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A new Story?
« on: January 30, 2006, 07:03:09 pm »
Howdy y'all.

How many folks is interested in somethin' new?

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Re: A new Story?
« Reply #1 on: January 30, 2006, 08:53:53 pm »
*handraise*
"Dialogue from a play, Hamlet to Horatio: 'There are more things in heaven and earth than are dreamt of in your philosophy.' Dialogue from a play written long before men took to the sky. There are more things in heaven and earth, and in the sky, than perhaps can be dreamt of. And somewhere in between heaven, the sky, the earth, lies the Twilight Zone."
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Re: A new Story?
« Reply #2 on: January 31, 2006, 09:08:05 am »
*Grim enters and drops his ass in the chair beside La'ra, gives La'ra a mug of bloodwine for his free hand, puts his feet on the low table in front of them and raises his hand while taking his first swallow *
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Re: A new Story?
« Reply #3 on: January 31, 2006, 06:44:35 pm »
Me! Me!! *waves hand in air franticly from the back of the room*
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Re: A new Story?
« Reply #4 on: January 31, 2006, 09:54:28 pm »
Okay, I'm game - what kind of new though?

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Re: A new Story?
« Reply #5 on: February 01, 2006, 02:14:51 am »
New is good.
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Re: A new Story?
« Reply #6 on: February 01, 2006, 01:49:27 pm »
No ask, you post  ;D

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Re: A new Story?
« Reply #7 on: February 09, 2006, 10:55:11 pm »
Here's the first two chapters. I'm going for something a bit new in presentantion. This ain't gonna be typical Trek, as La'ra might agree.  I could go on, but I rant enough as is...

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Brave New World
   CH. 1
   
   
   
   “A peace treaty!” The words were incredulous. Captain Ford had to agree that he’d felt the same sentiment only an hour ago upon hearing the news. He kept his brown eyes even and cool as he regarded his first officer. Commander Ben Thomas was understandably perplexed, and the captain intended to give the hulk of a man plenty of time to adjust and cope before voicing his own feeling on the matter. They each had a lifetime of personal anxt to get over before the news would ever make sense.

   “A peace treaty…” Thomas repeated, turning to pace across the confines of the captain’s cabin. He stopped before Ford’s antique firearms cabinet. “I can’t f*ckin’ believe it…”

   Most would blanch at the XO’s use of profanity. It wasn’t common in this day and age. But the captain had used the same and various worse terms from alien tongues. He didn’t have virgin ears.

   “How’d this happen?”

   Captain Chevis Ford sank down onto his bunk and raised his tumbler of rum back to his lips. “So far as I’m informed by the command message, Praxis’s explosion three months ago brought on a series of rush negotiations. The Klingons suffered an assassination of Chancellor Gorkon—“

   “I’d heard that much…”

   “Which led to the first female Klingon Chancellor, Azetbur, Gorkon’s daughter…”

   “I hadn’t heard that.”

   “Wherein she called for further negotiations at Khitomer. There was this big ass conspiracy… Something about Klingons, Romulans and certain Starfleet officers being in cohoots and trying to derail the peace initiative. Enterprise and Excelsior intervened and took down a Klingon warship in orbit of Khitomer and the negotiation went off successfully.”

   “So now Admiral Sharp’s Starfleet Chief of Operations.”

   “Our big boss.” Ford agreed. Word of Sharp’s taking over for Cartwright had come on the heels of news of the later having been arrested for unspecified breaches of interstellar law. It was all slowly coming into focus in the big picture.

   “How’s that affect us?”

   “Thus far, our orders are to finish our refit, reprovision and get ready for deployment.”

   “Nothing from the top of the food chain?”

   Ford looked up at the other, who still held a forgotten drink in his own meaty hand. Thomas was betting that Ford’s friendship with Admiral Sharp had let him in on a few secrets. It had, but only in terms of details about the opponent Enterprise had faced. Sharp had given nothing away as to fleet’s intentions toward their ship. Endeavour was freshly equipped, repaired and champing at the bit. But what would her duty be if the Klingons weren’t the bad guys any more?

   “Not really. Just a gentle prod to replace our reassigned division officers.”

   Ben rendered a look that was part grimace and part admonition.

   “Tactical division would be fine if you hadn’t promoted your chief of security…”

   “Fleet gave you such a high rank that the only way I could keep you was to make you XO. Sorry…”

   “Keep your sorrys. I was comfortable. Shoot the guns, beat up the bad guys.”

   “Life can’t stay simple forever. Would you rather be commanding a class at Advanced Tactical at the Academy? That’s what your experience and rank gets in that division. You’re better off.”

   Thomas pulled at the slim collar of his white duty shirt. He looked good in command division white. Security grey was very subdued. The new gold pin of a full-ranked commander still gleamed on the shoulder of his open jacket. “Probably. I wouldn’t take to any teaching job.” Thomas stared at the blue carpeted deck in silence for a time, then glanced back at Chevis. “I’ll gather you up a list of prospective division officer candidates and all them that might be promoted from within.”

   “Thank you, Mister Thomas. I got some data work ahead of me, so…carry on.”

   Thomas nodded back, downed his rum in one good gulp and made for the hatch. “I’ll get you that list by oh-eight-hundred tomorrow.” He said, setting his tumbler down as he left. Ford watched as the twin, deep blue doors hissed closed behind him.

   Endeavour was nearly empty of personnel and had been powered down for weeks undergoing her scheduled, sixth year refit. The ship had the feel of a house that was empty of all her children. The feeling was temporary. Endeavour was young, and it wasn’t as though they were putting her down. He’d decommissioned his previous command, the Gibbons. She’d been a forty-year-old Okinawa-Class frigate, refitted and retrofitted till she barely resembled her original form. It had been time enough to put her down.

   In another week at the most, this ship would be right back out there, making a difference. The only real question would be what kind of differences were necessary in this new world they had found themselves in…




   CH. 2




   “I was told you were only accepting applications from Vulcans for the science officer position. Is there a reason for this, Captain?”

   Captain Ford looked up from his desk to consider the expression on the dark fleshed Vulcan lieutenant standing at attention before him. He almost immediately chided himself for even looking for an expression. Being Vulcan, there was nothing to see. Her angular face was devoid of obvious emotion. He shrugged as he went back to looking over the data PADD in his palm.

   “Commander Thomas knows I prefer a Vulcan head of science, and took the liberty of only selecting applicants from your world.”

“Why the preference?”

The bald headed CO didn’t look up.

“Y’all are smarter than we are.”

“Sir?”

Ah… A bit of surprise in her voice. Ford took a bit of gleeful pleasure at having prized a tiny little hole in her unemotional veneer so swiftly. Innocently he glanced up at her. “You don’t agree, Lieutenant Surall?”

“Sir… I am uncertain how to respond.”

“Your species has a higher average intelligence quotient than mine, right?”

Surall seemed a bit taken aback, leaning a bit further away from the oak desk. Chevis retained his bland expression. The woman seemed to struggle with the right formula with which to answer. Likely she wanted to answer truthfully, but did not wish to ruin her chance to be the chief science officer aboard one of the few Excelsior-Class starships. “Sir, perhaps, however—“

Ford smirked, hoping to let her off the hook with his expression.

“A bit of modesty there, Lieutenant?”

“Some, Captain.”

“Good. Suffice it to say that I believe your race to be the most scientifically inclined of all Federation members. An Excelsior requires the very best. Are you it?”

Surall remained quiet for a few heartbeats.

“I believe so, Captain. And I have the experience other candidates do not.”

“Yeah, experience is at a premium these days since Kirk fired up the Genesis Planet and sucked in nearly every good science officer this side of the Great Barrier. You have the job, Lieutenant.”

“Thank you, sir.”

“Dismissed.”

Surall turned to leave, heading out to the now nearly fully staffed bridge beyond his ready room. Ford reclined in his office chair and studied the model of his first command, the USS Hawking. Ford was no stranger to combat missions, especially while in command of Endeavour. For all his efforts to replace his former XO with a great science officer, he really had to wonder how much work Miss Surall would really get. Would all the effort be wasted?

A shill reproduction of a boson’s whistle sounded from the desk comm.

“Yes?”

“Communications, sir. Urgent communiqué incoming from Command.”

“Patch it through.”

Ford straightened in his seat as the blue and white seal of the Federation appeared on his visual screen. Ford waited patiently for the system to do its security profile and load the waiting signal. Admiral Sharp’s wide cheeked face was what appeared. Ford instantly smiled.

“Got me a job, boss?”

Sharp’s deflated mood barely lent him to even the faintest smile. He looked over-tired and harried. His normal skin tone was nearly as dark as his new science officer’s, but today his pallor was faded and strained. His almond shaped eyes focussed slowly on the bearded captain. “Yes I do, Captain.”

“Something big?”

“Possibly. You are familiar with the KL-115 sector, are you not?”

“A few parsecs away from Goesa’vaina.”

“Indeed. You’re going to a planet in the Kovarn System within that sector. There is a prison camp based there run by the Ya’wenn. They mine bacinite ore using prisoner labor…” Sharp’s voice seemed so very tired. Likely he had been up all night going over critical developments dealing with the new Klingon situation. “A rumor recently reached General Tor of the Empire that the crew of one of his ships operating near the border might have been captured by a merc ship and taken there in the eighties.”

“Kovarn is on our side of the Neutral Zone?”

“The Klingons would have to cross over it to get there. The rumor reached him after the last bit of negotiations, and Tor’s been ordered to consult Starfleet before undertaking any operation to get any men it might have there.”

“Klingons are playing nice, eh?”

“Yes, they are.”

“So, are we escorting a vengeful cruiser across our space to beat down some non-aligned prison wardens?”

Sharp did smile at that. Almost.

“Not quite, Captain. I’m sending you. Go in, ascertain whether the Klingons are being held there, and if so, effect their return without beating anyone down…if you can manage that…”
Ford nodded seriously.

“Tall order, Admiral. Most non-aligned prison wardens aren’t going to hand over their prisoners without a fight or at least adequate monetary gain. Are we taking any latinum with us?”

“Ten blocks, Captain.”

Ford eyed Sharp closely. That was a huge amount of cash.

“We’re really wanting this treaty with the Klingons.”

“Of coarse we do, Captain. It’s what we’ve been hoping for.” The Admiral didn’t sound convinced with his spoken conviction. Starfleet opted for peace, but the Klingons had always been the enemy. Weren’t they always supposed to be, now and forever?

“So I’m to sweet talk them?”

“Whatever you have to do. There are other details, Captain, but those will be loaded into your computer within the hour. Go over the briefing info carefully. But whatever goes down there, make sure the Klingons get any survivors back. It’ll go a long way toward securing a future, firm treaty. Good hunting, Captain.”

“Aye, sir.”

The image of Jon Sharp faded and was replaced by the Starfleet security emblem. Ford leaned back in his synthetic leather chair and turned to look out the aft facing window. The cavernous interior of the huge docking station was all that could be seen outside the transparent aluminum porthole. A few, dimly lit windows were all to be had out there. So, he thought, these are the kind of missions that ensure peace. Bringing home the expatriates of your former enemy. He sat still and reflected on it all for a moment. In the end, he liked what he found within himself. His mission was to return captured soldiers to their homeland. He could live with that. Sucking down the last dribble of his near cold coffee, he left his ready room for the bridge beyond.

Passing through the security lobby and the two sentries there, he entered the bridge deck and looked the compartment over. There were a lot of new faces. There were also some familiar ones manning new positions. His gaze went past the new weapons officer, Lieutenant Daniel Nechayev, and fell upon the operations station in front and left of the conn. The large, dark haired man sitting there had been the ship’s former chief of engineering. Now he was the head of operations and every department head aboard answered to him. Ford was about to address him as the communications officer swung his seat around and sounded off in a high pitched young voice. “Captain on the bridge!”

Every hand on deck turned to greet him, some of the older hands doing so with amused looks on their faces. Ford did not disparage the youthful comm officer, but he wasn’t really used to being announced as he stepped onto the bridge. With a smile and a quick nod to all those looking at him, Ford stepped close to the comm station.

“Smith?”

The tall (it seemed most of the bridge crew was taller than he was now…) blonde headed lad stood up from his station and posed himself at attention. Ford smirked at the display. “Lieutenant Noah Smith, sir!”

“At ease, Lieutenant. You’re straight from the academy, yes?”

“Aye, sir!” The enthusiasm was cute, really…

“Quit yelling. You were promoted straight to O-3 level right after your training cruise due to excellent performance and equally excellent grades, yes?”

Lower now, and with pride.

“Aye, sir.”

“Great, kid. Now don’t rattle off every time I come back from the head. If I want people to take note of my returning to the bridge, I’ll holler at ‘em as I roll through the doors. Got it?”

Lieutenant Noah Smith honestly looked as though he didn’t know what to say. Ford figured there would be a lot of times like this with this boy. He seemed highly excitable. Chevis continued to look the boy in the eye till he responded.

“Aye, aye, sir.”

“Good boy.” Ford turned away, letting the young lieutenant sit back down, and returned his gaze toward his chief of operations. “Mister Davenport, how’s my ship squared away?”

“Ready to go, Cap’n.”

“Groovy, all hands stand to. Prepare for launch.” The captain nudged the lad beside him. “Get me clearance from yard control.”

“On speakers, Captain?” Smith asked. Ford moved away from comm to stand by the tactical station.

“I don’t want to talk to them. That’s what I hired you for.” Thomas glanced back from the helm station where he was leaning next to the new officer there. He grinned at the humorous glint in his captain’s eye. Ford returned the expression. “Mister Thomas, ready for a mission?”

“Aye, Cap’n.” Thomas never called his friend ‘sir’.  Ford had noticed long ago, but never commented on it. “We’re a bit early for departure. I suppose Command cut us some orders?”

“Yeah. Staff briefing in four hours. I want a coarse set for the Kovarn starsystem, sector KL-115.”
The thin, black haired kid at the helm glanced back Ford’s way. “Lots of stellar debris out that way, Cap’.”

“Plasma strings and nebula?”

“Aye.”

“Just about what I was remembering. Get the coarse laid in and review the most current astro-data you have on that sector. Starfleet doesn’t get that way often, but the merchant guild has got to have something on the area.”

“Aye.”

As the helmsman got to work, Ford inclined his head to Mister Thomas. “Is the new warp scale programmed in?”

“Yes, Cap’n. Ever figure out why they made the change?”

“Not a clue. What does out new top speed come out as?”

“Warp nine-point-two.”

Ford had to smirk a bit. The seemingly nonsensical recalculation in speed scales merely meant they traveled a couple of factors ‘lower’ than before. The ironic thing about it was that 9.2 was the former Endeavour’s maximum speed on the old scale.

“Yard command signals clear, Captain.” Mister Smith called out from comm.

Ford glanced at his security chief. The dirty blonde haired man did not look like a Russian, such as his name implied, but his accent sure belied it. “Ready for space, Keptin.” The slender officer said.
Ford nodded and headed for the center seat. His command chair hadn’t changed in the six years he’d commanded this vessel. The blue upholstered cushioning was well broken in and the edges of the control surfaces were blemished and chipped around the edges. He’d had to chase dockworkers away from his beloved chair a week ago. They’d already brought the replacement conn to the bridge and were undoing the bolts by the time he’d found them. The captain fondly eased himself into the comfortable confines of his seat and took a long look about the bridge. Starship command was a great thing. He’d never thought he’d fit in the role, but for the last twelve years or so, he’d known nothing but.

“Mister Davenport, clear all moorings.”

“Moorings clear, aye.” The lieutenant commander replied.

“ Comm, advise port control we’re getting underway.”

“Aye, Captain.” Smith called back. His voice still remained at trainee pitch. He’d grow out of it. “Control advises we’re cleared to approach Gate Four.”

Mister Thomas departed from the helm and strode to his station to the right of Ford’s. The situation control console had been installed for Thomas’s predecessor, Commander Surrak. Surrak had his own command now, and the custom built station now belonged to a new XO.

“Helm has a preliminary coarse laid in.” Thomas stated as he leaned over his board. “All decks report ready for space.”

“Very well, XO.”

Ben looked now at his friend in the center seat.

“XO, huh? No more ‘Mister Thomas’?”

“You’ll still get that too, but only when I’m mad at ya’.”

“Great…I ever tell you how much I love workin’ for you?”

“I’m sure it’s an experience. Helm, aft thrusters to one-quarter. Take us out.”

***

Hope y'all enjoyed that. Not much there for a beginning. Stears the story in the right direction and gives a little hodwy-do to the main characters. In case anybody read my first Ford story, this is six years after all that. I needed to change a few things, like crew and setting. Now I think I've found that special * that was missing.

be back soon
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Re: A new Story?
« Reply #8 on: February 09, 2006, 11:03:58 pm »
You already know I like this one, even if I was distracted from reading it by Rome: Total War.  Glad to see you posting it.:)
"Dialogue from a play, Hamlet to Horatio: 'There are more things in heaven and earth than are dreamt of in your philosophy.' Dialogue from a play written long before men took to the sky. There are more things in heaven and earth, and in the sky, than perhaps can be dreamt of. And somewhere in between heaven, the sky, the earth, lies the Twilight Zone."
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Re: A new Story?
« Reply #9 on: February 10, 2006, 03:19:51 am »
Gimme more so I can properly comment!


You already know I like this one, even if I was distracted from reading it by Rome: Total War.  Glad to see you posting it.:)


Rome tw rules larry. Esp with the Rome total realism mod. Check the Total War Center. Got Barbarian Invasion as well?
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Re: A new Story?
« Reply #10 on: February 10, 2006, 02:38:52 pm »
Great start, Guv. This story has a nice feel to it and familiar characters in new posts. Glad to see something new from you.

Minor nitpick: I rather doubt the Genesis Incident deprived Starfleet of all its experienced scientists. Regula I was a civilian station, and the Grissom was one science vessel with a few specialists on board. So, how d'ye figure?

And, before Josh puts an oar in, it is "Plot a course" or "Of course", and "The texture of the material was very coarse" or "He as a very coarse accent".

Just my 2 cents.

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Re: A new Story?
« Reply #11 on: February 10, 2006, 03:17:59 pm »
Actually, I was gritting my teeth and ignoring that. Thank you for speaking on my behalf, Andy.
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« Reply #12 on: February 11, 2006, 03:58:09 pm »
It's pet peeves vs. blind spot.

I know I love seeing the correct words used and everything properly edited, and my pet peeve is the "quiet/quite" mistake.

However, my own blind spot is "lose/loose", and I've noticed me doing it more and more. Thus, those who liive in glass houses and all...

I try to control myself. *grin*

So, Guv, where's the next bit? Or are you still going at it in Ancient Rome?
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« Reply #13 on: February 13, 2006, 12:45:20 am »

Minor nitpick: I rather doubt the Genesis Incident deprived Starfleet of all its experienced scientists. Regula I was a civilian station, and the Grissom was one science vessel with a few specialists on board. So, how d'ye figure?

And, before Josh puts an oar in, it is "Plot a course" or "Of course", and "The texture of the material was very coarse" or "He as a very coarse accent".

Just my 2 cents.

Keep it coming.

So far as your nitpick, you're right. But this is a personal comment from Ford's perspective, and therefor is (from the writer's perspective) intentionally wrong. It's his opinion based on what he's personally seen. I do allow my characters to just be wrong. It makes me happy in my funny places *checks the wet spot in pants...*

And of course I really care how coarse it feels when my /censored/ goes in /censored/ and feels really corse when I /censored/...   Just kiddin. Eye caint spall. Eye dunt no hoy too spull. Sory.
 
Trust me, if it weren't for spell checker on MS Word, there'd be A LOT more! But I just do this fer fun and don't go over board with it. Glad you're likin it. I suppose you remember the first NCC-2007 story I wrote?
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Re: A new Story?
« Reply #14 on: February 16, 2006, 05:54:57 pm »
Here's another chapter. Mostly just some added info and a bit of plot/character detail.
Enjoy!

CH. 3




“This could degenerate into an armed rescue mission.” Lieutenant Commander Davenport was saying to the gathered officers within the briefing room. Ford, for his own part, nodded his agreement. Getting the Klingon captives back from the Ya’wenn could turn ugly if they didn’t go for the cash offered. And with so little tactical intelligence available on the planet itself, he really didn’t know what to expect.

“The merchant guild’s records are a bit spotty about the prison world, Cap’n.” Helmsman Bronstien chimed in. He’d evidently read up on the files accompanying the nav records. “Two planets in the system are habitable, the prison planet being the lesser of the two. Most traders stop at Yu’derra rather than going on to Kovarn. Kovarn’s listed as barren and rocky, with barely survivable jungle belts near the continental interiors.”

Ford was impressed with the boy. Most helmsmen were only interested in the space surrounding the objective worlds they traveled to. “You’re well informed for a fly-boy, Mister Bronstien. Wanting a little shore time, are we?”

Johnathan Bronstien smiled broadly back at the captain from his end of the silver table.
“If I can get it, Cap’n.”

“You’ll get it, Mister. Do we have any intel on how many prisoners we can expect on the planet?”

Lieutenant Surall shook her head. “Negative, Captain. No traders or Federation agents have ever visited the prison. At least, not that they’ve reported.”

“Nice,” Thomas sighed. He sat to the captain’s right, opposite of the operations officer. “Go in to a planet we know dick about, get some Klingons who may or may not be there, and hope they want a Starfleet ship to take them home…”

“Just another easy mission from the brass at Command.” Ford answered.

“Tactical can handle any problem that arises on planet, Keptin.” This from Nechayev. The Russian officer sat with his form a bit less than erect, but he held about him a certain bearing of pride. He believed in his skill. He’d inherited a good security crew from Thomas. “If ve must break the Klingons out, ve can do it.”

“Good to know,” Ford replied. “But, I’d like to not make enemies of these people. We’ll ask nicely first, then negotiate…maybe threaten. I don’t really want to fight them, so let’s save that for a last resort. How about getting there. As Mister Bronstien says, there’s a lot of debris ahead. How dangerous is this region to us?”

The helmsman responded first.

“Well, Cap’n, the plasma strings gravitate toward each other, forming newer, larger strings in erratic places. The charts note that the mapped strings will not be where they were last seen, month to month. The nebulas cause these streams of gas to slingshot around and can create gravimetric hazards to ships traveling the area.”

Surall nodded at this.
“Indeed, Captain. The nebula themselves seem to suffer from irregular gravity phenomena, causing the entire area to be moderately unstable. Sensor resolution will also be weak, even for this ship. I advise caution to our piloting team as they take us through.”

Johnathan shot an evilly happy look at the science officer.
“Oh, I can get us through there. A few plasma storms aren’t enough to scare me—“

“Alright, Mister Bronstien.” Ford cut him off. “Let’s keep it civil, even if you are playin’ around. Just see to it that we get in and out without singeing the hull plating.”

“Aye, Cap’n.”

Ford looked at them all with a quick scan.
“Dismissed. Thomas and Davenport remain here.”

Each of the division officers filed out of the rectangular briefing room and into the corridor outside. Ford stood and went to the refreshment table behind his seat. “Our helmsman seems like a proficient lad.” He commented as he poured himself some coffee. Thomas and Davenport joined their captain for a hot drink.

“Kind of a hot head, if you ask me.” The ops chief mentioned after a sip of his own cup.

“I don’t think he was serious, Ron. Just trying to get the science officer’s goat.”

Thomas smiled at the colloquialism. Ford was always coming up with ancient redneck sayings. “Well, not all of us get along with Vulcans anyway. What about our new security chief?”

“Nechayev?” Ford polished off his coffee and set the silver cup down on the tray. “He’s gotta be good, or you wouldn’t have put him on the list.”

Thomas almost blanched.
“Well, pickin’s were kinda slim. Not many people get rid of good tactical officers. They just make XO’s out of ‘em.”

Ford’s brows bobbed.
“Wonder who you’re insinuating there… I think Danny is going to be pretty decent for a first timer in command. He’s confident. His record shows skill and bravery. He holds the Starfleet Credit for Meritorious Conduct and a couple of Purple Hearts.”

Ronald laughed out loud. “But no one holds as many Purple Hearts as our good Captain here.”

“What can I say, everyone and everything wants to kill me.”

Ben joined in. “That winnin’ personality. I think we’ve got ourselves a good crew.”

“Same here. We should get along just fine.” Allowing the other two to finish off their java, the captain led them out of the room and back to their duty.




Lieutenant Commander Davenport exited the turbolift and strode quickly down the hall to his former haunt. The bass thrum of the mighty engine core reverberated throughout the ship, but was strongest here, on Deck Nineteen. Main Engineering was the heart of the ship, the life-blood. Ron found it hard to stay away after having been an engineer for 80% of his career. The heavy main doors of the compartment parted before him with the drone of heavy hydraulics. He missed this room.

The great, linear mass of the warp reactor chamber loomed in the far rear quarter of the room. Brilliant blue accelerator coils glowed from inside the recesses built into its dark hued alloy shape. The sound, loud as it was outside the room, was twice as strong inside. The vibration of the detonation of matter with antimatter moved in waves through a person’s body. It was like being next to a dragon’s heart.

The room was arrayed about the intermix chamber, with nearly every attached room and station facing the core. The master control console was set directly before it. Davenport, driven by instinct as natural to him as breathing, went straight to that station and looked over the read outs arranged in rows of blue lit displays. Everything looked normal at the first glance.

“Can I help you, Commander?” Came a new voice. The accent forming the words was heavy and icy, leaning heavily on ‘h’-sounds and turning all ‘o’s into long sounds. Davenport knew the primary Andorian accent, and knew who he would find standing behind him.

“No, Miss Tolin. Just bein’ nosey.”

Lieutenant Commander Xia Tolin stepped around the induction sensor she’d been examining and set her tricorder down on the master console. Davenport gave her his most benign expression possible. Hopefully she wouldn’t take too much offense at the former chief engineer poking about in her business.

“Does everything meet with your approval?”

“Nothing’s on fire. We haven’t blown up…so yeah, I guess it passes muster.”

Xia pressed her thin blue lips into a small smile as she clasped her hands behind her.
“I promise I will take care of your engine room, sir—“

Ron waved her off, amused by her playful sarcasm.
“You can drop the ‘sir’-bit. We’re both O-4 grade. But, I’m gonna drop by from time to time to take a look at my babies. Hope you don’t take any offense at that.” Davenport searched her eyes for any measure of expression. It could be hard to map an alien species' reactions. He was rather familiar with Andorians, but no one knew everything about another culture.

“Drop by any time, Commander. Just don’t be surprised if I put you to work.”

Ron smiled. He was a bit galled by the idea of being put to work, but he had no aversion to the idea of helping out with the engines. He looked forward to it in fact. “I’ll probably come down here just for that, Chief. So…what’s your handle?”

“’Handle’?” Her head cocked to the left and her tiny antennae curled.

“Every chief engineer has a nick-name. What’s yours?”

Xia’s lips pursed again. “I have none. Unless my crew calls me something I am unaware of.”

“Dirty words don’t count. We’ll have to look into that.” Ron turned to leave.

“What is yours?”

Davenport glanced over his shoulder.

“Sparky. Had a habit of getting zapped in my younger, more klutzy days.”

Ronald received a small smile as he turned back about and removed himself from the engine room. He’d only come by to glance about. He might have made a friend at the same time.
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'm enjoying writing with this crew. I'd also enjoy hearing any nit-picks and gripes...though I remind every one that my spelling is not likely to improve... :D

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Re: A new Story?
« Reply #15 on: February 17, 2006, 02:36:26 am »
i like the camaraderie you portret.  gimme more
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Re: A new Story?
« Reply #16 on: February 18, 2006, 09:59:54 am »
i like the camaraderie you portret.  gimme more

Yes, gimme more  ;D

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Re: A new Story?
« Reply #17 on: February 18, 2006, 01:10:46 pm »
I have to agree with Grim and Frankk.

These guys and gals seem like a good bunch, and I really enjoy the easy familiarity the senior crew have with each other. Looking forward to more.
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Re: A new Story?
« Reply #18 on: February 19, 2006, 10:35:25 pm »
The camraderie of TOS was what I was hoping to capture. These people live and work with each other. They trust each other and are a family. I was hoping y'all would comment on that!
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Re: A new Story?
« Reply #19 on: February 20, 2006, 06:29:26 pm »
Here are some more letters placed in nonsensicle order. I'm gratified by the comments thus far, as always. Y'all don't fail to disappoint!

However, anyone know where Jaeih's been holed up? I like seein' a comment or two from the Rommy side of things... :huh:

CH. 4




“Coming up on Sector KL-115, Cap’n.” Bronstien called out from the helm. It was late in the day’s shift, and each of the division officers had elected to modify their duty cycles to be here on the bridge as they entered this dangerous area. Ford was glad of his officers’ commitment. Often it was the more experienced eye that caught the small signs of approaching trouble. The captain glanced to his right at his executive officer.

Mister Thomas had pulled a double shift to be here right now, insisting that Ford take the time and get some rest. The ship’s commander had to be fresh, he’d reasoned as Ford had argued. Yes, Thomas was going to make an excellent XO. Right now, though, he seemed a bit sluggish. Ford turned to his comm officer.

“Mister Smith, order the yeoman up with some coffee. Looks like we could all use a cup.”

Smith responded and did as he was bid. It was not long before the head yeoman and two of his stewards appeared from the turbolift to begin distributing their caffinated wares. The largest cup always went to Mister Davenport. Thomas noted and laughed a bit.

“We need to attach a cup holder on the ops console. Ron drinks too much.”

Davenport held his stainless mug up in salute. “Hey, I’m all for that.”

A shared laugh passed about the bridge. Ford smiled kindly at his main yeoman as the muscular African headed for the aft lifts. The comradery of the ship hadn’t diminished since the crew change. If anything, it had increased. In fact, Ford was very glad of the change in operations. Davenport was so much more amicable than the young lady he’d finally decided to transfer.

“Sensor resolution down to thirty percent, Captain.”

The captain looked over with more than a touch of shock at Surall’s report. He hadn’t expected that drastic of a drop in efficiency. At their current speed of warp seven, it was almost like flying blind. “Helm, reduce speed to warp five. Engineer, direct additional power to the sensor array.”
Responses came from both positions. The low roar of the warp drive cycled down to a softer baritone as the star streaks on the forward screen slowed by nearly half. Beside the captain, Commander Thomas had gotten busy with his own instrument panel.

“Cap’n, interference is located in pockets surrounding each of the plasma strings… They’re dotting the area like walls in some kind of 3-D maze in space. Damn near anything could be hid out here.”

“Ideal for bandits, might you say?” Ford asked.

“Might explain why even the guild doesn’t get out here too often.”

Ford had to agree.
“Excelsiors are still new enough that back water pirates might not know to be scared of ‘em. Someone might decide to take a shot or two at us.”

Thomas nodded, the decision made.
“Yellow Alert. Get those shields up.”

“Yes, Commander.” Came from Lieutenant Nechayev. The high pitched, repetitive warble of the Condition Two alarm sounded off as small yellow spots replaced half of the main lights throughout the ship. With the light level now much dimmer, the control faces on every console now shone out like beacons. Ford could feel the inertial dampeners in the deck kick in to a more powerful setting. This would protect the crew from dangerous falls should the ship meet any…turbulence.

“Tactical, maintain a close scan for threats. See to it nothing sneaks in on our rear.”

“Aye, Keptin. Beginning level two sweeps.”

“Estimated ETA now five hours, twenty minutes, present speed.” Davenport updated from ops, mug still in hand.

“Captain!”

Lieutenant Smith’s voice was particularly excited this time around. Ford whirled his seat to face the comm station. Noah looked over his shoulder at the conn. “Picking up low-band transmissions, ship to ship traffic.”

“Source?”

“Two…now three sources! Two aft at 187 mark 073 and 199 mark 015. One forward at 357 mark 007. Distance indeterminate.”

Ford stood and made for the bridge railing that separated the inner and outer ring of stations.
“Who’s talking out there, son?”

“I can’t tell. They’re using a code I’ve never seen before.”

“Pretty good chance they’re talking about us!” Thomas interjected.

“Who else is out here?” Ford added in agreement.

“Lateral sensor contact.” Called out Surall at the starboard science console. Ford looked back at her long, curving station. The after subspace array definitely was showing something. She went on, her dark face lit by the scrolling readouts she studied. “Two vessels, identity unknown. Approaching from aft at warp factor seven. Their bearings match communication’s triangulation.”

“Are their weapons hot?” Came from Thomas. Ford was already headed back to his seat, expectant of fireworks.

“Indeterminate. However the tri-axial array does show an energy concentration at their bow section. Their deflectors are definitely up. Weapons range in one minute.”

“Red Alert!” The captain decided, now safely in his chair. Behind him he could hear the tell-tales of weapons arming and target acquisition. “Comm, order those ships to wave off.”

“Aye!” Smith keyed the sending controls and held tightly at the microphone piece in his right ear. “Unidentified starships, this is the USS Endeavour. We order you to change coarse. Do not close with this ship or you will be fired upon. Please respond!”

Ford waited as the youth repeated the challenge. Thomas glanced his way. “Targets still inbound, Cap’n.” Ford nodded, eyes glued to the viewer image ops had pictured of the ships closing in on his ship’s rear.

“Captain, no response from either vessel. Comm traffic only between the incoming craft.” Reported Smith. Ford squared his jaw and licked the back of his teeth. He’d hoped to avoid fighting, and had barely thought of bandits hitting them. These were unsettled areas for the most part though.

“Very well, comm. Begin wide-band jamming of all comm signals. Tactical, lock aft weaponry on the foremost vessel and fire as she bears.”

“Aye, Keptin. Target locked!”

There was a note of relish in the Russian’s tone as he’d replied. Ford had heard the same tune in his new XO’s voice more than once. He would undoubtedly be a good gunnery officer, but would bear watching for a while.

“Lead vessel has begun active targeting.” Came from science.

“Target in range!” From Thomas.

“Fire aft torpedoes!”

The alien ship obviously did not have long ranged weaponry. Ford heard a trio of ‘woop’ signals from the tactical computer denoting weapon firings, and counted five seconds without a report of return fire. Three torpedoes angled in on the wedge shaped craft and impacted on its prow. Firelight illuminated every cranny of the ship’s hull and it staggered like a drunkard in its flight path. Sparks of electricity arced down the ship’s length. The damage was quite apparent.

“Direct hit on bandit forward section.” Surall reported. Her voice remained a level monotone. “Several hull breaches detected along with apparent structural buckling. Its forward shields are down.”

Ford nodded with a bit of satisfaction. “Either not very advanced, or not a true warship.”

On the forward screen, purple lances of jagged energy shot out at them. Endeavour rumbled under the strike, but little turbulence disturbed the crew. Ford had felt worse gouges from civilian weaponry. “No effect on aft screens, Keptin.” Nechayev intoned behind the captain.

“Their weaponry is suffering massive output fall-off as the energy passes through their warp field.” Surall said from her post. She had a large blue line schematic of the enemy vessel depicted on her primary panel. The computer was detailing everything useful it could discern from the aft sensor array. The ship seemed to be packing a lot of firepower.

“Early Starfleet ships had the same problem with their phasers before the annular confinement beam.” Thomas was almost muttering tactical data. The enemy’s lack of warp speed weapon power gave Endeavour a distinct advantage. “The second ship has entered firing range.”

“Put another couple of torpedoes into the lead ship. Maybe we can convince them to go home.”

“Aye, Keptin. Firing.”

Another two photons leapt out and smacked the enemy in the face. This time, parts flew from the center of the explosion and the ship began to wobble like a toy. After a moment of this, the forward hull of the bandit shredded into twirling chunks of flotsam and the ship fell from warp. The other moved up to take its place.

“Cap!” Bronstien hollered out from his piloting station. “Plasma fields are narrowing down up here! I’m running out of maneuvering space!”

Ford sat forward in alarm. “You need to reduce speed?”

The pause from the helm did not bolster the captain’s confidence. Johnathan stiffened in his seat and became very measured in his movements about his console. Then he shrugged. “Nope, I got it.”

Ford’s expression turned incredulous. “You sure?”

“Got it, Cap. No problem!” The kid’s hands then began to fly about the controls. The roar from the engines changed pitch and ship’s gravity began to slew to the right. “Thirty degrees port yaw, forty degrees positive pitch!”

Ford clutched the handgrips of his seat as the inertia of the turn threatened to toss him to the deck. One of the white shouldered enlisted hands forward fell flat on his butt and slid to the center of the room. “Your piloting is causing more ruckus than their guns, boy!” The captain yelled. He thought he saw the flash of a smile from the youth.

“Ten degrees starboard yaw, fifty degrees negative pitch!”

The crew’s stomachs lurched upward as the ship suddenly went into a warp speed dive beneath a dense cloud of ionized energy. Ford was glad the viewer was angled aft so he only saw the enormous clouds of roiling destruction in hindsight. The trailing bandit was still following Endeavour, its greater maneuverability allowing it to close in. More purple blasts of energy lashed out at the Starfleet ship. The Endeavour rocked harder this time, this ship obviously not having as much weapon difficulty as its companion did. As it followed through another set of hairy turns with Bronstien calling off vectors all the while, the bandit lashed out with shot after shot. The larger starship slued side to side with these harder impacts.

“Aft shields down to ninety-percent, Keptin.” Tactical reported. “I am having difficulty maintaining torpedo lock on the hostile vith all of the turning!”

“Lock phasers on target. Are they within range?”

“Ten seconds--!”

Another, far more violent blast rocked Endeavour. Ford could tell by the view on screen that helm had just lost a large bit of control. Bronstien stabilized their flight path, but the effect could have been disastrous. The kid paused in his rattle of flight jabber to pass a warning. “Another hit like that one at the wrong time an’ we’re all walkin’ home!”

“Reduce to warp four and bring ‘em in range!” Ford ordered.

Bronstien only nodded his ascent, further changing the engine pitch by a full octave. The vessel trailing them suddenly grew in size as it looped beneath a string of hazy pink energy. They were now in full weapons range.

“Phasers!”

“Firing!”

The aft phaser banks came to life, spitting alternating bolts of phaser pulses at the incoming craft. The streams of weapons blasts pelted the prow of the enemy craft and sent it rattling along its path. Its deflector grid flared under the strain as the rampid torrents of energy passed along its shields. The ship in the viewer grew to enormous proportions.

“She’s passin’ broadside, starboard flank!” Thomas called, excitement rising in his voice. The enemy had just done the worst thing it could have. “All starboard and ‘midships phasers, fire!”

As the unfortunate bandit ship zipped past the silver hulled Federation starship, Endeavour’s main armament came alive, phasers hurling streams of phaser pulses out in front of the craft like fields of ancient flak. The alien bandit staggered nearly to a halt as multiple impacts rained in on it. Entire sections of its hull shattered and internal explosions tore out from within. Its left most, under-slung nacelle exploded into a fiery, plasmic cloud. Before Endeavour’s phaser barrage ended, the craft was whirling into a swirling fog of stellar plasma to Endeavour’s port side.

Ford watched the bandit twirl toward its doom.
“All stop! Tactical, lock forward tractor beams on target and halt their flight!”

Endeavour’s mighty engines growled as they powered down. Bronstien piloted the massive starship closer to its target, careful not to wind up in a plasma string as well. A low hum sounded from the power grid and a shimmering blue field of gravitons snared the uncontrolled bandit. The raiding vessel was now held firmly in the Federation ship’s grasp.

Ford stood and approached the fore railing between ops and the view screen. He looked over the battered, flaming hull of the alien ship. The enemy had set upon them with Lord knew what on their minds. But, Starfleet did not choose men to command their ships who were without mercy. If he could spare these aliens, he would. He glanced back over his shoulder.

“Keep a close watch out for the third vessel communications detected. She might be a bit more stout than these little guys.”

“Aye.” His officers sounded off. He returned his studious gaze to his captive, pondering what to do with them. These ships made their way by preying on those unfortunate enough to wander through this narrow fairway unawares. Inferior vessel without adequate defenses would be picked off and looted, their crews likely taken as hostages, slaves of just murdered. But, these ships and their commanders had likely been operating in this area for some time. Long enough, obviously, to have good knowledge of the plasma strings’ habits and take advantage of its tactical benefit for entrapping starships. The captain had to wonder if this fact might prove useful.

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'It's a lot of hard work being a mean bastard...' --Captain Eric Finlander, CO USS Bedford (The Bedford Incident)

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