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Re: Dirt
« Reply #30 on: February 20, 2008, 03:52:25 pm »
Well, now we get to see the contemplative side of the Burning One. A nice little introspective piece. I like and dislike I'rell's puzzlement at the same time. The attitude is good, but seems kinda wrong on her somehow.

Legat's attitude is pretty cool too. Klingon psychology differs from author to author, but I too am puzzled why a Klingon marine would be happy on a farming planet. He is informative about events, but not motivations. I am wanting to know the same as I'rell.

I'd write more comments, but I've already forgotten most of it.  ::)
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« Reply #31 on: February 20, 2008, 04:42:01 pm »
I hope to present Dath'mar as a 3-Dimensional character. He has martial prowess, but I do not simply want to present him as 'the brooding badass'. His dark and silent demeanor is, in many ways...just an act. And he admits it to himself, and strangely allows the Surgeon to see past this. His persona has been changed a lot by his 10 years of being a prisoner/rebel on Kovarn. He doesn't relish wanton, unnecessary death among his people any more. He is actually beginning to learn that death in battle might not be the only way for his life to end.

I'rell, on another hand, is a very good scientist. This does not, however, mean that she is not a pure warrior. In the future I may have opertunity to show her more martial side, which only peeks out in this episode. I toyed with a scene in this story that would certainly have showed her capacity for melee, but I have thus far axed it. I may still write it to show as an alternate scene... She is genuinely confused about colony life, and like you, does not understand how a marine would go back to live on a farm world.

As to the Governor, I wanted to show that side of Klingon life barely hinted at. The Klink who's life's ambition was not to be a warrior. He joined because it was his family's tradition to do so, but never intended to make it his sole route in life. Much like a person in RL joining the Reserves, he did it for the experience, and for the tools it gave him for his future. Don't expect to see that placed in the story verbatum, however. The story really isn't about the Governor. He's just there for flavor.

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Re: Dirt
« Reply #32 on: February 20, 2008, 06:05:48 pm »
Here's y'all some more unmemorable work to read

Hehe... Just so you know, I have been reading this and enjoying it very much!  I agree with what Rommie said earlier: best Klingon mission ever.   :D
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« Reply #33 on: February 20, 2008, 10:45:09 pm »
*bows graciously*

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« Reply #34 on: February 21, 2008, 12:30:45 am »
And this from a man who had Rommie singing 'Sexyback', so he knows 'memorable'!
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« Reply #35 on: February 21, 2008, 03:25:08 pm »
And this from a man who had Rommie singing 'Sexyback', so he knows 'memorable'!

LOL!  Rommie isn't the one that I had singing Sexyback... but I should have.   ;)

Still waiting for more of this excellent adventure, btw.  I'm also wondering why no one has brought up the option of simply taking out the patrolling destroyer and then grabbing the ferilizer before reinforcements can arrive.
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« Reply #36 on: February 21, 2008, 07:49:37 pm »
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LOL!  Rommie isn't the one that I had singing Sexyback... but I should have.   ;)

I was trying to implant the suggestion subliminally.
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« Reply #37 on: February 21, 2008, 10:04:11 pm »
  I'm also wondering why no one has brought up the option of simply taking out the patrolling destroyer and then grabbing the ferilizer before reinforcements can arrive.

You shall see soon...

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« Reply #38 on: February 22, 2008, 02:38:25 pm »
I was trying to implant the suggestion subliminally.

Hmmm... how about something along the lines of Rommie as a green orion slave girl singing "I'm bringing sexy back," eh?

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I bet I could throw together a kickin' song parody to go with that if anyone wanted me to...   ;)

You shall see soon...

Excellent!  I very much look forward to it.
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« Reply #39 on: February 28, 2008, 04:09:20 pm »







CH. 7






Dath’mar’s single remaining eye opened in a mixture of shock and rage as he stared blades at the Brigadier pictured on his monitor. No one witnessed this conversation. The Captain was speaking with his commanding officer, Brigadier La’ra, in the dark privacy of his cabin. The other stared back, unmoved.

“You are ordered to complete this mission without Gorn casualties, Captain,” The regional tactical commander told his subordinate once again. A wave of static washed across the viewer. Dath’mar wished it had wiped out the signal entirely.

Captain Dath’mar sat back, eye still locked on the Brigadier as he fought to retain his control. His blood boiled as the order repeated over and over within his mind. No Gorn casualties. He could not attack them, not in the traditional sense. Nor could he bring his ship’s full might to bear in defense of his own vessel and crew. He was effectively being sent into this mission with his hands tied.

“Are we the Federation now, that we go into battle to stun our enemy and leave them to attack us another day!” The captain growled back. He’d almost shouted, but such was no longer Dath’mar’s way. Shouting and railing had never gained him anything.

“The Gorn are not our enemy, Captain. And our Empire can ill afford them to be. Praxis—“

“Praxis! Every difficulty I hear is laid upon the altar of Praxis!” The captain returned. His firsts were clenched to either side of the comm screen. He glowered most impressively. La’ra stared back defiantly, secure in the light years separating them.

“The Empire cannot afford another war. We already battle the Mirak over the Juramik Stretch and are only now beginning to get political support for the effort from the Federation.”

“And for that we throw them back the territories surrounding Goesa’vaina!” Dath’mar resisted the urge to growl and hurl curses. The lengths his government was going to appease the weaklings in among their former enemy disgusted him. “Have we not given them enough?”

“The Mirak, for now, remain their allies, and they wish to remain friendly with the Gorn as well. We would find their ecological assistance on Qo’noS…lessened should we being initiating broad scale hostilities against ALL their neighbors. I support your plan to steal what we need. The Gorn indeed will NOT barter with us for anything. And asking them now would only give them fore knowledge that you are coming. This seems our only recourse. But you cannot anger the lizards enough that they mobilize against us. Find a way to avoid combat with their ship and ground defenses.”

“And how do you believe I should proceed?” There was vehement accusation in his retort. Dath’mar looked back with consternation. He was being asked the impossible. La’ra merely looked back with put on innocence, passive and smug-seeming. There was the hint of a smile when he replied.

“Do you believe yourself incapable of the task?”

Pride arose within the Captain’s chest and threatened to burst forth in a childish tirade of boasting. Brigadier La’ra dared much. He was intentionally goading Dath’mar into this. And it was working. The captain held back his response for a time, then declined his face in anger. His eye remained locked on his commanding officer.

“I will do for the Empire as I must. If we now fear war against inferior creatures, then I will find a way to combat them without drawing blood.”

La’ra nodded back, then killed the connection. Dath’mar’s fists slammed down in futile rage. He almost wished he hadn’t transmitted his battle plan to the Brigadier’s ship. But all major operations in the Goesa’vaina-Juramik Stretch Theater of Operations was under La’ra’s review. Withholding vital information from him would be paramount to treason.

The captain was not a blind man, nor was he necessarily shortsighted. He knew the economic state of his Empire. La’ra had been quite correct in his assessment. It made his orders no less bitter a pill to swallow, but he agreed with the reasoning behind them.

If the Empire required Dath’mar to complete this mission without making an enemy of the Gorn Hegemony, then he would do just that. But how? Dath’mar reactivated the computer screen before him and waited for it to reheat, its startup images rolling and fizzling. He would need to review the tactical assets that this starsystem boasted and its navigational anomalies. The Pang would not fail in her task.
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The Pang traveled invisible to eyes and sensors through the chill silence of space, carrying her skeleton crew of determined warriors out and away from Klingon space. The ship was quiet with all of its work crews gone. Of the compliment of three hundred ninety, only one hundred four remained.

Captain Dath’mar had again called his command staff into the briefing chamber and packed them around the confines of the cheep little plastic table. The captain remained standing as he regarded them all in stern silence. The monitor on the wall behind him and the small screen in the center of the conference table both showed the configuration of the Chetell starsystem. It possessed ten planetary bodies, each with at least one small satellite. Its star was of the common yellow variety. Chetell III, their destination, was highlighted near the center of the slowly revolving map.

“This is our destination.” He told them, his voice dull and subdued. He wasn’t looking forward to any of this. “Brigadier La’ra has ordered us to curtail enemy casualties to prevent the start of war between us and the…Gorn.” He’d only barely avoided using the term ‘enemy’. He waited for his crew to take this in. Commander Kurvis was the first to stir near the head of the table.

“Speak.” Dath’mar told him with a small nod.

“By curtail…you mean…”

“No Gorn deaths will be tolerated. We are forbidden to destroy their on-station frigate or shore defenses.” The captain again paused to allow them the time to curse. To his mild surprise, they merely looked back and forth amid themselves and gaped. His crew was a disciplined band. Pride in them awoke deep inside him, and not for the first time since taking this command. Kurvis looked back to him.

“You must be…” The First Officer halted before insinuating anything he’d immediately regret. “How can he expect us to complete this mission without destroying Gorn defenses! We cannot simply begin beaming in their minerals and not expect to be attacked. Their planetside guns are arrayed all about the mining sites. They also have terrestrial shielding. And that escort is not going to simply let us have our way. She may be small, but she poses a great risk to us if we do not eliminate her!”

Once the First had had his say, the captain calmly nodded.

“This mission is onerous and inglorious. But it will be done. The planet’s defenses are formidable,” he began the meat of his briefing, turning to the wall mounted viewer and pointing to the highlighted spheroid. The image enhanced and depicted an aerial view of the main continent where resided the largest nitrate mining complex. The ground was torn and scared from the Gorn’s efforts and massive installations dotted the surroundings. “However, there is one fatal flaw. It is civilian built, and not built to defend against cloaked vessels with Klingon transporters. They have no idea we can use our beams while cloaked, unlike the Romulans. Their entire defense network is powered by a single warp reactor…” He pointed to a rounded building with peripheral hubs. “Here. Once disabled, the Gorn’s defenses should crumble.”

“Should?” Asked Shenna. As First Gunner, hers was much of the responsibility in combating their enemy. The prospect of undergoing this mission under no-fire orders frightened her to no end.

“We have no intelligence as to their backup capacity. It is suspected their guns will have some kind of battery system.” Dath’mar answered.

From the left side of the flimsy table, Hekk sat back with a smirk. “No one builds energy weapons to charge directly from a reactor. We must expect them to be able to continue to fire even without their reactors.”

“Indeed.” The captain nodded once more. “Our ground units will not only strike the reactor, but also their hard connections at two other points to further complicate their repairs. Without primary power, their shields will fail quickly and their guns will speak only sporadically.”

Kurvis sat forth, squinting as he scrutinized the images before them.

“Removing primary power will not be enough. We must also ensure the few shots they are able to hurl at us do not disable us. I suggest beaming in strike forces to disable their guns.”

The fat surgeon made a noise.

“We barely have the manpower for that. The Gorn are strong—“

“We are Klingons!” Kurvis spat back. “Caught by surprise, they will be overwhelmed!”

Dath’mar studied his First and nodded. Kurvis might loathe this mission and the limitations emplace on them by Command, but, like the captain, he carried out the Empire’s will. The First was now looking up to Dath’mar.

“But what of the escort? How do we dispatch it without attacking it directly?”

Before the captain could formulate an answer, the navigator spoke up.

“Could we not lure it away?”

The assembled officers stared back to Lieutenant Ger’shall. The young woman seemed to sink a bit under the weight of their sudden attention. Dath’mar could not help but smile a tiny, dark grin at the sight and over her suggestion. The crew noticed his smile. Soon they too were shrinking before its ire. The captain did not smile. To see it now…was unsettling.

“Lure it away…” He repeated.

Ger’shall looked up at the captain with uncertainty bordering on meekness.

“If the escort is not present, it cannot be a threat to us.”

“A distress call?” Suggested the surgeon after some time of silence.

Kurvis shook his maned head.

“The Gorn know where each of their ships is at any given time. Civilian or otherwise. They will not be fooled. Pirates have tried similar on them before and failed.”

“What can we lure them away with, then?” Asked the doctor further.

Sudden realization dawned upon the captain. His smile had not yet faded.

“Something they hate more than us.”

The officers looked up at Dath’mar in question. Hekk matched the CO’s grin.

“Romulans.”

The animosity between the Gorn and the far away Romulans was quite renown. The expansionist cousins of the Vulcans had once tried to conquer the Gorn when their designs on the Klingon Empire had failed to yield fruit. The reptilian recluses had quite savagely shown the pointed-eared devils which way their home star lay. Repeated conflicts had marked history as time and again the two races’ forces had found one another and clashed.

“We can simulate the energy emissions of a scanning Romulan Warbird with an ECM package.” Hekk thought aloud. “A probe won’t do. To small, too limited. It would not provide a convincing rouse.”

“A shuttle.” Dath’mar provided, matching the engineer’s thought process.

“That means a pilot.” Added their Surgeon. “A pilot in a near defenseless shuttle craft, bobbing about out there and trying to draw the attention of a much larger ship. He’d be a dead man.”

Kurvis bore teeth in an animalistic leer.

“A glorious death!”

The surgeon did not appear to agree with the warriorly sentiments of death in battle. He rolled his eyes and looked away. None noticed but Dath’mar. The captain already knew where his doctor’s convictions lay, and was not bothered. The captain sat slowly into the small chair near the head of the table and allowed the small smile to fade away. The countenance of stone again reigned.

“Who do we send off on this glorious, one way mission?”

The First Officer drew to his full height within his chair and seemed to take on a look of satisfaction. “I know just the man…”
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“So! The captain wishes me to volunteer for my death!”

Commander Kurvis smiled grimly back to Lieutenant Motek. The former first gunner’s outburst had been fully expected. The shorter man fumed and raged behind his own eyes as he glared bloody holes through the executive officer.

“No. I am offering you the chance to redeem yourself before the captain.” The First told him. “The captain ordered me to pick the man I thought best.”

“Then you offer me nothing!” Motek hurled back, stalking to the far end of his shared cabin. Thankfully, the other junior officers assigned to this berth were on duty. There were none present, other than the two of them. None would hear the disgrace the lieutenant would likely begin to rail. “I have no desire to redeem myself before that cowardly to’pah!”

“You believe he has treated with you unjustly?” Kurvis asked in a voice far calmer than the boy deserved. Motek snapped his face back to glare once more at the First.

“He stabbed a man unable to defend himself! Would you have done the same, Kurvis?”

“No. I’d have shot you before the attack began. As your particulate matter settled onto the deck, I’d have assumed the guns myself and done your job for you. You got off lucky.” Kurvis was again grinning, this time with pronounced malice as the former gunner’s face fell into a long look of shock. “If you have a grudge against your captain, seek to settle the matter in the in an honor duel. Till then, do your duty and stop your infantile tirade against him. Word of your fit in the mess has reached me. It has likely reached the captain’s ear also. Do not test his patience…or mine.”

Motek continued to stare back, standing still as a post before his bunk. His fists were no longer clenched. His hands hung limp at his sides. Kurvis had stopped smiling and was looking at the whelp in challenge. Before the boy decided to look away, the First Officer took a menacing step in.

“Now, do you have the gomptu’ to accept this mission? Or will you sulk in your cabin and continue to whine like a child?”
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To Hsta: I'm hoping that the idea of destroying the Gorn frigate, at least prior to this CH., was implied as a given...and therefor not brought up for discussion. Just thought I might clear that one up...

Anyway...about halfway through the chapters here. There are 8 more...any comments?

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« Reply #40 on: February 29, 2008, 02:52:51 am »
Nice plan! I like that you sketch an impossible task and then give a possibly usable solution. But even the best laid out plans fail at first contact. So GIMME MORE!
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« Reply #41 on: February 29, 2008, 09:00:39 am »
I too am impressed with the plan and the confrontation with the mutineer. I like seeing these "bog standard" Klingons being forced to think outside the box and come up with solutions none of them ever thought of before. You told that very well!

As for the plan, Larry screwing things up for Dath'mar with the 'No casualties' rule was funny. I liked this line:
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“Praxis! Every difficulty I hear is laid upon the altar of Praxis!”

While I t think the ground may indeed be scared of the Gorn, it'd probably be scarred by their mining efforts.  :D

You are really fleshing these characters out quite nicely, Guv. Keep it up! Looking forward to more.

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« Reply #42 on: March 01, 2008, 10:04:36 am »
To Hsta: I'm hoping that the idea of destroying the Gorn frigate, at least prior to this CH., was implied as a given...and therefor not brought up for discussion. Just thought I might clear that one up...

Yes, MUCH clearer now.  Excellent work, as usual, THANKS!  8)

I will note that I do recall a TOS episode where Klinks used fake distress calls to lure the Enterprise away from a planet they were interested in.  Scotty had been left in charge of the Bridge, IIRC.
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« Reply #43 on: March 01, 2008, 10:47:58 pm »
I remember it. Was where the idea actually originated. Was hoping to kinda imply that such was not the norm for the 'bog standard' Klingon who's mind is muddled by misconceptions of honor.

Glad yall are liking!

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CH. 8





“I have found our pilot.”

Dath’mar cast a slow glance back at his First as Kurvis returned to the bridge.  He was relatively certain as to whom the XO was referring. The knowledge did not bother the silent captain. Let that officer prove himself again or die in the trying.

Dath’mar nodded his understanding and returned his stern eye to the stars streaking past on the main viewer. The captain was not truly seeing what his eye looked upon. His mind’s eye was looking upon the scope of the task ahead of them. The onerous mission to save a colony, and thereby helping to preserve their floundering Empire, without inflicting casualties upon an enemy that would not pay them the same favor. There was challenge there, without doubt. His orders seemed a cruel joke. There was no glory in completing the mission this way. Warriors throughout the Empire would jest about the Pang, who sneaked in the dead of night as a thief and stole the property of the Empire’s neighbors.

Giving such orders as these made La’ra seem the fool. Dath’mar knew better. La’ra had bested Kruge, brought down his Great House. La’ra had survived Captain Sharp of the Endeavour. No, the Brigadier was no one’s fool. His reasoning was sound, even if the methods he ordered employed were unorthodox. Surely, the veteran officer would have made a better suggestion were he not somehow hemmed in by his options.

Dath’mar, however, was not about to lay claim to having envisioned this quest. He still considered such methods beneath him and his crew. Their goal was honorable. Their methods for achieving it would not be.

The problems of completing their mission swirled within the captain’s head. He stared a hole clean through the main viewer in his concentration. The enemy’s defenses would not be so easy to subvert. Even should their escort vessel be drawn away by their planned rouse, the Gorn planet would not be so easy to wriggle past. Being hampered in the ways he could carry out his mission, Dath’mar would have to discover a new way to ensure the survival of his ship. He held no faith in the idea that the Gorn would be defenseless once their main power was cut.

‘I must maintain control of their weapons once they are disabled.’ Dath’mar thought. Kurvis wished to send ground forces to take over their gunnery emplacements. That meant three teams to take over the gunnery control centers. They would have to remain in those centers until the cargo had been extracted. The Gorn would fight like demons from Grethor to reclaim them from enemy hands. They might even destroy those centers out of spite.

‘My warriors will be hard pressed to retain those centers while using only stun-force weaponry.’ The captain’s face turned sour as he realized what they would go through down there. He would have to lock their weapons on stun to ensure they adhered to their orders. He was hesitant to commit such an act. Orders be damned.
Three nine-man groups would be the typical prescribed method for assaulting and holding such emplacements as those weapon control towers. Twenty-seven warriors. Men he did not have to spread around. He already needed nine to assault the reactor installation, and two groups of three to sever the power conduits. Dath’mar pondered. He could save the men meant for the conduits, instead blasting them from orbit. Surely La’ra would not begrudge him the use of his disruptors. The captain felt the urge to smile. He felt he could trim down the existing groups and create the assault units to hit each of his targets. Another briefing in that tiny room below would be necessary to inform the officers of his changes.

“Now crossing Gorn border.” Kurvis updated the captain. The First Officer stood with hands behind his back next to the navigator, Ger’shall. Ger’shall had been ingenious to offer her idea earlier. This was rare for an officer so young. Even now, she showed her youth as she sat at her station and monitored the ship’s passage. Her wide, high-cheeked face shone with inexperience and childish repose. She would not likely be much use in a ground fight or a boarding, but he already knew she could hold up during a ship-to-ship firefight. This was a start. Combined with a good head on her shoulders, she might have a grand career.

“Set for maximum stealth.” Dath’mar called out to his crew.

Kurvis nodded his ascent and turned for the helm.

“Reduce speed to warp factor four! Weapons, secure all scanning! Switch completely to passive scanners!” The XO’s path took him to the engineer’s post at the foremost bulkhead. “Cut secondary power and secure reactors. Activate exhaust buffers.”

Each of his commands received the necessary responses, leaving both he and the captain satisfied that their ship was completely and totally invisible. The Gorn were renown for their persistent patrols and adept watch stations. It would be no mean feat to reach their first objective undetected.

“Estimated time of arrival to Tres’in Nebula, three hours, forty-six minutes.” The helmsman reported. She looked back for the captain’s response. He ignored her. Kurvis smiled and headed back that way.

“Very well, Bekk. Maintain your course and speed.”

The captain was all too aware of the younger officer’s desire to please him in the performance of their duties. Such did not always bear forth good results. An officer too eager to get the attention of the captain took risks, hurried or ignored regulations. His method had always been to allow his First to take care of such men and women. Kurvis was perceptive.

Dath’mar leaned into the thin upholstery of his command chair and forced the tension from his bones. He fought to clear his mind for a time. There would be plenty to worry over soon enough. He had enough to do, maintaining his imposing figure and pretending to be bored.
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IKS Pang slowed to a halt at the furthest reaches of the blue and silver Tres’in Nebula. The giant, swirling formation of gasses reached out for three light years, and its irradiated matter shown out against the stark galaxy like a beacon. The fields stretching forth from the Tres’in were not greatly powerful. But they clouded every sensor frequency utilized on this side of the galaxy. Thus was the reason the Gorn kept their assets away from this area of space.

And thus would it make a grand place for a ‘Romulan’ ship to take detailed, long-range scans of the Gorn’s outer colonies. The energized stellar emissions would mask active sensor waves, allowing a scout to operate for a long time without being noticed. There would be no immediate response should the Gorn suddenly take notice.
For these purposes, the nebula also worked well with Captain Dath’mar’s plan. It’s distance meant that it would take a very long time for that escort to get here. And the nebula’s existence meant that their volunteer pilot might also survive his mission.


Before the lone, tall captain, a single, bland looking grey shuttle sat on the hanger deck in silence. Its pilot stood before him. Lieutenant Second Motek was completely armored, his disruptor and d’k’tagh in place. Dath’mar looked at him coolly. The lieutenant would like to employ either or both of those weapons in his death. The captain bore both his hand-built disruptor and his blade. He felt no fear for the man before him.

Motek stood waiting. Likely he thought himself to look impassive. Any could detect the anger writhing inside him. Dath’mar took a slow step toward the boy. The other tensed, looking for sign of attack.

“Are you prepared for your mission, Lieutenant?”

Motek’s eyes narrowed even more than before.

“Yes, my captain.”

“Your electronics package will emulate Romulan scanners. Direct their beams toward the Chetell system and amplify your emissions to cover the distance. Scan for short durations so as not to appear false. Run for cover when it becomes obvious you have drawn their attention. Seek refuge within the neb—“

“You counsel me to run like a targ!”

Dath’mar stepped closer. He was now close enough to strike should he want to. Motek held his ground, eyes widening. The captain leaned forth just a bit. His eye pierced the officer. “I’m giving you operational orders to survive your mission. Is this clear, Lieutenant?”

“Perfectly clear, Captain.”

The reply was slick with hatred.

“Once we have begun our operation, the escort will turn back. This is when you will make your return to Klingon space. Do so quickly. Bring my shuttle back intact.”

Dath’mar took a cautious step in reverse to clear the distance between he and his budding adversary. Motek took an aggressive step in, drawing close once more.

“Should I return from this inglorious suicide attempt, I ask that you grant me one thing.”

Dath’mar stared back, considering.

“What?”

“I demand you meet me in the circle of equals. A duel. Blades in the sparing chamber.”

Dath’mar remained stone-faced. He took his time in answering, as though deciding, weighing options. He already knew his answer. “You will have your duel, Lieutenant. Station!”

Motek saluted his captain, despite the rift between them. He had been honored by the acceptance of the duel. He had something to look forward to upon his return. It would fuel his will to return from his mission. “Qa’pla!”

“Success!” Dath’mar replied, returning the salute lazily.

Motek glared for a final time and reached aside to open the shuttle’s side hatch. The door swung up and open for the lieutenant, who clambered inside and began the process of powering up. Soon, the shuttle was lifting to revolve toward the after bay door. Dath’mar remained immobile, staring at the small craft that hummed and whistled next to him. He motioned high for the enlisted warrior in the control pod to open the main door.

The hatches reeled themselves aside, revealing the panorama of space looming beyond the field protected portal. The shuttle boosted ahead, its hull shimmering as it passed through the hanger’s forcefields and then again as it exited the Pang’s cloaking shield. The shuttle made a sudden turn, taking it from the captain’s view. The doors slid closed.

The mission had truly begun. He did not trust the youth out there, but Dath’mar was reasonably sure that the boy would fight Fek’lhr himself to return here for his promised chance at revenge. The captain did not look forward to it. He regretted the notion the notion that he would have no choice but to slay on of his own men. He had seen far too many of his people killed before him, uselessly, for him to relish the idea of killing another, even for honor. He’d chosen not to kill the boy when he’d had clear reason to days ago.

The future would be what it chose, he decided.

Captain Dath’mar left the droning hanger bay as the ship’s engines again powered up and accelerated to faster than light velocities.
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The Surgeon slowed as he neared the Captain’s door. The lock showed to be on. This was not often the case unless Dath’mar was sleeping. Likely the man was in there, prone on his rack, gathering up rest needed for the coming trials. It was many hours from the Tres’in Nebula to Chetell. It would be several more hours worth of passage, likely under some form of pursuit, between their destination and their home skies. The doctor almost thought better of awakening his commanding officer.

Just as quickly as doubt had occurred to him, it inexplicably died. The Surgeon pressed the enunciator key beside the security panel. An insectoid buzz sounded on the other side of the hatch.

“What!” Came the captain’s voice through the tiny speaker.

“I have come to see you, Captain.” The fat Surgeon declared, as though this were reason enough to disturb his commander’s slumber and be admitted. The light on the panel did turn yellow. He smiled and keyed the hatch open.

As usual, the fat man entered through the personal office. He found it devoid of life, and so continued on through the dimly lit cabin to the sleeping compartment. There lay Dath’mar on his foldout bunk. His targ lay on its side, tucked in beside the long-limbed warrior. The animal looked sleepily the doctor’s way, narrowing its black eyes to see the new intruder. The captain’s own eye glared back in annoyance. His hand still caressed the tawny back of his pet.

“What do you want, Surgeon?”

“I have come to learn that you have entrusted the fate of this ship and her mission to a man who has sworn to kill you. I’m wondering what sort of thought process leads a man to come to such a decision.”

The Surgeon said this with a light tone of humor and sarcasm. His head bobbled from side to side with his words, emphasizing his opinion of the captain’s logic. His jowls were split with a wide grin between his thin mustaches.

“You care to question my orders also, Surgeon?”

Some of the levity drained from the fat man, but not all.

“Oh, certainly not, my captain.” The doctor searched the dimness for a seat and found one against the starboard bulkhead. There he planted himself. “That would be a wonderful way to derail my stellar career in medicine and earn me a knife in the gagh basket. But I would like to know why you trust him to do this.”

Dath’mar’s eye drifted to the ceiling. His targ continued to stare at the intruder for him.

“I have agreed to duel him upon his return.” The captain’s voice droned dully. “This alone will drive him better than a training sergeant. His hatred for me will guide him back here, and with him with him will come success.”

“And his success means our success.”

“It makes ours all the more likely.”

The doctor’s perceptive eyes narrowed as he scrutinized the warrior lying on the bunk. Dath’mar, like so many, rested fully armored. His pistol lay within easy reach on the counter beside the rack. There was and abnormally melancholy air hanging over the captain. His face appeared almost mournful. The surgeon shifted uncomfortably in the thin metal chair beneath him. He didn’t totally like or understand what he was detecting in his normally immovable commanding officer.

“You don’t like the prospect of killing that boy, do you?”

The first answer was a simple one.

“If he loses his duel, he will die.”

“That was not my question. You will not enjoy killing him. Will you?”

“It is a sad thing for a Klingon to kill another over mere…pride.”

The surgeon’s lips curled into a vehement sneer. These thoughts echoed his own.

“This happens every day. All over the Empire.”

Dath’mar continued to look to the ceiling.

The surgeon’s mind caught on a fact that added detail to the mystery of Dath’mar’s malaise.

“You could have killed that boy on the bridge when he questioned your orders during combat. Yet you merely stabbed him…wounded him. Can it be that our dire and dismal captain has seen enough of his own brethren die?”

The captain’s eye came back to rest on the fat doctor. His face was bland.

“I have seen enough of them die without use, Doctor. To be forced to kill him over a matter of his misplaced pride---“ The captain suddenly halted, now glaring with anger at the fat man. “You draw me into far too open conversation, Surgeon! Enough of your prodding!”

The fat man stood up from his chair. It was no longer any comfort to him. He laughed down at the captain who still nailed his hide with the evil eye. “Perhaps I draw you into open conversation because our stone-faced captain needs a friend on this ship of strangers. You do not fraternize with your First. You have not taken a woman from among the crew or officers. All you have other than me is that hairy plate-lunch at your side… By the way… What did you name that flea bag?”

“’UQ QetwI’.” Dath’mar looked back to the wall. The surgeon would have bet his last Drakar that he’d seen the ghost of a smile on the captain’s lips. So he did have a sense of humor…

“Running Dinner indeed.” The fat man turned to make his escape, lumbering back the way he’d came. “I shall leave you to your repose, Captain. Sleep tight.”
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« Reply #45 on: March 14, 2008, 11:14:45 am »
Finally!

Sorry, Guv, but for some reason my internet doesn't like 'Dirt'.  Every other thread I try and bring up on the board works, but this one stalls halfway through until just now.

You already know my opinions on pretty much every part of this story, but wanted to let ya' know I was still readin'. ;D

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« Reply #46 on: March 14, 2008, 03:25:44 pm »
Excellent!!!  Just can't get enough Dirt and I'm glad to see I'm not the only one to take advantage of the forum outage to get some work done.   There were a couple of jarring instances of repeated words, but I'll let the wordsmiths here post the mark-up editing comments.  I'm simply enjoying this exceptional tale as it unfolds.

As for La'ra, roger that.  Working on Rommie's song parody now.   :D
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« Reply #47 on: March 14, 2008, 10:30:22 pm »
 There were a couple of jarring instances of repeated words, but I'll let the wordsmiths here post the mark-up editing comments. 

Repeated words? I am confused.

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« Reply #48 on: March 15, 2008, 01:16:08 am »
Repeated words? I am confused.

Like in this paragraph:

The mission had truly begun. He did not trust the youth out there, but Dath’mar was reasonably sure that the boy would fight Fek’lhr himself to return here for his promised chance at revenge. The captain did not look forward to it. He regretted the notion the notion that he would have no choice but to slay on of his own men. He had seen far too many of his people killed before him, uselessly, for him to relish the idea of killing another, even for honor. He’d chosen not to kill the boy when he’d had clear reason to days ago.

Oh, and I think you meant that he would have no choice but to slay one of his own men.   ;)
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« Reply #49 on: March 15, 2008, 12:46:14 pm »
Good stuff. 
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« Reply #50 on: March 15, 2008, 01:52:13 pm »
Funny that the grammar check wouldn't pick that up... Oh, well. It is fixed in the home copy. Thank you.

Glad y'all continue to enjoy.

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« Reply #51 on: March 23, 2008, 11:42:53 pm »
Now...to the nitty-gritty...


CH. 9





Twenty-seven hours of listless waiting and slow preparation found the Pang and her warriors slowly coasting toward Chetell III. For the first fourteen hours of the journey from Tres’in, the mighty cruiser had maintained a steady velocity of warp factor seven. This was a moderately fast speed for their purposes, but with proper care, did not broadcast their presence further than three light years away. Their circling course had been carefully constructed to keep the largest planetary bodies between Pang and the waiting Gorn.

Thirteen hours out from her destination, the battlecruiser began to scale back her speed. Dropping first to warp five, then four, three and so on over the passing hours, her crew lessened their outgoing energy emissions and traceable telltale signatures. Seven light minutes outside the Gorn mining system, the Pang finally dropped out of warp speed, resigning to coast the rest of the way in with a final surge of full impulse power.

No engine breathed aboard the stealthy cruiser. Her main reactor had been scaled back in power production. It only made enough energy to fuel the cloak. All else was fed by battery. Nearly all outboard systems had been secured. Maneuvering thrusters remained silent. Active sensors were dead. The life support system was set to the barest minimum. Only the smallest amount of energy escaped from the navigational deflectors; they remained necessary since even the smallest space rock could endanger them at such high sublight speed.

Pang had coasted, half-drifting, into the core of the alien star system. Her entire crew was at their posts. Each watched their instruments for the slightest sign of betrayal to the enemy. In such situations, everything became the enemy. Their systems, the faulty ones and the misused. Their own mistakes. Unforeseeable happenings outside their ship and beyond their control… Successful incursion demanded complete vigilance.

Dath’mar stood bent behind the science console, leaning lightly against the back of Lieutenant Commander I’rell’s chair. His vision scoured her panel for any sign of errant signals and unwanted emissions. The science officer kept a watchful eye as well, even as she also watched for sign of enemy wariness.

“The Gorn warship maintains its orbital path.” She updated in a small, light voice.

Dath’mar nodded. The crimson from the glyphs on her board bathed his angular face. He seemed a vision born of blood. I’rell noted this with amusement and a slight trace of fear. The captain possessed a fatal persona that made her suspect he wanted nothing more than to drop his cloak now…to open fire on the Gorn and turn this into an open battle. His mannerisms did not speak this. Nor his expression. These remained unreadable as ever.

The very air about the man sweated pent up violence.

“Now nearing apogee in our course for the planet, Captain.” Called out Ger’shall. The navigator looked up from beneath her sweaty curls of light brown hair to see her captain’s reaction. “Beyond this point we begin to pass Chetell III and will have to reverse course to correct for orbit.”

The First Officer quietly stepped closer to Dath’mar. The captain kept his eye fixed on the alien escort. The Gorn ship had yet to slip around the curvature of the colony world from them. Pang remained within direct line of sight of her. One small mistake now would spell disaster. For Pang. For Galt. The Empire.

Sweat dripped from the executive officer’s bearded chin. The unrecycled air on the bridge was stifling. The ventilators had been disengaged for seven hours now. Heat convection from engineering circulated the air in an effort to keep it oxygenated. This made it stale and warm. But this method consumed less energy and created a lesser signature than the life support generators.

“The Gorn ship is facing away…” Kurvis observed of the enemy. He was anxious to make orbit. Backtracking to achieve orbit would only mean more of a chance to be detected. Once in orbit, planetary reflection and magnetic fields would help to obscure the Pang.

Dath’mar continued to watch the circling alien craft. Its orbital path was most inopportune. It’s course seemed designed by fate to keep the little vessel in sight of Pang for the longest period of time possible. The captain watched. The Pang drifted. The Gorn ship circled slowly.

Dath’mar finally shook his head and stood up straight.

“Slow the ship.”

With a pronounced nod, Kurvis turned for the flight control stations.

“Helm, braking thrusters. Trigger minimal reverse thrust and increase steadily to one half power. Execute!”

Bekk Akara nodded her understanding and bent to work. Her normally luxurious dark brown hair was pulled into a dank, tangled mass behind her glistening neck. The helmsman dripped as she worked. The Pang began to slow, lethargically at first, resistant. Then her velocity began to drop steadily.

Dath’mar and I’rell watched the reptiles’ ship intently on their scopes. The captain was prepared to order attack stations at the slightest provocation. A battle against that tiny craft would be short indeed. The angular, needle-like Gorn ship never tottered in its orbit. Her power emanations remained steady.

“No reaction from target.” Came from I’rell.

“Maintain alignment…” Dath’mar murmured. He was not yet satisfied.

There came a shining wave of emerald energy from the Gorn escort, depicted on the sensor images as a cone waving out from the little vessel. Both watching soldiers tensed as the scan passed over their position. Kurvis drew up still behind his commander. They waited for further indication…

The wave of energy passed on. It swung thirty degrees past Pang and concentrated. An active pulse of a different sort shot out from the escort, pegging an area of unoccupied space with detective energy. The Gorn received no return. Both scanners shut down. The escort kept on circling the planet.

Dath’mar looked to his exec.

“They are alert soldiers.” Kurvis remarked.

The captain gave the barest of grunts and stalked away for the command dais. He ascended its summit, but did not yet sit. He looked back out over the stations about him. “Watch the Gorn. As they pass around the colony’s perimeter, we will close. Not before.”

Each of his officers turned to him as they heard his words. They nodded their understanding, Kurvis included. The First would have to test his own patience. Dath’mar flopped into his chair with little sound and glowered at the brown and white colored world on his viewer. He seemed to be staring curses at the planet and its inhabitants.
Were his stare a virulent plague, the populace of Chetell III would all be gone.

I’rell turned her seat away from her post to look to her commanding officer. He glared her way in challenge. The science officer was becoming less and less affected by his shadow. She looked up to him with a mild defiance he found he liked. “Lieutenant Motek will begin his broadcast within the minute, Captain.”

Dath’mar nodded, then glanced to his First. This look was all Kurvis needed from his captain. “Science officer,” his thick, melodious voice said.  “Open long range subspace detectors and begin listening for our gunner’s rouse.”

I’rell nodded and returned to facing her station. The heat swelled. The officers blinked sweat out of their eyes and remained on the watch. None spoke. Even the few pieces of running machinery seemed to be muting their voices. Dath’mar looked idly on at the screen before them all.

Kurvis turned suddenly, his wet mane flinging with the motion.

“Contact! Intense sensor emissions now reaching Chetell, Captain. Motek is right on time!”

Dath’mar looked at him, measuring. He nodded.

“The Gorn?”

Kurvis cast his gaze back to the science panels. Both operators worked to enhance the images they had of the now receding escort ship. The little vessel continued on, seemingly oblivious to the energy waves rebounding in the system. Were the emissions too weak? Had they over thought their plan in their efforts to avoid seeming specious?

Time crawled by in the excruciating stillness. The Gorn continued on under the Klingons’ watchful eyes. The Pang sat near motionless amid the swirling and shooting bodies of the system. Dath’mar closed his eye, trusting in his crew while he rested his mind for a time.

The Gorn warship passed out of view of the drifting battlecruiser.

“The enemy has moved out of sight…”

At I’rell’s voice, Dath’mar’s eye opened and he straightened.

“Helm, rotate the ship and push us into orbit, minimal thrust.”

“Yes, my lord!”

The stars on the main viewer jostled as the ship’s visual recorders fought to maintain a steady image against the Pang’s spin. The unusual motion quieted and the planet centered there began to enlarge slowly. Pang was again in flight.

Kurvis leaned in on the sensor station. His shoulders knit together in frustration.

“Motek continues to broadcast. Soon he will disengage and wait for a quarter hour to be—“

Motion burst past the left-hand side of the viewer. There was a flash and a hint of pseudo-motion from behind Chetell III. The captain looked over to his exec. “First!”

“A warp trail, Captain!” Kurvis could not contain his exuberance. His great fist crashed down on the console, causing a squeal of protest from the machinery within. “The Gorn have gone to full battle speed, my lord! They bear for the Tres’in Nebula!”

Finally, the captain truly relaxed. The bulk of their worries had just been lessened. He closed his eye once more, face inclining toward the dark ceiling bulkheads. “Put us in orbit helm. All stations…maintain stealth.”
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CH. 9 [pt.2]

With the Gorn escort gone, the Pang had gained to opportunity of watch down on her enemy with impunity. She established a geosynchronous orbit, parking directly above the colony site. Commander Kurvis took on the task of guiding the science and gunnery officers as they scoured the lands below them with visual and passive detection systems. With patience and skill, they were able to fully map the installation below and target its most critical resources. Pang now knew where the critically needed nitrates were stored.

Dath’mar had watched on in typical silence, offering a word here and there in support. Otherwise, he remained out of their way.

Time passed more swiftly now that each had their respective tasks at hand. The First Officer made repeated trips down to the assault staging area, briefing his men on the latest intelligence as it was forthcoming. The Qas Dev who remained on board were to be the leaders of the strike teams. The captain had ordered four teams to be readied for deployment. Seven warriors, including the First, would assault the reactor installation. Four men would strike each of the gunnery control towers. They would be dressed in the heaviest armor available in the armory and bear all the arms they could carry. The captain had forbidden all melee weapons save for daggers. Dath’mar knew the zeal of the warrior. The marines could not be expected to control themselves to the point of not cutting the Gorn to pieces.

Kurvis returned to the bridge after his fifth inspection of the troops below. He had already donned the heavy armor meant for pitched ground combat. The typical Klingon soldier did not favor the more bulky build of the assault gear, but its superior protection could not be argued. The First carried his rifle slung over a shoulder. Dath’mar looked him over from atop the command dais.

“The Qas Dev are at full readiness, Lord.” Kurvis reported. There was swelling pride within the commander. The captain nodded in return, his eye unblinking.

“You don’t care to take a heavier rifle, First Officer?”

Kurvis blinked and unslung the weapon from his shoulder pad. He had in his hands the standard rifle, little more than the quite powerful, venerable pistol unit with an attached stock. The stock bore additional power cells and an optical sight for long range shooting. The First looked the rifle over and shrugged. “I find the standard weapon quite satisfactory, Captain. I doubt I’ll find opportunity to fire further than one hundred qams, and while not as powerful, this weapon will shoot for a longer period of time.”

Dath’mar looked back to him with some doubt, but did not argue with the First. Kurvis waited for an objection to arise, and when none was forthcoming, he look