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Re: Second Chances III: The Trellious Incident
« Reply #20 on: December 06, 2007, 02:40:49 pm »
Is the voice in his head someone/something I would know from earlier stories I haven't read?
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Re: Second Chances III: The Trellious Incident
« Reply #21 on: December 06, 2007, 02:46:34 pm »
I took the "alternate" endings for what they were and found them hilarious!  Of course, I'm obviously twisted in regards to humor so your mileage may vary.   ;)

Pewsonally, I vote fow the ending that involved fish-schlapping.  Keep it coming, Czaw!
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Re: Second Chances III: The Trellious Incident
« Reply #22 on: December 06, 2007, 03:38:17 pm »
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Is the voice in his head someone/something I would know from earlier stories I haven't read?

Yes. You can find all of that information in The Long, Dusty Trail. I think you're right, though, that part of that should have been included somewheres in the intro.

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I took the "alternate" endings for what they were and found them hilarious!

I'm glad someone got a good laugh out of it, that is why it was there in the first place!

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Re: Second Chances III: The Trellious Incident
« Reply #23 on: December 07, 2007, 08:34:09 am »
Very nice.  Of course, the none-of-the-above answer is the only right one.

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Re: Second Chances III: The Trellious Incident
« Reply #24 on: December 26, 2007, 03:08:46 am »
Technically, It's still Christmas (somewhere), so here you all go, its a little late, and (sorry) not wrapped in a bow:


   “Cloak effects fading,” K’Tal reported behind him. “Freighter Gold Rush and Tanker Blue Ribbon entering system.” The two massive Clydesdale class freighters showed on the main view screen, closing in on the sixth planet. Blue Ribbon stopped her travels while her dry-goods counterpart coasted ahead on her red glowing impulse drives. “Four Y’Takki vessels are assuming escort pattern…”

   “What?” he barked at her, standing and turning around to face her. “They have never escorted us before.”

   “The Y’Takki might still be spooked from that Starfleet ship,” Biklis said softly from the helm, hairy paws plotting in their approach course.

   He turned, a faint smile playing on his lips. “I doubt that they realize what power any Starfleet vessel might have when compared to their tiny ships.” He resumed his seat quietly and spoke in a soft voice, “they want to risk their lives if that ship comes back, then let them. Offer no assistance if it becomes a firefight.” He smiled deeper, more sinister, and spoke again, “get me all sensor data on that ship, and see if we know who we’re dealing with.”

   K’Tal worked her panel silently, and a brief moment passed before he was reading the data for himself on the console between the command chairs. He drew upon years of service with the fleet, watching the form rotate slowly about. Some of the shapes that this ship had were familiar to him, and others not. His well trained eyes found the weapons mounts, docking hard points, life boats… He counted the decks, guessed at the length and width, and found this ship to be an enigma to him. It was, essentially, a light cruiser packed on a large frigate’s hull. Power output was off the charts for a frigate, but then again, Starfleet had been taking leaps and bounds in the field of engine efficiency. She was small, and would hurt when she punched, but he was confident in his ship and crew. Boldly across her hull was plastered her name, Cerberus; the name tickled him inside, and he chuckled softly.

   This information amused him to no end, and he made the decision, This ship must be mine.



   Perkins almost tripped over the still opening lift door as he entered the bridge with a frantic pace. “The rovers,” he started, nearly out of breath, “the rovers we found… they aren’t surveying the sixth planet, they’re surveying for us!” T’Sala’s gaze followed him to his science panel, Aux 2, with upward arched eyebrows in genuine curiosity.

   “How do you know this?” McCloud questioned him with equal curiosity. “And can you prove it?”

   “Wait one,” he told her as he busied himself at the panel, augmenting the sensor readings on the recordings, waiting for something to jump out at him. “Bingo!” he said after a long pause.

   “‘Bingo!’?” T’Sala asked him, hoping it was a simple explanation behind the phrase.

   “Yeah, bingo; as in ‘ah ha’ or ‘eureka’… look,” he pushed a few buttons on the panel, and it chirruped merrily in reply to his commands. The view screen shifted and displayed what it was he found. “We thought that they were simply relaying messages back to their home planet, but part of each transmission was bouncing off of our hull…”

   “Like old style radar,” McCloud interrupted.

   “Not quite. The radio transmission was enough to mask the probe’s scans.” The screen showed Cerberus orbiting the planet, and each probe’s transmissions were highlighted with white wavy lines. Perkins pressed a control and the image highlighted a separate purple line, directed from each probe directly towards the ship. “There’s more,” he said softly. The screen shifted again to a top-down view of the system, with an extensively drawn grid of purple lines extending around the fourth, fifth and sixth planets, and extending near to where Cerberus sat quietly waiting.

   “It seems that they have a partial system wide detection grid set up,” Perkins said. “Set up to be undetectable by standard scans. We met with a village elder. He said that four humans had decided to make this system home.”

   “But that doesn’t fit,” McCloud started. “Sensor technology and scanning protocol has changed drastically over the years.”

   “Perhaps this will explain,” Perkins said, returning his attention to his now alarming panel. He didn’t have to look to know what was going on, the alarm was familiar to him; it was where things were happening that forced him to look. “An unknown vessel has decloaked near Y’Takki.”

   “Too far out to be Romulans,” Michaels said from the helm.

   “Klingons or pirates,” T’Sala offered.

   “I’ve managed to patch into their sensor net. Whoa…” Perkins worked the controls and the screen shifted to a close up view of a Klingon battle cruiser. “Insufficient data to determine anything for certain, but that’s a see seven hull, I’m very certain of that.”

   “Are those Starfleet markings?” Michaels asked. “There have only been three of those ever to serve in the fleet.”

   “And only one,” McCloud started, and then sighed softly before continuing, “that wasn’t scrapped for raw materials.”

   “Commander,” T’Sala said in a hurried voice. “Using Perkins’ patch, I’ve found the Many De’Oria.”



   “When the ships collided,” Jones continued her story in the smallish cave that had been their temporary home in the encroaching night. A faint smile played on her lips as she finished, “the entire simulator room erupted in flames and smoke. Half the saucer was blown off, but we managed to take that Klingon out. We tumbled into another cruiser, destroying us and them.”

   “And that was your answer to the unbeatable simulation?” McDougal asked her.

   “No, that was my first answer to the K. Maru.” She laughed a little before continuing, “I made three more attempts, the last one I found the Kobyashi Maru, but the Klingons swept in while we were slowed for transport.”

   “Poof!” McDougal added with a laugh.

   “Yeah, poof. I think we lasted twenty seconds in combat on that run.”

   “Well, I only had the honors of running the test once,” he smiled at her in the firelight. “I was the last in my class to take the no win, so I had a lot of stories about what to do and what not to do. But the test administrator either knew what I was planning or had several cadets who were last in line pull what I had planned, so he changed the programming on me. I had to rescue a crippled Klingon frigate that was under attack by a single pirate ship. We took out the pirate no problem, but when two Klingon cruisers showed up, they assumed that we’d come across the Zone just to take out the frigate.”

   “Poof!”

   “Yeah,” he agreed. “I tried to talk my way out of it, but in the end, disruptors spoke louder than words, and down we went, that stupid frigate fired the kill shot.”

   He paused a moment, letting her ponder his words. “That was when I created the U.S.S. Hope.”

   “That was you?” she asked. “I only heard about that behemoth, we all thought it was a legend…”

   “Well, I’ll tell you the whole story, starting with Hope herself.”

   “I heard she was some kind of super battleship.”

   “Mostly correct,” he started.

   Story time stopped abruptly as McDougal’s communicator chirped softly for his attention. He fished the small device from his pants pocket and activated it. Static filled the line, followed by the brief sentence, “Have found shuttle Many De’Oria, stay on the line for beam out.”

   A silent moment passed until the familiar tingle of the transporter took them away. Alarms assailed their ears when they materialized on the shuttle, the most worrisome of them was the one indicating that a Klingon Battle Cruiser had decloaked in system.

   The question of whether or not anyone had noticed was answered shortly after their arrival as the shuttle rocked gently from a near miss from one of the local craft. A warning message blinked frantically for attention, and Jones read it aloud, “Run to Three.” McDougal deftly piloted the small craft through several weapons discharges, evading them with years of practiced skill.

   Many De’Oria was a large shuttle, and boasted similar speed and maneuverability to her smaller counterparts. Added to that was her small warp drive, not ever going to break any warp speed records, but enough to move the tiny vessel faster than light. With a simple button push, the ship left behind her pursuers, and leapt towards relative safety. “We’ll have about six minutes,” Jones started, “before they catch up.”

   “I just hope McCloud can rescue our sorry butts in time.”

   “Strange that the Klingon hasn’t taken to pursuit yet. I would have figured he would have been all over us.”

   “Might have something to do with those two freighters out there,” he replied, pointing at the sensor readouts.



   “Starfleet shuttle has gone to warp,” K’Tal said calmly. “Shall we pursue?”

   “Negative. Let our protectors protect us from this dangerous shuttle.” He chuckled maliciously.

   “Entering standard orbit,” Biklis added.

   “Very well. Wait for it Biklis, don’t get too comfortable.”

   “Incoming urgent transmission from Y’Takki,” K’Tal said. “They are requesting for us to aid in capturing the shuttle.” Her panel beeped frantically. “Starfleet vessel has reentered sensor range, heading for Y’Takki., high impulse.”

   “Open a channel to the planet,” he said while standing. The view screen didn’t change over like he’d anticipated, instead it remained focused on the slowly turning planet below. “Our deal is advanced products for crewmembers,” he said in a cold voice. “One thousand of your best slaves every three months gets you more crap than you’ll ever need. Our deal does not include capturing shuttlecraft. However, I am willing to renegotiate.” He paused to let the words sink in. “Two thousand slaves gets you the shuttle and her crew, three thousand and we’ll remove the Starfleet vessel permanently from your system.”

   Again, the screen didn’t change over, but the Supreme Leader’s voice filled the bridge’s speakers. “These are people’s lives you are dealing with!” he shouted, a touch of remorse in his tone. “Do what you must, but I want salvage rights to the ship!

   “Supreme Leader, if you are so concerned with the lives of your slaves, then why enslave the planet at all? You sound as if our deal isn’t fair.”

   “Not at all unfair, m’lord, I’m just concerned with the welfare of the slaves, that’s all.

   “As I said when I first came to your people, they will be well taken care of as members of my crew. Four thousand gets you whatever remains of the ship after we’re through, the crew of the shuttlecraft, and a double shipment of weapons and ship components in three months instead of deuterium this shipment.”

   “Consider it a deal,” he replied grudgingly. “But when will we have more deuterium? Our stockpiles are running low.

   “Then I suggest you start a conservation program or start harvesting it yourself.” He turned to K’Tal, a wicked smirk on his face, and issued a throat-cut gesture. The line closed as he spoke, “Combat stations! Take us out of orbit, helm. Intercept course, ahead slow. Miss K’Tal, order Blue Ribbon to our position. Charge all weapons to standard, tractor beam to full, transporters and raiding parties to stand-by.” He chuckled maniacally as he resumed his center seat. “Order no casualties, I want that ship and her crew.”

   “Holding position,” McDougal said from his tiny helm station. Many De’Oria had stopped after rounding the third planet of Trellious, just far enough to watch events unfold, and to make a clean get away if the situation called for it. “Cerberus has reentered the system, and it looks like one of the freighters and that Klingon are heading to intercept.”

   “We passed close enough to scan the freighters and the Klingon. Nothing definite, but it looks like a pirating operation,” Jones sighed and continued her report, “the freighter in orbit is empty, the one that is moving is loaded to the gills with deuterium.”

   “Did you say deuterium?” McDougal asked her. “Something familiar about this set up.”

   “Cerberus is closing on Y’Takki. Communications are being jammed.”

   “Is there any further readings on that Klingon ship?” he hastily tried to augment the sensors to pick up a higher resolution on the bogey.

   “All we have is recorded data. We picked up on a see seven hull type, heavily modified. Starfleet power signature, some Starfleet, Klingon, Romulan and Kzinti materials detected on the hull.”

   “We can’t see anything from here,” he said, giving up on the sensor tune up. “McCloud better have an ace up her sleeve.”

   “She does, look!” The Klingon vessel and Cerberus closed silently in space. As the two ships neared optimum firing range, they veered away from each other, the Klingon ship exposing her weaker rear shields to Cerberus.

   “Aw, shoot!” McDougal shouted. His mind finally found the lost bit of data that was stored in his vast memory, forcing his mind to think the unthinkable. Run! a different memory told him as the events coalesced into fact. “Don’t take the bait! McCloud, damn you, keep turning! We can wait!”

   McCloud did not hear him. Jones looked at him worriedly. Cerberus turned towards her prey, sealing the deal. Both ships now pointed towards the shuttle. McDougal knew what was next. But he waited, watching impatiently, hoping things would change. Blue Ribbon increased her speed.



   “Cerberus has taken the bait, sir,” K’Tal said quietly. “Speed has increased and she has turned to engage. Twenty thousand… fifteen thousand… eight thousand…”

   “Emergency reverse!” he barked, and with a jolt the old man jumped backwards. Cerberus began to overtake them, the sudden change in course caught them off guard. Some weapons fired, rocking the old man, making him shudder like a leaf in the wind, but the frigate’s photons never fired, they stayed nestled in their tubes as the older Klingon vessel passed beneath them. “All stop! Engage tractor beam!” The old man halted his movement, and an unseen hand leapt forth to grab the smaller craft. He lurched again under the frigate’s pull, but his own mass kept her from fleeing.

   “Remote link to Blue Ribbon has been reestablished.” K’Tal said from behind him. “Changing course, lowering shields for transport… transporting now…” The fluid laden freighter slowly came in from behind them, speeding towards the entangled prey.

   “All back emergency!” he said as he watched the frigate struggle like a fly in a spider’s web. “Drop tractor, all available power to shield one!”

   Cerberus had fired what weapons she could into the Klingon vessel as she passed over, spreading the damage across several of his shields. Of what remained, the arc wasn’t proper. She began a slow, struggling turn while caught in his grasp. A few more seconds, and the first two of the four overloaded photons would come to bear. “Detonate!” he ordered as the small craft on his screen was eclipsed by the freighter.

   Well positioned anti-matter pods disintegrated within the mass of deuterium, their contents hungrily interacting with the fluid, causing an explosive chain reaction that detonated the freighter. Cerberus and the old man shuddered with the force of the blast, the frigate taking the worst of it, but she remained.

   “Enemy shields five and six are down,” K’Tal reported.

   “Initiate second transport!” he ordered in return. The protective shield dropped as the old man slowed, now moving in for the capture. “Belay that!” he barked, but he knew it was too late as watched on the view screen the orbs of death flew unhindered through the expanding debris cloud. The shield was already down, and there was nothing more they could do but wait.

   Four overloaded torpedoes had been chomping at the bit, waiting for the sweet release of launch. Their wish was granted and the salvo leapt from the ship, no longer hindered by line of fire. He smiled in fear as two struck his ship’s hull.


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Re: Second Chances III: The Trellious Incident
« Reply #25 on: December 26, 2007, 01:43:22 pm »
A good addition! I'm gonna have to reread a lot, however, for it to flow well in my head.

I'll reply in more depth later.

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Re: Second Chances III: The Trellious Incident
« Reply #26 on: January 01, 2008, 03:48:38 pm »
Suspensful and annoying at the same time.  Annoying because I have to wait to find out what happens next.
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Re: Second Chances III: The Trellious Incident
« Reply #27 on: January 01, 2008, 08:44:03 pm »
Love the torps at the end! I must have a copy of your stuff for my collection!

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« Reply #28 on: January 04, 2008, 12:27:15 pm »
Okay, just reading and noting as I get there.

I really liked the idea of the captain having pictures taken of his ship in an appropriate light. Great idea!

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How could such an advanced culture condone slavery?
Orions? Kzinti? Romulans? The Final Reflection's Klingons? You don't have enough data (at that point in your story) to say they're socially advanced, only technologically. And as we all know, some peoples' technology advances more quickly than their wisdom and/or social mores.

Also, why instantly jump to thinking they are Slavers? How can you determine the trade of an individual through a life form scan? My first thought was they were a colony planet in the process of being settled, my second was that they were miners a la 'TOS: The Devil in the Dark', and the third was that it was a prison planet.

Master-At-Arms is a position, not a rank. There is no 1st or 2nd class. Different ranks can be an MAA. Depending on what service you are in, they have sliightly different roles, but the traditional duties in the USN (as opposed to the originating RN - I'm assuming as a Yank you're using the Yank position) is law enforcement. An MAA on a USN Ship serves as military police. They are not Special Forces. Even in the RN, the MAA position is the Armoury Officer, being in charge of the ship's small arms and their provisioning and training in their use. He is also responsible for discipline on board. The position can be assigned to any rank of Petty Officer.

Rommie's comments that they might not be slavers fits in nicely to my above comments. Having the captain suddenly say, "Oh, wait!" strikes me as... wrong. Feds aren't meant to pre-judge after all, and with so little supporting evidence for any theory, to leap to that as your first conclusion instead of giving a newly encountered race the benefit of the doubt... this guy should not be in charge of an exploratory mission. The facts are too thin on the ground to be so sure - unless he has a Kirk-style gut-instinct about it that you haven't made clear.

I liked your "I wish we were Klingon/I'm glad we're not Klingon" comments from the different scenes. Again, though. the Feds really shouldn't be wanting to blow anyone out of the sky - unless, I grant you, they genuinely are slavers.

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“We’ve been watching!” Pop-Pop laughed himself into a deep cough, and then continued. “Ninety-eight of our years ago, three of your Starfleet men came to our planets. They chose Y’Takki to live,” he pointed to the sky, “and eventually, to rule over.”
Ooooooh!! Big revelation! Cracking cliff-hanger! Now I'm really interested!

LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE the 'Pick your own Story' elements! Very funny (especially Janeway's hair comments and the strikethroughs). Even funnier was our fellow authors thinking these were the real ending(s)!
I do agree with Kadh's secondary comments though. Jim would've saved the day six ways from Sunday. My personal order of preference would be:
Baneway (Best written - "Fire in the Galley!")
Smirk (even before the Jim'd save the day editorial)
Ricardo (major under-reaction - "It was a long while waiting, but eventually the assault fleet gave up pursuit of the fleeing Cerberus." Sheesh. Grow a spine.)
Crisco (Major over-reaction - Oopsie, I blew up the planet...)

The introduction of the ex-Admiral is odd in a way I cannot define. It's descriptive enough, just possibly a bit rushed. I dunno. Interested to see where it's going though.
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Re: Second Chances III: The Trellious Incident
« Reply #29 on: January 04, 2008, 03:32:06 pm »
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A good addition! I'm gonna have to reread a lot, however, for it to flow well in my head.


Sometimes proper flow escapes me. Sorry for that.

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Annoying because I have to wait to find out what happens next.


Sorry here, too. I recently discovered the rest of D.net and I spent my writing time trolling the rest of the boards. Next part due out in about a week... from Tuesday...

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Love the torps at the end! I must have a copy of your stuff for my collection!


I'm really glad that that part came out well. And, as soon as the series is concluded, including reverse editing the master file (I often add/subtract/modify after I've copy-pasted here but before posting; I don't always go back and make the same changes in the master  :-[) I'll port it to .pdf and find a way to get it to anyone who wants it.

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I really liked the idea of the captain having pictures taken of his ship in an appropriate light. Great idea!


Also plays into scenes coming up, and came from some really old KA screen shots of a similar nature, but I don't seem to have those anymore, so I can't share it. Sorry.

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Orions? Kzinti? Romulans? The Final Reflection's Klingons? You don't have enough data (at that point in your story) to say they're socially advanced, only technologically. And as we all know, some peoples' technology advances more quickly than their wisdom and/or social mores.

Also, why instantly jump to thinking they are Slavers? How can you determine the trade of an individual through a life form scan? My first thought was they were a colony planet in the process of being settled, my second was that they were miners a la 'TOS: The Devil in the Dark', and the third was that it was a prison planet.


I won't argue this, mostly because you're right. Just because *I* know what's going on doesn't mean everyone else should know too.

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Master-At-Arms is a position, not a rank. There is no 1st or 2nd class. Different ranks can be an MAA. Depending on what service you are in, they have sliightly different roles, but the traditional duties in the USN (as opposed to the originating RN - I'm assuming as a Yank you're using the Yank position) is law enforcement. An MAA on a USN Ship serves as military police. They are not Special Forces. Even in the RN, the MAA position is the Armoury Officer, being in charge of the ship's small arms and their provisioning and training in their use. He is also responsible for discipline on board. The position can be assigned to any rank of Petty Officer.


You won't like what I have to say about this. One of my better friends in the Navy was MA2(SW) Burns. Great guy. I was prosecuted (and charges dropped) by MA1(SW) Roberts (don't ask, wrong place, wrong time).

Look here: http://usmilitary.about.com/od/enlistedjob1/a/ma.htm

And here: http://www.navy.mil/search/display.asp?story_id=31744

Navy Seals = special forces; MA1/2/3 (SEAL) is a very real position/rating. This is what I was going for. Cerberus isn't loaded with all Marines. I like the idea that the Starfleet Navy would have SEALS, too.

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I liked your "I wish we were Klingon/I'm glad we're not Klingon" comments from the different scenes. Again, though. the Feds really shouldn't be wanting to blow anyone out of the sky - unless, I grant you, they genuinely are slavers.


You're right about the Feds not usually blowing stuff up. But, I'm glad you liked it.

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LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE the 'Pick your own Story' elements! Very funny (especially Janeway's hair comments and the strikethroughs). Even funnier was our fellow authors thinking these were the real ending(s)!
I do agree with Kadh's secondary comments though. Jim would've saved the day six ways from Sunday.


I'm glad that you and others liked this part. I really tried to capture the main feel of how each would handle it, and how they would get into the situation. And you and Kadh are both right. Kirk would have pulled it off, got off, and had something funny to say about it with Spock and McCoy. Maybe I'll re-edit it later.

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The introduction of the ex-Admiral is odd in a way I cannot define. It's descriptive enough, just possibly a bit rushed. I dunno. Interested to see where it's going though.


By now you should all know who it is. If not, you'll know soon enough. I hope to use him at least once more as the bad guy in this series.

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Re: Second Chances III: The Trellious Incident
« Reply #30 on: January 04, 2008, 03:59:51 pm »
I strand corrected on the MAAs not having grades. Apparently, according to your first link, there are 3 MAA grades: MA2, MA1, and MAC (Presumably for "Command").

However, the comprehensive listing of job descriptions backs me up in that they are law/discipline enforcers and physical security. It is not a rank but a position - especially as the Navy Pay grades of these ranks are E5, E6 and E7 respectively. The MAA you note in your second link - a damn fine soldier by that account - was a SEAL who was an MAA.

What I'm trying to says is: Not all MAAs are SEALS, and not all SEALS are MAAs. The MAA's job function - regardless of their Service (Army, Navy, Marine, SEAL) - is discipline and security, not Offensive SpecOps. Here's one of my sources:

http://web.archive.org/web/20050207144053/www.seal.navy.mil/seal/bec_sourcerates.asp.

The prefacing note says:
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Note: the SEAL program is open to all enlisted Navy active duty members (with exception to established requirements) regardless of their rating. Once you are in the SEAL program you will be required to change your rating to one of the rates listed below, if applicable.


I take this to mean that you can be a Navy MAA and transfer to the SEALs, or any Navy Petty Officer transferring to the SEALs and making MAA your rate, and you'll be an MA1/2/C ( SEAL). You could also be a SEAL with a Gunner's Mate rate who wants to be an MAA.

Admittedly, I feel like an idiot trying to correct someone whose served with MAAs. I feel like I'm setting myself up for a fall, to be cut of at the knees. If I'm wrong, Czar, lay it on me. I'd really like to know, as all my (second & third-hand) sources are disputing you.

Oh P.S. - Sorry for hijacking your thread. I like your story.  :D
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Re: Second Chances III: The Trellious Incident
« Reply #31 on: January 19, 2008, 12:23:00 am »
Andy- I'll get back to you on that MA bit soon enough. Suffice it to say, I was going for something not Marines, better trained and also part of normal security. Cerberus' new mission is to explore the unkown. Sometimes they might need some muscle to get out of a scrape. Marines die, that's what they're there for; but SEALs tend to live forever, which means, Cerberus away missions with SEALs will live forever.

That said, here's the next thrilling part:


   The warble of the intruder alarm reiterated to her that the shields had been compromised. Frantic beeping from the helm told her the ship was still spinning slowly out of control due to the huge matter-antimatter explosion that had ripped the protective shields away from the ship. Flashing indicators told her of damaged systems, weapons, shields, life support, transporters… She ignored these. Her attention was focused solely on the individual that had materialized on the bridge. He held a small, egg-like object in his hand. “Computer,” she said as he activated the device and dematerialized back to wherever he’d come. “Emergency control system lock out, authorization McCloud, theta one seven nine enable.” Anesthazine gas slowly filled the bridge, and most likely the decks below. She knew a takeover when she saw it, even if she only had a split second to act. Computer screens dimmed and shut down, terminals locked out. Only three people could restore the ship, two were not aboard, the last drifted into an unwelcome slumber.


   “Are you certain?” Jones asked frantically. If it is him…”

   “We covered this particular act for three days in advanced combat tactics,” McDougal replied to her dryly. “We even watched the recordings from his ship’s logs. How do you think he got that ship he’s on now?”

   Several warnings beeped and blinked frantically for their attention, cutting the discussion short. “Klingon vessel has…” Jones started. McDougal’s hands sped quickly over the helm controls, narrowly avoiding the twin disruptor salvo. The shuttle dipped and swerved, and eventually found relative safety in the milky grey atmosphere of the planet they orbited.

   “Stand-by to vent drive plasma!” he ordered, most of his attention turned to dodging incoming weapons fire.

   “Computer has recognized the ship, and you were right! Standing by to vent…”

   “We’re in pretty deep,” he said as the shuttle shuddered from another near hit. “We can’t stay in the atmosphere, we’ll burn up, and we don’t have much of a chance against him, even if he only intended capture. To top it off, what we’re about to do could cause our very deaths.”

   “What do we have to ignite the plasma?” she asked, recognizing their part of the Kolvoord Starburst. She gave him an “I’m with you” smile.

   “Him,” he said, pointing to the ceiling in the cabin. “We’ll have to time it right, but from their perspective, it should look as if we’ve been vaporized. And it should buy us enough time to get aboard Cerberus and get out of here.”

   The shuttle angled up slightly and began her exit from the planet’s uppermost atmosphere. Many De’Oria shook gently as a phaser strike impacted the hull. Taking her cue, Jones executed the release of drive plasma. “He’s powering down weapons!” she said excitedly. “He’s accelerating to full impulse”

   “Shut the vent!” he shouted at her. “It’s not him, he’s not there… If he was, they would still be firing…” he paused, refocusing his mind on the art of evasion. Skilled hands danced playfully across the helm. Behind them, the massive Klingon battle cruiser closed the gap, twin gashes of freshly rent hull plates could now be seen adorning his secondary hull. The shuttle dove hard towards the planet below, using the gravity to accelerate them. Jones’ panel beeped a frantic warning as structural safety limits were being exceeded. He ignored these, focusing solely on the planet below. “That f*cker’s on Cerberus.”

   Behind, the cruiser tried to keep up, and had his commanding officer been aboard, would have followed the shuttle down. In his absence, the crew merely waited for the shuttle to burry itself in the planet’s surface, or explode trying; first by slowing, then altering course all together. At the last possible second, the shuttle pulled up from her dive, a slight shock to the crew of the cruiser, and bounced gingerly off the atmosphere. The entire event managed to mask her ion trail, and for the moment, Many De’Oria was nowhere to be found.



   He walked quietly through the silent corridor, the sound of his boots muffled against soft Starfleet carpeting; the hiss from his respirator was the only sound that assailed his ears. Red combat lights bathed him in familiarity; red alert flashers reflected the evil in his eyes. Starfleet had been smart enough to delete his command codes from their computers, denying him his prize for the moment. He knew that the crew was well trained and loyal to the fleet; they’d never aid him in restoring computer control. No matter, soon the Old Man would flush out the quarry, sending the lone bird back to the nest. Judging by what he found on the bridge, at least one of the persons on the shuttle would be the commanding officer. Unless, of course, she was the one in the command chair, wearing an engineer’s uniform.

   He’d slapped her unconscious form regardless; she’d given the order to fire on his ship, after all. He’d have had more for her later in one of his agonizer booths, had they both not been destroyed. But he was crafty, and something would happen, it always did, that would allow him to force her atonement for his dead personnel.

   He finally made his destination, and stood beside the large pressure door to the shuttle bay. He waited a silent moment, allowing his far behind security guards to catch up. Beyond the door he could hear the whispering hiss of a shuttle landing. He waited, and took a position to the left of the door. Familiar sounds of a shuttle’s door opening sounded through the bulkhead, along with the main hangar bay door sealing shut, and still he waited.

   His patience wore thin after ten minutes of silence. They had had more than enough time to come through the door, to be taken by his men. He motioned for his squad to stay put and remain ready as he opened the door.

   No phaser shots came through at him. One of his squad pulled out a tricorder and briefly scanned the bay, and shook her head to relay the “no life signs” message she’d received. Anger boiled inside him, but never the less, he motioned to his squad calmly to secure the bay.

   As they busied themselves with searching the scorched Many De’Oria, he opened his communicator and dialed in the proper frequency. “K’Tal,” he spoke into the device through his respirator’s voice filter. “K’Tal, come in!” Silence was his only response. He looked down the corridor to a sleeping form. It was possible that one of the bridge crew had revived themselves, but certainly not enough to overtake K’Tal and the three marines with her. He closed down his communicator. She could just be too busy to answer; restoring the computer was the first priority, after all. He stepped into the hangar and greeted one of his men who’d come running out of the larger shuttle.

   “Recent transporter activity, sir,” he said. “The shuttle’s transport log has been erased, along with most of the sensor and communications logs. Two personal life support kits are also missing from the storage locker.”

   It is a standard Starfleet shuttle, he mused. Why not have standard equipment?   He smiled, and turned to exit the shuttle bay with quick strides, motioning for his squad to follow. In a flash, the door slammed shut, locking them behind him in the bay. He didn’t wait, though. Without feeling he trod down the lonely corridor, to the nearest computer terminal. They might have pulled his authority off of the ships, but they still used the same computer designs. He made the terminal as force fields snapped into existence around him. Unnoticing, he forced his way through the multi-layered computer lock out.

   A few hundred keystrokes later, he found himself free of his temporary cell, and on a turbo lift to the bridge.



   “Status?” Commander Shawn McDougal barked at her. He’d moved Lieutenant Michaels’ unconscious form free of the helm and sat down himself. Unlocking the computer was a long ordeal, as was taking out the guards on the bridge. Precious time had been lost, forever unrecoverable.

   “Shields one through four fully functional,” Lieutenant Commander Selma Jones responded. “Five and six are down. Life support systems are taxed, but are flushing out the anesthazine; Bridge is locked down and secured; all computer and command functions routed to bridge terminals; insufficient power available for movement or weapons at this time. Our guests are still wandering the ship; I’m waiting for power systems to return to capacity to engage security force fields.” A low rumble was felt by the duo, followed by a flashing indicator on the engineering panel. Jones hopped from the tactical station to the engineering station.

   “Impulse engines are at full capacity. Rerouting power to security systems.” A snap came from the turbo lift door as a force field formed within the frame. “That should do it, including those in the shuttle bay.” A flashing indicator blinked for attention on the tactical panel, then faded as quickly as it had come, unnoticed by the busy executive officer.

   “Lock down all turbo lifts and Jeffries tubes,” he ordered. “How long until we have warp drive?”

   “The computer estimates ten minutes, maybe sooner if someone wakes up down there. That explosion wrecked havoc on the power grid and warp drive.”

   “We need to get the downed shields back up,” he said, working the controls of the helm. “I’m plotting a course out of system, as soon as we have the power, we’ll be on our way. And Miss Jones?”

   “Yes sir?”

   “See if you can’t secure the garbage on the bridge,” he said, motioning to the four stunned infiltrators.

   “Gladly, sir.” She left her station to tend to the binding of the hands and feet of their four unwelcome guests. She tended to the Vulcan first, assuming that she’d be most likely to come around quickest, and she was the closest to her position. Eight pair of security shackles formed in the bridge’s port replicator unit, and with a simple click the first two were affixed to the stunned Vulcan. Jones continued her rounds to the next two, both lying behind the command chair, when the crackle of the force field protecting the bridge sounded in her ears.

   The lift door parted, revealing the tall man behind, phaser pointed into the bridge. “Don’t,” he said as McDougal and Jones both began to stand and draw their own weapons, “or you’re both dead.”

   “Computer!” McDougal shouted. The two consious Starfleet officers slowly moved hands away from phasers, and pushed them towardss ths ceiling.

   “I wouldn’t do that either if you valued your lives,” the man interrupted him.

   “I’d known you’d sunk low,” McDougal said to him, softly returning to his seat. “But this is a new low, even for the great Czar Mohab.”

   “My reputation precedes me.” He took a short bow. “Pity, I’ve not heard of yours.” He stepped away from the twin terminals, further towards the center of the bridge.

   “Strange, I thought you’d recognize the boot that will be kicking your sorry *ss all the way back to Earth!” McDougal said vehemently. He turned quickly to the helm, pressing down hard on one shiny red key.

   The sound of a phaser beam broke through the tension filled atmosphere.


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EDIT 1: The old man was suffering from GID (her instead of his). Fixed.

EDIT 1.1: Had to act out parts of this to see if it was believable. Added a few words. Believable now.

EDIT 2: I swear I proof these before I post. But, Changed "Cargo" bay to "Shuttle" bay, as said by Jones.
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Re: Second Chances III: The Trellious Incident
« Reply #32 on: January 19, 2008, 09:41:27 pm »
I am very sleepy and have an attention starved feline in my lap, but am compelled to comment anyway.

This was a very exciting addition and left me wanting to see the story's completion all the more. The Ceberous sees as much action as the 'ill-fated' Endeavour!

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Re: Second Chances III: The Trellious Incident
« Reply #33 on: January 21, 2008, 02:27:21 am »
I feel stupid that I didn't figure it out.  It should have been obvious. 

Nice action, but I'm still not decided whether I like the overall story or not.
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Re: Second Chances III: The Trellious Incident
« Reply #34 on: January 21, 2008, 02:54:41 am »
I feel stupid that I didn't figure it out.  It should have been obvious. 

Don't. It was supposed to make the reader feel, "Is that... no, he wouldn't... would he?" I did leave enough clues, but don't feel bad for not getting it. I tried to keep it covered, too, you know.

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Re: Second Chances III: The Trellious Incident
« Reply #35 on: February 29, 2008, 07:37:01 pm »
Long overdue continuation. Enjoy!

   “You missed,” Mohab sneered at the wily commander. The sounds of the transporter faded away with the forms of two of Mohab's men.

   “So did you,” the commander retorted. Mohab noticed the scorch mark on the other's left shoulder. He hadn't missed that bad before the commander dove for the deck. Plain as day, his adversary's left arm lay limp at his side, stunned.

   “I wouldn't try anything like that again,” Mohab said calmly. He adjusted the phaser to a higher setting. “Both of you, up front, now!” They stood and obliged him, and only once they were both in his field of view did he remove the slumbering female from the command chair and take the seat for himself. She fell painlessly to the carpeted deck with a soft thud.

   “I was a lot like you once,” he started, casually letting the fingers of his free hand trace the few controls on the chairs arm rest. “Full of wonder and nobility. Trying to save everyone. Look where it got me.”

   “Not everyone falls like you have,” the slender female said back to him.

   “No, and not everyone can blame their career path on one singular event either. There were so many vessels during the incident... Lyran, Klingon, Romulan, Tholian, and all the Federation ships...”

   “Which incident are you talking about?” It was the female again, and deep down he wondered if it was even mentioned when she went through the Academy.

   “Surely you know of the Hyperion Incident? The basis behind the construction of the station...” He felt pain at the memory, pain and regret towards the choices he'd made that day. He knew deep within himself that had he followed his instincts that day, Operation Unity would still have started. Everything else would still have played out the same, except there would be no station, no war with the Romulans that cost the Federation the Star Empire and that stupid device, which in turn would have never led him down the dark trail that he was on right now.

   His vision wavered, the humans before him faded into the background like ghosts in an old house. “... multiple hull breaches in the engineering section.” K'Tal's musical voice finished the damage report from behind him. Flames licked eagerly at the bulkheads on the bridge, his first officer lay dead at his feet, the deck shuddered as the mighty warship struggled through his damage to remain mobile. On the static filled view screen the lone Dominator receded from the battleground, ensuring victory for the Galactic Forces.

   “Message from Captain Kadh,” K'Tal's voice once again called to him.

   “On screen,” he replied. The screen flickered briefly, then showed the stern face of the Klingon captain. His red battle lit bridge was filled with smoke and debris, clearly the Screaming Dizbuster had faired about equally as Mohab's own ship. The man's face staring at him excited another memory, of Mohab's home planet many years prior.

   He'd learned at a very young age the treachery of Klingons. Through skillful negotiations, Mandeline III was removed from the protective sphere of the Federation's influence, and turned to a neutral status. The planet was one of many that the Federation had taken as its own during the recent war with the Klingons, and in an effort to further peaceful relations, was abandoned by both sides. With little interest in peace, the Klingons deceitfully came one bloody night and massacred every person who was unable to leave the planet. This included the Royal Family, save one young Jacob Mohab. It was the night he'd taken the still beating heart from a Klingon's chest, the pungent flavor of the same still hung on his lips. It didn't bring his family or friends back, but avenged their deaths with the whisper of the dying general's last breath. Mohab was one of seven survivors from a colony of twelve thousand, and though 'avenged', he never forgot them.

   Nor did he forget his distrust and hatred of Klingons. This was his second chance, here and now. He wouldn't wait for this Klingon to offer a victory celebration. Mohab would speak first, and end it here and now. “Captain Kadh, I am hereby officially ordering all non-Starfleet vessels to leave this sector immediately. Any vessel that has not withdrawn in ten minutes will be considered hostile and fired upon. This incident happened within the borders of the Federation and was a Federation matter. We appreciate the response to the destroyer Hyperion's distress call and dealing with the Andromedans, however we now consider this matter closed.” He made a cut throat gesture and the channel closed.

   “In case they think we are bluffing, target the Screaming Dizbuster's main bridge.”

   “Aye, sir. I must remind you that we are in no condition to hold out long in sustained combat

   “I know K'Tal. This has to remain an internal affair. I think...” his words were interrupted by the familiar tingle just on the edge of his senses. He felt his command chair melt away below him, and suddenly he found himself inside a Starfleet shuttle looking up from the deck plates. Before he could reorient himself, the tingle came again.

   He found himself, sans phaser, on Cerberus's cold hangar deck, lying on his back. He looked to his left at the large shuttle that he was just inside, two of his men desperately trying to pry the doors open. “It would not have worked,” the commander's voice called over the shuttle bay's intercom system. “Even if you managed to scare off some of them, Kadh and Kotheme would have destroyed you!

   Mohab screamed in panic. How much had he said? How much of that was a delusion? 

***

   “It was only set for four,” McDougal responded to his XO's questioning gaze. “I set Many De'Oria's transporters to remove our guests if the became hostile. I'm glad it took the loon,” he smiled slightly, “and left the Vulcan. She'll make a good bargaining chip.”

   Jones made her way to T'Sala's tactical panel while McDougal returned to the now charred helmsman's chair. “I can't find Mohab's ship,” Jones said as she looked over the panel. “If they've cloaked...”

   “I've got something...” McDougal called back to her. “Focus scans here,” he said as he fed her panel the data from the helm.

   “Working... Shawn, I'm reading multiple fighters inbound.”


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Re: Second Chances III: The Trellious Incident
« Reply #36 on: February 29, 2008, 08:44:02 pm »
Damn... Been so long since the last post...I need to reread it all...

I read a lot of stuff...

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Re: Second Chances III: The Trellious Incident
« Reply #37 on: March 01, 2008, 09:28:56 am »
Damn... Been so long since the last post...I need to reread it all...

LOL!!!  I am relieved I'm not the only one...

Glad to see you are still working on this Czar, thanks!   :D
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« Reply #38 on: May 04, 2008, 01:37:33 am »



Decided to take the more difficult route. Be done when it is done ;)

Besides, had some bad real life happen lately... not a happy thing.

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« Reply #39 on: May 04, 2008, 03:23:59 am »
I'll give you this. Maybe more tonight. Dunno. Not sleepy, so...?


   “What can you tell me?” McDougal asked his exec. He wasn't too surprised at the turn of events. It was just another coal in the ever growing fire.

   Soft grumbles came from around them as the unconscious crew began to wake.

   “Too distant to make anything out for certain, but I am reading at least fourteen  shuttle sized  hulls. Maybe more.”

   McDougal pondered the situation a moment, allowing things to flow through his brain and form a possible outcome to the seemingly worsening situation. “Clear picture on sixteen contacts, possible eight more fighter class hulls inbound. Also detecting larger power signatures on extreme long range.” He processed her report with everything else that he had been fed. Without further information, he came to what he felt were the three most logical conclusions:

   They were after Cerberus. Perhaps the ship, perhaps the symbolic nature of the ship.

   They were after the planets below.

   They were after Mohab.

   “Sh*t!” Lieutenant Michaels exclaimed as he struck his head on the underside of the his panel as he rose. “What the hell...”

   “Bogeys at noon, helm,” McDougal said, snapping the helmsman's attention to the here and now. There would be time enough for explanations later. “Mohab's cruiser is MIA, presumed local. Temporarily without warp drive or solid maneuverability. You've got the sticks.” McDougal stood from the scorched chair and with a single armed gesture, aided the still shaky helmsman to his seat.

   “I might need a moment to un-fuzz my brain,” Michaels said, holding his left thumb and middle finger to his temples.

   “Clear picture, twelve fighters, heavily armed with projectile weapons, mixed with twelve fighters, lightly armed, phaser only... heavy sensor suite on the drone mounts... all closing fast, bearing three-five-eight mark zero-zero-three.”

   “Seems like they're looking for someone,” the helmsman replied to Jones' continued reports.

   McDougal had turned his back on the view screen, assisting his engineer off the carpeted deck. “I'll figure it out on my way down below,” she said softly, rising from the ground. “I'm on my way, sir.”

   He was shocked at her sudden dedication to duty, and yet, not. He noticed T'Sala begin to stir near her tactical station. “Miss T'Sala, update yourself with our current situation as soon as possible. XO, assist the engineer in getting our engines to full power from the bridge. Helm,” he turned abruptly to face the forward station. “Maintain current speed and course, stand by evasive.” He took his own seat with a silent thud and a loud sigh. “And someone wake Mister Perkins.”

   Silently McDougal watched the rectangular viewer as twenty-four hostile assault craft angled towards his slightly crippled ship.



***
   Mohab paced gently inside the rather-spacious-for-such-a-small-vessel shuttle bay, listening intently to the reports coming in from Death Giver. Cerberus not only allowed for his ship to see these new threats much more clearly than his own ship's normal sensors could, but much sooner. He'd managed a fairly decent description from Biklis, and almost instantly recognized the intruder.
 
   Eric the Dead was a notorious pirate operating in the local area of space. He'd been dealing mostly within the Federation; however, he had occasionally wandered to the Klingon side of space. Last time, it was a normal VIP ferrying contract, nothing glamorous or dangerous; just taking a delegate from one planet to another. Eric had used the same space lane for years for such contracts and never once encountered any resistance.

   Until he met Mohab.

   Eric found out quickly that this newcomer was rather territorial, and vengeful. He'd managed to escape the war lusting former Starfleet admiral, only to have the bastard track down Eric's shipyard and capture it.

   There were laws amongst the pirates, laws that Mohab didn't know. Eric didn't hold a grudge when he was attacked in 'Mohab's territory'; that kind of misunderstanding happens, you don't notice the new guy so you miss paying the first “rights of passage” bribe. Usually it could be worked out. Eric learned that day that Mohab had no code of honor within the pirate circles. There would never be payments for passage, never more would there even be a blind shipping lane through the borderland for he and his associates to use.

   There would always be Mohab.

   Capturing the shipyard was one thing. It happened. As a pirate, you can't always protect every asset every time, stations and ships sometimes changed hands. Usually, deals could be struck, either returning the stolen goods or providing some form of compensation. Pirates were usually in pretty deep when it came to sharing hardships. Mohab did what he did, a simple act of retribution, to teach Eric a lesson.

   When the school bell rang, there was no more shipyard. Mohab had not only captured the giant ship manufacture and repair facility, but managed to cloak and move the entire thing out of the sector.

   Eric was miffed, to say the least.

   Attempting to contact Mohab had proven fruitless. Tracking him and his exploits proved pointless. Until, that is, an informant lead Eric to Mohab's slave factory.

***

   Mohab smiled to himself. “Czar Mohab,” he spoke into his communications device, “to commander Cerberus, please respond.”

   “Captain,” came the staticky  reply. “Kinda busy. Talk fast.

   “I believe I know who is approaching and why they are here,” Mohab smiled a bit wider as the words rolled off his tongue. “His name is Eric the Dead, one of the weaker pirate entities operating nearby. He's after me and my ship. If you let myself and my crew go free, we'll...”

   “Not so fast, silver tongue. You're officially a prisoner of the Federation. I can't just let you go.

   “Indeed, Commander, you'll do as I say or you'll not survive to hold true your weak threat. The pirate is after me, but I assure you he will gladly open fire on any vessel that has me inside.”

   The voice on the other side of the static paused, understanding the situation. Mohab was playing a dangerous game, but McDougal had to ponder how far the pirate would go. If what he was saying was true, then the lone Starfleet vessel would be left more or less alone. Unless they had a reason to attack the ship. Mohab was the reason, but would Mohab sell himself out for his own freedom? McDougal didn't know where Mohab was going with this. “You and the Vulcan will stay until Eric leaves. We'll drop the Vulcan off on the nearest surviving element of your 'empire', and keep you in custody.

   “Deal,” Mohab smiled.

   It was too easy. Way too easy. Mohab waited in the brief pause and thought he'd heard a mumble about transport. “Signal your vessel, ten seconds, three, four, five, all up.” The former 'Fleeter recognized the code, and relayed the information as such.

   It also meant that he had to get out of the shuttle bay in less than ten seconds to avoid the inevitable transport inhibitor field that no doubt would permeate the bay, locking him inside. The door to the bay swished slowly open, and he ordered the few of his men within out. They'd given his men a way out from under the inhibitor, but the quartet of phaser rifle armed security guards kept him at bay in the bay. Five or so seconds remained until shield three would drop. There would be a long enough pause between three going up and four going down... He pondered the approximate times in his head, and scoffed at the guards as they shut the door to the bay.

   No matter, he sighed to himself. I'll have almost forty-five seconds before the shields go back up. No problem.

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