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Re: A new Story?
« Reply #30 on: February 27, 2006, 11:50:26 am »
I love it.

I do agree they're not acting like a typical Federation crew...but neither are they being so belligerent to seem like Klingons or Romulans to me.  Ford seems to know when aggressive bluster will get him more than peaceful handshakes, but he hasn't crossed the line into behavior I couldn't see Feddies doing.

And then there's this little bit...

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“The leader of the group was known as Captain Dath’mar. Is any of this familiar to you?”

I knew he went out too easy. :rwoot:
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« Reply #31 on: March 01, 2006, 02:19:03 am »
You spin an interesting captain here m8. I've never been a holier than you zelous trekky from hell which says everything should confirm to his/her ideals for  a fed captain but you are going where no man has gone before imho. Me like. Gimme more.
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Re: A new Story?
« Reply #32 on: March 01, 2006, 10:23:11 pm »
You spin an interesting captain here m8. I've never been a holier than you zelous trekky from hell which says everything should confirm to his/her ideals for  a fed captain but you are going where no man has gone before imho. Me like. Gimme more.

I'm gratified. Anything specific?
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« Reply #33 on: March 03, 2006, 02:48:38 am »
mmm. Nothing what I can really bring into words, but it feels different.
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Re: A new Story?
« Reply #34 on: March 06, 2006, 06:51:51 pm »
Hello all! I R back. Another week, another chapter.

I enjoyed the comments above, and hope that this and future posts compell more of the same. Sometimes this is as close as I get to having friends over... So, enjoy!



CH. 6




“Now entering Kovarn System outer limits, Cap. Eleven minutes to orbital range.” Bronstien reported. Ford answered him and joined Mister Thomas near to the science station.

“Pre-approach scan, Miss Surall.”

“Aye, Captain.”

Lieutenant Surall leaned in close to her control board and pressed a waiting key. A long, slender viewing scope extended from the console face. Manipulating her keyboards without looking, she scrutinized the images the myriad of sensors and scanners overlaid atop each other in the scope.

“Multiple vessels and energy signatures in planetary orbit. Three high orbit cargo transfer stations, possibly seven mid-orbit fueling stations. There are definent defensive platforms in orbit, they read as…small, unmanned satellites, massing…three hundred metric tons. I am directing an intensive scan on the weapons array of the closest…”

Ford and Thomas waited in silence as the science officer did her job. The quiet, ever-present sounds of the bridge crept into their perception. The captain was beginning to count the pings of the chronometer when Surall finally came across with more intel. “Low yield fusion beam cannon tied directly into their main power reactors. Common technology, if a bit crude. They represent a moderate threat level, but their maneuverability is limited.”

“Evident technological centers on the surface?” Ford inquired.

“Scanning… Three large industrial centers, several notable mining sites. All centers are arranged near a spinal mountain chain extending from the northern tip of the main continent to the eastern edge of a large forested region. The central most facility bears landing platforms for up to mid-size transports. Roads interlink the other centers to it.”

A topographical map of the area under scrutiny appeared on the upper main readout above Surall’s scope. Ford looked the terrain over with the eye of a military commander. He noted areas where defenses would likely be hidden among surface features. He spotted several areas that would likely be impossible to fight in if the worst were to happen. His was the duty to take advantage of all his own advantages and use them to negate the opposition’s capacity to derail his mission. Sharp felt it imperative these Klingons be returned to their Empire to show the Federation’s willingness to further the peace initiative. Ford was not going to fail his former captain.

“We’ll beam down three groups—“ The captain began, but was cut off as a dark skinned hand projected into view. Surall faced him.
“Transporter function will not be possible, Captain. The prison and all of the main continent is covered by an electromagnetic barrier.”
“We could knock the barrier out with a few phaser blasts.” Ben suggested.

“Sharp didn’t want us to start a war with anyone we don’t even know yet. We won’t employ weapons till we have to.” He mentally adjusted his operational plans. “We’ll go in with three shuttles, then. Mister Thomas, you and me will go down in a Type J with a full security party. Two Type L personnel shuttles will fly escort with a full security team each. Security will equip for hostile terrain. Accompanying us in the Type J will be Lieutenants Bronstien and Smith, and we’ll equip with light gear.”

“Weaponry, Cap’n?” Thomas asked. He didn’t want to go down naked.

“Pistols only. No rifles for us. We’ll want to look somewhat reasonable when we meet with whoever runs this place. Hard to do that with rifles in hand.”

Thomas didn’t look convinced, but did not argue. Ford looked past the XO to the inner ring of stations. “Mister Davenport will have the conn.”

“Nearing inner system, Cap.” Helm called.

“Reduce to full impulse.” Ford headed for his command chair. Taking a seat as Thomas conferred with the chief of security, the captain turned toward the comm station. “Mister Smith, hail the prison facility.”

“Aye, sir. Hailing them now.”

“We’ve got somebody’s attention, Cap.” Bronstien commented from his helm console. Ford flicked his eyes from the pilot to the forward viewer. The growing image of the little, brown colored world in the center of the screen suddenly grew in stature as the lieutenant zoomed in on the northern hemisphere. Dozens of orbiting craft were turning away from their previous paths and were beginning to move in on their visitor. Captain Ford knew few of the ships viewed, but several of them possessed noticeable weapon ports. Barrels were turning the Endeavour’s direction and others were already beginning to glow.

Any one of these ships, Ford counted six so far, was not likely to be a match for his ship, but the captain did not want to tangle with any of them. They weren’t here to make enemies of these people. Getting into an orbital starship battle was not going to help their relations on the surface.

“Slow to one-quarter impulse. Yellow Alert.” Ford decided.

“Shields coming up, Keptin.”

As the lighting changed overhead and the alarm sounded, the captain held his breath slightly. The sensation was akin to waiting on a girl’s answer for a first date. Would everything turn out good…or bad? The half dozen vessels eased in closer, assuming as they approached a definite attack posture, their heaviest ship in the lead center of a ‘v’ formation. Backs began to stiffen all about the bridge as the officers manning their stations tensed for what was about to happen.

“I read a wide variety of weaponry aboard the approaching vessels, Captain,” Surall offered unbidden from science. “The most dangerous craft is likely the lead ship, which bears ten accelerated plasma cannon and nuclear torpedoes.”

“Nukes,” Thomas muttered, “…great…”

“Set phaser banks 2, 3, 4, 11 and 12 for point defense and stand by.” Ford ordered his weapons officer. And still the waiting continued. The approaching ships seemed to slow. Was this a good sign?

“Closing wessels are drawing to a halt, Keptin. They are outside standard torpedo range.” Lieutenant Nechayev leaned close over his console, hands braced on either side of his panel.

“Steady as she goes.” Ford was not willing to yield too much. He would approach from a position of strength, which meant not halting or backing down from their weaponry. He would act as though their show of force didn’t concern him.

“Range four million kilometers, Cap.” Bronstien reported. The young man’s eyes were glued to the indicators covering his panel. His hands remained poised over the RCS system.

“Sir,” called out Lieutenant Smith, turning in his seat at whiplash speed. “We’ve got an answering hail.”

“On screen.” Ford was relieved, and hoped it didn’t show too greatly.

The image of the halted defense ships was replaced by the visage of a large, muscle bound mountain of a man standing behind a desk cluttered with junk and data modules. The alien had oily looking skin of a grey-ish color and short black hair. His face bore whiskers unshaven for more than three days and the expression he wore was a mixture of indifference and displeasure that told Ford he didn’t want to deal with whatever the unidentified ship presented. Chevis had worked with many similar folks during his career. These he knew he could work with. They would do whatever they could do to get the visitors to just go away and do so quickly. And they were always looking for ways to profit without having to work for it. This made them dangerous, but predicable.

“Who are you?” The large alien asked as he sat lazily into his office chair and took a long drink of whatever he was carrying.

Ford would normally stand when addressing an alien representative, but would not do so today. Standing would only show this man more respect than he himself had shown Ford. Still seated, he inclined his head to the man on the viewer. “I’m Captain Ford of the Federation starship Endeavour. I represent the government of the United Federation of Planets which lies beyond the plasma string phenomena several light-years back.”

Ford could see that the large man still did not care much. He shifted in his seat and looked more interested in the drink in his meaty hand. Finally he looked back up to the screen.

“And what does your Federation of Planets want here?”

Ford did not answer straight away. He remained silent and forced a small, half smile on his face. “I might tell you once I have your name, sir. You have me at a disadvantage.”

The alien returned the smile. It looked more disgusting on the near-human face.

“More than you know, Captain. But if it makes you feel any better, I am Over Warden Jarn. I run this place for the Ya’wenn Government. What has your government sent you here for? Are you here to buy metals?”

“Maybe in the future…” Now Ford stood and approached the visual pickup. “We’ve been ordered here to negotiate the release of a group of your…workers…to our custody for return to their home planet.”

Jarn seemed absolutely unfazed by the request. It seemed that he bought and sold prisoners on a daily basis, and likely did. He pursed his bottom lip in a manner that showed slight interest. “What specific group, Captain?”

“A group of Klingon warriors.”

Jarn paused a moment. He wasn’t the consummate actor.

“Klingons…good workers those Klingons.” He said, his voice so gravelly that it sounded as though he’d suffered some throat damage in his sordid past. “They’ll cost you plenty, Captain Ford. But I don’t talk money with a ship in orbit. You have landing ships?”

“We carry shuttles.”

“Well, then, bring your cash and a minimal group of men down to the coordinates we’ll send you. I don’t allow matter teleporters on my planet. Too much danger of things going missing, you understand.”

“I figured as much. We’ll make orbit in ten minutes and see you after that.”

“Very well, Captain. My ships will let you pass.”

The viewer shed the link to the Over Warden and returned to the view of the planet and escorting ships. The six little starships were turning to match Endeavour’s flight path, though their weapons remained powered. Behind the conn, Lieutenant Nechayev continued scanning their escorts for defensive weaknesses. Ford heard him working and felt all the safer for it. Commander Thomas gave the captain a sideways glance.

“We’re not really taking the money with us, are we?”

“Hell no. We’ll bluff ‘em on the money, bring it down when we have the prisoners. There’s something not right down there, though.” Ford paused in recollection. “He hesitated when I mentioned the Klingons. They might not even be down there. Or they might be dead and buried. Whatever is wrong, he isn’t going to play straight with us, and we’re going to have to be careful.”
Ford patted Bronstien on the shoulder.

“Assume standard orbit, helm. Then get down to Shuttle Bay One. I want my best pilot on the main shuttle incase we have to hotfoot it out of there.” He looked left to the Ops position. “Ron, you have the conn.”

“Aye, Cap’n.”

Davenport stood and made for the center seat. A replacement NCO took Ops as the captain headed for the after lifts. “Mister Nechayev, ready another shuttle and appropriate security forces for the latinum should we need it. And map out the location of the field generators just in case we need to eliminate them.”

“Yes, Keptin.”

“XO, Comm, y’all are with me.”





“This isn’t the way we do things, Captain…” Ford turned to the sound of the voice behind him. Lieutenant Smith stood at the foot of the personnel shuttle’s boarding ramp, phaser pistol in hand and question upon his face. Chevy gave the boy half a smirk and faced him fully as he pulled the slim, light field jacket over his shoulders. The kid’s eyes focussed for a second on the shiny gold Captain pins on the jacket’s shoulder and arm. Most of his resolve drained from him.

“Something to say, Comm?”

“Well, Captain…” Ford could tell the young officer now wished he’d never spoken up. He shuffled foot to foot, glancing away uncertainly. Commander Thomas thumped up the ramp, passing the boy and slapping him painfully hard on the back. Thomas’s face bore a cruelly sardonic expression as he passed by Chevis. Ford pretended to ignore him. The boy stammered a bit more.

“Well, this isn’t how we were trained at the Academy. I mean, we weren’t trained to negotiate from behind armed phasers.”

“That’s right, Lieutenant. You weren’t trained like this. You were trained in a cozy little simulated environment, negotiating against instructors skilled in playing a role. No one was pointing a weapon at you. No one was looking for a way to screw you and take advantage of all your weaknesses. No one wanted what you had. Right now though,” Chevy smiled a bit, hefting the weight of his own grey-blue phaser pistol, “We’re going to operate on a planet where all of those instances might be true. We have to get our job done, return a former enemy home, and do all that while still protecting our asses. Do you have any idea how many times Captain Archer of the NX-01 was captured in his ten years of command?”

Smith seemed taken aback. This might not be the butt-chewing he’d expected for questioning his captain, but he knew now that Ford wouldn’t tolerate much in the way of scrutiny. Chevis Ford played things his way. “No…uh, no, sir.”

“Fifty times. Some of those were re-captures! Him and his engineer were notorious for getting nabbed. Ever read Captain James Kirk’s history? Not counting the recent Klingon trial where he was arrested, he, Spock and Doctor McCoy were captured times uncountable. Now…any idea how many times Admiral Sharp was captured during his years in command?”

Only a questioning look came back in answer. Ford held up a solitary finger.

“Just once. One time, by Commander La’ra of the Hiv’laposh. Who’s school of thought do we want to emulate?”

“Sharp’s, sir?”

“Damn right! Get aboard.”

Lieutenant Smith stepped quickly past his CO. He was probably very glad to be out of the captain’s sight. Ford, however, stepped back down the ramp and examined the polymer casing of his Type-Two pistol. He did indeed wish for easier ways to get things done. But, often, a good solid weapon was the only tool one could count on. Maybe things would be different for the next generation of Starfleet, but today, one had to remain realistic.

Ford glanced about the cavernous main shuttle bay. Closest by his own craft were two other vessels, filled with security men and rifles. Further away was another cargo shuttle being prepped for launch when the captain called for it. Chevy proclaimed to be no genius, but did everything within his power to protect his ship and crew. He just hoped none of this would be necessary.
Far across the steel and white colored bay, the final officer he awaited emerged from the after turbolift. He came on at a trot, holstering his own phaser and sliding on a field jacket. Ford greeted Mister Bronstien as he neared the ramp. “Ready for a short trip, helmsman?”

“Aye, Cap.” The youth said with a wide grin. His short-cropped black hair made the lad look even younger than he acted. Such children made the captain feel old. Ford motioned the boy to the cockpit and holstered his own phaser.

“Let’s go, kids.” He murmured as he closed the aft hatch.

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Anyway, that's ch. 6.  :spam:

I actually was thinking of how more traditional Starfleet types might regard how Ford carries on. This is why I made Smith such a young kid fresh from the Academy. He gets to be the moral sounding board for all the differences between my Trek and real Trek. There is at least one more such instance within the story where he questions what he's seeing. You might even see Ford brought to task over it in future stories.

Till them, read on and enjoy if possible.
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Re: A new Story?
« Reply #35 on: March 07, 2006, 11:14:24 pm »
Good Chapter, Ronjar! I loved the point about Archer and Kirk being captured so many times. Ties in neatly with your posture on a previous post (the cow pie one). I'm liking the bad guys, and Ford's attitude to them and life in general.

Want more! Giving me ideas for my own stories!
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« Reply #36 on: March 09, 2006, 08:54:33 am »
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« Reply #37 on: March 09, 2006, 08:59:08 am »
Good Chapter, Ronjar! I loved the point about Archer and Kirk being captured so many times.

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and Ford's attitude to them and life in general.

agree

However, i need to see more of the baddies to really say I like them. What I do like is the first impression.
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« Reply #38 on: March 15, 2006, 11:40:00 pm »

Here's you a lil' more than a first impression on the badguys. I originally had a longer scene, but it dragged down the pace of the story. Anyway, enjoy...

CH. 7




The forward, starboard facing door of the main shuttle bay droned slowly open to allow the trio of shuttlecraft to exit into open space. Each of the tiny reserve ships emerged from within the structure of the larger vessel’s thick neck and held position before the Endeavour to wait for the others. Once gathered; the smaller escort shuttles flanking behind the single, large cargo shuttle; they slowly descended toward the surface of the rocky little world.

Commander Thomas held solidly to either side of the ops section of the pilot console as he watched the insertion intelligence scroll automatically across his readouts. “Lower atmosphere thirty-percent oxygen, thirty percent nitrogen…the rest a bunch of trace elements. Computer says its breathable, but I figure its gonna stink. Gravity reads as one point two Earth standard.”

“A lot of heavy metals in the core, then.” The Captain commented. For such a small planet to have gravity even greater than Earth meant it was made of some dense material. Ford resisted the urge to order his men to set their equipment accordingly. Twenty years ago, personnel equipment had to be hand adjusted for environmental differences such as gravity, EM fields and terrestrial gasses. These days, however, they equipment they carried was built to adjust itself automatically. Everything from their phasers to their universal translators had some kind of a chip or module meant to set it to operate more efficiently in whatever environment it found itself. Progress.

“Touchdown in three, Cap.” Mister Bronstien reported. The kid’s hands moved across his controls with fluid skill. The cargo shuttle they rode in barely wobbled during the entire entry. He was good. Clouds were parting themselves before the main view port as the shuttle forged its way to the waiting ground.

The captain glanced at the helmeted faces of the waiting security grunts sharing the cargo bay with him. Each sat with his or her rifle held beside their knee and stared back at their CO. The captain gave them an appraising nod. “Your primary role on the surface is to act as guards for this shuttle. I will imply to the Over Warden that we have the latinum on board. Your real purpose, aside from guarding the dummy load, is to act as a backup force should the negotiating team get into trouble. Hopefully, our talks with these people won’t take us too far from the landing sight. If it does, attempt two-man beams ins with the emergency transporter array. Hopefully, it’ll work fine beneath the security field. If not, make your way in the best you can, and call for back up from the reserve units as needed. Understood?”

“Aye, aye, sir!”

“I’m reading a lot of guards gathered around the landing site, Cap’n.” Thomas called back to the cargo area. “Armed with focused particle rifles and well armored. They ain’t slouches.”

Ford looked back to the security team, then to his comm officer. “You heard the XO. Set your rifles to heavy stun to begin with, but jack it up to high disruption if any heavy shooting starts. Mister Smith, check your pistol setting and make sure its locked on level two.”

The officer nodded back without speaking and drew the pistol to check it. Ford noticed with some relief that his finger came nowhere near the trigger as he examined his weapon. He’d served with seasoned comm officers, with ten years experience or better, who did not know the first thing about weapon safety. No Starfleet issue weapon in history had ever been built with a trigger guard, and probably never would be. It was good to know this kid wouldn’t likely blow his CO’s head off on accident.
Satisfied with what his indicators showed him, Mister Smith replaced the weapon in his hip holster. The boy still seemed worried, but the captain thought it pretty normal. This was his first shore duty since exiting the Academy. And worse, he had an unorthodox skipper. It was enough to make any kid nervous.

“Lining up for touchdown!” Bronstien informed. Beside him, Thomas was pointing out the view port at some area below them.

“Set ‘er down with the side door facing the main complex. We don’t want them getting a good look at our empty cargo module.”

“Aye.” The pilot answered. Most of the kid’s concentration was on committing the landing with a powerful side-wind blowing in. Ford held onto an overhead safety strap for support as the landing pads thudded onto a solid surface. The anitgravs cycled through their wind-down and their noise faded into the background. Ford arose with his men and made for the port exit. Two grunts, a blonde human woman and a green skinned Axanari male, took forward flanking positions before their commander and opened the hatch. Beside the captain, another grunt scanned the immediate area with a combat tricorder and pronounced it safe with a curt nod.

“Let’s go.” Chevy ordered. His men filed out, two before him, the rest behind. The security force encircled the officers, creating what, in macabre humor, they called a meat shield around their charges. Two men remained behind to guard the still open hatch to the shuttlecraft. Above them, and still circling the complex and the landing platform, were the two backup shuttles.

The platform about the Starfleet visitors was of a common type. Heavy, polymer laced earthen materials formed the sturdy tarmac surface where vessels set down. It was stained black against the lighter painted markings meant to help pilots align their approach and smelled of a thick petroleum compound. Drab, old steel and concrete structures lined the perimeter of the landing zone and supplied it with various services. The captain and crew could make out warehouses for holding materials, fueling stations, and round topped buildings that resembled old military barracks on Earth. The main structure lay directly ahead of the group, and rose high above them. It led into the main processing station and was also built into the stone of a giant, craggy peaked mountain. Behind them, and past the shuttle, dense jungle pressed up close to the edge of the landing platform. The tops of huge, swaying trees came up almost level to the ‘ground’ of the tarmac they walked on.

Emerging ahead of the team, a group of resident aliens led by Over Warden Jarn walked purposefully their way. As the heavy door reeled back down behind them, Chevis found himself hiding a smirk.

“Everybody walks a little bit faster when money or guns are involved,” he muttered to his XO.

“Yeah,” Thomas agreed, his eyes measuring the faces before them all. “And they practically run when both are involved.”

“Captain Ford!” Jarn was shouting. The tall alien pointed up toward one of the Starfleet craft lazily circling above. “I ordered you come with a small group!”

Ford waved his men to a halt. His forward most grunts raised their rifles across their chest armor.

“I have come with a small group, Over Warden. You didn’t expect me to bring an enormous load of gold-pressed latinum without adequate escort?”

“You defied my instructions! You bring a veritable army to besiege my installation!”

“If my paltry force is all I would need to lay siege to anything on your planet, then you need better trained men, Mister Jarn.” Ford looked at the Warden rather pointedly. “Surely my little unit isn’t going to…usurp your estimable power here?”

Jarn’s jaw worked as his teeth ground.
“Not likely, Captain.”

“Then why quibble? We’re here to discuss a transaction, and I am secure that my cargo is in safe hands. You are also secure that your installation is secure…”

Jarn looked the waiting shuttle over with distaste. This was little more than a primal strutting contest, now. Jarn’s pride had been injured. The Warden glowered back onto the human. “You violated my orders.”

Ford bobbed his brows in feigned disappointment.
“Well, I don’t take orders from you. I’m here at the behest of my government to deal with you…but if you aren’t interested in latinum…” Chevy half turned as if to leave. Many among his party did likewise. This cracked Jarn’s resolve.

“You wouldn’t be here if I weren’t interested, Captain. You may enter, but your soldiers will remain with your vessel!”
Ford felt the concession to be reasonable under the circumstances. He hadn’t expected to get them into the complex, but at least they would be nearby. He nodded back to the Over Warden. “Fair enough.”

The NCO nearest to the captain turned on his heel and directed his men back to the shuttlecraft. Thomas took the lead to the group with Smith beside Ford and Bronstien in the rear. If only the Warden had realized what kind of a tank he was allowing to walk through his front door, he might have ordered Mister Thomas to remain behind as well. Ford felt reasonably safe under the big man’s protection.

The sights that greeted the Federation party upon passing through the loading doors of the main complex were relatively similar to what they had experienced of other mining establishments. Smelters, cracking devices, ore movers and sensor devices of varied designs filled chamber after chamber. Workers culled from many a world filled the rooms, spaces and catwalks above. The noise of all the work was deafening. Shouts and mechanized signals competed for supremacy amid a cacophony of unidentifiable sounds. Ford wished his field jacket had been equipped with ear mufflers.

Jarn gave no pretext of offering a guided tour of any kind. He said nothing as he stalked along, leading them deep into the recesses of the enormous installation. But Ford looked around just the same. Like everyone else in his party, he was looking for Klingons. None could be seen, but these were all low security jobs. Few guards abound, and Klingons would have to be under heavy, constant guard.

“No Klingon biosigns within one hundred meters, Captain.” Smith reported. Chevy looked to the kid beside him and noticed for the first time that he’d been scanning with his tricorder. It was a good bit of initiative on his part, but something their hosts might object to. Saying nothing, Ford nodded and pushed the boy’s scanner back out of sight and closed its top.

They arrived at a flat wall built of concrete and inset with a multitude of doors. Jarn leered back at the bunch and keyed open the closest door, leading them inside. The Starfleet crew followed, with the Warden’s bunch coming in behind.

Within this new section was a sight completely different. A veritable cathouse of scantily dressed humanoids caroused around a wide and spacious room decorated in every manner of decadence known to this sector. Expensive wall tapestries adorned a formerly polished marble floor. Statues of unparalleled skill stood sentry all about the area amid levels of stairs and raised platforms. Women of several species danced in slow, lusty and sinuous fashion, some on poles, and others from chains hanging from the high ceiling. Beings lounged on over stuffed, luxurious pieces of imported furniture and many lay about the lushly carpeted floors in orgy-like masses. The amount of drugs and alcohol one could smell alone within this room led Ford and Thomas to know how Jarn ran things here. He was certainly no warden of any justice system. He was a criminal making a huge profit in a variety of fields. Much of his garnered wealth likely had been founded upon the shoulders of those he worked to the bone.

Jarn did not pause amid any of the wonders moving about the room, but instead led the Feds on a climb through it all. They ascended level upon level of hedonism till at last reaching what one could at least pretend was an official area reserved for business. Guards bearing nasty looking weapons lined the wall, and for the first time in over twenty minutes, Ford could see daylight again. Jarn opened another door, this one a simple wooden design with a turning knob, and led them into the office he’d been in when they’d hailed. A nude female of the Warden’s species lay draped across a black leather couch against the right wall, and two more guards stood at either side of the inner entrance. Jarn made right for a table full of liquid filled decanters to the left and began to pour a drink of red fluid.

“A drink, Captain? You or your men?” The alien’s gravelly voice boomed.

“Not till the deal is done, Over Warden.”

Jarn looked back at the captain with humor in his eyes and a touch of respect on his face.

“Like to keep a crisp eye on what’s going on around you, Captain? Not a bad method. Thankfully, alcohol has little effect of Ya’wenn physiology.” He held up a tall glass of the stuff. “Cheers!”

Downing the bloody brew, the giant lumbered to his chair and sat.

“Alright, Captain, let’s deal. You want a bunch of smelly, violent Klingons.”

Ford felt a bit relieved. At least the Warden had seen a Klingon before.

“Indeed.”

“What the hirruul for, Captain? You have any idea how poor of workers they are?”

Ford approached the desk, lacing his fingers before him almost like a priest.

“I don’t personally want them. But their government wants them home. My government offered to get them there.”

“Are you their servants?”

“Nope. But they would have to cross our territory to get here, and we don’t want that.”

“Why, Captain?” Jarn had the twinkle of pleasure in his eye. “Do you fear them? I know that Klingons are violent, but does their military—“

“I’m not here to deliver you intel, Jarn. How many Klingons were brought to you?”

Jarn paused, looking away to amuse himself by making Ford wait. Chevy continued to stare at him without blinking. Finally the alien returned the glare. “If I recall, I bought over a hundred of those grimy bastards nearly a decade ago…”

“And their leader?”

“Leader?”

“Surely you found out their names.”

Jarn stared in silence, then… “Dath’mar, I believe.”

Ford felt vindicated. Perhaps all this wasn’t going to be a waste of time. He knew the name of the Klingon leader, and there was no way he could have gotten it without having had them here. Hopefully they still remained here. “Any how many remain?”

Jarn shrugged.

“How should I know?”

“You have a prisoner count, don’t you?”

“Oh, yes, Captain. But you won’t find them on one presently.” Jarn was again smiling. It wasn’t a pretty visage. His hand grasped the empty glass on his desk as though it was some child he was taking pleasure in strangling. “You see, Captain Ford, they escaped six months after they were brought here. They’ve been raiding and attacking my operation for years! I would almost pay you to take them away!”

Jarn held up a scarred and bent finger.

“Almost,” he repeated. “But you’re going to need my intel and assistance to capture these Klingons if you hope to take them anywhere. And that…is going to cost you.”

Ford glowered at the man, his forehead furrowing in displeasure.

“Oh, really? Pay you for the privilege of tracking them down myself? Why would I do that?”

“Because if you don’t, Captain, the ships in orbit with you will force you to withdraw. And you’ll have nothing. Save for a blemish on your service record.” Jarn looked overly pleased with himself. He reclined in the seat he occupied and toyed with his glass. Chevis wanted to ram it down his smug throat.

“In the end, it doesn’t matter much,” the captain said instead. “But I won’t pay nearly as much if I have to hunt them myself. How much cash is required for the right to track them and get your intel?”

“Ten blocks gold pressed latinum!”

Ford was stunned by such a close guess. It was grossly over-priced, but at least the Warden hadn’t asked for more than they’d been issued. Latinum could not be synthesized in any way. It was mined and encapsulated into golden containers to be used as money.

There would be no way of acquiring more.

The captain scoffed.

“Ten blocks! You’re full of sh*t, jailer-boy! You’d be lucky to get three!”

Jarn stood in self-generated rage. His gnarled finger jabbed at Ford’s chest. The captain had long ago made a habit of not standing within jabbing distance of anyone he didn’t like.

“You’re damn lucky I’m even talking to you for ten blocks!” The Warden thundered, spittle flinging. “You’ll pay ten or leave.”

“You will take four or you can keep the war-mongering Klingons for yourself!” Ford countered. “Let them wreck your installation. It’ll cost you more than any blemish on my record might.”

Jarn paused a second.

“Eight!”

Ford grinned. This was how negotiations really started. Haggling prices.

“Five.”

“Seven, and not a slip less!” Again the finger pointed.

“Six and a deal.”

Jarn looked ready to argue further. But at last, sensing the captain’s readiness to walk out of the room and go home, he nodded. “Six, then, Captain. Well done.” The big man straightened. “I’ll get you that drink now.”

Ford nodded and watched the alien lumber that way. Chevis shared a glance at Mister Thomas, who was suppressing a small grin at the spectacle. He grew almost giddy when the captain yelled. It happened so little. Jarn returned with a drink both Ford and himself. They raised the glasses together. The warden drained his in a few deep drafts; Ford sipped his. It was stiff, but honey sweet. It’d be easy to get looped on this stuff.

“I’ll be sending my men to acquire payment. I assume the cash is on that larger shuttle out there?”

“You’ll get half now, then half before we leave with the prisoners.” Ford returned. “And no, it isn’t. I’m not stupid enough to come to an unknown planet, looking for people I still don’t know are even here with a ton of currency I can’t defend for any length of time.”

Jarn grunted a laugh to show his agreement. “I wouldn’t trust me either, Captain. I think we may do further business in the future.

Do you like dancing women?”

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I had a very specific actor in mind when I wrote Jarn. I found him entertaining. I don't know the actor's name, but he played a rebel on Enterprise...

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« Reply #39 on: March 16, 2006, 07:57:52 am »
Great continuation, Guv! I love Ford's assessment and haggling with the warden. Great scene, keep it coming!
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I gotta agree with J here. And that warden is a pig...
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« Reply #41 on: March 23, 2006, 09:31:28 pm »
I gotta agree with J here. And that warden is a pig...

Indeed. He gets worse later on.

How 'bout some more Rog-Trek?

CH. 8




The Starfleet party walked quickly toward the landing zone and their waiting shuttlecraft. They finally shed their guards and were reasonably alone as they made it to the center of the tarmac. Commander Thomas stepped in close to his captain as they moved along.

“So, Cap’n, what do you think?”

Ford drew his communicator from the back of his belt. “What I think is that we’re not going to make our deadline. The Klingons were supposed to meet us at the border zone in forty hours to either get their men, or an answer. It’ll take us ten hours at maximum warp to reach the border, which leaves just thirty or so hours to find a bunch of Klingons who’ve had a decade to find really good hiding places. And I figure that about an hour past our rendezvous time, Governor Ron’jar is gonna hop across that border and come looking for us.”

“f*ckin’ great.” Ben groused as they came to a halt near to the waiting shuttle. “Countdown to an interstellar incident. Thanks for makin’ me your XO, skippy.”

Ford pressed the key to flip open his communicator. “Welcome.” He smiled past the exec to speak into the comm. “Ford to Endeavour.”

“Davenport. Go ahead, Cap’n.” Came the scratchy reply from the tiny speaker.

“Launch the cash-cow with an advance payment of three blocks. Cover it with active targeting.”

“It’ll be down in ten, Cap’n. Anything else?”

Ford grimaced to the rest of his party and eyed the growing gloom gathering in the skies. A light drizzle was beginning to come down in cold waves. The wind was beginning to pick up as well. “Yeah, Ron. We’ve met with complications. Our hosts lost our Klingons ten years or so back and we have to go looking for them. Commander Thomas is going to remain on sight and carry out search and recovery while we coordinate our efforts with prison personnel via Endeavour. Security will supply whatever the XO requires.”

“You’re returning to the ship?”

“Indeed. Mister Smith will accompany me, my security team and Mister Bronstien will remain with the XO. Stand by to retrieve my shuttle.” Ford looked the party of prison guards back at the main doors over with dubious apprehension. He had to shake his head. “Ford out.”

Thomas was smiling as the captain stowed his communicator. “You look like you don’t trust our hosts, Cap’n.”

“I don’t. You gonna be able to handle all this down here?”

Ben gave his friend a scornful eye. “You once sent me down to a planet crawling with Klingons to steal a data base. Alone. I think I can handle a few search parties in unfriendly terrain filled with untrustworthy allies and former enemies. You just go back to your floating battleship and sip on some ice tea and try not to dribble it on your nice clean uniform.”

Ford chuckled as he turned for the boarding hatch.

“Well, you’re older and fatter these days, Mister Thomas. Just wanted to make sure you wouldn’t prefer your old rockin’ chair and a knee blanket.” The captain glanced over to the senior noncom as he began to step into the small ship. “Remain with the XO, Petty Officer. I’ll pilot the Thunderkiss myself.”

 Ford and Smith took to the cockpit and settled themselves into the command seats. They ran through a standard preflight of the waiting equipment and readied for launch. As they worked in silence, Noah continually glanced in his captain’s direction.

“Question, Lieutenant?”

“Well—“

Ford didn’t slow as he brought the main thrusters up to heat.

“Spit it out, kid.”

“Why did you bring me along?”

“Same reason you take a rubber to a strip bar on Denobula. Just in case.”

“Sir?”

“If I needed a command base on sight in a hurry, who would I need there as quickly as he could get there?” Now the captain was looking right back at the boy. The blonde headed lieutenant thought for just a moment, the swallowed.

“Your comm officer.”

“Right. And if things went south and we were on the run and needed to break jamming or set up covert comm with the ship?”

“Comm officer.”

Ford nodded, returning to the task of getting the shuttle airborne.

“Exactly. There are no unimportant positions on a starship, Lieutenant. Besides, you need the ground experience.”

A voice called into the confines of the ship from without. “Hey, old man! You remember how to fly one of these things? What’s the hold up?” Thomas guffawed in laughter. Ford flew him a foul finger.

“Get your damn head outta my door or I’m takin’ it with me!” Chevy pressed the control to close the hatch down. Thomas withdrew with even more laughter and stepped out of the way as the shuttle lifted skyward.

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Commander Thomas watched dispassionately as the prison guards worked at unloading the advance payment from the shuttle Patricia at the furthest end of the landing zone. The quartet of lightly armored gunmen were sweating and panting and cursing as they labored to remove the heavy blocks of currency completely by hand. There seemed to be few antigrav lifters at hand here or within the complex. They were expensive devices, and might not be so easy to purchase out here on the backwaters. Or, possibly, the Over Warden didn’t want to equip men who might try to steal the money with the means to carry it easily.

Ben turned away from the scene and eyed the landing of one of the escort shuttles that had originally come with their party. The shuttle Curry evened off for a textbook touchdown and settled onto the short landing studs beneath its twin nacelles. The executive officer now had the beginnings of a plan to look for the Klingons. Warden Jarn had provided them with a data pad programmed with a map of nearly every building the prison had and the terrain of the main continent. Also in the module’s memory was a complete listing of every Klingon sighting and attack in the last year. Having looked the list over, Ben had to admire Captain Dath’mar’s men. They kept busy…

The Curry’s side hatch popped open as a security spec emerged carrying an extra rifle. Thomas accepted the weapon and paused in thought. “Chief York, we’ll begin our search in the northern foothills of this mountain chain. We’ll keep low over the trees to get better sensor penetration and look for signs of habitation. The Klingons have got to be sticking close to the mountains since they’ve kept off the orbital scans. The ore is the only thing that could be blocking them.”

York was a short, stocky woman with wild blonde hair beneath her slim helmet. She’d been a part of Thomas’s security team for years, long before his promotion. She was a good hand. Her blue eyes were dubious. “Why the northern hills, XO?”

“Because there’s nothing there, and there’s never been an attack or a sighting in that area. The prison guards wouldn’t waste their time in that area because it’s so damn far from what the rebels have been hitting. They don’t understand Klingon tenacity.”

York nodded. She knew Klingons from experience. They would think nothing of trekking through the mountains for hundreds of klicks just to hit a target. And they’d find excellent ways to achieve just that. “Very well, XO. Are we ready?”

Thomas glanced into the now rain swept distance to where the cargo shuttle was pulling up her after ramp. The money had been delivered and was now being ushered into the main building. He nodded his answer back to the NCO and followed her back to the shuttle. Packing the extra security men into the two remaining craft was a bit of a chore, but by splitting the difference, they managed. And so the search began.



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Wow... that chapter was shorter than I remembered... I'll post y'all some more...
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CH. 9




Commander Davenport vacated the center seat as the captain stepped down into the command level. “I stand relieved, Cap’n.” The chief of ops said as he resumed his own post.

Chevis glanced over the readouts on the arms of his seat and took a look at the aft tactical display. “We’ve gathered some more company.” He observed.

“Indeed we have, Captain.” Davenport answered, flicking the main viewer from image to image as he showed Ford the new bunch of vessels hanging close by Endeavour. “Our ‘escort’ is growing. They only want us to leave on their terms.”

“Or not at all.” Chevy murmured in a low voice as he sat. “Shield status?”

“Full power, Keptin,” Nechayev replied. His arms were crossed and professional pride rode atop his voice. “Ve lowered them only to accept your wessel into the hanger.”

“Very good. Keep the cut-off times as low as possible when we bring other shuttles back. And maintain Yellow Alert. I don’t trust these bastards any further than I can sling ‘em.”

“Wery vise, Keptin.” The Russian complimented.

Ford rotated his seat in the direction of communications.

“Comm, send an update to Starfleet Command and inform them of our delays. And see if you can get me Governor Ron’jar’s office or his ship.”

“Aye, sir.”

The conn swung the opposite direction.

“Science officer, any luck in picking up Klingon bio-signatures?”

Lieutenant Surall raised from the long scope protruding from the center of her panel. Her brilliant eyes were showing a hint of having stared into the device too long. Ford knew better than to advise a Vulcan of anything, and so ignored the darkening rings beneath her eyelids. She looked back at him smartly enough, after all. “Indications are negative at this time, Captain. However, Commander Thomas has directed his search north of the mining complex. Narrowing my search to coincide with his may produce greater results.”

“Sounds like a winner, Lieutenant. Get some extra help if you need.”

“As you wish, Captain.”

With no further preamble, the olive woman bent back to her sensors, though the captain did note her hand reaching for the intercom. She could direct every science and scanning center aboard to assist her task if she so desired. Chevy found he wanted exactly that. The sooner his ship left this place, the better.

“Message sent to Starfleet Command, sir,” reported the comm officer. “I have an open frequency with the Toq’hiGH, Governor Ron’jar’s command ship.”

Ford grinned at the mention of the Klingon ship’s name. Toq’hiGH meant ‘bird that fights dirty’ as best as he knew. He stood from the conn and approached the comm station. “I’ll take the transmission here, Mister Smith. On screen.”

A small, round viewer activated to show the black on red image of the Klingon Trefoil symbol. The emblem cleared away to reveal the dark skinned, dour eyed face of the Imperial Governor. Ford had seen that face many times before. The Klingon had black, dagger-like eyes that were even now boring through the human captain’s skull. The man had an omnipresent essence of…something…foreboding. The darkened bridge of a warship showed behind him.

“You have Captain Dath’mar’s men?”

No greeting, no demands…just the question. Get down to business. That was the Governor. And apparently his subjects loved him for it.

“Not yet, Governor.” Ford consciously looked down to the Klingon’s collar piece to check his current rank. Still a captain, he saw. “The prisoners escaped not long after being deposited on this world. They’ve been destroying everything they could lay weapons on ever since.”

There came no change in expression. It was as though he’d expected no less.

“Good. You’re searching for them?”

“Indeed. But we’re not likely to make the original deadline. This planet is mountainous and heavily forested in many areas. It could take some time.” Ford wondered what kind of response he was about to get. How hard would he have to argue with the man?
Ron’jar nodded.

“Understood. My ship could facilitate in the search.”

Ford was a bit taken aback. He’d expected Ron’jar to demand clearance to pass, not just offer it benignly. He found his eyes narrowing. Klingons weren’t known for their patience with other races.

“I don’t have the authorization to allow you to cross the border,” a bit of a lie, but would the governor know? “But my men will find the prisoners—“

The governor cut him off with a stony voice.

“As you have said, they are not prisoners.” The Klingon leaned closer to the feed, his face looming. “They are warriors…battling criminals. Were it I there, and not you, I would supply them arms and let them finish the job.”

“Trust me, Governor…” Ford let his face relax completely. His expression was one of understanding and agreement. “I’m tempted to do just that.”

“La’ra says you are a man of metal, Captain Ford. Do well by my countrymen, for I will be watching.”

The screen went black. The captain turned and walked back to the center seat, holding in a curse. Davenport glanced back at his friend at the sound of his loud boot steps. Usually Ford was quite light on his feet. Chevy pegged the operations officer with a black look.

“He’s coming. Ron’jar’s probably already on his way.”

Ronald nodded, now understanding his captain’s agitation. They’d informed the Klingons too soon of the news, and now they would violate the border. From behind Chevy, Smith piped up as he took the silver mike from his ear.

“Sir, won’t our border ships stop Ron’jar?”

“The Toq’hiGH has a cloaking device, Lieutenant.” Davenport answered for Ford. “And he’s damn careful. The border patrol probably has no idea where to start looking.”

“We’re not likely to know he’s here till he wants us to,” Chevis agreed. The captain sat with tired irritation as he thought over the situation. Cupping his bearded chin, he lapsed into silence. Maybe this wasn’t such a bad thing. The Klingons could find the ex-prisoners a lot quicker. But they would likely kill as many of the prison staff as they could in the process. This was what Command had been concerned about. Damn his short sightedness!

The captain released a low grunt, nearly a growl.

“Alright, Comm, get me the XO.”

“Aye, sir,” Smith pressed his silver mike into his ear and began tapping a series of yellow-lit keys. Overhead, the main intercom system thrummed to life. Noah cast a glance at the captain in the center seat. “On speakers, Captain.”

“Go ahead, Skip.” Came Commander Thomas’s gruff voice from above.

Ford drew a breath in with a sigh. “’Fraid I goofed, XO. The Klingons know the prisoners are loose on the planet and fighting the Ya’wenn. Governor Ron’jar’s probably on his way here right now.”

“Great job there, buddy.” Ford was relieved by the humor reflected in his friend’s voice. It caused him to smile broadly.
“How about the search, Ben? Found me some rebels, yet?”

“That’s a negative so far. We are closing in on an energy trace under the forest canopy. Not sure what kind of technology or device but we’re going to check it out…It doesn’t appear on the prison’s maps…”

Ford looked over to the science station and eyed the location of Thomas’s shuttle. The Curry was passing over the expanse of the northern forests and making for a squat outcropping of stony mountains. According to the Over Warden’s info, the mountain chain was littered with massive caves and grottos. The Klingon rebels could be anywhere down there.

“Sir,” the voice of Bronstien at the shuttle helm was saying on Ben’s side of the link, “We’re one hundred meters from the signature. Slowing to ten meters per second.”

“Power level of the reading is spiking.” Thomas reported. “”It’s gotta be a—Raise shields!”

The captain’s eyes flew wide open. A great thud came through the overhead speakers and static began to flow. Ford stood in shock, mouth gaping. “Ben! What’s going on? Shuttle Curry, report!”

“We’ve lost all contact with the shuttlecraft, Captain!” Smith reported from comm.

“Try to get them back,” Ford stomped over to the edge of the rail facing the science station. “Lieutenant Surall, what’s going on down there?”

Surall bent her face to her main scope.

“Analyzing readings now, Captain.”

“Captain!” Lieutenant Smith whirled his seat about toward the command center. “Emergency signal from Shuttle Blocker, sir!”

Ford spared the kid a glance and prepared himself for further bad news. If he’d had hair, it’d have been standing on edge. “On speakers.”

“—Captain, the Shuttle Curry has been shot down!” Said the voice of an unfamiliar noncom.

This much he’d guessed. He needed more to go on before he could decide whom to get mad at.

“By whom?”

“Weapon of indeterminate origin. Possibly ground based, sir. I’m getting radiation signatures that I can’t identify. Prison weaponry, maybe…”

Ford ground his teeth hard. A flash of anger and images of stomping the Over Warden’s head flat flashed through the captain’s mind. He fought to control the anger. He had no conclusive proof that the prison troops had done this…

“What is the condition of the Curry?”

“She’s down, Captain. We saw a glimpse of movement around the craft as we passed over, but there’s radiation leaking from their EPS grid. It’s making direct sensor scans impossible.” There was a pause as someone on their end said something. Then: “We can see smoke now, Captain. Orders?”

“Get down there and provide assistance. Expect resistance. We’re readying back up.” Ford stalked back to the security console. “Mister Nechayev, ready another two security teams and get them to Shuttle Bay Two, full tactical gear! Engineering, order all stand by shuttles prepared for launch. Mister Smith, continue trying to raise Shuttle Curry.”

Mister Smith nodded without looking back to his CO. He pushed the comm mike further home in his ear and again keyed the transmit tab. “Shuttle Curry, this is Endeavour calling. Do you read?” Unkeying, he waited for a time. “Shuttle Curry, this is Endeavour…Commander Thomas or Lieutenant Bronstien, please respond.”

As the moments of static wound by, anxiety built within Noah’s mind. He was friends with Johnathan, but he knew little of Thomas, and nothing of the other members of the team. But he feared for them all none the less. The lack of response caused him a terrible fear. He looked back to the skipper.

“No response from the Curry or her party, Captain.”

Ford’s glare was like black fire when he shot a look back at the comm officer.

“Then get me Jarn!”

“Yes, sir!”

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PO1 Dawayne Goodwin leaned in close to the thick, protective layer of alloy between he, his men and the Curry. The butt of his duel handled phaser rifle dug into the nook of his shoulder with a satisfying pressure as he eased it and its enhanced optics out from behind cover to examine the scene before him.

His shuttle, the Blocker, was parked behind the Curry, her nose facing the tail of the downed craft. The close, jungle-like fauna stood close on all quarters, much of it blackened and smoking from the Curry’s descent. The Curry’s starboard nacelle and aft thruster assembly was blown to carbon scorched ribbons and the mess of her ravaging crash lay fifty meters behind Goodwin. The damage looked much like a hit from a disruptor cannon or focused particle weapon.

Added to this damage was a blasted-in main door at the shuttle’s fantail. Bits of the door lay scattered across the Curry’s cargo deck, and protruded from the bodies of several of the inert bodies within. Dawayne touched the comm key on the side of his slim helmet.
“Endeavour, we have casualties. I count seven down.”

Crewman Daniels spoke up from the other edge of the shuttle.

“Tricorder shows faint life signs from inside the Curry. Three definite survivors!”

“We have three viables within the shuttle, Captain!” Goodwin reported into his comm. “Requesting med support. We’re moving in!”
At a hand signal from the Petty Officer, the security squad jumped into motion, leaving only one man with the Blocker. The team spread out, leap-frogging from cover to cover. Two riflemen flanked either side of the Curry, while two more took positions further away to cover the surrounding forest. Dawayne and a final grunt entered the Curry and slung their weapons.

Daniels bent over the nearest live casualty, passing his tricorder over her bloody form. The look on the slim-faced man grew dark. “Sanchez has a broken collar bone, a large piece of shrapnel lodged in her sternum and multiple contusions all over her body. She’s also been stabbed, Dawayne!”

Goodwin looked back with a hint of surprise.

“Stabbed? By what?”

“Tricorder indicates an edged weapon. A blade shaped like a Klingon D’k’tagh, though traces of an inferior metal.” Daniels began to pull first aid supplies from his armored vest pockets. Dawayne moved forward to look over the remaining wounded. One, an Andorian named S’laan, had a severe neck injury and his blue tinted blood pooled all about the diamond-plate deck. He also had a myriad of minor shrapnel wounds about his back and side. He, also, had been stabbed by some bladed implement. The same was true for the final casualty, a human man whose name he didn’t know. His mind screamed Klingons. The bloodthirsty bastards were known to finish off the injured before leaving an area they’d attacked. Goodwin went about the task of trying to bind the injuries of the remaining survivors. As he plied his mundane healing skills, his eye examined the collected corpses around him.

Out of the people lying here, any one of them would have survived the injuries they’d incurred during the crash and the destruction of the door. But their attackers had slaughtered them. The prison staff would have taken prisoners, or shot them whole sale rather than stepping foot in here. He did a count of the victims. Seven bodies. Two were missing. He glanced toward the cockpit. The bodies of Lieutenant Bronstien and the XO were not here.

Goodwin came back to Crewman S’laan. His pulse was thready and weak. He wouldn’t likely last till any medical support arrived. He tapped the comm link on his helmet. “Endeavour, Goodwin! Can we get an emergency transport?”

The voice of Lieutenant Smith came back. “Negative as yet, Petty Officer. Planetary shield remains active.”

With a curse, Goodwin shouted out the hatch. “Gornt, get in here!”

Crewman Gornt was one of the flankers, his closest support. It didn’t take the Tellarite long to get inside the shuttle. Dawayne looked up at the crewman. “Get a stretcher and help Daniels get these people to the Blocker. We’ve gotta get them up to Endeavour.”

“Aye, sir!” The husky alien replied and hotfooted it back out the hatch.

Goodwin tapped his comm again. “Endeavour, ETA on backup?”

“Shuttles Tucker and Hoshi are en route. Touchdown in six minutes.” Came that green kid’s voice once more. It would take at least that long to get the injured into the Blocker.

“Understood, Endeavour,” he replied. “We’re med-evacing the casualties aboard the Blocker. We’ll remain on sight to search for Commander Thomas and Lieutenant Bronstien. They are not among the people we have here.”

The captain’s voice came through next.

“Very well, Mister Goodwin. Any idea the ID of the attackers?”

“Gotta be Klingons, Captain. They slaughtered the survivors of the crash. Bladed weapons. They’re probably using whatever energy weapons they can scrounge up, but they’ve built traditional melee weapons from local alloys.”

Gornt had returned, and now both he and Daniels were bumping around as they lifted S’laan from before him and gingerly placed him on the skiff. Goodwin stood, unslinging his rifle and jacking the setting up to level five. He intended to respond to any violence in the same way the Klingons had treated his fellows here.

“Understood, Goodwin,” responded Ford. “When backup arrives, I want you to move toward a cavern entrance Two hundred meters north-east of your current position. Once there, give me a report and await further instructions.”

“Aye, Captain. Goodwin out.”





Captain Chevis Ford resisted the urge to growl in frustration. His inability to help his friend and the team on the surface was building up pressure in his chest. The captain could feel blood rising in his face. He wasn’t a pacer. But he did stand by the edge of the command center and thump his hand again and again on the dark rail there. He glowered at the image of the dirty little planet before his starship.

“Captain,” Came Smith’s voice. “I have Over Warden Jarn.”

About damn time! Ford stomped to the fore ground between the helm and ops. The grizzled humanoid appeared on the center screen, lounging at a couch somewhere in his base with another drink in his hand.

“What do you want, Captain Ford?” There was a disdainful tone to his voice that said he’d rather not be bothered by Ford’s trivial matters. The captain bared his teeth.

“I have a combat situation developing on the surface of your planet. I need you to lower your shield so I can transport injured men back to my—“

“Not going to happen, Captain. I’m giving a lot just allowing you to operate down here.”

The captain gave the warden a suspicious glare.

“Do you have any men in the search zone I should know about, Warden?”

The alien stood, tossing a female of his species to the floor beneath him as he arose. “Are you accusing me of attacking your people! I have no men anywhere near the northern mountains! And if I had ordered their attack, I would not have left you any survivors to transport back!”

“You won’t help me get my people back.” It wasn’t a question, more a confirmation. Ford stared deep into the Over Warden’s eyes. The alien was much more confident being safe on his own world.

“You’re on your own, Captain.”

Ford smiled back with an evil glint.

“I’ll remember that, Jarn. Endeavour out.”

The screen clicked back to the orbital view. Ford returned to his command chair. His fear for his friend and his men on the planet below was like a wet, cold mass in the depths of his gut. He would recover Thomas and Bronstien. And he would make sure Jarn regretted resisting him. He already had the inkling of an idea of how to ruin the warden’s disposition. He forced himself to relax in the blue command chair.

“Comm, maintain a constant link with the ground party. Mister Nechayev, get a passive lock on the nearest planetary shield generator. Should our casualties go critical, I will beam them up. Jarn be damned.”

“Aye’s” came from each of the officers. Ford glared at the forward screen and simmered.
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The original version of this chapter had most of the on-planet action being heard over the bridge's intercom as Ford listened and gave orders. I decided a more hands-on version of the scene was better. The outcome of each version is a little different, and this is the version that fits with the rest of the story. The original version had the entire shuttle crew abducted, rather than killed.

Hope it's enjoyed.
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« Reply #43 on: March 24, 2006, 02:11:39 am »
Dude I just took the time to read it at my work and felt i read all in one breath! GIMME MORE!
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« Reply #44 on: March 24, 2006, 09:17:05 am »
Yeah, the shuttle crash scene was pretty damned tight.
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« Reply #45 on: March 24, 2006, 09:57:55 pm »
Guv, that this some damn exciting storytelling! I love the friendship displayed between CO and XO in Ch.8, though it is setting a bad example to the young 'uns. Not exactly stamding on protocol, are they?

That shuttle crash was pretty damn nasty in its aftermath. 7 nastily dead, 3 nastily wounded, 2 missing. That's a pretty big shuttle, too.

Keep it up, this is good stuff.

PS. it is "on site". I know you don't care, but I have to put out a token correction. *grin*
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« Reply #46 on: March 24, 2006, 11:12:18 pm »
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That shuttle crash was pretty damn nasty in its aftermath. 7 nastily dead, 3 nastily wounded, 2 missing. That's a pretty big shuttle, too.

Actually, I forgot to mention my only gripe.  The casualty count is kind of confusing.  I didn't get whether it was 4  dead, 3 wounded, 2 missiing (9 people in the shuttle), or 7 dead, 3 wounded, 2 missing (12 people in the shuttle) or something else.  Somehow I got the impression there were seven people in the shuttle total, but then the talk about casualties made me wonder.

I might've just been misreading or sleepy, though.  I'll look at it again tomorrow.
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