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Re: Derelict
« Reply #20 on: August 07, 2007, 11:41:06 am »
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"The Andromedans," Kadh said, "will never stop coming.  Not until they are all destroyed or we are."

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Re: Derelict
« Reply #21 on: August 07, 2007, 02:19:51 pm »
I was fully expecting the stasis field generator to have backfired or something.  And this can't have been the only one left on the ship, since there would've had to been more than one to make more Kadhs.

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Re: Derelict
« Reply #22 on: August 16, 2007, 11:03:32 pm »
"I'm telling you again, he's not a Klingon!" the Galaxy's doctor said, his face flushed from continued exertion of his vocal cords.  "He's half-machine and that makes him Borg."

"The Borg were eliminated centuries ago," Gorgath replied equally sharply.  "I don't care what he scans like, that man is Klingon."  He stabbed a finger at the wall monitor that showed their guest  in the officer's mess, dining with two security lieutenants.

"Which is well after that ship left the Galaxy," Commander McLeod reminded him.  "In fairness, however, which was well before the Borg were first encountered.  I suspect the mechanical additions are Andromedan in origin."

"We do have a few Andromedan artifacts aboard," Captain V'traia finally spoke.  "Doctor, compare his artificial organs with those devices for similar technology.  In the meantime, he is our guest.  We shall treat him courteously but give him restricted access only.  After the doctor has completed his scans, invite Kadh to join us.  He could be a great source of information."

"What of his ship?" Gorgath asked.

"Technically," answered the commander, "it is now part of the Federation Star Fleet, as all National fleets were absorbed in the unification process.  I doubt he will see it that way so it would be best if we left it here."

V'traia nodded.  "Briefing over.  Resume your duties until the doctor is ready."
"The Andromedans," Kadh said, "will never stop coming.  Not until they are all destroyed or we are."

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Re: Derelict
« Reply #23 on: August 19, 2007, 11:10:03 pm »
"Of course all my cyborg implants are from the Andromedan galaxy," Kadh answered the doctor's question.  "That is where the founders' mission sent them."

"So you're an Andromedan cyborg that has been sent here to destroy us," the doctor continued.

The Klingon glared at the human.  "It is fortunate that you are not under my command.  Bring me your captain."   Kadh turned away from the doctor and began some form of what appeared to be ancient Klingon meditation.  The doctor considered the array of surgical instruments beside him and the exposed back of the Klingon.  "I will kill you if you make the attempt," the Klingon said without otherwise reacting and the doctor withdrew his hand which had been unconsciously moving toward his equipment tray. 

Instead he walked to the intercom furthest from the patient, forcing himself to relax.  "Sickbay to bridge.  I've completed my examination of the prisoner; his implants are Andromedan; and he demands the Captain be brought to him."  Despite the extra time, hostility was clear in his tone.

"V'traia here," the captain's voice responded immediately.  "Tell our guest I am on my way."  The doctor relayed the message and the Klingon answered with a ferocious grin and a hungry look that stayed on his face and followed the doctor uncomfortably until Captain V'traia entered sickbay.

"Thank you for submitting to our examination," he said addressing the Klingon. "I apologize for any offense."  The Klingon bowed.  "Is there any title by which you would have us address you?

"I am Ambassador Kadh of the Ghostwise Empire.  I have been sent to aid in the renewal of contact between our two peoples.  I have questions to ask and questions, no doubt, to answer."  Here the Klingon gave a second, shallower, bow.  "I know more about you than you do of me, so I will answer your questions first."

V'traia raised his right hand in formal Vulcan salute.  "Welcome Ambassador Kadh.  Live long and prosper."

The Klingon imitated the gesture.  "Live long and prosper, Captain.  Shall we continue in front of your staff?"

The senior staff was assembled soon thereafter in the briefing room.  After V'traia explained Kadh's status, Commander McLeod asked, "Ambassador.  We came on this mission expecting to face an Andromedan race much akin to those that invaded our galaxy.  How is it that the representative of your galaxy appears in the form of a Klingon?"

The Klingon glared at the android.  "How is it that an android appears in the form of a human?  That is what you are.  I am Klingon, augmented, but Klingon."

McLeod persisted.  "Ambassador, no disrespect was intended.  I simply desire understanding."

"It is a long story," the Klingon answered, appearing to allow himself to be mollified.  "Perhaps a history lesson is in order."
"The Andromedans," Kadh said, "will never stop coming.  Not until they are all destroyed or we are."

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Re: Derelict
« Reply #24 on: August 20, 2007, 08:58:44 am »
Eagerly awaiting that history lesson. This is better, Kadh. A mystery and some people who seem real to me. This style seems to suit you.

I may try it myself.
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Re: Derelict
« Reply #25 on: August 31, 2007, 02:08:13 pm »
Been working on something else unrelated.  Now I have spare time again.  Will post next bit tonight or tomorrow AM.
"The Andromedans," Kadh said, "will never stop coming.  Not until they are all destroyed or we are."

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Re: Derelict
« Reply #26 on: September 01, 2007, 03:22:42 am »
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Will post next bit tonight or tomorrow AM.

Umm... *Looks at watch impatiently* its past "tonight" and is now "tomorrow AM"... :carmen: :whip:

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Re: Derelict
« Reply #27 on: September 14, 2007, 01:44:54 pm »
I've been rather ill.  I'm back and better so will be resuming this story.
"The Andromedans," Kadh said, "will never stop coming.  Not until they are all destroyed or we are."

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Re: Derelict
« Reply #28 on: September 14, 2007, 09:06:03 pm »
I do, then, whole heartedly appologize for the comment above. I, and I assume many others, look forward to this story's conclusion.



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Re: Derelict
« Reply #29 on: December 07, 2007, 08:39:48 am »
While I'm working on Chapter 1 of The Promise, I'll post some more on this.  Installment coming tonight!
"The Andromedans," Kadh said, "will never stop coming.  Not until they are all destroyed or we are."

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Re: Derelict
« Reply #30 on: December 07, 2007, 07:57:12 pm »
*rings a gong loudly!*

What?  Seemed appropriate.
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Re: Derelict
« Reply #31 on: December 07, 2007, 10:12:32 pm »
Great, I've been gonged on my own thread!
"The Andromedans," Kadh said, "will never stop coming.  Not until they are all destroyed or we are."

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Re: Derelict
« Reply #32 on: December 07, 2007, 11:12:30 pm »
At least the host didn't show up trying to kill you on behest of the CIA!

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(Was actually trying to sound celebratory, but forgot about the friggin' Gong Show)
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Re: Derelict
« Reply #33 on: December 08, 2007, 12:15:57 am »
I kinda figured it was celebratory, but couldn't resist the other one.  Anyway, here's the teaser for the next part.  Again, no real pre-planning here. 


CHAPTER 1: INVASION


“We’re not much of a defense force” Blyre commented.  “One carrier, three escorts, and an old D7.  I hope you’ve got more up your sleeve than a waltz into the sunset.”

“There’s ghost…” Kadh started to explain.

“Ah yes, your Frax allies.  I’ve always wondered where they came from.”

Kadh laughed.  “Still too damn smart for your own good, eh?  They popped out of a spatial anomaly during the first battle at the old Hyperion station.  We hit it off very well.  They’ve got quite an armada ready now.  “We’ve got over a hundred ships waiting for us just outside the galaxy.”

Blyre laughed in turn.  “I’ve my own trump card to play for this little foray. “

“I heard when I came back that Commodore Brezgonne had been killed in battle some years ago,” Kadh said dryly.  “Frankly I never believed it.”

“Touché,”  Blyre said and gave Kadh a half salute.  “Ambassador Kotheme will escort us out of the Galaxy through Tholian space.  Brez has a starbase and a Tholian fleet waiting for us as well.  It looks like we’ll have a couple hundred ships waiting for us just outside the galaxy.”

“That leaves only one issue,” Kadh said and tugged on his beard.

“Who’s in charge... ” Blyre answered and chuckled.  “Rock, paper, scissors?”

The two old men, Klingon and Human, faced each other in battle for the last time.  Together they repeated the ancient words, “Jan, Ken, Po”.  Two fists raced towards open palms. 

"The Andromedans," Kadh said, "will never stop coming.  Not until they are all destroyed or we are."

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Re: Derelict
« Reply #34 on: December 08, 2007, 07:16:52 pm »
Excellent, very official way to decide on command structure! I like it!

I'll also have to wait a while befor using the same thing in my Ford series...

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Re: Derelict
« Reply #35 on: December 21, 2007, 02:42:29 pm »
Better than a duel to the death, especially when they're supposed to be allies.
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Re: Derelict
« Reply #36 on: December 24, 2007, 12:00:55 am »
Makes me wish Wally was still writing. Kinda miss his works. Sad to find out that Brez didn't live in this timeline. He made a great rules lawyer. And Kotheme... man, you put me down memory lane and then some. I hope that your next part(s) have some interaction (even a simple "hello") with the great ambassador.

Hope Kadh and Blyre tied the match, but I guess we'll see who is in charge, eh?

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Re: Derelict
« Reply #37 on: January 03, 2008, 01:09:46 pm »
Kotheme will get a personal meeting.  I try not to go too far with other people's characters especially since I can't get ahold of them to ask.  I'm sure Pat or Dan wouldn't mind, but Wally might.  We talked about this ending some a few years ago so I hope he'll accept this as a tribute to him and his character.

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Re: Derelict
« Reply #38 on: March 31, 2008, 01:34:46 am »
Kotheme went aboard the carrier to meet Blyre and Kadh.  When told how they had arranged the command structure, he glowed blue with amusement.  "As it was in combat," the Tholian said, "despite the unusual choice of battlefied, I still win the wager with my aide.  I calculated the likelihood at just under one-hundred percent.  Fortunately he does not know either of you well."

Kadh laughed and would have slapped the Tholian on the back, but Kotheme's encounter suit made the gesture pointless.  "Come with us.  Your diplomatic abilities far supersede ours put together.  The look he got from Blyre was not complimentary, but he knew the human agreed with him.

"My people require my skills here," Kotheme answered.  "Besides, no one negotiates with Andromedans.  They are the one uncompromising enemy that I have encountered."  The crystalline figure paled and Kadh knew he was remembering the Seltorians.  Blyre apparently did as well.

"Are there any concessions required of us to pass through Tholian territory?" the human asked. 

"A course has been laid out for you," Kotheme explained and passed a datapad to him.  "You must conform to the speeds and directions listed here.  No Tholian ship or base will intersect your path.  We will not be required to lie to your Federation when they ask if we have seen you."

"What about you?" Kadh asked.

The color returned to Kotheme's body.  "We are in the neutral zone.  Officially, I am here to tell you that your request to pass through Tholian space has been denied.  My ship will be leaving shortly after this meeting to give us the necessary separation so that your crossing the border will not be detected."

Kadh laughed.  "We should just conquer this galaxy between the three of us and then send an unbeatable armada against the Andromedans."  Blyre chuckled politely but then sighed pointedly.

"I have considered that possibility as well," Kotheme responded.  "It is unlikely that our combined genius would be defeated in such a war.  Given time to prepare.  With the current situation we would have a lesser chance, but the odds favor success by fifty point nine percent.  That is not worth the risk.  Even if it were, there is a ninety-six point two five percent chance that you would attempt a takeover after the victory.  It is in your Klingon nature."

"I am what I am," Kadh said.  "Shall we forget our plans of dominance then and have a glass of bloodwine to celebrate the onset of our great undertaking?"

"It would boil away before I could drink it," Kotheme responded while Blyre answered "I would prefer to leave out the blood and just have wine."

Kadh summoned his aide, who produced two bottles and an insulated container.  "One bloodwine, one French wine with some long complex name that no doubt means I paid too much for it, and one container of something even more unpronounceable that does remind me of the squeal of a tar chop.  Drink up gentlemen for we three will never meet again." 

"I am impressed," Kotheme said and Kadh noted his color change again to amusement.  From inside his encounter suit, two bottles appeared and he handed one to Kadh and one to Blyre.

"This is ridiculous," Blyre said, trying to maintain a straight face.  He reached down beside the briefing room table for his own collection of potables.  "We will be unable to move by the time we finish this stuff.  How about a bottle a year on this date?  We can start with Kotheme's since he's leaving soon."
 
For the last time, the three old soldiers drank together.
"The Andromedans," Kadh said, "will never stop coming.  Not until they are all destroyed or we are."

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Re: Derelict
« Reply #39 on: March 31, 2008, 11:16:55 pm »
Well, there was the "hello" I asked for. ;)

I don't know if you have Blyre or Kotheme  working with you on this, but you're writing their namesake 'toons very well.

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