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#15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« on: December 01, 2007, 02:42:22 am »
Here we are folks. This one wraps up 'Season Two' of Star Trek: Endeavour. The 'season' was a short one...but if the Sopranos can get away with it...

I have yet to properly start the next one, so this will be the last Fed story for a time. The working title of #16 is 'Loose Ends, Strong Ties'. It'll work toward tieing up 'loose ends from this plot line and setting up for the next big run of Endeavour's adventures. I have new characters envisioned. Old characters will grow and some may move on. New things will happen, old stuff will be revisited. I am also endeavoring [no pun...] to come up with less...harowing...stories for my crew before I write them all into nervous breakdowns...

Anyway, here's:

Star Trek: Endeavour
Mercy For The Devil
CH. 1





Chief Petty Officer David Riker looked up with almost a start as Doctor Keller stepped through the double glass doors of Whisker’s. The young CMO had not graced his domain in far too long a time. With a sparkling grin on his bearded face, the ship’s chef and recreation officer rounded the polished bar to greet her.

“Andrea,” he hailed. She was a stunningly beautiful woman. She wasn’t too tall at about five feet and five inches. Tonight she was sporting a short red dress of Andorian silk and modest two-inch heels. Her red hair spilled freely about her shoulders, down to nearly mid-back. She was a shapely woman, and from the scuttlebutt running about the ship these days, single. “So nice to see you again. I was beginning to give up hope.”

Andrea smiled back and took a long look around the new surroundings before allowing him to usher her to the bow-facing window seats. “It’s so very different, now.” She commented.

Riker felt a slight thrill at the sound of her British accent.

“Well, this compartment took a direct torpedo hit before her rebuild. Even the Skipper’s fish got blown out the breach.” They both gave the room a glance as he took her by the arm in gentleman fashion and guided her up to the dining platform.

The compartment’s basic structure remained unmodified. It had a wide, long serving area for those catching lunch or and after duty drink. Three steps led to a raised platform before the portholes gazing out onto streaking stars. Here the fancier, glass topped tables resided for folks to enjoy a romantic and or private meal. Given Andrea’s choice of dress, Riker gathered this might be where she was headed.

“So, dining alone or expecting company?” He asked hopefully.

“Meeting…a friend.”

David resisted the overwhelming urge to frown.

“Seeing someone special…tonight?”

“The Commodore.”

“I hadn’t heard you were back together…” He replied, trying to sound as though she hadn’t just dashed his hopes against a jagged reef. His luck with the fairer sex was phenomenal, but he would have enjoyed chasing this one.

“I’m…not sure what we are, Chef. Or is it chief now? I notice the new rank pins.”

Riker reached up to the barred rank pin belonging to a chief petty officer which resided on his left shoulder. It also reminded him that he wore the white shouldered uniform of an enlisted man. Was she trying to point that out to him, or was he being a touch paranoid?

“Lots of us got a promotion for staying on with the old girl during the retrofit. But you can still call me Chef.”

“Splendid. It suits you. You seem the kindly tavern owner, and this establishment fits you spot on.” She told him. The look in her brown eyes was one of sincere compliment. It disarmed his earlier worries, but didn’t quite allay his disappointment over her dating status.

The after doors opened once again, revealing Commodore Chevis Ford in complete uniform. Ford looked up and spotted the two of them. Riker smiled back. He also saw Keller practically melt. No, there was no real hope for a romantic overture with her. For now, she was totally enamored with the Skipper.

Ford hesitated at the hatch for a moment, looking down at his fleet uniform. He hadn’t expected Andrea to be decked out so splendidly in civilian dress. Riker put on his best host’s grin and stood tall to wave the ship’s CO over. “Come on up, Skipper. We’re just about ready for you.”

Ford smirked a bit and approached, tromping up the steps at a trot. “Evenin’, Chef.”

Riker returned the small smile with feigned enthusiasm. He was enough of an adult to recognize that he didn’t currently have a chance with the beautiful lady doctor. He didn’t have to be happy about it though. But, duty was duty, after all, and Chef Riker would make sure his charges had a good time in Whisker’s. “Commodore. A lovely night to spend with a lovely woman.”

Ford nodded his agreement.

“Thanks, David. I’ll have a Killian’s Red, if you don’t mind.”

“Certainly, Skipper. And you, Doctor?”

“Chardonnay, David. Thank you.”



Chef Riker made off for the bar section and gave their orders to the stewards manning the synthesizers. Ford watched the tall man retreat and looked back to Andrea with a coy light playing in his eye. “Was the Chef trying to score on my date?”

“He’d began his first overtures.” Keller confirmed. They knew the CPO’s penchant for seducing the unwary. Not that the wary would mind a night with him. After all, he was a handsome man.

Ford eyeballed the whole of the compartment. His eye halted on several details. Like Keller, he hadn’t been here since the relaunch. “Mighty different in here.”

“Yes. I find that something of a relief. I can almost forget … what happened in here.” Keller replied haltingly. This room brought back dark thoughts. It had only been a score of months since the Halvor Device ravaged this ship and forced the crew to carry out the most horrendous acts of violence. Keller had slashed a man to death just over by the bar. It had been in self-defense…to start with… The difference in décor helped, but didn’t totally relieve the discomfort. Determined to distract her own mind, she looked the commodore in the eye.

“The uniform looks fine, by the way.”

Chevy grinned, mock-sheepishly.

“Yeah. Didn’t even consider civilian attire. I’ve just been in uniform so long it feels like a second skin.”

“I suppose it will always be a part of you.”

“That bother ya’?”

A steward paused by their table to deposit their drinks with a smile and compliments. They waited till she left before continuing with their conversation. Andrea ran a finger over the top of her long stemmed glass. “I’m not certain that your devotion to Starfleet is what bothered me.”

“Bothered? Past tense?”

“Mostly…” She paused, looking out into the passing starlights. The ship was moving along her patrol route at warp factor five. The star streaks were shooting by a relatively lazy pace. It could lull one into a contemplative, relaxed state. “When I thought you were dead, I found myself blaming the service. Starfleet as a whole. As though the fleet had taken you from me. Then I blamed you once I came to know more about the situation. How you piloted the ship into the midst of the Ya’wenn.”

“Yeah…” There was dark sarcasm in Chevy’s voice as he looked back at her dangerously. “Mighty selfish of me.”

Andrea looked back with mild defiance.

“Actually, I thought it stupid. You were throwing your life away after suffering what you thought to be a defeat.”

The commodore’s hands came up, open and wide.

“I’m not gonna argue that particular situation with you.”

The lady doctor made a self-admonishing face and looked down to the golden rim of her flute. “I wasn’t intending to start an argument, Chevy. But, I was confused and angry. By the time Thomas brought you home, when I saw you there at the open airlock… It all hit again. I knew I couldn’t take ever losing you in that way again. It hurt too much, and I’ve never been hurt in that way before. I wanted to get as far away from you as I possibly could. I thought that…”

Ford leaned in as her voice trailed off. “You figured that if we weren’t together, it wouldn’t hurt if I went and got myself killed. Somethin’ like that?”

“Perhaps. But the idea of being with you scared the bloody hell out of me.”

“What’s different now?”

“I don’t know. When I heard that a war had broken out on that planet, I wasn’t overly concerned, save to hope that you were able to get our people out of there as safe as possible. Then I discovered you were down on the surface with one of the teams…and they failed in beaming you up… I found that same fear upon me all over again. I rushed my team to the hanger deck when I’d heard Bronstien had recovered you. Even though I knew you would be fine, I was scared for you…until I saw you sitting there in the shuttle.”

Ford remained quiet, looking at her. Andrea swallowed. Her eyes dropped yet again.

“The fact is…I was trying to protect myself by separating myself from you. But I apparently couldn’t. Losing you would have hurt just as much whether I was with you, or not…”

Chevy’s face softened. The ghost of a warm smile pulled at the edges of his mouth. His hand snaked across the tabletop, open and palm up. “So…start over?”

Andrea considered his hand sitting there. Her hand fit snugly into his. The Yellow Alert siren interrupted any words that might have been forthcoming. Ford cursed and immediately jetted across the compartment to the comm panel. Keller, slower in heels, was never the less right on his tail.

“Ford here.”

“XO,” Commander Davenport replied over the open link. “Skipper, we’ve detected two strong subspace currents. Both have been identified as Ya’wenn cruiser size vessels. Their apparent heading takes them into the general vicinity of New Providence Colony.”

Alarm charged the Commodore’s persona. That pleasure and farming colony was only lightly defended. It had no strategic value and was only frequented due to the beauty of its terrain and its convenient placement among the space lanes.

“Has Providence reported any Ya’wenn sightings?”

“Negative distress signals, sir. We’re hailing Colonial Admin now.”

“How old are the trails?”

“Surall’s chewin’ o it. Current estimates are better than eighteen hours.”

Ford did the mental calculations in his head. At the Ya’wenn’s best speeds, they could have already made New Providence. At lower speeds, they could arrive there literally any minute. “Begin intensive long range scans of the area ahead, XO. Set a general course for New Providence Colony and engage at warp nine. I’m on my way up!”

“Aye, Skipper!”

Anxious over an impending fight, the Commodore looked back to Doctor Keller and gazed into her eyes. Both felt the same uncertainty over their future together. Loneliness had ultimately brought them together in the first place. Feelings of fondness revolving around their experiences with Ford’s heart surgery had made them truly notice each other. Fear of what the trials of service had severed the doctor from Ford. Now that they were trying again, how would they handle this continuing element of unpredictable danger?

Keller’s eyes softened and she gave him a forced smile of encouragement. Ford’s eyes lit. She pressed closer, into his arms and he embraced her quickly. Her smile became less forced. “So much for our date, Skipper.”

“Jarn just ain’t got no timing, does he?”

“I suppose not. One of these days we’ll work on your faulty grammar. But for now, you go work on the Warden’s timing.”

Ford gave her a soft kiss and squeezed her gently. She let him go and watched him exit the lounge.


***

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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #1 on: December 01, 2007, 03:32:39 am »
LMAO, great way of solving the prob m8!
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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #2 on: December 01, 2007, 08:52:53 am »
nit: gentlemanly fashion

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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #3 on: December 01, 2007, 09:43:05 am »


Another wonderful intro as always. There's no gripes from me on this. I don't remember reading elsewhere about the loss of Ford's fish. I know that in the Federation they're not supposed to be possessive of things, but that still really sucks. Maybe there'll be a new one in the future. This does stress one major point that we might have forgotten since #11 or so... this isn't going to be the same Endeavour. *IF* the Ya'weenies are playing phaser-tag with the colonists, they'll soon realize this, too.

I say *IF* because I smell set-up. Ambush? Diversion/distraction? Sensor ghosts? Bad dream(s)? It's Trek, so who knows (well, you do, but that's not the point).

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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #4 on: December 01, 2007, 06:17:04 pm »
nit: gentlemanly fashion



*slaps forhead, rolls eyes, shakes head*

grumble...

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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #5 on: December 05, 2007, 02:19:53 pm »
I like this so far.  Especially the subspace currents that could be weenies but don't have to be.
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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #6 on: December 05, 2007, 11:29:43 pm »




CH. 2





Commodore Chevy Ford exited his turbolift and strode out onto the bridge with a gritty sense of purpose and a drive to confront whatever the Ya’wenn had in store for him. His experiences in Jarn’s torture room were pushed deep beneath his conscious mind. He couldn’t dwell on those hateful memories and still function as a good commanding officer. He stepped down into the command center, railed off from the majority of his officers, and stood before the conn.

“SitRep.”

“Our speed is warp factor nine, heading 132.5 mark 021.6.” Commander Ronald Davenport told him from where he stood near the science console. Before the ship’s executive officer, the chief science officer was tapping at her sensor controls as she scoured the area before and behind, studying two separate ion trails. Ronald stood fully and turned toward the CO. “ETA to New Providence: Twenty-five hours.”

“Both subspace fields and ion trails show nineteen point-one-two hours of degradation, Skipper.” Lieutenant Surall told him. The science officer had not been on duty at the time of contact. The initial discovery had likely been made by a junior officer in her department. The young Vulcan must have been the first person the XO had summoned before sounding the alarm. The dark skinned woman had yet to even snap the front of her duty jacket.

“Thank you, Science. Tend to your uniform.” He replied with a playful grin.

Surall shot him what bordered on a dirty look for a Vulcan and looked down as she buttoned up the black border at the front of her maroon jacket. Ford chuckled and eased down into his soft chair.

“Negative contacts from ahead, Keptin.” Lieutenant Nechayev reported from the tactical console. The tall, blonde Russian leaned over his station in almost lazy fashion. “Tactical section reports at duty stations. Shields on standby, phaser capacitors charged, torpedo tubes loaded. Security on station.”

“Thanks, Weps. Engineering?”

Specialist McCoy looked aside from the large, curved black engineering console and pulled the mic from her ear. “Warp drive stable, running at ninety-seven percent peek efficiency. Coils showing nominal stresses. Structure shows sound, sir. No problems with our present speed.”

“And if we went to maximum velocity?”

“Projections show no foreseeable difficulty.” The enlisted woman told him.  Her hazel eyes scrunched just a bit. “Should I confer with Commander Tolin, Skipper.”
Ford looked back with feigned sobriety as he tested the engineering spec.

“I’ll settle for your recommendation, Specialist McCoy. I’m sure Commander Tolin will call and gripe at me if she doesn’t think the ship can manage the speed.”

Kimberly swallowed just a bit and looked directly at the commodore.

“She’ll manage, Skipper.”

Ford nodded and looked then to the helm.

“Mister Bronstien, all ahead flank.”

Lieutenant Johnathan Bronstien nodded back and eased the main throttle control ahead on his board. The responding rumble from the ship’s drives became an ever-present companion in the air on all decks. “Controls respond ahead flank, Skipper.” The young officer replied.

Lieutenant Noah Smith was the next to turn away from his station to gain the CO’s attention. “New Providence Chief Administrator Arlin Potter now responding to comm, Skipper.

Ford nodded back and stood. He pointed back to the comm officer as he took a stance between the helm and operations consoles. The screen wavered and displayed a greying gentleman of probably sixty Earth years in age. The commodore nodded to him.

“Administrator.”

“Commodore Ford, I presume.” The older man replied. He had the genteel voice of a mild mannered sort of man. He was balding on top, but not so much to show scalp.
“Indeed. Administrator Potter, has your system patrol detected the approach of any unscheduled starships?”

“No. Your communications man included the readings of two…Ya’wenn vessels?” The official stumbled only slightly over the unfamiliar name. Ford nodded back and waited for him to continue. “No vessels matching those details have approached this starsystem. The only ships on approach currently are two Nivarite Alliance bulk carriers and a civilian-registered Klingon freighter.”

“Good. I don’t know what they might want in your system to begin with, Administrator, but keep a sharp eye out for them. They could easily get there before we can intercept. I also suggest assuming an alert status among your police forces and ask for the assistance of any armed allied craft in your vicinity. If the Ya’wenn are bent on mayhem, they can do a lot of hurt with two cruiser size ships.”

The planetary governor seemed to absorb all of that and turned to nod to someone off screen. Behind the old man was a soft painted wall, probably within some kind of office. An expensive looking painting of abstract color drew the eye with bright hues. “We’ll do as your suggest, Commodore. Thank you. We’ll advise you on the approach of these craft.”

“Very well, Administrator. Endeavour out.” The CO turned back to his exec as the screen returned to a view of rapidly hurtling star fire. “Ron, what’s the closest assets in this area?”

Ron stepped over to the StratCom console standing at the aft inset section of the bridge. The status and whereabouts of every Starfleet ship in the sector would be depicted there. Ford had a reasonable good idea of whom he could call upon for assistance. But he wanted to know who’d get to Providence first.

“Tenseiga is closest at coordinates 11538 by 43077. At her maximum warp, she could be at New Providence in seven hours. Next closest is the Constellation. She’s close by us, twenty-seven hours from the colony.”

“Advise both ships of the situation and update SB 23 of our findings as well. Order Thomas to take Tenseiga on to Providence at max speed. Order Constellation to take up our patrol route and to begin intensive scans for any Ya’wenn vessels attempting to shadow the first…or us.”

Ronald nodded simply and turned for the comm station.

Ford patted his helmsman on the shoulder fondly and headed for the science console. The science station on this ship’s bridge was huge. At more than ten feet in length and curved with the shape of the bridge bulkhead. Two seats manned it, with the primary controls arrayed around the forward-most chair. This was Surall’s post. Her detailed imaging scope was extended and she was currently standing, bent over to peer into the scope as she looked into her readings. The commodore halted and waited for her to notice him.

Finally she looked up.

“Yes, sir?”

“Any chance of catching them on long range scan this close to the Tempest?”

The Tempest plasma storms played havoc with sensors to some extent from any point in the next three sectors. Endeavour was currently pointed directly away from the phenomenon, however, and he was hoping to catch a break.

“Perhaps, as we draw further from the storms, sir. The section we currently traverse remains flooded with delta waves and ionic interference. Were it not for the inefficient nature of Ya’wenn warp propulsion, we might not have detected them here at all.”

Surall had answered his question, but there seemed to be more. Ford dallied.

“Anything else catch your eye, Lieutenant?”

“An interesting choice of words. But, yes.” She turned and began to tap at waiting controls. Both Ford and Surall’s subordinate tech glued their eyes to the trio of screens the science chief had activated. “Here we have the two distinct ion trails recorded at 19:31:27. Both trails are in close proximity and highlighted at intervals by extreme electromagnetic discharges.”

“Which means what?” Asked the commodore.

“Almost anything. Save that, as you can see here,” The Vulcan officer pointed to the second of the three screens. “As the discharges heightens sharply between the two, the course of one of the ion trails suddenly changes vector and does not return to base course for some time.”

Ford nodded, understanding.

“One was chasing the other. The straight line trail is from a ship under pursuit and under fire.”

Surall nodded also, drawing his attention to the final screen.

“There is no debris, but there is evidence, also, of nuclear detonations against the vessel being pursued.”

Ford squinted at the screen. He growled aloud, reaching into his right pant pocket to bring out his glasses. Now that he could see, he read off the intelligence being shown him in full detail. He smirked. “One of Jarn’s ships is one the run from a Government vessel. There are no photon detonations…the rebel must have run out of torpedoes and gotten caught with his pants down. Now he’s running for dear life.”

“Quite possibly, Skipper.”

“Alright. Hopefully the Government ship wins…or has won.” He looked down to the younger junior officer to his right. “Long range sensors pick up anything that might be a detonation? Debris? Anything?”

The dark haired man nodded. “Checking, sir.”

Mister Davenport came to a halt near to his CO and leaned against the blue bridge railing. “Tenseiga is underway and Constellation has altered her patrol route. 23 acknowledged our update and asked if we require further assistance.”

Looking over his tiny glasses, Ford glanced aside to Ronald.

“You tell ‘em ‘no’?”

“I did.”

“Good job.”

Ronald crossed his arms and pointed to Surall’s three screens and the fuzzy blue trails they depicted. He’d over heard the entire conversation, like much of the rest of the bridge officers. Ford wasn’t known for keeping information low-key on the bridge. “So we’ve got a bogey being chased by another bogey?”

“Looks that way.”

“Think we should broadcast a hail to the friendly one or maybe a warning to the hostile?”

Ford took a moment and considered.

“Not sure what it’d gain us, especially if we’re wrong in our guess.” He shrugged. “For all we know, there’s another reason for the readings and they’re on the same side, planning some kind of op. Can’t take nothing for granted.”

Surall raised an eyebrow at the double negative employed and bent back to her scanner. Ford smirked, somewhat let down that his science officer didn’t bite at obvious bait when he deployed it. He turned back for the conn. Ron followed, keeping at arm’s length till the skipper sat in his chair. Then the XO sidled up and laid a hand on the armrest.

“What do we do if the survivor is a rebel ship?”

“We kick his sorry ass back home.”

“And if he’s the legitimate Government vessel?” Ron probed further.

“Then we escort him home.”

“And if we’re all wrong and it’s two Government ships?”

Ford’s brows came up and he sighed. He took off his glasses, pointedly folded them and replaced them in his pocket. “Then things have gotten more interesting, and we’ll have to figure out what the hell they’re doing out here…”

Ron nodded, patting the armrest.

“That’s what I’m worried about.”

The XO moved away, pausing to confer with the Gorn officer sitting at operations. Ford considered his friend’s ponderings. He hoped it was nothing so complicated. But then, life had a way of becoming complicated, right when you least expected it.
***


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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #7 on: December 06, 2007, 12:16:23 pm »
Very good.  I like the portrayal of the Vulcan.  Writing believable Vulcans has always been hard for me. 

The bit with the engineering woman reads a bit odd.  Not sure how to fix it, but at least
1. Conferring with Commander Tolin is a question
2. Probably specialist Kimberly McCoy should be how she's introduced if you're gonna use her first name later
3. Swallowing just a bit... that's the weird part.

I should also like to add that I like how they're considering the alternatives before they get into the situation. 
You run a more military bridge than I'm used to seeing from the feds.
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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #8 on: December 06, 2007, 01:51:46 pm »
Knowing the good engine-doctor McCoy, I didn't notice the lack of introduction, however Kadh is right in stating that she should have been introduced a tad more formally. It is a failing I find myself having alot, and you usually never have (I don't remember a time other than this).

This, as always, was a wonderful piece. You did give us a super formal reintroduction of the bridge, once again setting another segment up for stand-alone-ism. And again, you reminded us this isn't the same ship we met way back in #1 (for some, more way back than others).

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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #9 on: December 06, 2007, 01:58:42 pm »
The crew and Ford both seem more focused and driven in this one.  Not that they weren't focused before, just that so far, in this tale, there's a definite sensation of them having their 'eye on the prize' now that they've gotten their ship back in business.
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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #10 on: December 06, 2007, 06:46:10 pm »
Gracias for the replies.

Kadh: 1] Yeah...I noticed the lack in the question mark after I'd posted it. Wasn't going to bother with a mod for one stray symbol, however.
         2] And I should have used McCoy's full name first. Was kninda seeing if anyone would even notice, given I'd used her so much before.
         3] 'Swallowed just a bit'...before giving a recomendation to the Commodore about something she's too inexperience to be totally sure about... Not seeing a problem there. Perhaps I misunderstand your meaning?

I try to portray Vulcans in the mein that we have seen them on screen, without turning them into mental munchkins or going overboard. I'm glad they are liked.

I never thought of my crew as being very military, but that is indeed how they seem to come off. I find it to be a compliment. I've never liked Trek characters that run off into the wild with their eyes shut to the possibilities. It's irritating.

Czaw...uhm...Czar: Glad you continue to read and like. I did feel that the bridge, being a critical place on any story based on a ship, needed a reintroduction both in this and the previous story. Endeavour has been rebuilt, in some places almost totally, and is very much a different ship. And yeah, the doers-wrong shall soon see the difference.

La'ra: I wanted a 'eye on the prize' feel for this one, because the prize is coming into sight.

I shall post more soon.

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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #11 on: December 08, 2007, 07:12:27 pm »





CH. 3





Captain’s Log, Stardate: 9715.4

We have been en route to New Providence Colony for seven hours. No distress signals have been forthcoming, and no sign of the enemy has come about. USS Tenseiga reports no contacts between Endeavour and the colony. Ben has just reached Providence and states that all is well and his ship remains at alert status.

For now, we proceed on course. Engineering tells me we can maintain warp nine point two for another thirty hours if the need arises. This ship has mended well given the beating she took. I just wish we could pin down that damn vibration on Deck Eight. It’s drivin’ me crazy…

Given the lack in contacts, I’ve ordered the ship to stand down to Condition Three to resume combat shift rotation. I have a good crew, and I’m not about to wear them out before we even find the enemy.

End of Log.




Lieutenant Commander Rathus Slik leaned back uncomfortably into the human designed chair. His species did not favor such seating. Either they stood or they lay down. But primates tired easily and were not so steady on their feet under duress. They needed a soft chair to man their consoles with, and to meet with senior officers. Much as Slik was now doing.

The reptilian officer tried not to leer or glower at his CO who sat behind his smooth topped black desk. Ford seemed least spooked among the crew when confronted with him. This spoke much for his willpower. But there was still the primal taint of fear wetting the air.

For his part, Ford seemed perfectly calm and seemed more interested in perusing his glass full of iced beverage. He was a good actor. The commodore looked up and gave him a grin.

“So, Mister Slik. How’s life aboard the Endeavour treatin’ ya?”

The Gorn chief of ops tilted his predator’s head.

“Well, I suppose.” He hissed in response.

“No complaints? Too cold on the bridge? Problems with the crew or anything?”

“Should I expect problems with the crew?”

Ford pursed his primate lips. Slik did not understand the context of that particular gesture.

“Wouldn’t think it likely.” He answered. “But the bulk of the crew was on board when troops from a Gorn battleship boarded and attacked us. Even when I requested your transfer here, I was concerned whether a problem might arise in that arena.”

“I have encountered no racially motivated transgressions among the compliment, Commodore. The crew seems very professional when on duty.”

Ford paused a bit.

“What about when off duty?”

“I couldn’t say.”

Ford’s left brow shot up. Only his left ever made that movement. His right seemed permanently in place unless it moved with the left. Rathus had learned in his years among the humans that this denoted some kind of confusion on their part. Slik went on to explain further.

“I do not see them when they are off duty.”

“Never?”

“Unless I’m traversing to my cabin. Or encounter them in the corridors during my rounds.”

“You don’t fraternize with the crew? Or the officers?”

Rathus shook his head. It was one of the humanoid gestures he was most fond of. It was a good, simple way to say ‘no’. His stiffly designed and muscled neck could barely copy the motion, but he’d been practicing.

“What do you do when you’re off duty? If…you don’t mind my asking.”

“I sleep.”

“Sleep? Do you require a great deal of sleep?”

Rathus paused to consider what a primate might consider a ‘lot’ of sleep. Eight hours? Ten? More? He shrugged. He liked that gesture too. “Not really. But under the sun lamp, I tend to get drowsy.”

“Sun lamp? You need that to stay warm…since you’re cold blooded?”

“No. It feels good. As does a good, large tub of water.”

“Is the standard issue Jacuzzi big enough?”

“No.”

Ford smiled. Slik wondered why.

“I’ll have the quartermaster order you a bigger one from fabrication.”

“I do not require luxuries, Commodore.” Slik hissed slowly. He did not want preferential treatment. His duty here among the human fleet and the people of the Federation was to study them and their ways. His Hegemony had compelled him to seek Starfleet service to better determine if continued contact with these prey-like lifeforms was worth the trouble. He didn’t want to be treated any better than they were…

“I don’t consider it a luxury. If any other officer or permanently deployed crewman asked for a modification to his living space, then I’d likely give it to them. A big tub ain’t a real stretch.”

Slik didn’t follow much of the vernacular, but he understood the meaning. Ford was a giving man. It was a common quality among the fleshy, softer species. Giving and protective. He found them strange, but not in a disagreeable way. “Very well, sir.”

“And, if you’re not just opposed to the idea, you might try socializing with some of the crew. You might take a liking to them. I think it might beat laying around in your cabin.”

Rathus pondered why the human commodore might be so opposed to solitude. Primate-based humanoids were very social animals. They thronged in groups. Gorn did so, to a point. But they reveled in the time they could spend away from others.

Rathus figured that seeing how the humans and their allies spent their free time might add to his study of them. For this alone, it may have been worth the loss of a few extra hours under the lamp. It might even help him end this mission away from home earlier. He might see his home waters in twenty years as opposed to the planned thirty…

“I shall consider it, Commodore. Is that all?”

Ford seemed disappointed. If he was, he didn’t protest or elaborate. He shrugged again and nodded to his operations officer. Rathus nodded to him and stood to his full height of seven feet. Ford looked up at him in subtle amazement and remained quiet as he returned to the bridge.





Chevy watched as the hatch whispered closed behind the green-scaled officer. He was alone again, and his slightly elevated heart rate began to level. He wondered over the physiological reactions his body manifested when alone with the Gorn. Was it truly just a primal reaction to a large predatory reptilian creature? Maybe he’d have Andrea run a study on the affects Slik had on the crew. She would have to do it quietly to avoid pestering the commander, though. Would it be worth the trouble?
The commodore wondered whether all Gorn locked themselves away from people, even their own species, during their free time. Perhaps suggesting that he visit with the crew was past his bounds as commanding officer. But then, the Gorn was here, within the Federation, on a study mission for his people. If he was going to study humanoids, then he may as well do it right.

“Commodore Ford to the bridge.” The intercom squalled out, breaking any further reverie. Ford was on his feet and out the door at a slightly faster than normal gait. He entered the ship’s nerve center and rounded the after stations and closed on the conn.

“Report.”

Commander Davenport vacated the center seat for the commodore and paused by the railing for a moment before heading for science. “Both trails have taken a detour, Skipper. We make their new galactic heading as 115 mark 26.”

Ford eased into his seat and looked inquisitively back to his exec.

“Which takes ‘em where?”

“The Odarin Starsystem.”

“Info on that one?”

Davenport held up a staying finger and made for the sensors console to consult the library computers. It did not take him long to pull up the necessary file. “Odarin System. Class Two G-Type star. Sixteen planetary bodies. Two are within the limits of Class M, though both very young. One is Class L. Currently uninhabited. Planet Four is slated for pre-colonization efforts later this year.”

“Nothing there of immediate military value, then.” Ford thought aloud. “The lead ship may be trying to lose his pursuer. Or wants to use a planetary system to his tactical advantage.”

Ron looked back from the banks of blue writing on the black monitors. His countenance didn’t show much worry over his previously voiced concerns. “Sounds about right.”
Chevis looked to the dark haired flight control officer.

“Helm, come left to 322 mark 340. Slow to warp factor nine.”

Bronstien nodded his ascent and began working the controls on his panel. “Coming left to 322 mark 340, slowing to warp nine, aye. ETA to Odarin: two hours and seven minutes.”

The sleek Endeavour began a slow, measured turn to her left, dipping lower in her course as she maneuvered. The streaking of stars slowed their pace quite noticeably.

“New contact, Commodore!”

Chevis swung the conn round to face his science officer. Lieutenant Surall was inclining her head sharply to the right, looking at a scope on her subordinate’s side of the console. The junior officer sat stunned at her senior’s swiftness. “What do we have?”

“One Ya’wenn escort sized vessel.” Surall told him. She turned and again extended the main scope to her eyes and bent in close to it. “Given her energy and warp emissions, I suspect she is a Government vessel, not a rebel. She’s holding a course approximate to our previous vector, possibly shadowing the same ion trail we were following. Distance is six light years, speed: warp factor six…which puts her out of the Tempest Zone for at least four hours.”

“Why are we just now detecting her?” Davenport queried. Had he looked at the tactical map of the area, he needn’t have asked. Surall looked quite calmly at him.
“The contact was on nearly a straight-line trajectory between Endeavour and the Tempest anomaly. Therefor she was masked by the emissions of the plasma storms till we altered our course, thereby eliminating the direct interference from the phenomena.”

Ron nodded and looked back to Ford, who gave him an ‘I told ya’ not to ask’ look. As technical explanations went, this had been a relatively tame one. Surall could have elaborated much longer and dragged the answer out for several minutes had she wanted. Many Vulcans might have.

“Alright…” Ford turned his chair back to forward and sighed in thought. “Comm, send message to the Constellation. Update her with position of intruder vessel and order Captain Jeremy to intercept and turn her back. He is to proceed with prejudice. If the craft refuses to turn away, he is to force her.”

Ron caught the CO’s attention again.

“We’ve penetrated their territory before.” He reminded. “They had every right to order us out just as you’re doing…”

Chevy nodded, not looking back at his friend.

“You’re right. And they would’ve the last time if we hadn’t come with a fleet to back up our peaceful intentions. The difference here being…I’m not as tolerant as they were.”

Davenport nodded back with a shrug. Ford had the option to play it as he saw fit. And there were plenty of sound reasons to turn the alien craft back. There was already at least two of the marauding around Federation territory as it was. The executive officer stood and went to monitor Lieutenant Surall’s post.

Smith turned from his communications array.

“Constellation confirms her orders and reports she’s moving in to intercept.”

“Very well.” Ford looked back to his, as always, very quiet weapons officer. “Weps, are we outside the escort’s projected sensor range?”

Nechayev shrugged. Even his head added to the motion. “They could possibly scan this far, Keptin. However, they vould have to drop out of varp speed and direct nearly all their primary power into their sensor array. Ve have observed Jarn’s ships doing this from their end of the storm region as they scanned Starbase 23.”

“But they remain at warp?”

“Yes, Keptin. And ve have not detected any emissions of said strength. They are wery noticeable.”

Chevy nodded his understanding and looked back to the main viewer. He pondered what they would find in the starsystem ahead. Ronald, done with pretending to monitor the science station, meandered his way back down next to the command chair and crossed his arms in thought. Ford looked up at him. “Yes, XO?”

“Any reason behind slowing, Skip?”

“In case they have a nice, elaborate trap set up for us within system limits. Half our scans get reflected back from a dense starsystem. This one has sixteen planets and who knows how many asteroids and comets and hydrogen gas fields… In addition to stellar radiation… It’d make a terrific place to hide from an approaching starship.”

“So we go in slow?”

“Yup. Till we know more about what to expect. Once within system limits, we’ll drop to warp four and cruise in. Maybe whoever might be waiting will get impatient.” The commodore explained all this in a manner one used to speak with a friend, not the man one was grooming to take over command of a ship. Ron had been Ford’s trusted friend for six years now. They’d known of each other somewhat even before serving together on this ship. They hadn’t been through all the adventures shared between Chevy and his former exec, Ben Thomas, but there was a mutual bond there, none the less.

Ron had another inquiry lined up.

“Should we step back up to Condition Two?”

It was only two hours till Odarin. A surprise between the ship's current position and there was unlikely, but not totally out of the realm of possibility. He shrugged as he nodded. “If it’ll make ya’ feel any better, XO.”

Ron spun on a booted heel and pointed to the weapons officer.

“Yellow Alert!”

“Aye, sir. Yellow Alert.”

The whirring siren came to life as the lighting dimmed. Ford began to count how many times the yellow tracers flashed before the first turbolift arrived with backup and supplemental personnel. He counted off six, seven, then eight before the doors on the starboard bow portion of the bridge popped open with it’s liter of people. Less than fourteen seconds. Not bad at all.

“All stations report Condition Two Alert.” Nechayev was telling him twenty seconds later. Endeavour was renown for her response times. Now all they had to do was wait and try not to get bored.
***



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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #12 on: December 12, 2007, 01:39:20 pm »
More goodies to read on my two shorty days after the long ones I work early in the week!
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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #13 on: December 15, 2007, 09:01:07 pm »
No commento?
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CH. 4





“Now picking up vessel debris, Commodore.”

Lieutenant Surall’s report from science roused Ford from his hot tea. He brought the drink with him, continuing to sip at it carefully as he ascended to the sensor station. “Whacha got, Science?”

“Definite refined metal alloys, sir.” She told him, not taking her eyes from the scope protruding from her console face. “Ya’wenn metallurgy. It isn’t Starfleet, and not likely any Federation design. There is little duranium and no tritanium at all. The field is quite wide…”

“Also picking up veapons fire, Keptin.” Added Nechayev. He was traversing the distance between the weapons control station to the tactical sensors console to the conn’s left rear. He conferred with the ensign there and looked back with confirmation. “Ya’venn veaponry, Keptin. This wessel vas destroyed by magnetron gunnery.”

“Any way to determine whether that weaponry belonged to Jarn’s men or the Government?” The CO asked the Russian. Nechayev shrugged and bent back to whisper to his subordinate. Ford turned back to Surall. “Any thoughts, science officer?”

Surall straightened and began to manipulate a broad array of different sensor platforms. Endeavour’s sensor suite had nearly doubled in size and complexity since the CO had taken command of her six years prior. “I am scanning for latent neutron radiation signatures of the bandwidth associated with Federation torpedoes, Skipper.” She explained to him. “Likely this will take some time. I believe the vessel in question was destroyed while still at warp. The debris field is quite long and widely distributed.”
The commodore nodded and turned away to let her work. They were still at warp factor four. Within twenty seconds, the ship would be outside the range of most of the equipment Surall had just employed. He inclined his eyes to the helmsman. “Helm, secure from warp speed. Make your speed ahead one quarter impulse power.”

“Slow to one-quarter impulse, aye!” Bronstien rapped off. The sound of the mighty engines deflated smoothly and the ever present oscillations in the deck eased noticeably. John glanced back a few seconds after that. “Controls answer ahead one-quarter.”

“Very good.” Ford turned back to the science officer. Davenport was now also loitering in the vicinity. Chevy found himself smiling when he probably shouldn’t have been. “Who do you think won, XO?”

Ronald shrugged as though the question were academic. “Don’t know, Skipper. Guess we’ll find out when we meet the winner.”

Ford grunted. He went back to drinking at the much too hot tea his young yeoman had brought him. He hissed aloud when his tongue protested the heat. Ron chuckled.

“She likes to scald the hair off your tongue, doesn’t she?”

“Yeah. I can’t believe she’s a Petty Officer already. You know she’s only twenty!”

Davenport’s brows arched. He’d reviewed Yeoman Ailee Pershing’s file, of course, but hadn’t likely noted her age. “I know she’s more than checked out for security. Her phaser rifle percentile is better than yours. With our without the scope. I’m not sure how she got assigned to Administrations.”

“Some dumb-ass move of former Commodore Shiloah’s.” Ford groused about their former nemesis. “She was Starbase personnel before I assigned her to the Endeavour billet. Her jacket still doesn’t show how she made E3 in under two years. It’s been done, but generally someone makes a note of how.”

Ron leaned in on some note or another on the junior science officer’s screen. “You could ask.”

Ford’s mouth pursed with a bobbing sort of nod. Surall turned about to face both officers.

“Got something?” Ford inquired.

“Negative as yet, sirs.” Surall replied. Just the slightest amount of irritation was evident behind her brown eyes as she looked from one officer to the other. “And fewer findings are likely given your proximity to this station and the volume of verbal traffic taking place.”

Ford’s hands came up defensively, sloshing just a bit of tea onto his wrist and burning him. “Oooo-ooo! Okay! We talk too much. You can have the deck.”

The two senior officers rendered the science area back to its proper master and retired to the safety of the StratCom in the aft alcove. There, Ford relieved himself of his blazing tea, sitting it in a cup slot on the station’s side. They began to ply their minds on the study of the starsystem.

“The last ion trail keeps heading in for the inner planetary ring.” Ronald noted, pointing at the trail highlighted by science. “Almost like he’s still being pursued.”

“Maybe the destroyed craft deployed their version of a fighter group?” Came from the commodore, who was still busy sucking on his little burn. “The survivor’s trail is mighty weak. He didn’t get off without taking a lot of damage.”

Davenport seemed to agree. “Maybe he’s making for the inner core to set down for repair? Do we know if those things are landable?”

“Probably. Even the old NX-Class could maneuver in atmo.” Ford zoomed the screen down on the inner sphere of planets. The two Class M worlds were within, as was the L-Class. The fourth of the five inner worlds had a red marker showing its registry for future colonization. The ion trail was far too diffuse to be tracked into the system core from Endeavour’s current distance. Stellar radiation was making detailed scanning harder as well. Ford pointed to planets four and five. “Were I him, and my ship was on its last legs…I make for either the outer M or the L here. They’re both on this end of the system. The other M-Classed planet is clear on the other end of the solar rotation. Hell, a Ya’wenn ship might not even detect it.”

“Agreed.” He pointed to number five. “That L-Class is totally unprotected by any kind of Van Allen Belt. Its atmosphere is too thin to block out more than a tenth of the solar rads flying through here. Unless he had no choice, he wouldn’t have gone there.”

Ford straightened and looked off to the communications deck.

“Smith, any distress signals or weak broadcasts on any band?”

The comm officer pressed his silver receiver further home into his ear and turned back to his controls to make an intensive band search. He took nearly a minute to thoroughly scour the subspace region. “No signals of any kind emanating from inside this system, Skipper. Subspace or radio.”

“Very well. Keep looking.”

Lieutenant Surall turned to face the StratCom console.

“Skipper, there is no evidence of high band neutron radiation within this wreckage. I suspect this to be a Ya’wenn Government vessel. All hands aboard…killed.”

Ford’s light mood evaporated. He picked up his now cooler drink and headed back for the command chair. “Understood. Helm, turn your course for the fifth planet in this system for a passing approach of one million kilometers. We’ll scan it for life and any evidence of a landed craft, then head on for the fourth in the system. Ahead full impulse power.”

Bronstien tapped in the commands and pushed the accelerator lever forward gently. His skill with the helm was all but wasted on a starship of Endeavour’s size. “Coming right to 027 mark 001. Increasing speed to full impulse, Skipper. ETA fifth planet, ten minutes.”

Ford took a long, slow drink of his tea, finishing the still unpleasantly warm brew in on swallow. There was every reason to believe some of Jarn’s men still lived within this starsystem. There was as yet no evidence of their having left. Endeavour would have picked them up hours ago. Even if they were trying to sneak out of here at impulse, the Federation starship would likely have sighted them by now. His crew was among the best there was. And there wasn’t much that escaped Surall. The Ya’wenn rebels were on one of those two worlds. Were they there to undergo repairs, or were they slinking around with foul intent? Chevis decided to be ready in either event.

“Mister Nechayev. Red Alert.”

The weapons officer simply pressed a single waiting control on his board. His posture straightened. Ford had often marveled that the only time the man ever seemed to really perk up was during battle. The double beat of the alarm and the crimson tracers seemed to bath him in a new energy and sense of purpose. Even his blue eyes sharpened. It was as though his entire persona had just said ‘AH!’.

“Condition One, Keptin, aye.” He responded.

The entire crew was already at their posts. All that came next was the activation of weaponry and defenses, and the shutdown of all non-essential subsystems. Nechayev’s confirmations were soon forthcoming. “Shields activated, phasers armed, torpedoes loaded and ready. All decks report Red Alert status.”

Smith jerked at his station, then just as suddenly turned to face the conn. The boy’s expressive face was one of concern. “Now picking up an automated distress beacon, Skipper. Coming in from the fourth planet, southern continental region.”

Ford’s eyes were lit with a wry bit of sarcasm.

“I’ll bet. Maintain course and speed, helmsman. We’ll continue as described.”

It wasn’t likely, Chevis figured, but there was the slightest possibility that Endeavour’s sudden energy increase had been sighted. The activation of the beacon could just as easily been a planned rouse in such an event. Perhaps this was paranoia speaking out of turn, but Ford would play it safe. No one seemed to be questioning him, not even the XO. Commander Davenport remained quiet behind the junior science officer, arms crossed at his broad chest.

Ford watched his exec a minute. Ron would be a great captain. All he really lacked was the XO-billet’s experience. He had all the skills. He had the persona. The crew loved him. And he handled the ship and it’s personnel well. The only things stopping Ford from assigning the man to a ship in the sector’s fleet were the fact that he’d only been a commander for a couple months now, and the fact that Ford wanted him to take over the Endeavour. Sharp wanted very much for Ford to settle down on the Starbase and command the sector from there. Chevy didn’t want it that way. Grooming Ronald for this commission was his way of delaying the inevitable and making sure he left his ship in the hands of the best captain in the fleet.

“Now passing planet five.” Came the report from Commander Slik. Bronstien shot the Gorn an aggravated look for having reported a helm update before him. Ford smirked. He looked then to the science station. Surall was again at her scope. Ron was bent low, helping the junior officer with her own scans of the planet from medium range.

Ronald looked from the ensign to the senior lieutenant, then reported to the commodore. “No joy, Skipper. There’s no evidence of a ship making planetfall here.”

“Scour the poles with visual sensors, just to make sure nothing’s bobbin’ around in orbit, waitin’ for us to bug out.”

Ron nodded back to the captain and pointed to the two science officers.

Ford watched in continued silence while his helmsman drew the ship’s course for the next planet in their path. Bronstien looked back over his shoulder quickly, lest Slik beat him to the punch again. “Coming left to 331 mark 050.”

“Steady as she goes.” Replied Ford. Slik made a curious motion of the head at the sound of it. The commodore wondered how many more old sailors’ terms he could entertain the alien guest with. Surall broke into his thoughts. “Polar orbits are clear, Skipper. There are no vessels on or around planet five.”

“Keptin, now picking up an active energy signature from planet four.” Said the Chief of Security. “Same general location as the distress beacon. Matter/antimatter drive system. Low power yield.”

Ford waited as the weapons officer confirmed readings and made another scan.

“No fuel containment systems are evident, sir. There may be fuel pods in high planetary orbit, though. She may have had to dump her fuel to make an emergency landing.”

‘We can hope,’ Ford found himself thinking. He adjusted his seating posture and said to the helm: “Align your course for high parking orbit, southern hemisphere. Align forward weapons with the position of the alien vessel.”

“Aye.” Johnathan said back simply. The image of the planet growing on the main viewer was already beginning to rotate on its end.

Ford returned his attention to the comm.

“Smith, open general hail. Put me on.”

“You’re on, Skipper.”

Ford cleared his throat silently and projected.

“To the Ya’wenn vessel landed on the fourth planet in this starsystem. This is Commodore Ford of the USS Endeavour. We are moving in to assist you. You will disarm whatever weapons systems you currently have deployed and prepare to be taken into custody. Any resistance will be met with like retribution. Respond this channel. Over.”

Ford made a slash-throat gesture and Noah killed the transmission. Privately, the CO was beginning to doubt if anyone had heard the broadcast. He wondered if any one was even alive down there.

“Closing on planet four.” Slik intoned harshly.

“Now detecting life signs from the surface.” Came from Surall. Several are faint…likely injured. None appear to be moving. There is a radiation leak from within the Ya’wenn engine core. I believe the crew on the surface are being poisoned.”

“How long’s she been there?” Ford asked.

It was Ron that answered, still at science.

“About ten hours, I’d say. Maybe more.”

It was decision time. The lush blue and green world was swelling in size within the silver rimmed confines of the main viewer. Chevy could see the continent on the southern end of the planet. It was a wide, rocky expanse. Wide valleys were evident, even from space. And down there were a large number of the people Ford considered to be his enemy. Perhaps even his own personal enemy. They were rebels led by the man who’d ordered him to be tortured. And they now seemed to need his help.

“How…many survivors are there?” Ford’s voice was thick and husky. He hadn’t been conscious of the change, but his crew noticed it with concern. Ron turned and leaned in on the bridge rail.

“Seventy-one, sir. I’ll lead the landing party with a –“

“No.” Ford stood up, dropping his empty cup into the vacated conn. “I’m leading the away team. I wanna see what’s down there. Have three security teams armed and ready on the pads and four medical units with ground triage gear.” Ford was becoming a walking dynamo of pointing as he strode fast for the after lifts. “Slik, Bronstien, Smith, you’re with me. Make sure Goodwin’s leading one of the ground teams. Ron, you have the conn.”
***


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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #14 on: December 15, 2007, 09:55:16 pm »
I really don't think it's a good idea for Chevy to go down there.  It could still be a trap.
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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #15 on: December 16, 2007, 12:36:57 am »
If it is he'll just have to Dodge. 
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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #16 on: December 17, 2007, 05:44:35 am »
He'll just have to Cadillac. Smoothly and leisurely.

On a more serious note, I love the Gorn though I'd expect him to run into quite some difficulties due to Endavour's crew pior history with the Gorn so I'm hoping the hint you gave us will be played out.

I'm also wondering how you gonna play this prison dillema out. Perhaps by making Ron the voice of reason? The captaincy thoughts are a pointer to a high profile role for him in the very near future... We shall see.

“Ya’wenn metallurgy. It isn’t Starfleet, and not likely any Federation design.

This stuck me as odd. I took it as: It's Ya'wenn, and it isn’t Starfleet, and not likely any Federation design - I though to myself of course it's not Federation when it's Ya'wenn. I can see ways to make it logical (by thinking the Ya'wenn might have sold their metal to other fractions), but I still think it doesn't work in this phrasing. But maybe it's just me.


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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #17 on: December 17, 2007, 07:21:10 pm »
On a more serious note, I love the Gorn though I'd expect him to run into quite some difficulties due to Endavour's crew pior history with the Gorn so I'm hoping the hint you gave us will be played out.

The difficulties I hinted at shal indeed come, but I didn't try to work them into this one. This is part of the reason I mentioned his habits of staying in his cabin all the time...in a tub... [Yeah, that's for you La'ra!] You'll just have to wait till Season Three.

This stuck me as odd. I took it as: It's Ya'wenn, and it isn’t Starfleet, and not likely any Federation design - I though to myself of course it's not Federation when it's Ya'wenn. I can see ways to make it logical (by thinking the Ya'wenn might have sold their metal to other fractions), but I still think it doesn't work in this phrasing. But maybe it's just me.



I admitted to Federation member races having known of and trading with the Ya'wenn [prior to Ford's ever learning of them in] in a couple of stories. I think it likely someone might be using Ya'wenn alloys. Her stating that it was not Starfleet was a bit unnecessary, but then, oh well.

Glad to see some replies. I thank you and will post more once we here SOMETHING from La'ra... :-\

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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #18 on: December 17, 2007, 09:31:17 pm »
I thought that was odd phrasing too.  The way I took it was that the Ya'ween had at some point in the past acquired (I almost thought they bought them) two or more of the old NX class ships and had copied stuff from that.
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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #19 on: December 17, 2007, 10:35:35 pm »
The Ya'wenn grew into an interstellar power in their own section of the galaxy [mostly cut off by the Tempest, but not entirely] among a group of nations that had no Prime Directive. Thier tec has evolved as a melting-pot of various worlds' technology. It was only natural for Jarn to incorporate photon torpedoes into all his ships once Captain Rell introduced them to him. As for using NX-level stuff, I DID kinda copy their capabilities after what was seen in ENT, but my view of them is about 60 years more advanced than that. They didn't have the equivelent of photon torpedoes, but apparently neither did SFC's Mirak...or the Klingons for that matter [in SFC and B]

I tried to play off the tec difference between the Ya'wenn and Starfleet as WWII vessels battleing WWI era ships. One can imagine an Iowa-Class BB going up against a four stacker destroyer from 1916. This was how the battles were paired between Endeavour and enemy escorts in the first episode of the series. Since then, they've been adding stuff that the Klingons sold them. Photons. Better shields. SIF generators. Etc...

Don't know if that helps or what. Just started tapping keys and this is the result!  :D

I'll see y'all around soon!

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« Reply #20 on: December 18, 2007, 02:25:54 am »
On a more serious note, I love the Gorn though I'd expect him to run into quite some difficulties due to Endavour's crew pior history with the Gorn so I'm hoping the hint you gave us will be played out.

The difficulties I hinted at shal indeed come, but I didn't try to work them into this one. This is part of the reason I mentioned his habits of staying in his cabin all the time...in a tub... [Yeah, that's for you La'ra!] You'll just have to wait till Season Three.

I expected that and I'll certainly will be waiting!

This stuck me as odd. I took it as: It's Ya'wenn, and it isn’t Starfleet, and not likely any Federation design - I though to myself of course it's not Federation when it's Ya'wenn. I can see ways to make it logical (by thinking the Ya'wenn might have sold their metal to other fractions), but I still think it doesn't work in this phrasing. But maybe it's just me.

I admitted to Federation member races having known of and trading with the Ya'wenn [prior to Ford's ever learning of them in] in a couple of stories. I think it likely someone might be using Ya'wenn alloys. Her stating that it was not Starfleet was a bit unnecessary, but then, oh well.

I figured as much. It just didn't work for me the first time I read it.

Glad to see some replies. I thank you and will post more once we here SOMETHING from La'ra... :-\

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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #21 on: December 18, 2007, 07:08:01 pm »
'Tis winter. Larry is in sleeping gear.

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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #22 on: December 19, 2007, 07:49:44 pm »
Well, I was gonna wait for La'ra, but I'd rather have this posted before '09.  ::)

This next CH. is one I deliberated on for some time on how to bring it about. I hope it's liked. Tell me what you think of it please!






CH. 5





Endeavour’s final landing party materialized amid a scape filled with twisted starship debris, med teams and alien bodies. The craft had been dashed upon a long stretch of unforgiving rock protruding up from the otherwise flat valley between monumental mountain chains. The ship’s debris was strewn over a six kilometer run, beginning just before the protrusion of granite which had torn it to shreds. The Ya’wenn cruiser had possessed a crew of just under four hundred. Only seventy of them were now among the living.

The rest were scattered amid the forest of jagged, burned metal.

Ford turned to face the largest bulk of the wreck. It was full of breaches. Much of it had obviously been the result of direct weapons fire. The ship would never have survived even a controlled landing among the best circumstances. Beside the commodore, Lieutenant Smith whistled aloud in awe of the macabre sight.

“Man…that ship is f*cked!”

Ford ignored the outburst of profanity. Such did not bother him. He simply turned to face his team. “Remember to keep an eye on your radiation meters. Black means bad. Help the med techs where you can. Get the survivors rounded up into concentrated groups. Don’t let the rebels put you in any kind of bind or get anything over on you. They’re prisoners till further notice, understood?”

There were nods from his team of officers as they stared back at him. The commodore’s face was a stern, emotionless mask. It just meant he was all the more angry. His crew knew this. They moved out slowly, picking their way amid the rubble to reach the maroon and white clad medical teams where they spread out among the living and the dead. Lieutenant Bronstien stayed close to the flag officer, unofficially his armed escort. Ford, though, had eyes for but one person among the landing party.
Doctor Keller was bent over the still body of a Ya’wenn female. The alien’s head was splayed open to the air, a dangerous infection already evident within the darkened grey flesh of her exposed scalp. Ford quickened his pace at the sight of the badly injured woman and knelt close by to render aid.

“She has severe cranial fractures and a high temperature. I’m going to have to stabilize her before I can transport.” Keller was telling him even as she applied her hypo to the alien’s throat. Chevis nodded and checked the CMO’s open medical bag for the next thing she might need.

“Don’t you need some assistance on this ‘n?” He asked her, glancing about for the nearest nurse.

“I don’t have enough to go round, I’m afraid.” Her English accent told him. “You’re going to have to do, Commodore.”

Ford smirked despite the dark nature of their task. Bronstien knelt close by in case he was needed, but kept his eyes peeled for problems of a more tactical nature. The helmsman’s prosthetic legs did not seem to be causing him any real difficulties today. The radiation spilling from the cruiser’s ruptured core wasn’t affecting the cybernetic components yet, either.

“Dermal regenerator.” Keller asked next, hand out for the tool. Ford handed it over without hesitation and watched as the skilled hands of his lady sealed up the huge gash atop the woman’s skull.

“She’s not going to feel very sporting when she wakes up, but she’s stable enough for transport.”

Ford stood, thinking he’d heard something. Was that a yell? He patted Keller on the shoulder of her duty jacket. “Have her beamed up to the ward, Andrea. I’m headin’ over that way to check on something.”

Andrea nodded back without words as she plucked the communicator from her belt. Motioning to Bronstien, Chevis led the helmsman over a small rise and toward a tall mound of damaged engineering structure. The two of them rounded the torn-off butt of a warp nacelle and were faced with an entirely new expanse of twisted, silver and carbon-black junk.

“Le’s spread out, Lieutenant. I thought I heard a holler.”

Johnathan nodded and drew his phaser. Ford left his holstered but kept his hands free and at the ready. They took angled paths through the wreckage, careful not to get sliced open on the jagged edges of warm metal. The planet’s sun was beginning to beat down on them, adding to the heat emanating out from the ship’s engine core. Ford ducked beneath a bent, twisted pipe and paused, hearing a gruff, strangled call. The call had been too muffled and distorted for the UT in Ford’s communicator to translate, and the vocal was definitely Ya’wenn. Ford moved a bit faster. He rounded a torn swelling of dirt and half-buried metal. The call repeated with a familiar note.

The commodore paused, uncertain. His heart skipped a beat. He began to trot ahead as a more clear voice of gravel began to call again. The Endeavour CO had lost sight of his guard. Bronstien soon called out for him. Ford didn’t answer. He was near now to the issuing voice.

“Help!” His translator finally began to decipher the harsh male call. Ford slowed to a cautious walk, drawing his phaser and holding it low. He rounded a huge, dented capacitor and looked down the rise for his quarry. The huge Ya’wenn lay with his broad, bloodied back facing the human.

Chevy’s face began to twist into a dark, vengeful smirk as he slowly circled the pinned survivor. The alien had been clawing at the dirt for some time it seemed. His hands were bloodied from the effort and his handprints stained the multi-ton mounting frame leading from the damaged capacitor further back. The big man stiffened as the sound of Ford’s boot steps on the rough ground came to him. He twisted, trying to see out behind him.

Ford slowed even more, reveling in the trapped man’s feelings of fear and agony. The man still couldn’t see him. He tried turning his stiffened neck to cast a glance on him. “Hello! I hear you there! Help me! My legs are broken!”

Lieutenant Bronstien came over the top of the rise from the opposite direction, his pistol raised and ready. He was bent cautiously when he’d come into view, but straightened immediately in surprise at the sight of the malicious expression burned into his CO’s face and the drawn weapon. His young brown eyes widened as they saw Ford set his phaser to maximum. Then he looked down on the man lying trapped in the dirt and blood. The helmsman looked back and forth between the two men, uncertain. At last, the survivor saw Bronstien standing there.

“Humans…Starfleet…” Jarn visibly balked at the sight of his ‘rescuer’ and began to push with renewed might at the angled metal piercing his twisted legs. “No…NO!!!”

Ford looked back to his pilot. The young officer looked back in continued indecision. Ford kept his eyes locked on the boy as he continued to round the mounting frame and come into Jarn’s sight. The boy blinked a few times, and looked again to the pistol in Chevis’s hand. Then he made his decision.

Smiling slightly, Johnathan turned away.

Chevy returned his full, undivided animosity back on the Ya’wenn jailer and took the final step into Jarn’s field of view. The huge, helpless man drew totally still. Sweat beaded and rolled from his upper lip. He’d been lying here long enough to grow stubble on his face. With a single quake of fright, the alien looked up to the commodore.
“Ford!” He whispered in the tiniest of voices. He’d stopped pushing on the immobile metal. His black eyes leveled on Ford’s brown orbs. The human’s eyes were objects of concentrated hate. Jarn’s belied only fear. Ford’s smile widened.

The phaser in the commodore’s hand rose to hip level, aiming right between Jarn’s eyes. The Ya’wenn criminal’s eyes widened, jaw slack in horror. “No! Ford! NO!! Don’t Captain! Don’t do it!! NOOO!!!”

“Chevy!”

Ford’s eyes darted back up the rise he’d traipsed down to reach this spot. Andrea was coming. He could hear her, all but running as she sensed the danger here. Ford looked back down to his victim, teeth grinding and mouth twisting into a mess as he debated vaporizing every last trace of the bastard’s existence.

Andrea couldn’t see that. She was smart enough to know what would have happened. Jarn obviously had no weapon. He was pinned, helpless. He could do nothing to offer offense from his current position. And the single fact that he would if given the chance was not enough to justify killing him here. Even if Keller could live with it and understand, the commodore wouldn’t force her to.

“f*ck!” Ford kicked a rock at the cringing Ya’wenn prisoner and holstered his pistol. He did it just a moment too late to avoid being seen. Andrea faltered several steps and halted, staring down the hill to her beau. Ford looked back at her, expression dark. Then he looked away, his chance stolen.

Doctor Keller returned to a slow trot and came to a rest next to the Over Warden. She was already scanning the prisoner, but still looking back to Ford with suspicion and confusion. She looked up to Bronstien. The helmsman just shrugged back.

“He’s badly injured, Chevy! Help me get this girder off him!”

Ford glared back, a look that stung the doctor visibly. Then he looked back up the hill to the helmsman. “Bronstien, get down here and guard the Doctor! I’ll go find someone who gives a damn…”


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Any way, this CH. 2 suffered many attacks of revision and rewriting. Much of it actually just wound up right back the way I originally concieved it, though. Hope it doesn't read as butchered. Having been the one who worked on it from beginning to now...I remember all of what I HAD written and how it COULD'VE wound up...and I just wonder if it flows right. I think it does, but...*shrugs*

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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #23 on: December 20, 2007, 05:29:57 am »
'Tis winter. Larry is in sleeping gear.

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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #24 on: December 21, 2007, 01:08:37 am »
Caught up on this. Mercy for the Devil indeed. Jarn himself. Heh. Now there's a right bastard to catch up with completely by accident.
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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #25 on: December 23, 2007, 10:25:37 pm »
So many things that I want to say to this, but I don't want one of those to end up being a spoiler.

Deep down, I'm still hoping for the Ford-Jarn private room ending.

And I kinda feel for Ford in this, I'd want to frag the weenie too, but it is much better that he doesn't. Yet.

I realize that some are out having a great time for the holidays, but I'll be here, hoping for a *nudge* next chapter for Christmas.

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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #26 on: December 24, 2007, 10:32:46 pm »
You asked...and so shall you receive!

Merry Christmas, Czar!





CH. 6





Doctor Keller drew her gaping jaw shut as she watched the retreating backside of her man. He kept moving, stalking out of view cloaked in seething anger. She could not understand the dark miasma that had taken control of him. What would drive him to execute a defenseless man in cold blood? Had she really understood what she’d seen? It was incredible! She could hardly believe it, even now.

The doctor forced herself to go on with her work, opening the inner pouches of her pack and withdrawing phials of anesthesia and antiseptics. This Ya’wenn’s physiology was impressive. Many lesser men would have succumbed to shock or infection and died during the time he’d obviously been here. Her whirring tricorder told her that his heart was strained, a problem made even worse by the torrent of adrenaline that flooded his system. He was critically low on blood. She could only solve that aboard ship. Why had Chevy left?

Andrea glared up to the equally unhelpful helmsman. Bronstien had his own reasons for disliking her. But he would suffer assisting her to help an injured survivor, wouldn’t he? What the hell was going on here? The slim young man had his pistol out and help low. He looked equally ready to shoot this man, though less driven than the commodore.

“Johnathan. What the devil is going on here?”

The now bleary eyed Ya’wenn looked to her, his head tipping low. The alien was already feeling the effects of the meds she’d injected into him. She looked back as the man began to stutter a bit.

“He…he was going to kill me…” He pleaded pitifully.

Andrea ran her scanner over the survivor once more. She could hear her men trotting carefully through the debris field, headed her way. Help would be here soon. She glared back up to the pilot again. “Ford was going to kill this man!” She shot up at him with dire accusation.

“Yes he was, Doc.”

“And you were going to just stand by and let him do it!”

“Before you get all sympathetic on this ‘survivor’, Doc, maybe you’d like an introduction…” The lieutenant stepped in with a darkly ironic glint in his mirthless eyes as he returned her glare. “Doctor Keller…meet Over Warden Jarn.”

Keller’s jaw fell again. Cold overtook her flesh as it took on a crawling sensation. She slowly drew her eye to the side and looked upon her patient anew. The bastard looked back at her with pain, fatigue and fear shining through. Her wide mouth drew into a straight line and she pressed her hypo into his neck once again. Jarn’s eyes rolled into the back of his grey head and he sagged. The dosage wasn’t a lethal one, but he’d be asleep for a very long time.
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Chevis Ford hit the back of his cabin’s office chair with an angry thud and leaned forth to bury his face in his hands. He trembled with aggravation, frustration and anger. Grief was there too. So many unwanted feelings washed through the Starfleet commodore that he couldn’t begin to label them all. He’d been so close to killing Jarn. So damned close. But Andrea had come along just a few seconds too early.

Even if the doctor hadn’t happened by at a most inopportune time, could he have really gotten away with it? Bronstien was relatively certain to have kept the true details quiet. There would be little evidence to suggest that Jarn hadn’t been armed or even that it had been him to begin with. Ford might merely have been forced to explain why his sidearm had been set to maximum power. Given all of the debris scattered about, he could also have gotten by in stating that he HAD in fact set it for stun…but the weapon got clipped by the metal junk laying all about. More than likely, no one would even have questioned him over it to begin with.

So, the question might really have been…could he himself live with murdering the man in cold blood. At the moment, Chevy knew the answer was ‘yes’. But what would that answer change to later down the road?

The junior flag officer’s finger found the intercom controls and pressed for the bridge.

“Bridge, Davenport here.” Ron’s voice came back after a moment of the CO saying nothing.

“Commander, I’m in my cabin. Arrange for all security in bringing Ya’wenn survivors to the ship. Have a triage set up for them under full guard. Separate their commander from the rest of them and place him under double guard in sickbay.”

“Aye, sir.” There was question in the XO’s voice. He’d heard the darkness in his skipper’s words. “Do we know our guest, Skipper?”

“Over Warden Jarn,” Ford replied, tapping the controls again. “Ford, out.”

With this report finished, the commodore began to tap at the main comm controls before him on his computer interface. His hands moved quite of their own volition as he called up the subspace communications system and keyed for a specific repeater array in the next sector. This communication would burn a lot of fuel down in the engine room, and someone was likely already cursing the fool who’d accessed the comm array without informing them in due course. Ford waited through all the prompts his comm officer would normally have dealt with for him. Finally he received the message he sought and straightened before the admiral appeared on screen.

Admiral Jonathan Sharp wore his regular dress uniform, and looked thinner than ever before. More age was beginning to show on his lined face. He squinted upon recognizing the commodore.

“Chevy.” He greeted the Endeavour’s CO. “Problems?”

“Of a sort…” despite the pressing nature of what he had to tell the Admiral, he could not help but comment of the drawn complexion of the normally robust Chief of Starfleet Operations. “You’re looking pretty haggard since I seen ya’ last, Jon. You alright?”

“Been ill, lately. But you didn’t call to check on my health, Commodore.”

Sharp seemed touchy about said state of health. That wasn’t a good sign. Ford forced himself past it and got down to business. He slumped before the comm screen.

“We just captured Jarn.”

Sharp’s brows drew together in suspicion.

“You didn’t invade alien territory to grab him…”

“No, we found his ship crashed on Odarin Four. His vessel was apparently pursued here by a government-affiliated craft. The government ship was destroyed, but not before crippling Jarn.”

Sharp was silent a moment more, looking Chevy directly in the eye.

“And this was in no way instigated or concocted by you?”

Ford had to grin despite his ill humor.

“Ya’ know, Admiral. One might think you didn’t trust me.”

Sharp leaned back in his own office chair and put a stony glare on the junior flag commander. “Chevy, I just know you can be one of the dirtiest players in the fleet. I’ve read the intercepts about the bombing of Jarn’s battleship in his home system… And I know Captain Rex Stephens fell off the galactic radar about that time. He was my contact for dirty work long before he was yours, Commodore. Then there’s your scouting mission…”

Ford shrugged noncommittally. There would be no getting past the admiral on any of this. Sharp knew well what he was doing out here, but did not wish to push his authority on the matter. “Well…” he began to reply soberly, “you gave me the rank, Jon. But I just happened to get lucky this time around.”

“Is he still among the breathing?”

“For now. I’m hoping he has a blood clot or something.”

It was the admiral’s turn to smile, finally.

“Our biobeds are too advanced to miss that these days. Unless he’s not in one…”

“He is, against my better judgment.” The commodore straightened and looked to the darkened ceiling of his quarters. His hand descended to the dog waiting beside his seat and began to scratch the happy critter above the tail. “Jon, you have no idea how tempted I was. I could have killed him.”

Sharp said nothing in response. He gazed back. Static drizzled through the connection between them, a tell tale of the extreme distance between the Excelsior-Class ship and Earth. Finally, Ford looked back down to his mentor. “What do you want me to do with him?”

“He’s an unsanctioned leader of an unsanctioned alien interstellar attack force. He isn’t recognized by us or his own people, and is even being hunted by his own… Jarn’s wanted for an unwarranted attack on Federation vessels and for the murder of Federation Starfleet personnel. He’s a prisoner. Remand him to Starbase 23’s brig, there to wait pending trial or extradition back to his own world.”

The commodore finally gave a heartfelt smile, though it remained tainted with his ire for the subject of their conversation. “That’s what I needed to hear, Admiral.
Anything more, sir?”

“I don’t think so. I’ll discuss it with the C in C and get back to you with any changes in plan.”

“Ford out.”

The commodore terminated the transmission and turned his small cabin chair about in a lazy circle. China halted his master mid-turn by hopping up and leaning on Ford’s leg. Chevy smiled and patted his lap for the animal to join him. The Pekinese tried three times before gaining the height required to ascend to Ford’s lofty seat. Once victory was gained, the dog claimed his reward by passing a wet tongue over every unguarded portion of his squirming master’s face.

“Alright, alright…” Ford pushed the persistent critter back and again gave him a good scratching just forward of the tail. China’s leg immediately began to kick as his eyes wandered off to nothing, his attention drawn by pleasure.

“You could just kill him, you know.” She said.

Ford looked up to the slim, dark skinned woman sitting primly on his bunk. He smirked as he looked upon her. He’d been mildly expecting her.

“I know.” he told her.

Anya tilted her head as the commodore continued to scratch his canine’s happy spot.

“Jarn stomped on your humanity, and you’re just going to remand him to Federation justice?” The slim woman was dressed in a lacy white shirt of flowing silk, much as she had been when he’d first encountered her on New Providence. She was alluring. But then, she was supposed to be.

“Whatever I do, it’s my decision.” Ford told her with a stone voice. “I don’t have too many options. I did try to kill him…”

“No you didn’t.” Anya stood and stepped in closer amid the gloom of the commodore’s quarters. She placed both hands on the crown of his office seat and leaned down closer to him. He could see down her blouse, lay eyes on those heavenly… Her scolding, hate tinged voice recalled his attention. “You could have ended him when you found him. But you didn’t.”

“Andrea was there.”

“To hell with her. She ran from you when he hurt you the first time. And she wouldn’t stand with you if you gave him what he deserves…”

Ford glowered into her dark eyes. She smelled of cherries.

“She has a conscience. More than either of us.”

Anya scowled and stood in a huff. Her arms crossed before an ample bosom as she looked away. He smirked again. “So… Am I just talkin’ to myself or are you some part of my fractured psyche?”

It was her turn to display the smirk.

“I’m a non-corporeal entity that has taken residence within your pain.” She told him. His eyes didn’t waver from hers.

“Really?”

“You’ve been around. Is that so unbelievable?”

Ford was silent for a heartbeat before scoffing.

“Yup. I think you’re just inside my bent lil’ mind.”

Anya’s arms rose and she arched her lithe back as she began to run her long fingers through her near-black hair. “So…I’m just in your head? That’s boring.”

By now China had tired of his pampering and had wriggled his way free of Ford’s arms. The Pekinese thumped to the carpeted deck and made for his food dish to nibble. He passed through Anya’s feet. The commodore smiled again as he stood from his desk. “I think that speaks volumes, my dear. I’ve got work to do.”

Anya stood where she was, her arms still high as she twisted at the waist to watch him go.
***



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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #27 on: December 26, 2007, 03:02:07 am »
You're a bastard.  You give us exactly the kind of thing we've LOVE to see happen to Jarn and then turn it around so that the toad escapes what any sane person would've given him. ;D

I laughed, incidentally, when I realized who it was.  Real hard.  Especially at the idea of just what look Ford had on his face as he watched his nemesis writhe under the big piece of metal.

Honestly, I wasn't expecting Anya to show up again.  I like that she's still a...player, so to speak.

Other thing I really enjoyed was the way Keller went from 'Highly Moral Federation Doctor' to something not quite as altruistic when she found out who her new 'patient' was.  That jab in the neck told us much.
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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #28 on: December 26, 2007, 03:16:30 am »
I read this, and I'm still hoping for the "private room" ending; however, I do feel that there may be something else in store for our not so favorite weenie. At the same time, there is the weenie civil war going on, and I am curious to know who's running that show for Jarn?

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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #29 on: December 26, 2007, 01:47:00 pm »
You're a bastard.  You give us exactly the kind of thing we've LOVE to see happen to Jarn and then turn it around so that the toad escapes what any sane person would've given him. ;D



Vaporizing him would have been just too easy...

Thanks for the replies. More to come soon as I start wrapping this one up.

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« Reply #30 on: December 30, 2007, 10:34:19 pm »
I worked quite hard on this CH. I hope it comes out as something better than lame. I had great difficulty with it, and it suffered from many periods where I just didn't feel  like writing any more. Lemme have some feed back, please. This will be the last Trek story for a bit, and I'm particular about this'n.




CH. 7





Commander Ron Davenport sat sleepily in the command chair and watched the young, Earth-like world revolve beneath Endeavour. It was late in Gamma Shift, 23:57 hours. Soon, Mister Bronstien would report for duty and take over the bridge. The lighting was as low as it was during combat alerts to emulate nighttime conditions on terrestrial worlds.

The bridge staff was moderate. One officer manned each key position: Conn, Helm, Ops, Science, Communications, Engineering and Tactical. Noncoms manned the other, less vital stations. When the shift rotated, Engineering, Tactical, Comm and Helm would then be assumed by enlisted personnel in need of the console time. There would be senior noncoms on deck to watch over several of the lesser stations at once and to help baby-sit the less experienced crewers.

The after hatch opened and disgorged Lieutenant Bronstien earlier than expected. Ron turned the conn to face the slim young lieutenant as he stepped down into the command circle. Soon, the pilot would be receiving a new set of cloned legs to replace his current prosthetics. The kid had come to walk rather well on his new masts. Only his slower gait belied the lack of real limbs beneath his pant legs.

Johnathan came to a bobbing halt beside the conn, arms clasped behind as he also eyed the main screen. “Quiet evening, Commander?”

“Yes, indeed, Lieutenant.” Ron replied, trying to mask his tiredness with a slightly louder voice. “You’re the early bird today, I see.”

“Trying to buck for a raise, sir. Relief still coming along strong down there?”

“We’ve gotten all the Ya’wenn to the ship now. Last one beamed on board at twenty-hundred. Security has ‘em confined where they need to be. Commander Tolin has a team down there sifting through the wreck.”

“Anything good?”

“She’s recovering their computer core and their comm suite. Ya’wenn communications are nearly as advanced as ours, and usually powerful enough to break through Tempest interference. She wants a look at it.”

“I don’t suppose she managed to recover any torpedo casings. Maybe a damaged one Jarn’s men couldn’t use in their fight?”

“No such luck. Jarn used everything he had to keep clear of capture. But we got him anyway.”

“Any word from Constellation?”

“She’s closing on the escort. The Ya’wenn are trying to give her the shake, but Jeremy is hanging onto them.” Davenport replied.

The chronometer clicked home on 00:00 hours. A gong sounded throughout the ship’s main spaces as the main computer denoted the time. Soon, the lifts were spilling fresh faces onto the deck. The change of shift was as smooth as expected. Once the junior officers made their exit, Ronald himself stood before the conn and assumed a lax state of attention. Johnathan stood rail straight. He made a pretty officer when he tried.

“I relieve you, XO.” Bronstien said.

“I stand relieved, Lieutenant.” Ron stepped off the dais. “You have the conn.”

“I have the conn.”

Johnathan ascended up to the level of the big chair but did not sit down. He looked about the bridge space for a second, telling Davenport he had something else on his mind. Ron turned back fully to the young man. There were only seven crew on the bridge level now. This was as cozy as it was going to get for a private conversation.

“Something on your mind, John-Boy?”

Johnathan clenched his lips a tad and looked down. When he spoke, it was nearly silent. The noncoms were experienced enough to turn away at the sound of quiet officer talk and busied themselves in keeping the younger hands occupied.

“It’s about the Skipper.”

Ron stepped in close, curious.

“Down on the planet?”

“Yeah. He almost killed Jarn. I think Keller knows about it.”

Davenport had thought such a thing likely given the facts and the CO’s mood when he’d returned to the ship hours ago. He’d had plenty of time to ponder what could or might have occurred down there. He looked questioning up to the boy.

“Which are you concerned about, Lieutenant? That the commodore was going to kill him or that Keller might know?”

“Ya know…I’m not so sure.”

Ron’s face became stern. It did not portray anger.

“Ford is among the best CO’s in Starfleet. If he kills a man, then it was deserved and unavoidable. He doesn’t kill out of malice or revenge. Whatever he might have wanted to do, I seriously doubt it would have ended with the death of his prisoner unless Jarn had tried to kill him or one of you. And since Jarn’s still alive, then it doesn’t matter what the doctor or even you believe he might have been about to do. There’s nothing to base any suspicion on.”

Bronstien took in the commander’s words and considered the stony set of his manner. At length, he nodded. He might have liked to argue the matter further, but no matter what, Ron was essentially right. Jarn was still among the breathing. Whether or not Ford had wanted him dead or was considering murder, it hadn’t occurred.

“Very well, sir.”

Ronald nodded once and turned leisurely away. As he made for the lift, he pondered how much of his speech had been truth and how much was simply wishful thinking…
***





Doctor Keller stifled a yawn. She was barely awake. Her duties among the injured and dying Ya’wenn had covered her in blood and worn her to the bone. Now the majority of them were stable, resting amid the armed guards down in the triage. She’d gone to her cabin already, showered and changed. Her red hair remained damp as she snaked through the corridors and halls of her ship. She was in uniform, but had opted to go without a duty jacket.

She found the commodore in Whisker’s, much as she thought she might. The barrel-chested man leaned his girth onto the polished top of the bar as he swigged his way through a tall glass of amber fluid. She slowed her pace as she neared him. He’d sighted her as she’d passed through the glass doors.

“Have a seat, ‘Drea.”

Andrea slid onto the stool nearest her man and regarded him somberly. He seemed buzzed, but not drunk yet. She wondered just how long he’d been here, and how long he intended to do this in front of the crew. Thankfully, Whisker’s beheld only ten enlisted and a spare officer at the moment.

“Feeling any pain, darling?” She inquired of him.

“If you’re implying I’m drunk, doll, think again.”

“I’m not. I know an old hound such as yourself prides himself on the quantities he can imbibe.” I’m wondering as to your status as a ‘Paragon of Virtue’ among the crew, however.”

Ford cast half a glance over his maroon clad shoulder to the assorted people about the compartment. Few of them were even associating with each other, let alone casting a look his way. This time of night was the late-drinker’s hour. Few came here during the wee hours. They wanted to avoid being thought of as a drunk. The few that did come in only stayed an hour at the most.

“Don’t think they ever thought of me as a paragon of anything.”

“You’re still not showing yourself as a proper officer, Chevy. How long have you been in here?”

Ford looked at her, amusement shining on his wide face.

“Is this what I’m gonna be looking for’d to if we ever get hitched? You trying so very hard to straighten out my kinks?”

Keller forced a wry smile.

“As well as correcting your grammar. ‘Hitched’ indeed.”

Ford grunted a laugh and drained the rest of his glass into the detriment of his liver. Then he slid off the stool and assumed his spongy feet. “Then lead me the hell outta here, my British darlin’. Ed-ju-ma-cate me.”

At least he wasn’t being loud and overly obnoxious. Andrea nodded and wrapped an arm around him as she escorted the commodore out the door. He was walking quite steadily, but he was taking particular care to remain at a slow pace. He led her out the double transparencies and into the darkened, empty corridors. He was headed aft, and not toward the turbolift banks.

“Where are we headed, Chevy?”

“Aft observatory seven. Sweet view of the fantail and the port nacelle.”

“Romantic.”

“Could be…if it wasn’t for the fact that the engineer checking the manual impulse manifold coolant gear comes through every hour on the hour.”

The doctor smiled despite herself as he led her to their private corner of the ship. The observatory was open and designed for the comfort of visiting passengers. It was open to the rest of the deck and granted a beautiful view of the aft portions of the Excelsior-Class ship. The broad bulk of the silver and black trimmed engineering hull dominated the left-hand side of the window furthest to starboard. The other four portholes showed a panorama of the living planet beneath them, receding constantly abaft, and the long, sleek mass of the port warp engine. Only the bearing strut connecting the engine to the secondary hull blocked out any of the view, but it was far enough removed and quite low. One had to get close and look down to see the plane of it. Andrea could see men moving to and from in the upper control section of Shuttlebay 2.

Chevis settled down on one of the armless, blue chairs that abounded in the observatory and patted the one next to it. Andrea sat, hands knit in her lap as she watched him. She’d been angry and confused and shocked about what she’d witnessed early on today. Chevy Ford had looked like a killer bent of revenge. Now, he was a kindly and even sweet starship commander bent of relaxing.

“Chevis,” she began. “I hardly know what to think about you.”

Ford looked to her, his attention having been fixed on the view aft of his ship.

“Oh?”

“Earlier, you looked like Satan himself, poised to commit a dreadful crime. Now it’s as though that never happened. As though your greatest enemy isn’t laying in a bed on this very deck…”

Reminded of his hatred, the commodore’s face darkened and twisted into a frown.

“What the f*ck did you have to bring that up for?”

Andrea almost regretted it. Part of her wished just to ignore the happening. But, she couldn’t abide being with a murderer. And if he was truly capable of committing the act she was sure she had been about to witness down there on that planet…

“Chevy… You were going to kill him… At least that’s what it seemed.”

His face was a mask of hate. Directed at her or not, it was painful and frightening to behold.

“Was it really?”

“Don’t try to mislead me. And don’t even try to deny that the phaser you turned in was set to maximum power.”

Chevis grinned maliciously.

“Nice try. I made sure to turn it back down to setting two before I beamed back home.” Finally his evil persona lessened, abating to a shadow. “But, yeah…you’re right. I might have killed him.”

“Might have?”

The commodore seemed to slide into a reflective mood and relaxed again into the square cushioning of the decorative furniture. “At the time…I was gonna kill him. And I wanted him to see me killing him. When I heard your voice…I wasn’t so sure any more. I wasn’t going to do it and have you think less of me.”

“And if I hadn’t happened along just in the nick of time?”

There was no change in Ford’s now guarded expression. His face was a mask. Andrea felt slightly betrayed at this apparent effort to hide himself from her. He looked right into her eyes.

“I’d have killed him. I’m pretty damn sure of it.”

The admission sank in with a cold grip of fright. Keller drew rigid as she sat there before him. She was afraid of the fact that he was blatantly capable and willing to commit such a thing. More frightful still was the assured knowledge she possessed that he would not miss a wink of sleep over it. The fact that he hadn’t actually killed Jarn did not totally allay this fear. This fact tainted everything she felt for him at this moment.

She struggled with the knowledge, however, that Jarn was indeed deserving of such treatment, whether or not she believed in the taking of life. The man was an animal. Hateful and cruel. A murderer as well. He’d have done exactly the same or far worse to anyone aboard this ship if given a reason or the chance. And when cornered…that same tyrant had begged for his life and pleaded with the nearest sympathetic ear to protect him.

But what did all this make Chevis D. Ford?

“So you are a murderer?”

Those brown eyes narrowed into cold, angular slits.

“Am I?”

“I don’t know. Do you?”

“I was gonna kill his ass. So am I as bad as him?”

“Perhaps not…but I don’t know if you’re truly much better…”

Comparing Ford to his enemy, the man who’d tortured him, might have driven him into hysterics. Chevis’s teeth ground back and forth as he fought to retain control. It was the most telling thing he was allowing to pass through his façade. “Fine, then.” He replied in acid. “I’m a piece of sh*t.”

Andrea shook her head. The sudden realization that she would do little more than drive him away from her flooded her senses and made her more afraid than she’d been of his capacity for murder. “No…no! Chevy… I’m…simply trying to come to some kind of understanding…”

“No…You’re trying to decide if you want to be with a killer.”

Andrea bit her bottom lip and looked down, at a loss over how to salvage this situation. What the hell was she doing? They’d only been back together for a day! Now she was calling him a murderer to his face and berating him for something he might have done to a man that deserved to be dead! She looked back up, her eyes pleading.

“Whatever you are, Chevy… I still love you…”

Her voice was tiny as she whispered those last three words. She clenched suddenly scratchy feeling eyes and instantly felt wetness fall down her flushed cheeks. Ford eased off the chair across from her and sank to his knees before her. He pressed in close and wiped the tears from her face. His lips pressed to hers. He drew in his breath to avoid assailing her with the smell of whisky, though his lips still tasted of it.

Separating himself from her again, but still on his knees, Ford looked into her hot feeling eyes. All the anger had fallen away, leaving only his compassion for her. “I love you, too… I won’t do anything that makes you think less of me, Andrea. You have my word…”
***



Much of the conversation just ended was patterned after conversations I've had with 2 various significant others. I wanted a feeling of 'where the hell is this conversation going'? I hope this was conveyed and that it looks like an actual discussion between partially estranged lovers while not seeming too...melodramatic...

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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #31 on: January 01, 2008, 04:04:48 pm »
I just read the last several chapters to get caught up.  I don't know what Anya is so I'll have to ignore that point.  The last chapter is very powerful, but weakened by the ones before it.  Parts of them are necessary though.  What I mean is that you can get most of what happened from the last chapter and don't feel like you're missing anything. 
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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #32 on: January 01, 2008, 08:47:31 pm »
I see what you mean. I think it was necessary to recap things for the purposes of a clear conversation, though. [if I take your meaning at all]

For details on Anya, read #11: White Rabbits.

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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #33 on: January 03, 2008, 01:18:40 pm »
Finally caught up with this.  It's good as is.  Different dynamics to it than if you changed it the way Rommie meant (I think).  I really like that you've been able to show us deeply flawed people and that we haven't gotten rid of all of our bad side by the time we get to Trek era.  Scott Bennie did that very well too.
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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #34 on: January 03, 2008, 09:36:06 pm »
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« Reply #35 on: January 04, 2008, 12:55:41 pm »
Printing it out now to read later.

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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #36 on: January 05, 2008, 07:10:04 pm »






CH. 8





“Contact, Lieutenant…”

The uncertainty in the voice calling to Bronstien from the science station caused the helmsman to slowly swivel the conn that direction. The young, brown-haired specialist was peering into the raised main sensor scope. Her hair spilled over the black extension, defying her attempts to restrain her long bangs. She uttered nothing more for a few seconds, but continued to enhance the sensors she was employing.

Johnathan gave her a moment further then cleared his throat.

“And, Specialist?”

“What I have is a gravimetric shift, seven light minutes distant, sir. I believe it to be a mass…traveling at over a tenth the speed of light, which most likely makes it a ship.”
The blue eyed girl looked up to him, taking her eye from the viewer for the first time. “I think it’s a starship making a stealth approach on Endeavour, sir. She’s coming in through the most densely packed disk of stellar material in this system. ETA at estimated speed is just over an hour.”

‘A ship coasting in on us, set for silent running…’ Bronstien thought to himself. He believed as the Spec did. Ya’wenn? Jarn’s scouts had tried the trick on Endeavour before. They’d learned it from someone… Their original government perhaps?

Bronstien tapped the intercom controls.

“Commodore Ford to the bridge.” Echoed out amid the decks of the ship. The thunder of it could even be heard through the deck plates of the bridge. The lieutenant nodded to the science specialist. “Thank you, Spec.”

“Addler, sir.”

“Miss Addler.” The LT acknowledged and returned his attention to the main viewer. Space was black and serene beyond the curvature of the cloudy blue planet they orbited. It was not long before the commodore emerged from the turbolift.

“Report.”

Ford looked tired and a bit drunk as he shuffled down the steps beside the helm and entered the command circle. Doctor Keller was with him. She halted at the rail and tried to avoid eye contact with the young man sitting at conn. Bronstien addressed the CO.

“We have a silent contact approaching, sir.” He looked to the icon depicted on the tactical repeater on the left armrest of the command chair. “She’s coming in from 035 mark 077. Approximately one half impulse power, ETA outside of an hour.”

“Not very exact…” Ford murmured as he looked to the viewer. His expression was sleepy and amused. John shrugged as he slid out of the conn.

“Not much to go on. She’s being careful, Skipper, and we haven’t painted her with an active sweep yet.”

“Take the helm, Mister.” Chevy told him as he took over the center seat. The commodore looked to his lady with a wink and then to the science console. “Specialist, get me a visual on our incoming guest. Passive, telescopic detection only.”

“Aye, sir.” Addler activated the visual sensors and leaned in close to the main scope. She then began the task of scouring the vague set of coordinates she possessed to spot her quarry. The task could take seconds or long minutes. There was a great deal of open space out there to search through. Without active sensors to assist her, she had to rely on her eyes and basic computer enhancements.

Ford looked back to Andrea who was now stepping down the steps into the rail-partitioned command center. He smiled for her, their earlier tiff forgotten. Their renewed relationship felt slightly alien and the feeling was making itself known to him. Andrea flicked a wayward strand of hair out of her face as she looked up to him. Neither of them was dressed for bridge duty.

“What do you intend to do, Chevy?” She asked in a low voice.

“Gonna watch ‘em close in, catch their markings and try for an ID. Jarn’s ships have a pretty distinctive set of logos.” He told her.

“And then?”

“If they’re a Ya’wenn Primus vessel, we hail them. And if they’re rebels, I open fire.”

“Then I hope they’re a government ship. I was hoping we would avoid any further battle.”

Chevy nodded as he returned his eye to the main screen. “We’ve had more than our share in the last year.” He agreed with her. His longing to fight with the rebels had diminished significantly since the capture of Jarn. The skipper glanced to the noncom at communications.

“Last report from Constellation?”

“She’s escorting the Ya’wenn escort ship back home, sir. ETA to Tempest eight hours.” The youth told him. She was quick to add: “No damage to Constellation.”

“I have them, Commodore.” Specialist Addler called forth. The forward viewer switched then to a familiar shape of a wide designed Ya’wenn cruiser. The distinctive blue trim on her bow denoted her affiliation with the homeworld’s government. Ford felt himself relax a bit. He didn’t like being sneaked up on, though. Had they been slipping in here to catch Jarn unawares, or him? His hand fell to the intercom.

“All hands, report to duty stations. Repeat, this is the Cap’n… All hands report to duty stations.”

“Ops,” Called off Bronstien to the youth sitting in the station opposite of him. “Set all systems to standby and restore daytime lighting.”

“Aye.”

Ford watched the Ya’wenn cruiser close in, obviously drifting on her own inertia. He course was maligned and her crew was not correcting for the pull of planetary gravity, so worried were they over maintaining their stealth. But, like the rebel escort months ago, they had no clue they’d already been found. This ship bore obvious sign of previous battle. Her hull was scared with black and pot-marked. New hull panels shone out, unpainted and new where repairs had been made without the help of a yard. Chevis wondered how many missiles the ship would have left in her magazines.

A moment after this reverie, the after hatches sprang open and deposited the Alpha bridge crew onto the deck. They fanned out, resuming their stations and relieving the younger hands. Ford watched them settle into their posts, noting that each of them had managed to pull together complete, clean uniforms despite the sleep still clinging to their eyes. Only Commander Slik showed no obvious sign of tiredness. Their CO wore his wrinkled and beaten pants, which still bore dirt from the planet below and his white duty tunic. His jacket remained in his cabin, likely claimed as a bed for China by now. Ford had to smirk.

“We have a government issue Ya’wenn cruiser inbound to our position, trying to make it in under our scopes. Just like we did with the rebel escort, we’re gonna let ‘em come in just within torpedo range before we flip the lights on and let ‘em know we’re home.” He told his people. There were nods and ‘aye’s’ from several. Most had already grasped the situation with a single glance at the main screen.

“Veapons on standby, reserves fully charged, prefire chambers remain cold. Torpedo bays fully loaded.” Nechayev began to call out.

“All stations report ready,” Hissed the Operations Officer. “Ship is ready for immediate switch-over to alert status.”

“Cruiser closing to ninety-five million kilometers, Skipper.” Surall was next to quote.

Davenport was leaning close behind the science officer, reading off several secondary scopes. Specialist Addler was now seated behind him in the support station. Ron glanced toward the conn. “I detect no active energy emissions from target. She’s running zero propulsion, no active power sources and minimal life support. But I am reading heavy battery charge in their capacitors. I think her weapons are ready to fire at a moment’s notice.”

“Now detecting a course correction from target.” Came Surall again. “She has realigned for a more perfect intersection with us. ETA at current speed: sixty-two minutes, thirty-seven seconds.”

“That’s an awful long wait, Chevy.” Andrea mentioned.

Chevis looked to her at length, considering. He really would like to fool the aliens into a false belief about their own stealth capabilities…but then…one couldn’t estimate how long the would be willing to creep in before their nerve gave out. Would they power up at range and swoop in at maximum impulse or even warp speed? Or did they plan to drift all the way in to weapons range. Their previous encounter with the escort had been within the confines of the Tempest, with all manner of EM radiation and interference to mask their signature. The enemy had had no reason to suspect their cover wasn’t fool proof. Surely these more well trained naval personnel would know better.

“Alright, go to Red Alert. Power up all tactical systems. Paint them with active scanners.”

The Endeavour all but purred as her systems began to come up all at once. Power surged through her decks and bulkheads, activating everything needed to defend the ship. The approaching aliens would immediately note the shields snapping into existence and the powering of weapons.

“She’s noticed us…” Ronald called out from behind Surall. “She’s halting her approach… powering up.”

Ford looked portside to Smith.

“Comm, open hailing frequencies.”

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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #37 on: January 05, 2008, 07:10:40 pm »
“You’re on, Skipper.”

Ford looked back sternly to the main screen. “Ya’wenn vessel, you are trespassing in sovereign Federation space. You will discontinue your stealth approach and power down for inspection. Respond.”

There was a considerable pause as their guests pondered their next move. Their ship no longer feigned the pretense of stealth. Its weapons were hot and Ford expected to see her missile doors open at any time. Finally, there did come a response.

The viewer clicked onto the view of a compact, militaristic bridge, packed with controls and men. There were no women among their officers. The grey-skinned Ya’wenn glaring back wore the austere green and black uniform of the homeworld’s military, and each man bore a severe flattop haircut. One man separated himself from the rest near the after quarter and came closer to the visual feed. He was the eldest, though he couldn’t be much past the human equivalent of thirty. Ford gave him a respectful nod. It wasn’t returned.

“To whom do I speak?” The alien commander asked.

“Commodore Ford, commanding officer of the USS Endeavour.”

The commander nodded. His arms crossed in a manner that told of impatience; as though Ford were the transgressor, not he. “I am Captain-Commander Eddrin of the attack ship Rill’don. Commodore, we have intercepted your transmissions to the planet. We know you hold the traitor Jarn.”

Ford did not betray emotion to his opponent. His impassive face stared right back to the grey-faced alien. “We do. What of it?”

“We demand he be turned over to us immediately. He is a traitor to the state and a rebel commander. Our Premier was assassinated on his order. He has brought war to my people.”

The Captain-Commander was a strong willed individual, Ford believed. He obviously bore great hate for the man in Endeavour’s sickbay. The commodore leaned back into the cushion of the conn and considered his options. He could hand Jarn back over to his people with a clean conscience. They could do whatever their system of justice decided best. Ford hoped they still practiced execution. But, then, there was a lot of space between here and Ya’wenn Primus. Even should Endeavour escort the cruiser all they way back to the Tempest, that government cruiser would likely be alone in her transit back to the homeworld. There would be plenty of time for Jarn’s men to get to him, even reclaim him. Nothing would have been gained.

Chevy didn’t like the chances. While one might believe the odds were greatest that the prisoner would never see freedom again, Ford was not willing to chance that minute percentile that he’d have to deal with the Over Warden again in the near future.

Andrea was looking back to Ford, worry in her eyes. She likely wondered about what he was thinking. He gazed back at her. She shook her head slightly. For whatever reason, she didn’t like the idea either. The commodore looked back to the Captain-Commander.

“No dice, Commander Eddrin. Jarn faces charges here in the Federation. He’ll be transported back to our base and face trial and judgement there. You can arrange to participate and appeal for possible extradition through our ambassador service—“

“That is unacceptable!” Eddrin shouted back. He was not one to constrain himself in front of his men, obviously. His crew looked to their work and tried to avoid being noticed. “You will return Jarn to his people. His trial will be held on Primus! And he will be processed and executed!”

“Processed…” Ford found himself pondering aloud. “What’s involved in your…’processing’?”

The Captain-Commander’s face became a cruel mask of childish joy. He looked like the kind of kid who enjoyed setting cats on fire to watch them dance and yowl. Ford had seen similar on the faces of Jarn’s own men during his stay on Kovarn. It made his stomach turn. “He’ll get his due…I’ll say simply that, Commodore. He’ll pay for his crimes in slow fashion.”

Ford took his time in replying. He’d really like to just hand his own private enemy over to such treatment, but at the same time, justifying such treatment and placating such people as this alien commander was an undesirable notion. The thought of how the Captain-Commander’s men would behave while transporting their prisoner, then the idea of what he’d meet upon getting home was sickening. Never mind Jarn deserved such. Never mind, also, that Ford couldn’t wish it on a nicer person. The commodore would not condone such punishment after having suffered it himself.

Again Chevy looked to his significant other. Andrea looked back in idle fear, wondering what Ford would do. Ford looked back to the screen. “Sounds temptin’… but no deal, Commander. You have thirty seconds to turn that tub back for the plasma field and get packin’.”

The Ya’wenn CO narrowed his eyes in a display of pseudo-intimidation that Chevy was having none of. “You dare to order us about like criminals! You’re making a profound mistake!”

“File it with someone who cares, Commander.”

Ford looked back to the comm station and delivered a cutthroat gesture. Then he looked back to Doctor Keller as the irate alien vanished from the viewer. “You better get to sickbay.”

“That really could have been handled better, Chevy…” She chided gently.

“All too true, darlin’. Get below.”

As the stately doctor took her leave, Ford looked back to his gunnery chief. “Weps, set for missile defense.”

“Of course, Keptin. Phasers standing by.”

Surall looked up from the main scope.

“Ya’wenn are powering sublight engines. They are accelerating to full impulse power.”

“You want me to break orbit, Skipper?” Came from Bronstien. The planet below still took up the entire bottom section of the main viewer as the flat shaped cruiser bore in on them.

“Negative. We still have people down on the surface.” Ford told the pilot. Three full work crews were taking full advantage of the ebbing daylight down there. They did not know what was transpiring over head yet. Endeavour’s chief engineer was down there too. “Keep us well within transporter range of the planet surface in case they try to light them up with a missile.”

“Aye.”

“Enemy now opening missile bays on port and starboard sides,” Davenport called out. The XO had grabbed good holds on the edge of his and Surall’s station and the back of the science officer’s seat.

“Enemy wessel beginning active lock!”

“Missiles incoming!”

“Ahead one third,” Ford called off, his brown eyes focussed on the tac repeater on his armrest. “Begin defensive fire at your discretion.”

“Phasers firing!” Nechayev confirmed. The first barrage of fusion driven weapons was just coming into phaser range.

Endeavour’s phalanx fire peppered the approaching wall of projectiles, lighting them with a dancing spectacle of detonations and near hits. The incoming wall of ordnance evaporated inside of ten seconds. The huge Excelsior, meanwhile, closed the distance with the intent of tying the enemy up and keeping their mind off the fifteen men down on the planet, vulnerable to a single missile strike.

Another barrage of missiles loosed from the flanks of the silver hulled enemy craft.

“Firing!” Again sounded from Tactical.

Again, the effectiveness of the incoming weaponry was displayed. They’d lasted a grand total of seven seconds this round. Ford knew his enemy’s tactic, though. Implore Endeavour to waste her phaser reserves knocking down miscellaneous torpedoes, all the while closing in for a heavy beam strike. Ford might have done similar if forced to use such weaponry against a foe known to be able to interdict them so readily. But Chevy wasn’t about to fight completely from a defensive angle.

“Lock photon torpedoes on target. Target their shields and weapon arrays.”

“Aye, Keptin. Veapons locked!”

“Fire when ready.”

Slight shimmers passed through the deck plates as the first two torpedoes rocketed out into the face of the enemy ship. The alien staggered, nearly sluing off course as she closed. The cruiser quickly regained her footing and straightened out. Her own beam weapons were beginning to glow in readiness to fire once she made range.
Another duo of photonic weapons struck the Ya’wenn’s forward shielding and rattled the entire craft. Sparkles of energy, blue-white, could be seen dancing over the contours of the hull and its shields. They were already taking a pounding, and Endeavour had only fired four times.

‘They’re not up to Jarn’s level, yet,’ Ford thought to himself as he watched the aliens absorb another two shot volley. They were beginning a slow, clumsy looking turn to port, attempting to throw off Mister Nechayev’s aim. ‘Jarn’s ships have better shielding. Likely from the Klingons…’

“Rill’don now entering beam weapon range…” Ronald called out from the science corner. Ford unconsciously braced for the pounding to come.

The last barrage of missiles was still being dispatched even as the Ya’wenn opened up with banks of azure beams. Those magnetron bursts cascaded over the curved hull of Endeavour’s upper main hull and lower saucer hub. The ship rocked and rattled with the sound of a great crash as the impact was made known. The shots continued to pour in.

The enemy was no longer firing their missiles.

“Reset main phasers for standard fire. Take those guns out!”

Now adding to the photon torpedoes, phaser bursts lashed out in red against the weakened or unprotected expanses of hull belonging to the enemy cruiser. The Ya’wenn craft rattled fiercely, trailing loose hull panels and atmosphere as she doggedly closed in. The two monsters traded shots as they zeroed in on one another.
‘They’re not thinking about hitting our crew on the planet…’ Chevis decided with relief. There would be little good to come of such a tactic, but the urge to do some harm might prove irresistible to a commander losing a fight. ‘This can’t be their only strategy… What else is he planning?’

Those open missile doors fired off a new salvo of primitive rocket driven death. This time, the weapons’ flight vectors took them wide of the defensive fire bracket and away from the two combating ships. The tactical screens showed the missiles arcing past the Endeavour, then turning in on her to close on all sides from amidships.

“Nechayev!” Ford barked.

Daniel was already on it. The whoop of initiator alarms called out from the weapons console as Nechayev sent out a wave of phaser bursts to ward off the approaching devices. That had been a sneaky tactic on the Ya’wenn’s part. They’d tied up Endeavour's phasers in a gunnery duel, then launched their missiles in the hopes of slipping them around for a strike to the flanks. Endeavour, however, had plenty of firepower to go around.

The missiles made it in closer this time, though they still found nothing to hit.

Endeavour rolled wide from the near impacts as her shields were bombarded by ionized nuclear particles and atomized matter. Another missile barrage followed the previous, following the same path. Then came another in short order. Endeavour’s phasers kept on shouting their defiance at the weapons. The weapons kept on detonating. Not one struck home. But the ride was becoming quite bumpy.

“Deflectors are absorbing massive EM discharge!” Called off Specialist McCoy. Her engineering panels were alight with warning notes and flashing red indicators. “Surge coils are becoming overloaded!”

‘They’re not aiming for us!’ The commodore realized suddenly. His stomach plummeted. ‘They’re targeting our shields!’

“Helm, hard aport! Put our starboard beam to ‘em. Mister Nechayev, target their core!”

Targeting the enemy’s engine core was nearly a sure-fire way of blowing them clear to hell, but the chance to take them down with a minimal of bloodshed was quickly waning. He had to protect his own people. Endeavour continued to buck and roll from near misses.

The intruder alarms were the next thing Ford heard.
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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #38 on: January 07, 2008, 12:51:12 am »
Trick within trick.  One should know the capability of one's enemies.  Apparently the government forces do that.  Of course, one should also not assume that the guy in one's brig is the best of his race.  Ford underestimated his foe this time.  Nice story.  The early part has a few sentences that read awkwardly wordy or sesquipedalian.
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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #39 on: January 07, 2008, 07:08:52 am »
Yup.  He screwed that one up.  First with being a bit too bull-headed with the Ya'wenn Captain, and then during the fight.  As Kadh said, I think he underestimated his adversary, probably due to his interactions with Jarn.

Now, that said, this seemed entirely believable.  Waiting to see where it goes.  Seems like a good opportunity for Jarn to be 'killed in the crossfire', but I doubt that'll happen.  I also wonder if Ford might think of just letting the Ya'wenn boarders get Jarn. 

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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #40 on: January 07, 2008, 10:20:57 pm »
I think y'all will like this next part...




CH. 9





Jarn feigned sleep. It was relatively easy, given the amount of drugs he’d been given to keep him passive. Whatever these Earthers were pumping into his veins was giving him an upset stomach, but was not nearly so effective at keeping him unconscious.

The Over Warden was relatively sure his captors had healed him. Commodore Ford had been bent on killing him, but had not possessed the stomach to commit the act with his woman doctor in attendance. Despite Ford’s hatred for him, the weakling had allowed his healers to tend to Jarn’s legs. Jarn had tentatively been testing them over the last few hours. Pretending to be resting fitfully, he twitched and stretched, moving his limbs as he did so. His arms were bound and a strap held his chest down.

Nothing covered his previously injured legs.

This was a small advantage to be sure, but one he’d implement none the less if given the opportunity. Only one question remained: How? He had to escape this space borne prison. How he would bring this about and what he’d do after eluded him.

The sound of the human ship’s alarums brought Jarn’s eyes fully open. He glanced about at the nurses and security soldiers flanking the long compartment they kept him in. The guards came to a more rigid state of attention and the medics began to nervously banter in their untranslated language. The doors opened on both ends of the room, spilling in more armed soldiers. After another moment, a lone female, the head doctor, entered and began issuing stern orders in her odd accent. Jarn nearly closed his eyes once again, feigning incapacity.

Abruptly, Endeavour’s bulkheads began to reverberate with the squall of energy fire. They were in the midst of battle. The warden prayed to no entity in particular for one of the Earther’s translators. Was it his men out there attempting to reclaim him? Or was it Heedis’ men out to take his head home to place on a damned pike?

Jarn eased his eyes open for a glimpse about to find that the lady doctor had slipped up close without his notice. His eyes widened with surprise. She smiled back without warmth. “Pretending to be asleep, were we?”

At least she’d brought a translator. Jarn didn’t know where she was wearing it, or even if it was on her person. This Federation of Earthers and their subjects had very advanced technology.

Endeavour shook with the blast of a near hit. The wash of forces sweeping across the alien ship’s hull felt all too familiar. Nuclear weapons. Not Kovarn warships, and not Klingon. Heedis’ men had found him.

“Does Ford fight for his right to execute me himself?” He croaked up at her while she looked up to study the readings on the unintelligible board over his bed.

“You’re not going to be executed. The Federation has no laws allowing such forms of capitol punishment.” Keller responded. She did not bother to look down at him. She didn’t seem afraid of him, a quality he’d known in few women. He liked this doctor.

“How fortunate for me,” his gravel-voice mocked back. “Heedis cannot match this ship, and will only last against it till Ford’s patience runs out. Then I will be taken to one of your soft, comfortable prisons. Not the worst I could have asked for…”

“You deserve far worse.” She muttered, turning away.

Jarn bent and quickly snagged her arm in his steel hand. Rifles were instantly pointing his way. Jarn ignored them. “You’re Ford’s woman, aren’t you…?”

The human lady gaped back in shock, if only for an instant. He’d guessed right.

“What do you know about me?”

“Oh… The commodore squealed about you when he was a guest at my compound. He begged for you…” Jarn’s wicked crooning caused the doctor to turn fully back toward him, blocking the soldier’s line of fire for a moment. Two men had separated from their positions to advance on his, weapons up and placed firmly to their armored shoulders. Keller beat them to the punch. Quite literally.

Jarn’s head cocked back painfully as Keller’s palm connected with the bridge of his nose. The Ya’wenn jailer instantly tasted the metallic tang of blood. The pounding sensation in his face told him she’d just broken his nose.

“Mayhap that will teach you some manners, Warden.”

Doctor Keller whirled away from him; his hand no longer wrapped around her wrist. Jarn tried to cradle his nose, but bound, he could do little more than writhe. Another series of shockwaves began to pummel the Endeavour. The great mammoth yawed from side to side, throwing men off their stances and causing Keller to stagger into the neighboring bed. Jarn kicked down with his feet, forcing the bulk of his body to rise up on the bed. The tension in the straps binding his arms slackened.

The green sparkle of Ya’wenn transporter beams began to light the room, setting off shrill alarms and frightening Jarn to his cold hard core. Heedis’ men had made their way aboard! Had they breached Ford’s shields? How many ships had they brought?

It was a ten-man team that coalesced into being there in the forward center of the medical ward. The Warden could see that each of them carried subspace beacons on their shoulder armor. Ford’s shields remained intact, else they would simply have beamed him away without the effort of incursion. Those beacons would ensure they were able to retrieve him through any small fissure in Endeavour’s shields. They had to lay hands on him first…

The Starfleet grunts were quick on the trigger. Though outnumbered temporarily, they managed to even the numbers by dropping four men before the shock armored Ya’wenn could even turn to react. The blue energies of their stun beams caused the troopers to wobble and stagger to the carpeted deck with a series of thuds. Medics scrambled and jostled to get out of the way. More than one ran for nearby weapons stations. This took them to the furthest ends of the sickbay. The cacophony of noise; shouting, firing and impacts; echoed within the infirmary.

The Ya’wenn troopers fired back, ducking and scooting behind cover as it presented itself. One man made an immediate rush for Jarn and was cut down. The man landed so rigidly that the warden knew better than to think him dead. He was just temporarily immobilized. Once his stim packs kicked in, he’d be back on his feet and after Jarn.
Jarn kicked himself further up in his bed. His sizable hands pulled free of the binds holding them. A stun beam sizzled past him as an alert human security man took note of his efforts. This attempt to restrain the Warden served only to distract said Earther while the nearest of Heedis’ men shot him down. The Ya’wenn’s weapons were not set for stun. That particular human rolled back onto his backside, a smoking crater of mangled flesh and burned bone where his face had once been.

Jarn, his arms free, tore away the heavy strap that had pinned his massive chest and rolled onto the soft deck. He landed atop Keller, who looked up at him in wide-eyed shock. Both laid eyes on the rifle laying just an arm-length away. Jarn propelled himself toward the gun with a powerful pushup style lunge. Keller’s foot caught him across the temple and sent him rolling into the legs of his former biobed. Jarn glanced back at the tiny human female in open shock, just in time to catch another foot to his already smashed nose. Jarn bellowed out and clutched his beefy hand to the ruined pulp of his face. Motion triggered his senses, undefined in his torment, and he forced his reddening eyes open. The woman was scrambling for the Ya’wenn assault rifle. It was Jarn’s turn to deliver a vicious kick. His broad, unclad foot impacted dead center in the left side of the doctor’s ribcage and sent her sprawling into a fetal position beneath the nearest bed. He’d barely heard her scream over the din of the unseen battle raging within the med bay.

Jarn smiled, unknowing of the teeth he was now missing, and rolled closer to the unclaimed rifle. Keller, her face darkening from the burning lack of oxygen in her system, propelled herself off the legs of the bed above her and smashed her full mass into his. Jarn barely rocked back from the hit, but he was just that much further away from the rifle. Keller’s tiny fists found his nose, his temples and his eyes. Her raspy shouts of defiance scared the hell out of the rebel leader and he found himself scrambling back from the vixen lest she do further damage to him.

Keller didn’t follow. She now had the rifle. She aimed, using both hands to point it at his face, and pulled the trigger. She didn’t know there was a safety trigger on the fore grip…

The weapon made a plaintive squall of noncompliance. Jarn smiled and began to leisurely lean forth to take the weapon from her. Keller looked at the weapon in betrayal, then reversed her hold on it and brought it down with both hands onto the warden’s left leg. The barely healed fusion of bone bent beneath the impact, sending tears immediately to his bloodshot eyes. Jarn lurched ahead and hit her full force in the side of the head, sending her reeling.

The stunned soldier lying beside the two of them came up on his elbows, his sidearm unholstered. Jarn intercepted the probing pistol and began to wrestle its owner for control. The two of them tied up, strength testing against strength as they pried for leverage. Keller was returning to a sitting position across from them. Jarn watched as she groggily looked over the alien rifle in her lap and detected the two triggers. She claimed a look of immense satisfaction as she raised the weapon and put it to her small shoulder.

Jarn lifted the pistol in his and the trooper’s hands and bore down on the covered trigger beneath the other man’s finger. The beam of silver energy pierced the human and tossed her back like a rag-doll hurled by a child. The soldier beneath Jarn stiffened in shock. Jarn had the pistol away from him a second later and was rolling for the bulkhead. He aimed at the center of the trooper’s helmet visor and squeezed the trigger.

The briefest glance told the alien warden that the battle in this compartment was about to peter out. Heedis’ troopers were just too few to make much more than a quick grab for him and that had obviously failed. Jarn didn’t know where he could go from here, but he knew he’d gain nothing by remaining.

Jarn reached out and grasped the white sweater the human female wore and dragged her back toward him from under the narrow beds. He crawled, trailing her behind as he made for the exit at the far side of the sickbay. Keller was still alive. She’d be a valuable hostage against her lover.





Endeavour shuddered a final time from the impact of microwave energy cannon as her stalwart helmsman drove her out of range. Ford leapt from the conn and circled round to the tactical station where Nechayev was reading over the security update system. The weapons officer did not need to be asked for a report.

“Ve have multiple intruders on Deck Eight, Section Fourteen. Sickbay. Definite veapons fire. One squad of guards already on station. Two squads responding to ‘de area.” The Russian told the CO and the XO whom both crowded around him. Ford looked up from the readout, noticing the slim, dark skinned beauty leaning against the science console just behind the point Surall was peering into her scopes.

Chevy looked quickly away from the vision of Anya, bound to ignore her. She smirked sardonically and leaned down to pretend to look over the science officer’s shoulder. Nechayev looked sternly back to his captain.

“Sir, let me take another team down ‘deer to access ‘de situation.” The security chief’s accent was thickening with anxious energy. Ford shook his bald head.

“Negative, Weps. Stay on the guns. Is Goodwin down there?”

“Aye, Keptin. He’s just reaching ‘de area.”

“Then order him to meet me in Corridor Fifteen, Section Two outside Sickbay.” Ford headed for the after equipment locker and withdrew a type two and a power pack from within. “I’ll resolve the situation myself. XO, you have the conn. Blow that sumbitch out of my sky.”

Ronald did not try to talk his skipper out of going down there. There was something in his eye that told Davenport that it was not the Government Ya’wenn soldiers down there that worried him. He felt…knew…that Jarn was now up to something. That sneaky, dark souled bastard wouldn’t be able to pass up this opportunity to start something…

“Aye, Cap’n.” Davenport said simply, nodding before turning back for the conn. “Helm, bring her around to 111 mark 14. Keep us out of transporter range. Stand by to make your maneuvers sharply to bring us to bear on the enemy ship.” The exec looked over his shoulder to the weapons officer, just as Ford slipped out of view through the closing lift doors. “Ready the Mark Fours.”
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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #41 on: January 07, 2008, 10:46:24 pm »
I finally did some research on the actor I had in mind when picturing Jarn for this series.

For a better mental image, picture him as played by actor Clancy Brown, who played as the Kurgan in Highlander and as rebel leader Zobral in the ENT episode 'Desert Crossings'. I didn't have a name for said actor till I Wikied him up tonight.

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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #42 on: January 08, 2008, 01:24:50 am »
Nice to see the good doctor having some tough stuff.
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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #43 on: January 08, 2008, 10:01:26 am »
There's an apparent flaw in the logic of the baddies here.  Suppose they get Jann.  Then what?  Does Ford let them keep him?  Do they expect Federation ideals to be so high that they'll get away with the prisoner?  I can only conclude this has to have been a suicide mission from the start.  There only recourse would have been to kill him upon capture and take their lumps.  Of course, with him dead, Ford would have no real reason not to let them go. 

Btw, nice episode title.
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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #44 on: January 08, 2008, 07:24:11 pm »
The Ya'wenn captain is crafty...an knows he's crafty...

...this is where his mistake has come from. He fully believes he has a plan that will get him, his ship and Jarn away from Ford.

What WAS his plan? Hell, I don't know. Ask him.

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« Reply #45 on: January 10, 2008, 04:23:21 am »
The stones version is good, the GNR version is better.

OT though: I like this one a lot. Nobody is flawless, which makes it all the more believable.

@Kadh I thought the same thing but I thought the baddie would have a (small) fleet in waiting outside sensor rage, that he could call when he'd gotten Jarn. But I'd already bring them in the moment I was detected.
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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #46 on: January 10, 2008, 09:13:16 pm »




CH. 10





As the motion of his ship’s decks shifted perceptibly to port, Ford cocked the charge manifold on his phaser and checked his indicators. The pistol read full charge, setting four. Setting four was a basic disruption level. It would slash through organic material without slowing or losing power, burning away tissues while doing enough kinetic damage to keep the wound from truly cauterizing. He’d need level five or six against an armored opponent, but then, he wasn’t expecting to shoot an armored combatant.

He fully expected Chief Petty Officer Goodwin to have all of the intruders detained by the time he arrived. He also fully expected that his good friend Jarn had somehow capitalized on the situation and was loose.

Anya leaned against the turbolift’s bulkhead and studied him curiously.

“You’re going to kill him off now, right?”

“If I gotta.”

“I think you’ll want to when you find him.”

There was assuredness in her tone. The commodore looked back to her.

“Why?”

“He has her.”

“Keller?”
“You call her by her last name? How stand-off-ish.”

“Andrea, then? How the hell can you know?”

“Woman’s intuition, Commodore.”

The doors opened onto Deck Eight, allowing him no further time to converse with his imagination. Ford ran full tilt down the curving hall till he entered within sight of his security cordon. Several bound Ya’wenn, doffed of their helmets but still retaining their black armor sat on their knees in a line, faces toward the inner bulkhead. Their unclad hands and feet were bound with zip-ties. CPO Dawayne Goodwin turned stiffly in his drab grey combat armor, rifle across his broad chest as he noted his CO’s approach.

“We got ‘em, Skipper.” He told Ford.

“Jarn?”

“Unaccounted for. I have men making another sweep.”

“Casualties?”

Dawayne motioned back to the blackened sickbay doors. “The med staff took the worst of it. Three dead, two wounded. Doctor Keller is unaccounted for also. One security injury. Minor.”

A security crewman stepped out of the sickbay compartment to address his seniors.

“Jarn’s not here, Chief. And we still haven’t found the CMO.”

Ford looked sharply to his most trusted security officer.

“Jarn has her, and he’s on his way to somewhere he can negotiate from. What’s the best cover he could hope for between here and—“

The grunt nearest Goodwin looked up, her hands pressed to the sides of her wide helmet as she listened to updates from the main bridge security station. “There’s weapons fire aft of here, sirs! Section Fifty-Two near Junction Sixteen. Ya’wenn particle weaponry and phasers!”

Both men were off in a dead run. Goodwin slowed only to deliver rapid hand signals to those he wished to stay or follow. Ford led a group of six men down the long, circular hall then down a long radial corridor. Signs denoting Junction 16 edged into view and the commodore slowed his pace, phaser low but ready in his right hand. His men took up defensive positions before and to the rear of him. The reinforcing group came up on two more grunts flanking either side of the hallway, their bulk smashed in behind bulkhead braces.

Ford walked forth carefully and calmly.

Jarn was there. He had Andrea. The huge Ya’wenn criminal had his lady held up by the throat before him. He hid his face behind the mass of her smaller head. His dark eye glimpsed out from behind tatters of her unkempt red hair as he leered back to Ford. He was the very picture of the caged animal.

The two of them were in the very observatory that Ford and Keller had come to talk in just minutes earlier. The length of the hull and the black, dead of space shone behind them. Stars moved and changed direction with the maneuvers of the massive ship around them. The thrum of the engines and the beat of weapons fire and alarms faded in their perceptions.

Ford raised his pistol and took aim.

Coughing, barely able to breathe for the grip on her throat, Keller nodded to Chevy, telling him to take the chance. Fire. Ford held off, refining his aim for the subtle movements of the hull. Jarn tightened his hold on the doctor, cutting off her gasps with a wet click and making her eyes bulge. Anya lounged behind Jarn, leisurely leaning back in one of those blue loungers. The glint in her eyes told of her rapt enjoyment.

“Take your finger off that trigger, Captain…” The monster graveled at Ford. His black and silver pistol dug into the base of Andrea’s chin, aimed up. “I’ll turn her head into meat paste.”

“You’re not going anywhere, Jarn.” Ford countered. He could feel his men tense. There was no real opening to shoot. Jarn had Andrea up off her feet, a full foot and a half off the deck. She grasped his muscled arm to take the unbearable strain of his hold off her neck and throat. Her face was totally red. Soon, it’d turn blue. She’d already been shot once. She’d be fine… “There’s no where for you to go on this ship, and I’m not letting you go.”

“You have shuttles!”

“And they ultimately answer to me.” The commodore replied, forced calmness flowing through his voice. “You take off, I order it to bring you back or land where I want it to go. You know that won’t work.”

“But I’ll still have your woman, Ford. You won’t do anything to me or try any tricks with my foot on her throat!” Jarn bellowed out. He was sweating. He stepped back, closer to the semi-circle of chairs behind him. He had a limp. Ford took it all in, waiting for his chance. He adjusted the grip he held on his weapon, letting the sweat beneath his palm cool and dry.

“How we gonna do this, Jarn?”

‘Buying time…that’s all I’m doing… Waiting for him to f*ck up…’ he thought.

“First, Captain…order your men to back the frell off. They leave my sight. I can see all the way down that hall behind you and down both corners down here… They leave…and we talk more about how I’m leaving this ship! At the first tingle of a transporter, she dies!”

“Skipper?” Came Goodwin’s warning question. Ford glanced down to where the CPO knelt at his side. Ford nodded.

“Move out, Chief. This is between us.”

“Skipper…”

“Move, Chief.”

Goodwin turned and began issuing gestures to his grunts. With obvious distaste and misgivings, they obediently fell back and yielded the deck to the CO and his nemesis. Ford returned his full attention to Jarn. He forced his mind, even his vision, to block out everything else. Andrea…her darkening face…Anya…the cruel sneer as she waited for Ford to cave in Jarn’s skull. Ford smirked.
***





Endeavour’s newest weapons systems slowly protruded from their deep chasms of armored hull. They peeked out past their parted hatches, showing themselves for the first time since their installation and testing. They were wide barreled energy cannon, built for massive starbases and space stations. They were made to cut swathes through large fleets of large-scale ships. They weren’t made to be emplaced aboard a starship.

Endeavour made a final correction to her flight path as she bore in on her target. The Ya’wenn cruiser saw this new closing maneuver as her next opportunity to free her captive troopers, perhaps try once again to obtain the leader of the rebellion they battled back home. She, herself, bore in on the Endeavour at her fullest speed.


Commander Davenport held firmly onto the armrests of the conn as he anticipated the order to open up on the enemy ship. He felt badly for the necessity to end this fight. He thought about hailing them to end this conflict before it ended so badly. The Ya’wenn would only want to end this after they’d obtained Jarn. The skipper did not trust them to hand the prisoner over to them. And he had reason not to trust them. They were not likely to keep their charge long enough to get him to trial. Nor were they obviously planning to give him a real trial. They were going to torture him and kill him. That wasn’t justice. Capitol punishment was one thing, and while not practiced in the more evolved political body of the Federation, was acceptable to many. Torture and show executions were abhorrent. Such things belonged in medieval times.

Hailing them would prove of little use. They would continue to demand what Ford would not give them. They’d go on demanding it till they got it by force… or learned that they could not get it at all.

“Target locked on…” Nechayev reported, standing tensely by at his console to the right of the conn. Ron nodded, still eyeing the quickly growing enemy ship. Their particle cannon were primed to fire again. Missiles launched out from their flanks, again aimed to destabilize the shields and beam men in or out.

“Main phasers to point defense, fire torpedoes, minimal spread.” Davenport called out in timed fashion. His photons shot out, impacting on the enemy’s hastily patched together forward deflectors. The paper-thin shields flared and died, showing caved in hull and rent open compartments from the impacts. “Helm, maintain firing arc…”

The Mark IV phaser cannon were designed to be emplaced on a large turret, built to swivel and track. No such space abounded on a comparatively small starship, even on an Excelsior. Therefor the weapons’ ability to hit depended primarily on the ship’s orientation to the target.

Bronstien watched the main screen, ignoring the precise measurements rendered by his instruments. He flew by sight and feel alone. His hands worked over the contours of hard controls and by the heat of computer generated touch pads. “Easiest thing in the world…” He boasted idly, his attention centered.

Explosions rocked the ship as missile after missile detonated at medium range against Endeavour’s defensive phasers. The viewer was alight with flashes as they closed the distance. Ron grit his teeth. “Fire!”

Great, rushing sounds of energy being channeled toward a purpose echoed throughout the ship. The deck jerked spasmodically beneath the crew. Monitors blanked out and lighting dimmed at the activation of the huge guns’ prefire chambers…

The heavy phaser cannon fired, first one, then the other soon after. Each lashed out long, unending lances of crimson hell onto the incoming vessel, which was unable to defend against the attack. The forward section of the sharp-nosed cruiser blew away into glowing ribbons of bent metal. A cloud of white-hot plasma boiled out from the wounds as the beams carved ten-meter deep swaths of bright destruction beneath their touch.

The cruiser banked away, half out of control, half under the frenzied, panicked direction of it’s pilot. The beams slashed down the port quarter of the ship, burning away hull, sensors and maneuvering thrusters as easily as a cutting torch melts butter. The port nacelle of the ship imploded on contact, billowing out fresh torrents of ionized gas from within the ship’s engine core.

Finally, the barrage ended.

The Ya’wenn cruiser was completely disabled.

“Got him!” Nechayev howled, fist raised into the dim air. The lighting was only beginning to recover from the power surges. Ron looked upon the now derelict piece of flotsam that was once a ship with pity. At least they weren’t destroyed.

Now they could talk…

“Mister Smith, hail that…wreck.”

“Hailing them now.”

Nechayev allowed a relief officer to claim his post and circled round the railing to step before the conn. “Permission to go below!”

“Granted, Lieutenant.”

As the weapons officer exited the bridge, Commander Slik slid up from his station and stalked aft to take over the weapons post. Be bid the officer there to take ops and stood tall behind the weapons console. Ron glanced up to the Gorn officer. The reptile seemed all but bristling, eyes wide and shining brightly.

Slik noticed the ape’s scrutiny and looked down.

“That was…an exhilarating show of…power.”

Ron nodded, looking back to the main viewer. There was an unmistakable feeling of pride and…yes…power… blooming within the executive officer. It was not something to be proud of…but he could not deny wielding such destruction had been…appealing.

“Yes it was, Lieutenant. Yes it was.”
***



That's CH. 10 Part 1...

My posting has outrun the replies, but I'm ready to be done with this one. Hope its liked.

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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #47 on: January 14, 2008, 09:19:32 am »
Hell yeah me like! Not to keen on the cliffhanger though ;-)
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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #48 on: January 15, 2008, 08:57:38 pm »
This situation never ends well.  In movies whichever is the hero survives.  The girl may or may not die.  The bad guy may or may not escape.  But at least one person always dies and the hero isn't it.  in real life does this ever end with the baddy getting away permanently?  Of course in real life they don't have him absolutely confined.  Jarn must have outside help for this to work, right?  I like the shot in the face to end it. 
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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #49 on: January 15, 2008, 10:25:49 pm »
CH. 10 [part 2]

Seconds prior…

“Alright, Jarn, we’re alone now. Now what?”
Ford didn’t expect the criminal before him to do much more than demand a way off the ship. But he was waiting for that one chance to get off his shot. Andrea’s eyes were rolling up into her skull even now. He prayed that moment would not be too much further away. The stars behind Jarn had just stabilized…

“I’m not going to dawdle all frelling day, human. Take me to the shuttle port of your ship. The moment I feel a tingle of a transporter, this bitch’s head comes off. You try to trick me, and I’ll kill her for spite. I’m leaving this ship, and if you’re lucky, the bitch gets by with only the taste of my—“

The lighting flared, then died throughout the section as a tremendous squall assailed their ears. The deck rumbled and then lurched like a drunkard as the Mark Four phasers beneath them fired. Ford lost his footing, even though he thought he’d been ready. He hit the unlit deck hard, taking the impact on his shoulder and side. The commodore strained his eyes for sight of his target, but the warden had already fallen and was not silhouetted against the windows aft of him. Ford cursed and began to scramble onto all fours.

The commodore could just now make out Jarn. He was on his widely spaced knees, glancing around in confusion as though he thought he was about to be beset with further captors. Ford raised his pistol and squeezed off his shot.

The azure beam punched straight through the flesh at the criminal’s shoulder and hurled him back. His big hands lost their claim on Keller and she tumbled away with the roll of the deck.

Ford was now fully on his feet, stance low as he charged in. He fired again, catching the tough jailer in the chest, dead center. Jarn buckled and crashed backward into the blue chair behind him. He remained conscious, so vengefully alive, and shoved his pistol at Ford to fire as well.

The brilliant shot caught Ford in the thigh, searing skin and muscle away and snapping the bone. The human screamed out in fury and agony as he slammed his good foot down onto the deck, committing one last adrenaline powered leap. He thrust his shoulder out, unknowing in the flailing light where Keller had wound up falling and unwilling to fire again for risk of hitting her.

Ford’s shoulder found Jarn’s throat and the two of them went down in a heap of meat and sweat. Jarn tried to raise his pistol, his target being the side of the commodore’s head. Ford grappled that arm with both of his, then slid over the huge alien to bite a bloody hunk clean out of Jarn’s gun-hand. Jarn barked a cry of pain and dropped the pistol. His left hand struck Ford in the kidneys, the ribs and the head. His thunderous strikes bounced the smaller being’s cranium about like a tethered ball, but Chevis would not relent. His hands found Jarn’s throat and his thumbs pressed in with murderous force and delight. Jarn’s eyes bulged and he began to kick backwards to throw off the human’s balance.

Ford’s good leg and ruined thigh wrapped about the man’s barrel chest in desperation as Ford continued to exude force unimagined on his victim’s windpipe. Jarn’s vision tinged with red and he fought to prize the insane being’s hands from his throat. His chest burned for the pleasure of cooling air that was tantalizingly out of reach.
Ford’s eyes had glazed over and his face was a wrinkled, ashen and red mask of death as he glared down into the Ya’wenn’s eyes. He bore in with all his weight onto that throat in his hands. He had the life of the man who’d leveled him in his grasp. The man’s life…and ultimately his death belonged to Chevis D. Ford…so long as he could maintain this control.

Fear and desperation fueled the big alien and he abandoned the futile task of trying to rip Ford’s hands free. He reverted to beating the human’s head in, striking mighty blows to the left and right of Chevy’s round, hairless head. The world jarred and swirled in Ford’s senses as each hit assailed him. He felt his strength failing… his control weakening over his own hands. He freed a hand from the task of depriving this beast of his life and struck back, hitting Jarn right between the eyes. Jarn’s orbs blinked hard, rolled. He drove a thunderous right into Ford’s temple, a blow that finally toppled the smaller human.

Jarn dragged clean, cold air into his lungs and glanced down both halls to make sure Ford’s men were clear. They apparently had no idea of the fighting going on here. The noise and turbulence of before had died. Maybe the intense sound of all that machinery had drowned out his and Ford’s weaponry. This was becoming Jarn’s best opportunity. He looked for his pistol…

…and caught Ford’s right foot right in his broken nose. The word became a tumble of red and intense pain as he flailed out at his now unseen attacker. Ford’s boot impacted again and again on the Ya’wenn’s face and chest. With vehement cursing the likes of which could not be written, Jarn fought his way to his feet and fell upon his opponent, firing away fist after bruising, crushing fist. Some connected with flesh. Some punches found only floor. Within his right-hand, the middle knuckle snapped and protruded from his grey flesh in bloody tatters of jagged bone. Ford kneed and punched and bit and head-butted in return, cursing and growling in animal fashion as he did.

Jarn’s vision began to return, showing him still atop his human enemy. He adjusted his full weight atop the fiend, then powered down on him with a new hail of fists. His punches rained down as he supported himself on his aching knees. Ford elbowed him in the crotch, causing something to burst. Jarn could barely feel it all over the swelling pains in his skull. Sickness assailed some portion of his mind and stomach. The human ignored the pummeling he was taking and hammered his balled fist in on Jarn’s eyes and cheekbones. The socket there popped and sank with gritting agony at the third such strike. Jarn threw one final punch, rebounding Ford’s bloodied, pulp-like head off the stained floor with a hollow thud. He rocked back onto the balls of his feet, ignoring Ford’s last strike to his manhood as he reclaimed his vertical base and backed away.

With his broken leg, Ford could not follow as Jarn backed off, nor could he sweep the man’s legs at that angle. He fought to roll over and crawl toward the jailer, coughing and spilling thick blood from his mouth as he went. Jarn stooped to retrieve the human’s phaser from the deck. He staggered back another step.
Ford looked up at the man, rolling to lay on his left side as he flexed his right hand. His left leg howled from the pressure on his destroyed femur. He fought to ignore it…and the tingling numb sense of nearly passing out. He fought for consciousness. He brought his functional right leg close to his body and grabbed his boot.

Jarn aimed the pistol, leering down at his fallen enemy. Blood, dark and oozing, dribbled from every cut and contusion on his wide face. His left cheek had sunken, and slivers of impacted bone poked up from the flesh there. His left eye was entirely black from hemorrhaging within. Both eyes were swelling shut. He grinned at Ford in grizzly fashion. Anya sat behind the jailer, reclined and seemingly uninterested.

“Now, Captain…” Jarn’s gravel was now more bubbly from the fluid in his mouth and the ruined teeth. “This seems the reverse of how you found me this morning…”

“Enjoy it while…it lasts, bitch.”

“Which of us is going to walk away from here today, Ford? Not you…”

The security men had yet to show. Where were they? How far back had they fallen back? They’d stop Jarn from leaving surely, but Ford would ultimately still be dead. So would Andrea, lying close beside him. He looked back up to the criminal. “Neither of us.”

“I think you’re wrong, Captain.” Jarn adjusted his final aim and placed his finger on the trigger. Ford tensed, his hand grasped. Anya suddenly looked off to her left, down the corridor…

A phaser beam sliced through the Ya’wenn jailer. Another hit him in quick succession. Ford threw his boot-sheathed bowie knife. The blade buried itself in Jarn’s neck, stabbing clean out to the other side. A final phaser blast dropped the criminal lifeless to the deck.

Ford rolled onto his back, sore, burning with pain and glad to still be breathing. He looked down the length of his damaged body, moving his right foot to see Lieutenant Nechayev walking cautiously up the alert-flasher-lit hall, phaser held at the ready should Jarn stir again. Behind him was the security force that had accompanied Ford here.
“Sorry for ‘de delay, Keptin,” The lieutenant said, bending down to kneel next to his commander. “’De new phasers triggered the emergency bulkheads at sections fourteen and fifteen again. Ve had to find another vay around.”

“Better late than never, Weps.” he coughed with a smile. Behind Nechayev, Anya winked.

Ford allowed his body to sweep him into blissful unconsciousness. The commodore was glad for the way the fight had ended.  He just wished he could’ve reached that knife sooner…
***




Commander Davenport scowled at the soot covered Ya’wenn commander pictured on his main viewer. “I don’t give a damn about what decision got this fight started, Captain! You opened fire on us! Anything you got in return was justified!”

“This entire incident has been an insult to Ya’wenn sovereignty!” The Captain-Commander shouted in impudence. He had no cards left and he knew it. All he could do now was level threats for the future. “You have all but started a war here today, human! You will drag your people down with you into damnation with your insolence!”

“You wanna start a war with the Federation?! You just go ahead! We’ll hand you your asses on a galactic scale! You can end this bullsh*t today and call it even, or you can keep on pushing! Just try to take another shot, and I’ll see you IN HELL!!!”

The injured Ya’wenn soldier staggered and flopped down into his own command seat and blinked back. The aft turbolift doors parted behind Davenport and he looked back. Lieutenant Nechayev ignored the huge bulk of the Gorn at his post and came to stand rigidly before the XO.

“Commander, Jarn is dead. ‘De Keptin got him.”

Ron looked back to the sullen, and now overtly shocked Captain-Commander. The alien CO stared back in amazement. All that he’d ventured and all he’d just lost now meant nothing. Jarn was dead.

Ron faked a dark smirk.

“You can have the sonovabitch, now. I hope you’re happy!”

Davenport stomped back to the command chair and slammed down into it. Nechayev retook his post and Slik his. The XO glared over to Mister Smith’s corner of the bridge. “Comm, order the Constellation to return to this position after she deposits her present charge. She’s to haul this bastard back home too. Have Tenseiga escort her as well, per the commodore’s authority.”

With that relayed, Davenport looked back to Commander Eddrin.

“Now you sit tight and be quiet. We’ll get Jarn over to you once we’re done here, then you can go and do whatever the hell you want with whatever’s left of him.”

Eddrin nodded sullenly and the screen reverted to a blank star field.

Ronald leaned back and forced the tension from his keyed-up back. He looked over to Nechayev.

“Stand down to Yellow Alert. Maintain shields and set combat watch rotation.” He paused as the weapons officer set those commands into motion. Then the Russian again met his gaze. “I take it, since Ford didn’t come back up here with you, that he’s not in very good shape.”

The security officer smiled faintly and grimly.

“The Keptin fought a long, hard battle and came out, in the end, victorious. That is all that matters.” The Slavic would say little more. Davenport knew there was something more, but did not press. He turned round in the conn and looked out onto the nakedness of space.

“Sometimes, Lieutenant, you’re right. That is all that matters.”
***



Well Larry, it nearly took me till the end to get it in there...but Ron's line found it's way into the story!
Hope you laughed your ass off. [private joke 'twixt me and La'ra...]

Hope everyone enjoyed Jarn...

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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #50 on: January 15, 2008, 10:39:30 pm »
Don't reallly like shifting to the villain's view, but the fight was more intense than I had expected.
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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #51 on: January 15, 2008, 10:45:06 pm »
Yeah, shifting in mid-sequence like that doesn't look good. I didn't like it either, but it gave me the descriptions I needed without a scene shift [to the other character] which would have lasted only a paragraph or so anyway. Hope you found the brutallity of the fight fitting for Jarn's demise.

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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #52 on: January 16, 2008, 12:06:50 am »
Yes, I did. 
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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #53 on: January 17, 2008, 02:41:43 am »
Ah.  A good old-fashioned Roger-style slugfest.  Like two wooden ships of the line duking it out, both participants take so much damage that only imperceptible movements on their part can be used to judge which mangled opponent is the victor. ;D

Yeah, that's how Jarn needed to go out.  There's that little whisper that agrees with Ford, that it might've been better had he gotten to his knife sooner, ended Jarn with no help at all, but Jarn's done a lot to the Endeavour crew.  It's only right that a few shots from someone else helped end the problem once and for all. 

And yes, I loved 'the line'.  I also loved that Nechayev shot Jarn in the back.  Very appropriate to the guy who inspired him. ;D
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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #54 on: January 17, 2008, 08:51:22 pm »
Too bad there is no Emoticon for a jaw dropping like mine did when I saw La'ra had posted.

Hot Damn!

Now to wrap this one, and thise part of the series, all up.




Epilogue



Days later…

The new Over General, Jeedin Kaide rocked back from his comm screen in shock. He could not believe what the smiling, smooth faced Klingon on his viewer had just told him.

“Captain Rell… You and your affiliation have agreed to provide assistance if we adhered to our end of the agreement—“

“Which both you and your former leader Jarn have failed quite miserably in doing, General.” Rell cut him off. That damned smile never once faded. Kaide only now began to realize how much acid there was behind it. “You were provided with armaments and technical assistance, even tactical intelligence and my direct help…all in exchange for your forces tying up Starfleet assets in this sector. We kept our end of the bargain. Yet Starfleet is unperturbed and stronger now than ever before.”

“We could still accomplish this, Captain!” Kaide protested. He was desperate and he knew it. He also knew he was doing a miserable job at hiding it from the Klingon commander. Jarn had dealt directly with every illicit trade contact he’d possessed. Kaide didn’t even know who Kovarn had been sending their minerals to, let alone how to contact them again. The rebels needed Klingon support now more than ever… “We still have intact starship production and the mines are turning out high quantities. We—we could trade for cloaking technology—“

Rell actually laughed, looking away.

“Give the cloaking device to such unruly degenerates as you? I think not, my friend. No… I’m afraid our alliance is at and end. You do not possess the ties and contacts that Jarn had. You have no supporters, and even now more than three-quarters of your former fleet had turned corsair and fled you. The home government is closing in on your position and Kovarn will soon be in their hands. I think it best we sever all ties now…”

“But--!”

Rell’s smile fell. A sneering grimace of distaste had replaced his rosy veneer.

“We’re taking back all that we have given you.”

The transmission ended. Kaide looked in futile rage at the blank screen. He looked up, past his former boss’s desk, toward the opulent den of decadence that had been his primary residence. That den was empty now. His watery eyes settled on one of the few techs he still employed. The scientist looked back with measured disdain.

“You tracked his signal?”

The technician obviously did not think much of the half-baked plan Kaide had hatched. Trying to attack and board a cloaked warship…a Klingon cruiser at that… It was foolish. The tech handed his boss the data pad anyway. He hid his own acid smile as Kaide hurriedly looked the report over.

“Those coordinates are in this starsystem!” The ‘Over General’ exclaimed! The tech satisfied his urge to smile with a sardonic smirk. He crossed his arms as realization dawned on the acting commander of the Ya’wenn rebellion.

“Rell’s in orbit! Why would he be in orbit…why come here just to tell me he doesn’t—“

Kaide’s eyes bulged as Rell’s final words echoed in memory.

‘We’re taking back all we have given you.’

The rebel installation shuddered with the concussion of the first torpedo blast. The tech reclaimed his pad from frozen fingers. The scientist turned and calmly walked away while the old mining complex was beaten down around them. Reports began to flood the stunned commander’s comm panel, telling him of strikes against their outlying construction platforms. Kaide could only ball up under Jarn’s old desk and weep.

The rebellion was over.



END.


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Soon, hopefully, I will be posting a new Dath'mar story that I started at around the time I was working on #12... Said story took the backburner when I decided to put more time back into the Endeavour series. Problems at home have drained my enthusiasm for writing, but I force myself not to let this one drop. It's kinda important to me to finish this one. There's just a lot of detail in it.  Once I've finished this story, titled: Dirt, I will then move one to another project, likely the Tramp Freighter series. Said new series will not be nearly as prolific as Endeavour, but will hopefully be as well loved or more so.

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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #55 on: January 17, 2008, 09:20:41 pm »
So sad to see this come to an end. But, sometimes they must end so bigger and possibly better things can start and thrive for their own time in the sunlight.

Have I been reading? Yes. Have I been enjoying? Yes. Why haven't I said anything until now? Scheduling conflicts. I'd get maybe 10-15 minutes free, long enough to read one or two threads, not enough to say anything good.

So, with that said, I will review:

Excellent portrayal of Endy's new toys. Lights dimming, ship shuddering. Mostly why they are Starbase grade phasers, and I'm thrilled that you showed us why.

Ya'weenie roast. 'Nuff said.

I understand Doc's dislike of Jarn once she discovered him for who he was. The temptation to "accidentally" inject him with something really naughty must have been overwhelming, even for her. I think, had she known and Ford pulled the trigger (when she walked in on them), she probably would have been understanding. Most likely not forgiving or forgeting that her man was a cold blooded murderer, but understanding none the less.

Ford got his private room with Jarn. This makes me very happy. Especially since you didn't leave us all hanging. Jarn deserved what he got.

Also glad that the rebel weenies got some retribution. Makes me feel like that area of space will be a touch safer to travel in.

It was a nice wrap up to the saga. There doesn't have to be more to this; we can guess that Ford and Co. will have a nice life afterwards. You say you have 2 works coming for us. If you'd care to, you could always do a revisit to Endy, perhaps 5-10 years later where a new captain and crew try to live up to her reputation. Then you'd have 3.

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