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Re: Big Time
« Reply #30 on: November 08, 2007, 01:14:10 pm »
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"We took him out pretty easy yesterday."  Bytor paused.  "Detective Sexy?"

"I suck with names.  That's hers until I can remember her real one."

I. LOVE. THIS!  :D

I was surprised as hell when he actually said "Detective Sexy" out loud. I thought he'd slipped up and would be embarrassed. But that only lasted until 2 lines later. This is my way of writing like Larry. ;D

I missed these guys. I may print this whole thing out to read on the bus home tonight. 1984 is good, but I'm needing something more enjoyable, more... "up".

Lets hear more from these guys!
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« Reply #31 on: November 19, 2007, 03:48:23 am »
Next little bit...very close to the climax...

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Knightsaint was surprisingly businesslike when I called him.  Not sure what I was expecting.

"Sixth and University."  He repeated.  "Be there in about ten."

"Our guy's on the fourth floor.  410."

"What you want me to do?"  He asked.  King's Row accent was coming out again.

"Cover the front of the building.  If he bolts, you nab him."

"Description?"  He asked.

"Average height, yellow eyes, brownish skin.  Probably wearing Outcast colors.  Not hard to spot." 

"'Dyne head?"

"Yeah.  Watch him, he's stout."

Warren chuckled.  It was a big, honest sound.

"All right."  He said.  "See you in ten."

"All right."  We hung up.

Next to me, Bytor was wrapping up arrangement with whoever he was calling.  He closed his cell phone.

"She'll be here in a couple minutes."  He said.

"Girlfriend?"  I asked.

"Yeah.  Yours."

"Ass."

Bytor grinned.  I stared at the building down the street.  It was an older building, brick and concrete, with Paragon City's once-mandated external fire escapes.  A car slid by.  No one I knew.

"Figure with our buds covering the exits we can go in and get him pretty easy."  Bytor said.

"Yeah."

"How you wanna play it?"

"Depends.  Sexy say anything about anyone else in the apartment."

"There with a girl...not ours though.  Cops know her, say she's a gang groupie, picked her up when she went out on a food run."

"So he's alone."

"Yeah.  Clear sailing."

"Yeah."  Unless you lived in the apartments around or above him.  I worried a moment about the police grabbing Beavis' girlfriend.  If she'd been on a run to the corner market, he might start getting suspicious when she wasn't back soon.  I didn't think about it long.

"Ever kill anyone?"  I asked.

I'd asked the question out of the blue.  Bytor didn't seem to mind.

"Yeah, man."  He shrugged.  "Couple times."

I nodded.

"First one was some freak in black spandex.  Grabbed a school bus, wired it to blow.  Ransom crap."  Yellow-boy's voice was as even and cheerful as ever.  "He said he was gonna press the button.  I fried him."

"Think about it much?"

"Nah, man.  Him or a busload of cheerleaders.  Easy choice."

Despite myself, I snorted out a chuckle.

"Guess it would be."  I said.

"Gonna need one of my nice ones after this."  Said my partner, checking his supply of victory cigars.  "My girls here."

"Where?"

"Roof of the building."

I leaned forward, looked up.  I saw a figure on the roof.  Well-built and female.  No cape.  Further details were obscured by distance and darkness, but she waved at us.  I waved back, and she moved out of sight.

"I think your guy is here too."  Bytor grinned.  There was a big blue van easing up next to us.  Knightsaint was in his armor, of course, helmeted this time.  His high-tech headgear was actually less intimidating than his big, bald, black head.

I pointed toward the building.  Warren eased his van down the street, parked in a spot with a good view of the place's front door.

"Time to party."  said Bytor.  I nodded.

"Let's go."
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Re: Big Time
« Reply #32 on: November 19, 2007, 06:02:49 am »
anticipation building piece. GIMME MORE
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Re: Big Time
« Reply #33 on: November 19, 2007, 10:18:59 am »
Ditto. The tension is building! Let's get in the building!
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Re: Big Time
« Reply #34 on: November 19, 2007, 10:27:24 pm »
Was wishing for an 'Iceman Supreme' cameo for Bytor's back-up... Oh well!

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Re: Big Time
« Reply #35 on: April 20, 2008, 08:15:04 am »
This is a bump.  This is also me setting a deadline.  If I don't post something else on this story in two weeks from today, I'll let the Guv twist my nipples with a pair of pliers.

And I'll post pictures of him doing it.
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Re: Big Time
« Reply #36 on: April 20, 2008, 11:52:12 am »
oo goood, more adventures of bob coming.... welll then i'll be keeping my eye on ya... two  :D
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Re: Big Time
« Reply #37 on: April 20, 2008, 09:23:02 pm »
This is a bump.  This is also me setting a deadline.  If I don't post something else on this story in two weeks from today, I'll let the Guv twist my nipples with a pair of pliers.

And I'll post pictures of him doing it.

*looks at his selection of plyers...*

Which would hurt more....? Ah... the electrician's pliers...with the wire strippers...

I'm ready, cause you ain't for sh*t on deadlines. And tiny 11 kb posts don't count!

--guv!!!
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Re: Big Time
« Reply #38 on: May 03, 2008, 11:55:14 pm »
Scene finished....threat to nipples eliminated...for now...

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We got out of the Impala and strode down the sidewalk.  No dramatic music played, much to Bytor's disappointment.  We were trying to be subtle anyway, sticking to the same side of the street as the apartment building, with Bytor's trench coat buttoned over his yellow suit.

There was a sudden, sharp report, unmistakably a gunshot, and the sound of glass raining down on concrete.  A flurry of little bangs followed, flashes from our guy's window, adjoining rooftops. 

I bolted, boots pounding sidewalk.  Bytor wasn't quite keeping up.  He was saying something into his cell phone.

“He made the snipers!”  Bytor hollered.  More gunshots.  Rapid fire from the apartment, heavy, single ones from the cop’s position.  There was motion on the fire escape.  Beavis emerged from a window.  He was covered in a layer of stone.  It didn’t inhibit him much, rock moved as naturally as muscle as he bounded up towards the roof.

We were at the building.  I couldn’t do the building-hopping leap my  old teacher was known for, but I can catch some air.  I jumped, landing on the fire escape, a windowsill, a ledge, as I bounded my way up the side of the building.

“I really hate you right now, Bob!”  Bytor hollered.  He was climbing onto the fire escape as fast as he could.

One last jump took me onto the roof; I landed in a crouch.  Beavis was running, hopping from one apartment building to another.  Bullets knocked chunks of stone from his bizarre armor.  He returned fire, his AK-47 spitting bullets wildly.  He didn’t seem to see me yet and I took off after him.

His gun stopped for a moment.  He didn’t stop running, but he slowed down enough to pull a fresh clip from the duffel thrown over this shoulder, reload.  I hopped to the next, rooftop, the next.  He brought the gun to his shoulder, still aiming across the street.  He didn’t fire.  Bullets weren’t pelting him anymore.  He suddenly realized why, swung the assault rifle my direction.

I grabbed the gun, pushing it to the side and slamming my shoulder hard against Rock-boy.  He gave maybe an inch and the gun tore through it’s magazine, yammering and bucking, bullets tearing little holes in the concrete roof.  I slammed an elbow into Beavis’ face, where the stone was thinner.  I did it again.  And again.  The gun stopped firing.  I ripped it away from him, sent the weapon flying.  Mistake.  It gave him the split-second he needed to punch me.

I felt myself land, blinked away stars.  I was about six feet from Beavis, but he was running straight toward me.  I sprang to my feet, sidestepped, and brought my shoulder up under his arm.  I flipped him;  I’d wanted to hang on, but he was heavy and running full tilt.  We separated.  Concrete splintered when he landed.   He started to get up anyway.

I was on him in a heartbeat, a flurry of punches smacking pressure points, splintering stone.  I wasn’t giving him all I had.  I didn’t know how thick his rocky outer shell was.  Thick enough;  he staggered back, but he fended off one punch, then another, clipped my jaw with another dizzying punch.  I hopped away from him, wondering why the world seemed to be tilting back and forth.  He backed away, screaming at me.  I pursued him for a step or two, then my eyes got a bit wider when he ripped one of those spinning vent things out of an AC duct.

Beavis charged, swinging the giant piece of metal.  I ducked, a whoosh of air as Rock-Boy’s makeshift bludgeon skimmed by.  I dove forward, taking Beavis legs out from under him.  There was a loud ruckus as he lost his grip on his weapon, and a loud grunt from him as he landed on his face.  We were tangled up.  I took the opportunity, grabbed one of his ankles, twisted.  I put most of me on his other leg, to keep him down.

He tried to kick me.  He was ridiculously strong and every attempt bounced me around, but I held on.  He tried to reach back, hit me, but he was on his belly.  I could snap his ankle anytime I wanted; rock wouldn’t help him there.  Fight should’ve been over.

“You’re not getting away.”  I snarled.  “Give it up.”

He replied with a stream of obscenities and I realized we were moving.  He pulled us across the roof, leaving handprints in the concrete roof.  I twisted more.  Didn’t want to break his ankle. 

Beavis found the edge of the roof, the raised half-wall around it.  He started to pull himself up, get back on his feet, and never mind the two-hundred-fifty pound man wrapped around his legs.  He could hit me if he got up.  I twisted his leg, heard a loud snap.  He howled in pain;  I let go and rolled away from him.  He came after me, limping badly.  I was halfway to my feet when he raised both hands above his head, brought ‘em crashing down.  The blow cratered the rooftop, and I felt wind as I scooted out of the way.

I had a shot.  I didn’t want to hurt him, but if I let him keep going, he’d eventually hit me.  I could brush off, shrug off, or just plain avoid a lot.  I knew better than to assume I’d be able too.  His stony shell was tough, though.  I’d have to give him all I could. 

That’d kill most people.  But if I didn’t stop him, he’d die anyway.  Police would find something that’d get to him.  I took a step away from him as he lurched to his feet and slammed a high side kick into his face.

Rock splintered, and Beavis flew, landing on his back with a tremendous crash.

I stood there a moment, expecting him, despite my previous worries, to get right back up.  He didn’t.  I walked over to him, leaned down.  Rock boy had a strong pulse, and he was groaning occasionally.

I nodded, and sat myself down on the ledge.  I didn’t bother to flex cuff him.  Wouldn’t hold him anyway.

My heart was slowing down, breathing returning to normal.  Without the constant motion, I was suddenly aware of the pain.  My jaw ached bad, and when I moved it a little, it seemed heavier than usual.  There were all sorts of lesser pains.

There was a bit of yellow in the corner of my eye.  I looked up, swollen jaw an all.  Bytor had his hands on his hips.

“Just like you to hog all the fun.”  He said.  I chuckled; it hurt.
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Re: Big Time
« Reply #39 on: May 04, 2008, 07:39:12 pm »
*puts vice grips back into the tool box...but leaves the box unlatched...*

Damn nice fight, as I said. I like it better than the one in Call In.

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Re: Big Time
« Reply #40 on: May 05, 2008, 02:12:51 am »
I'm getting a John McClane feeling. Yippie-kay-yay motherf*cker!
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Re: Big Time
« Reply #41 on: May 30, 2008, 02:20:28 pm »
Nice scene. I had a how does his stone armour thing work query in here, but it was too... Bah.

Nice scene. I enjoyed it, though Bob is entirely too considerate towards the bad guy.
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« Reply #42 on: May 30, 2008, 04:19:06 pm »
I enjoyed it, though Bob is entirely too considerate towards the bad guy.

Really?  How so?
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Re: Big Time
« Reply #43 on: June 02, 2008, 03:58:18 pm »
"Well, I don't want to break his ankle... and if I call in support, they'll just try to kill the guy."

A little too altruistic in the middle of a fight?
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Re: Big Time
« Reply #44 on: June 03, 2008, 08:52:29 am »
"Well, I don't want to break his ankle... and if I call in support, they'll just try to kill the guy."

A little too altruistic in the middle of a fight?

If Bob liked to hurt people...well, he might be a superhero, but he wouldn't be Bob.  If he can resolve a situation without snapping bones or inflicting lasting injury, he will do so.
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« Reply #45 on: June 06, 2008, 08:34:35 pm »
You don't have to like hurting people to want them down and out, so they're unable to get back up and keep pounding on you.

Kirk was never that considerate towards those he flying body kicked, and we all accept that he wasn't a malicious sadist. You put someone down to stay down, and if they ain't taking the hint, you up the ante.

RockBoy just wouldn't quit, and Bob wasn't taking him down another way.
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« Reply #46 on: June 06, 2008, 08:42:03 pm »
Several things to consider:

1> Bob's entire aim is to capture the fellow so that the police won't be forced to kill him.

2> Bob has never fought a rock-protected gang-banger before, and is unsure how much force he can safely exert and not cause permanent injury.

3>  Bob, throughout the fight, is never at any point worried that he's going to lose, and his estimation is accurate.  He can afford to cut rock boy some slack.  He's a kung fu master. ;D

4>  When it was apparent that Rock Boy wasn't going to give up despite being in an untenable position, Bob did, in fact, risk a less restrained attack.
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« Reply #47 on: June 06, 2008, 08:43:56 pm »
Well, that makes sense and they are your characters. That was just the original impression the scene left me with, that's all.
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« Reply #48 on: June 06, 2008, 08:47:12 pm »
I'm hoping Bob's actions are clearer in the context of the entire story.  I can see what you mean, but I had hoped to make the reasons I listed relatively noticeable in the fight scene itself.
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Re: Big Time
« Reply #49 on: June 07, 2008, 08:55:42 pm »
Also remember that Larry follows the old style methods of writing a comic hero. He does not kill/maim/destroy without exceptional cause. In fact, he will kill more often than he is likely to maim, cause maiming folk is just plain wrong [in the vein of old school comics and classic westerns].

And never forget, Bob is a Do-Goodering GOOD GUY.

I now stand aside for the inevitable arguement from Larry as he tries to deny said. [or, as I have just writen this, he will agree or remain silent just to spite me]

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« Reply #50 on: June 08, 2008, 07:41:13 am »
Also remember that Larry follows the old style methods of writing a comic hero. He does not kill/maim/destroy without exceptional cause. In fact, he will kill more often than he is likely to maim, cause maiming folk is just plain wrong [in the vein of old school comics and classic westerns].

Not gonna disagree with this at all, actually.

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Or, as I have just writen this, he will agree or remain silent just to spite me.

Agreed because I agreed.

Spiting you is of course, a notable bonus. ;D

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« Reply #51 on: August 24, 2008, 12:29:28 am »
Was a long time coming, but I'm proud of this one.  The denouement and final scene of Big Time.

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Police lights flashed up and down the street, patrol officers put up tape barriers and told people there was nothing to see.  I held an ice pack to the left side of my face, which didn’t help too much.  Something was better than nothing.

Rock Boy (or Beavis, or Kyle) was stretched out on a reinforced hospital gurney.  His foot was secured with a splint.  He wasn’t covered in stone anymore.  His hands were bound with power inhibitors.  Just like Doctor Lynx, the police hadn’t bothered to take him into official custody yet.

“Where’s Nikki?”  I asked.

He tried to give me a hateful look.  His heart wasn’t in it.  Kyle’s yellow eyes looked tired.   I’m sure he’d been stressed over his arrest, his escape, but I couldn’t help thinking there was more to it.

He shrugged.

“She’s gone.”

“Gone where.”

“Just gone.”

I stared at him a second.  There was bitterness in his voice.

“Don’t know where, huh?”

“Not a God damned clue.”  He said.

“Kinda into her, huh?”

He seemed to think about his response.

“A little.  She ain’t like some…gangbanger chick.  She wanted into the action, and stuff.”

“Well, she got that.”  I pointed out.

“Yeah.”  He said.  “Truck thing was her idea, ya’ know?  That’s a big score for us.  Was all pissed cuz we screwed it up.”

“That why she took off?”

“Maybe.”  He shrugged.  “Told her I wasn’t doing any of that cowboy crap anymore.  Can make plenty of money moving ‘Dyne.  She didn’t like that too much.”

“Why not?”

“Kinda stuff that’ll get you steady cash, you’re doing for someone else.  Don’t think she was interested in doing for someone else.”

I nodded.  It sounded familiar.

“She took off soon as we busted out.”  He confessed.  “No ‘bye bro’ or nothing.  Just turned ‘round and she was gone.”

“No idea where?” I said.  It wasn’t truly a question by this point.

“Wouldn’t tell you if I did know.”  He said.  The statement wasn’t convincing.  “But she made sure I didn’t.”

“And we’re not gonna find her hiding out with her boyfriend in King’s Row.”  I said.  “Are we?”

“No.”  He replied.  “No you ain’t.  She think like a cowgirl  She’s in Peoria, or some sh*t.  She’s gone.”

I looked at him for a long moment.

“Not sure how much time you’ll do.”  I said.  “Got a lawyer?”

“I will.”  He snorted.

“Right.”  I said.  I wanted to ask him more questions, but there was nothing to ask.  He said Fire Girl was gone, and I believed him.  “Gonna turn you over to the cops now.”

Kyle just shrugged.  I motioned to a couple of uniforms.  I heard them reading him his rights as I strolled off.

Detective Sexy was standing near a squad car, talking to Bytor and Knightsaint.

“He’s all yours.”  I said.  “Anyone hurt?”

“No.”  Sexy responded.

“Guy totally cannot shoot.”  Bytor expressed.

I nodded.

“He says the girl split town.  I believe him.”

“Gang types usually don’t stray too far from home…”  Sexy said cautiously.

“Don’t think she’s content to stay a gangbanger.”  I said.

“She’s gonna be trouble down the road, ain’t she?”  Knightsaint rumbled.  His armor wasn’t even mussed.  Felt sorry that he’d come down here for nothing….but when had I started thinking of not getting shot at as nothing?

“Yeah.”  I said.

“Blow that bridge when we come to it, baby.”  Bytor grinned.  I smiled, almost laughed

“Sounds like a good plan.”  Knightsaint agreed.  “Glad you got your guy, man.”

“Glad for the help.”  I said.

“Anytime.”  He said.  “Now if ya’ll excuse me…suppers probably getting cold…”

Sexy shook her head.  Knightsaint walked off, his big, blue, armor making each footstep a minor earthquake.

“So…paperwork now….”  She inquired.

“Tomorrow.”  I said.

“Tomorrow.”  Bytor agreed, grinning.  Sexy rolled her eyes.

“See you two in the morning….”  She began to move away.

“When you roll over and nudge me?“  Bytor asked, loud enough for every cop around to hear.

“Only if you wear the spandex, bitch.”  She shouted back.

“Good Lord…”  I said.

“Ain’t she something?”  Agreed Bytor.   “So…this one’s over.”

“Yeah.”  I said.  “Yeah, I think it is.”



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For once, I had the radio on instead of the television.  It was late, and I was missing some favorite reruns, but I was cooking a much-delayed dinner and couldn’t have paid attention anyway.  The girl from Bytor’s radio station was taking calls again.

…so how can anyone criticize them, when, if they hadn’t been there, cops, or the suspect himself might’ve gotten killed?  I just don’t get it.”  The caller said.

There are two sides of everything, I guess.”  The DJ responded, sultry voice and all.  “I, personally, agree with you, but some people say that capes promote rather than control violence.”

But that argument makes no sense.  If you follow it far enough, you have to say that, ‘well maybe the police promote violence’ too and yet no one argues that we need cops…I just…

I tuned the radio out for the moment and stirred my hamburger helper.  I was trying to put myself into a reflective mood.  I was trying to worry about where Fire Girl was out, about how I was gonna pay for a new windshield, and other stuff.  The effort was turning out to be futile.

The kid was alive, and I hadn’t had to hurt him that bad.  I hadn’t been hurt that bad.  All the cops would go home tonight.  It was enough to make you feel pretty good about yourself.  And it was enough to put some worries to rest.

So instead of brooding, I cut up onions and took another drink of beer.

…and that’s really all I’ve got to say.” 

Like I said, personally I agree with you, and, especially when we’re talking about this incident…I don’t see how anyone couldn’t.”  The DJ said in her ‘wrap up the call’ tone.

All right…Joe from Steel Canyon, you’re up…

I only heard a few words of Joe’s call.  The phone rang.  I picked it up.

Famous.”  said Jill.  “And you were worried.

I smiled. 

“Famous?”  I asked.

You’re all over the news, again.  ‘Commando Bob apprehends desperate fugitive’, and all that.

“You called me just to tell me that?”

I knew you’d be watching sitcoms or something, instead of the news.

“TV isn’t even on.”

Really?  You must be cooking.

“Yeah.”  I admitted.

So are you still…having issues?

I gave the question some thought, stirred my pasta.

“Nah.  Don’t think so.”

Wanted to make sure.

“Thanks,”  I said.  “Lunch tomorrow.”

If you’ve not apprehending a desperate fugitive,”  said Jill.

I grunted.  Jill chuckled.

I gotta get to bed.”  She declared.  “Having lunch with a big-time superhero tomorrow.

“I am not a big time superhero.”  I said.

“Whatever you say…”  She hung up before I could object further.  I chuckled at her, stirred my dinner.   A few more minutes and it was done.  I fixed myself a plate, turned off the radio, and turned on the TV.  Frasier reruns can be held off only so long.  I remember something else though, that couldn’t wait.

I took a cigar out of my pocket  Bytor’s traditional victory trophy…from my pocket.  He always smoked his.  I kept mine.  I’d even found a cigar box to store them in.  It was stashed in the cabinet above my sink.  I got it down.

I opened the box and couldn’t see the bottom.  I stood there a moment, considering the revelation.  Bytor’s voice was in my head.

Welcome to the big time, Commando Bob.



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Re: Big Time
« Reply #52 on: September 22, 2008, 09:14:19 am »
Good stuff Larry! Wraps it up nicely and sets the scene for the next CB episode. Plus a nice ref to our DJ-ing physic... good show!
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« Reply #53 on: September 23, 2008, 11:28:38 pm »
Thanks, Grim!  Working on another one...with one familiar character in it though likely not who you'd expect...at the GF's request right now.  Once I get more of it done, I may start posting it.

Got all sorts of ideas, just need to manage my spare time better.  New job...I'm media again!...is still breaking in, but it seems to have relit some fires, writing wise.  Hope to be producing more very soon.
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« Reply #54 on: September 24, 2008, 12:24:52 am »
Thanks, Grim!  Working on another one...with one familiar character in it though likely not who you'd expect...at the GF's request right now.  Once I get more of it done, I may start posting it.

Got all sorts of ideas, just need to manage my spare time better.  New job...I'm media again!...is still breaking in, but it seems to have relit some fires, writing wise.  Hope to be producing more very soon.

congrats on the new job, keep the GF happy and yay to more writing soon!
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