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#15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« on: December 01, 2007, 02:42:22 am »
Here we are folks. This one wraps up 'Season Two' of Star Trek: Endeavour. The 'season' was a short one...but if the Sopranos can get away with it...

I have yet to properly start the next one, so this will be the last Fed story for a time. The working title of #16 is 'Loose Ends, Strong Ties'. It'll work toward tieing up 'loose ends from this plot line and setting up for the next big run of Endeavour's adventures. I have new characters envisioned. Old characters will grow and some may move on. New things will happen, old stuff will be revisited. I am also endeavoring [no pun...] to come up with less...harowing...stories for my crew before I write them all into nervous breakdowns...

Anyway, here's:

Star Trek: Endeavour
Mercy For The Devil
CH. 1





Chief Petty Officer David Riker looked up with almost a start as Doctor Keller stepped through the double glass doors of Whisker’s. The young CMO had not graced his domain in far too long a time. With a sparkling grin on his bearded face, the ship’s chef and recreation officer rounded the polished bar to greet her.

“Andrea,” he hailed. She was a stunningly beautiful woman. She wasn’t too tall at about five feet and five inches. Tonight she was sporting a short red dress of Andorian silk and modest two-inch heels. Her red hair spilled freely about her shoulders, down to nearly mid-back. She was a shapely woman, and from the scuttlebutt running about the ship these days, single. “So nice to see you again. I was beginning to give up hope.”

Andrea smiled back and took a long look around the new surroundings before allowing him to usher her to the bow-facing window seats. “It’s so very different, now.” She commented.

Riker felt a slight thrill at the sound of her British accent.

“Well, this compartment took a direct torpedo hit before her rebuild. Even the Skipper’s fish got blown out the breach.” They both gave the room a glance as he took her by the arm in gentleman fashion and guided her up to the dining platform.

The compartment’s basic structure remained unmodified. It had a wide, long serving area for those catching lunch or and after duty drink. Three steps led to a raised platform before the portholes gazing out onto streaking stars. Here the fancier, glass topped tables resided for folks to enjoy a romantic and or private meal. Given Andrea’s choice of dress, Riker gathered this might be where she was headed.

“So, dining alone or expecting company?” He asked hopefully.

“Meeting…a friend.”

David resisted the overwhelming urge to frown.

“Seeing someone special…tonight?”

“The Commodore.”

“I hadn’t heard you were back together…” He replied, trying to sound as though she hadn’t just dashed his hopes against a jagged reef. His luck with the fairer sex was phenomenal, but he would have enjoyed chasing this one.

“I’m…not sure what we are, Chef. Or is it chief now? I notice the new rank pins.”

Riker reached up to the barred rank pin belonging to a chief petty officer which resided on his left shoulder. It also reminded him that he wore the white shouldered uniform of an enlisted man. Was she trying to point that out to him, or was he being a touch paranoid?

“Lots of us got a promotion for staying on with the old girl during the retrofit. But you can still call me Chef.”

“Splendid. It suits you. You seem the kindly tavern owner, and this establishment fits you spot on.” She told him. The look in her brown eyes was one of sincere compliment. It disarmed his earlier worries, but didn’t quite allay his disappointment over her dating status.

The after doors opened once again, revealing Commodore Chevis Ford in complete uniform. Ford looked up and spotted the two of them. Riker smiled back. He also saw Keller practically melt. No, there was no real hope for a romantic overture with her. For now, she was totally enamored with the Skipper.

Ford hesitated at the hatch for a moment, looking down at his fleet uniform. He hadn’t expected Andrea to be decked out so splendidly in civilian dress. Riker put on his best host’s grin and stood tall to wave the ship’s CO over. “Come on up, Skipper. We’re just about ready for you.”

Ford smirked a bit and approached, tromping up the steps at a trot. “Evenin’, Chef.”

Riker returned the small smile with feigned enthusiasm. He was enough of an adult to recognize that he didn’t currently have a chance with the beautiful lady doctor. He didn’t have to be happy about it though. But, duty was duty, after all, and Chef Riker would make sure his charges had a good time in Whisker’s. “Commodore. A lovely night to spend with a lovely woman.”

Ford nodded his agreement.

“Thanks, David. I’ll have a Killian’s Red, if you don’t mind.”

“Certainly, Skipper. And you, Doctor?”

“Chardonnay, David. Thank you.”



Chef Riker made off for the bar section and gave their orders to the stewards manning the synthesizers. Ford watched the tall man retreat and looked back to Andrea with a coy light playing in his eye. “Was the Chef trying to score on my date?”

“He’d began his first overtures.” Keller confirmed. They knew the CPO’s penchant for seducing the unwary. Not that the wary would mind a night with him. After all, he was a handsome man.

Ford eyeballed the whole of the compartment. His eye halted on several details. Like Keller, he hadn’t been here since the relaunch. “Mighty different in here.”

“Yes. I find that something of a relief. I can almost forget … what happened in here.” Keller replied haltingly. This room brought back dark thoughts. It had only been a score of months since the Halvor Device ravaged this ship and forced the crew to carry out the most horrendous acts of violence. Keller had slashed a man to death just over by the bar. It had been in self-defense…to start with… The difference in décor helped, but didn’t totally relieve the discomfort. Determined to distract her own mind, she looked the commodore in the eye.

“The uniform looks fine, by the way.”

Chevy grinned, mock-sheepishly.

“Yeah. Didn’t even consider civilian attire. I’ve just been in uniform so long it feels like a second skin.”

“I suppose it will always be a part of you.”

“That bother ya’?”

A steward paused by their table to deposit their drinks with a smile and compliments. They waited till she left before continuing with their conversation. Andrea ran a finger over the top of her long stemmed glass. “I’m not certain that your devotion to Starfleet is what bothered me.”

“Bothered? Past tense?”

“Mostly…” She paused, looking out into the passing starlights. The ship was moving along her patrol route at warp factor five. The star streaks were shooting by a relatively lazy pace. It could lull one into a contemplative, relaxed state. “When I thought you were dead, I found myself blaming the service. Starfleet as a whole. As though the fleet had taken you from me. Then I blamed you once I came to know more about the situation. How you piloted the ship into the midst of the Ya’wenn.”

“Yeah…” There was dark sarcasm in Chevy’s voice as he looked back at her dangerously. “Mighty selfish of me.”

Andrea looked back with mild defiance.

“Actually, I thought it stupid. You were throwing your life away after suffering what you thought to be a defeat.”

The commodore’s hands came up, open and wide.

“I’m not gonna argue that particular situation with you.”

The lady doctor made a self-admonishing face and looked down to the golden rim of her flute. “I wasn’t intending to start an argument, Chevy. But, I was confused and angry. By the time Thomas brought you home, when I saw you there at the open airlock… It all hit again. I knew I couldn’t take ever losing you in that way again. It hurt too much, and I’ve never been hurt in that way before. I wanted to get as far away from you as I possibly could. I thought that…”

Ford leaned in as her voice trailed off. “You figured that if we weren’t together, it wouldn’t hurt if I went and got myself killed. Somethin’ like that?”

“Perhaps. But the idea of being with you scared the bloody hell out of me.”

“What’s different now?”

“I don’t know. When I heard that a war had broken out on that planet, I wasn’t overly concerned, save to hope that you were able to get our people out of there as safe as possible. Then I discovered you were down on the surface with one of the teams…and they failed in beaming you up… I found that same fear upon me all over again. I rushed my team to the hanger deck when I’d heard Bronstien had recovered you. Even though I knew you would be fine, I was scared for you…until I saw you sitting there in the shuttle.”

Ford remained quiet, looking at her. Andrea swallowed. Her eyes dropped yet again.

“The fact is…I was trying to protect myself by separating myself from you. But I apparently couldn’t. Losing you would have hurt just as much whether I was with you, or not…”

Chevy’s face softened. The ghost of a warm smile pulled at the edges of his mouth. His hand snaked across the tabletop, open and palm up. “So…start over?”

Andrea considered his hand sitting there. Her hand fit snugly into his. The Yellow Alert siren interrupted any words that might have been forthcoming. Ford cursed and immediately jetted across the compartment to the comm panel. Keller, slower in heels, was never the less right on his tail.

“Ford here.”

“XO,” Commander Davenport replied over the open link. “Skipper, we’ve detected two strong subspace currents. Both have been identified as Ya’wenn cruiser size vessels. Their apparent heading takes them into the general vicinity of New Providence Colony.”

Alarm charged the Commodore’s persona. That pleasure and farming colony was only lightly defended. It had no strategic value and was only frequented due to the beauty of its terrain and its convenient placement among the space lanes.

“Has Providence reported any Ya’wenn sightings?”

“Negative distress signals, sir. We’re hailing Colonial Admin now.”

“How old are the trails?”

“Surall’s chewin’ o it. Current estimates are better than eighteen hours.”

Ford did the mental calculations in his head. At the Ya’wenn’s best speeds, they could have already made New Providence. At lower speeds, they could arrive there literally any minute. “Begin intensive long range scans of the area ahead, XO. Set a general course for New Providence Colony and engage at warp nine. I’m on my way up!”

“Aye, Skipper!”

Anxious over an impending fight, the Commodore looked back to Doctor Keller and gazed into her eyes. Both felt the same uncertainty over their future together. Loneliness had ultimately brought them together in the first place. Feelings of fondness revolving around their experiences with Ford’s heart surgery had made them truly notice each other. Fear of what the trials of service had severed the doctor from Ford. Now that they were trying again, how would they handle this continuing element of unpredictable danger?

Keller’s eyes softened and she gave him a forced smile of encouragement. Ford’s eyes lit. She pressed closer, into his arms and he embraced her quickly. Her smile became less forced. “So much for our date, Skipper.”

“Jarn just ain’t got no timing, does he?”

“I suppose not. One of these days we’ll work on your faulty grammar. But for now, you go work on the Warden’s timing.”

Ford gave her a soft kiss and squeezed her gently. She let him go and watched him exit the lounge.


***

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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #1 on: December 01, 2007, 03:32:39 am »
LMAO, great way of solving the prob m8!
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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #2 on: December 01, 2007, 08:52:53 am »
nit: gentlemanly fashion

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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #3 on: December 01, 2007, 09:43:05 am »


Another wonderful intro as always. There's no gripes from me on this. I don't remember reading elsewhere about the loss of Ford's fish. I know that in the Federation they're not supposed to be possessive of things, but that still really sucks. Maybe there'll be a new one in the future. This does stress one major point that we might have forgotten since #11 or so... this isn't going to be the same Endeavour. *IF* the Ya'weenies are playing phaser-tag with the colonists, they'll soon realize this, too.

I say *IF* because I smell set-up. Ambush? Diversion/distraction? Sensor ghosts? Bad dream(s)? It's Trek, so who knows (well, you do, but that's not the point).

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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #4 on: December 01, 2007, 06:17:04 pm »
nit: gentlemanly fashion



*slaps forhead, rolls eyes, shakes head*

grumble...

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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #5 on: December 05, 2007, 02:19:53 pm »
I like this so far.  Especially the subspace currents that could be weenies but don't have to be.
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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #6 on: December 05, 2007, 11:29:43 pm »




CH. 2





Commodore Chevy Ford exited his turbolift and strode out onto the bridge with a gritty sense of purpose and a drive to confront whatever the Ya’wenn had in store for him. His experiences in Jarn’s torture room were pushed deep beneath his conscious mind. He couldn’t dwell on those hateful memories and still function as a good commanding officer. He stepped down into the command center, railed off from the majority of his officers, and stood before the conn.

“SitRep.”

“Our speed is warp factor nine, heading 132.5 mark 021.6.” Commander Ronald Davenport told him from where he stood near the science console. Before the ship’s executive officer, the chief science officer was tapping at her sensor controls as she scoured the area before and behind, studying two separate ion trails. Ronald stood fully and turned toward the CO. “ETA to New Providence: Twenty-five hours.”

“Both subspace fields and ion trails show nineteen point-one-two hours of degradation, Skipper.” Lieutenant Surall told him. The science officer had not been on duty at the time of contact. The initial discovery had likely been made by a junior officer in her department. The young Vulcan must have been the first person the XO had summoned before sounding the alarm. The dark skinned woman had yet to even snap the front of her duty jacket.

“Thank you, Science. Tend to your uniform.” He replied with a playful grin.

Surall shot him what bordered on a dirty look for a Vulcan and looked down as she buttoned up the black border at the front of her maroon jacket. Ford chuckled and eased down into his soft chair.

“Negative contacts from ahead, Keptin.” Lieutenant Nechayev reported from the tactical console. The tall, blonde Russian leaned over his station in almost lazy fashion. “Tactical section reports at duty stations. Shields on standby, phaser capacitors charged, torpedo tubes loaded. Security on station.”

“Thanks, Weps. Engineering?”

Specialist McCoy looked aside from the large, curved black engineering console and pulled the mic from her ear. “Warp drive stable, running at ninety-seven percent peek efficiency. Coils showing nominal stresses. Structure shows sound, sir. No problems with our present speed.”

“And if we went to maximum velocity?”

“Projections show no foreseeable difficulty.” The enlisted woman told him.  Her hazel eyes scrunched just a bit. “Should I confer with Commander Tolin, Skipper.”
Ford looked back with feigned sobriety as he tested the engineering spec.

“I’ll settle for your recommendation, Specialist McCoy. I’m sure Commander Tolin will call and gripe at me if she doesn’t think the ship can manage the speed.”

Kimberly swallowed just a bit and looked directly at the commodore.

“She’ll manage, Skipper.”

Ford nodded and looked then to the helm.

“Mister Bronstien, all ahead flank.”

Lieutenant Johnathan Bronstien nodded back and eased the main throttle control ahead on his board. The responding rumble from the ship’s drives became an ever-present companion in the air on all decks. “Controls respond ahead flank, Skipper.” The young officer replied.

Lieutenant Noah Smith was the next to turn away from his station to gain the CO’s attention. “New Providence Chief Administrator Arlin Potter now responding to comm, Skipper.

Ford nodded back and stood. He pointed back to the comm officer as he took a stance between the helm and operations consoles. The screen wavered and displayed a greying gentleman of probably sixty Earth years in age. The commodore nodded to him.

“Administrator.”

“Commodore Ford, I presume.” The older man replied. He had the genteel voice of a mild mannered sort of man. He was balding on top, but not so much to show scalp.
“Indeed. Administrator Potter, has your system patrol detected the approach of any unscheduled starships?”

“No. Your communications man included the readings of two…Ya’wenn vessels?” The official stumbled only slightly over the unfamiliar name. Ford nodded back and waited for him to continue. “No vessels matching those details have approached this starsystem. The only ships on approach currently are two Nivarite Alliance bulk carriers and a civilian-registered Klingon freighter.”

“Good. I don’t know what they might want in your system to begin with, Administrator, but keep a sharp eye out for them. They could easily get there before we can intercept. I also suggest assuming an alert status among your police forces and ask for the assistance of any armed allied craft in your vicinity. If the Ya’wenn are bent on mayhem, they can do a lot of hurt with two cruiser size ships.”

The planetary governor seemed to absorb all of that and turned to nod to someone off screen. Behind the old man was a soft painted wall, probably within some kind of office. An expensive looking painting of abstract color drew the eye with bright hues. “We’ll do as your suggest, Commodore. Thank you. We’ll advise you on the approach of these craft.”

“Very well, Administrator. Endeavour out.” The CO turned back to his exec as the screen returned to a view of rapidly hurtling star fire. “Ron, what’s the closest assets in this area?”

Ron stepped over to the StratCom console standing at the aft inset section of the bridge. The status and whereabouts of every Starfleet ship in the sector would be depicted there. Ford had a reasonable good idea of whom he could call upon for assistance. But he wanted to know who’d get to Providence first.

“Tenseiga is closest at coordinates 11538 by 43077. At her maximum warp, she could be at New Providence in seven hours. Next closest is the Constellation. She’s close by us, twenty-seven hours from the colony.”

“Advise both ships of the situation and update SB 23 of our findings as well. Order Thomas to take Tenseiga on to Providence at max speed. Order Constellation to take up our patrol route and to begin intensive scans for any Ya’wenn vessels attempting to shadow the first…or us.”

Ronald nodded simply and turned for the comm station.

Ford patted his helmsman on the shoulder fondly and headed for the science console. The science station on this ship’s bridge was huge. At more than ten feet in length and curved with the shape of the bridge bulkhead. Two seats manned it, with the primary controls arrayed around the forward-most chair. This was Surall’s post. Her detailed imaging scope was extended and she was currently standing, bent over to peer into the scope as she looked into her readings. The commodore halted and waited for her to notice him.

Finally she looked up.

“Yes, sir?”

“Any chance of catching them on long range scan this close to the Tempest?”

The Tempest plasma storms played havoc with sensors to some extent from any point in the next three sectors. Endeavour was currently pointed directly away from the phenomenon, however, and he was hoping to catch a break.

“Perhaps, as we draw further from the storms, sir. The section we currently traverse remains flooded with delta waves and ionic interference. Were it not for the inefficient nature of Ya’wenn warp propulsion, we might not have detected them here at all.”

Surall had answered his question, but there seemed to be more. Ford dallied.

“Anything else catch your eye, Lieutenant?”

“An interesting choice of words. But, yes.” She turned and began to tap at waiting controls. Both Ford and Surall’s subordinate tech glued their eyes to the trio of screens the science chief had activated. “Here we have the two distinct ion trails recorded at 19:31:27. Both trails are in close proximity and highlighted at intervals by extreme electromagnetic discharges.”

“Which means what?” Asked the commodore.

“Almost anything. Save that, as you can see here,” The Vulcan officer pointed to the second of the three screens. “As the discharges heightens sharply between the two, the course of one of the ion trails suddenly changes vector and does not return to base course for some time.”

Ford nodded, understanding.

“One was chasing the other. The straight line trail is from a ship under pursuit and under fire.”

Surall nodded also, drawing his attention to the final screen.

“There is no debris, but there is evidence, also, of nuclear detonations against the vessel being pursued.”

Ford squinted at the screen. He growled aloud, reaching into his right pant pocket to bring out his glasses. Now that he could see, he read off the intelligence being shown him in full detail. He smirked. “One of Jarn’s ships is one the run from a Government vessel. There are no photon detonations…the rebel must have run out of torpedoes and gotten caught with his pants down. Now he’s running for dear life.”

“Quite possibly, Skipper.”

“Alright. Hopefully the Government ship wins…or has won.” He looked down to the younger junior officer to his right. “Long range sensors pick up anything that might be a detonation? Debris? Anything?”

The dark haired man nodded. “Checking, sir.”

Mister Davenport came to a halt near to his CO and leaned against the blue bridge railing. “Tenseiga is underway and Constellation has altered her patrol route. 23 acknowledged our update and asked if we require further assistance.”

Looking over his tiny glasses, Ford glanced aside to Ronald.

“You tell ‘em ‘no’?”

“I did.”

“Good job.”

Ronald crossed his arms and pointed to Surall’s three screens and the fuzzy blue trails they depicted. He’d over heard the entire conversation, like much of the rest of the bridge officers. Ford wasn’t known for keeping information low-key on the bridge. “So we’ve got a bogey being chased by another bogey?”

“Looks that way.”

“Think we should broadcast a hail to the friendly one or maybe a warning to the hostile?”

Ford took a moment and considered.

“Not sure what it’d gain us, especially if we’re wrong in our guess.” He shrugged. “For all we know, there’s another reason for the readings and they’re on the same side, planning some kind of op. Can’t take nothing for granted.”

Surall raised an eyebrow at the double negative employed and bent back to her scanner. Ford smirked, somewhat let down that his science officer didn’t bite at obvious bait when he deployed it. He turned back for the conn. Ron followed, keeping at arm’s length till the skipper sat in his chair. Then the XO sidled up and laid a hand on the armrest.

“What do we do if the survivor is a rebel ship?”

“We kick his sorry ass back home.”

“And if he’s the legitimate Government vessel?” Ron probed further.

“Then we escort him home.”

“And if we’re all wrong and it’s two Government ships?”

Ford’s brows came up and he sighed. He took off his glasses, pointedly folded them and replaced them in his pocket. “Then things have gotten more interesting, and we’ll have to figure out what the hell they’re doing out here…”

Ron nodded, patting the armrest.

“That’s what I’m worried about.”

The XO moved away, pausing to confer with the Gorn officer sitting at operations. Ford considered his friend’s ponderings. He hoped it was nothing so complicated. But then, life had a way of becoming complicated, right when you least expected it.
***


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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #7 on: December 06, 2007, 12:16:23 pm »
Very good.  I like the portrayal of the Vulcan.  Writing believable Vulcans has always been hard for me. 

The bit with the engineering woman reads a bit odd.  Not sure how to fix it, but at least
1. Conferring with Commander Tolin is a question
2. Probably specialist Kimberly McCoy should be how she's introduced if you're gonna use her first name later
3. Swallowing just a bit... that's the weird part.

I should also like to add that I like how they're considering the alternatives before they get into the situation. 
You run a more military bridge than I'm used to seeing from the feds.
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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #8 on: December 06, 2007, 01:51:46 pm »
Knowing the good engine-doctor McCoy, I didn't notice the lack of introduction, however Kadh is right in stating that she should have been introduced a tad more formally. It is a failing I find myself having alot, and you usually never have (I don't remember a time other than this).

This, as always, was a wonderful piece. You did give us a super formal reintroduction of the bridge, once again setting another segment up for stand-alone-ism. And again, you reminded us this isn't the same ship we met way back in #1 (for some, more way back than others).

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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #9 on: December 06, 2007, 01:58:42 pm »
The crew and Ford both seem more focused and driven in this one.  Not that they weren't focused before, just that so far, in this tale, there's a definite sensation of them having their 'eye on the prize' now that they've gotten their ship back in business.
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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #10 on: December 06, 2007, 06:46:10 pm »
Gracias for the replies.

Kadh: 1] Yeah...I noticed the lack in the question mark after I'd posted it. Wasn't going to bother with a mod for one stray symbol, however.
         2] And I should have used McCoy's full name first. Was kninda seeing if anyone would even notice, given I'd used her so much before.
         3] 'Swallowed just a bit'...before giving a recomendation to the Commodore about something she's too inexperience to be totally sure about... Not seeing a problem there. Perhaps I misunderstand your meaning?

I try to portray Vulcans in the mein that we have seen them on screen, without turning them into mental munchkins or going overboard. I'm glad they are liked.

I never thought of my crew as being very military, but that is indeed how they seem to come off. I find it to be a compliment. I've never liked Trek characters that run off into the wild with their eyes shut to the possibilities. It's irritating.

Czaw...uhm...Czar: Glad you continue to read and like. I did feel that the bridge, being a critical place on any story based on a ship, needed a reintroduction both in this and the previous story. Endeavour has been rebuilt, in some places almost totally, and is very much a different ship. And yeah, the doers-wrong shall soon see the difference.

La'ra: I wanted a 'eye on the prize' feel for this one, because the prize is coming into sight.

I shall post more soon.

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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #11 on: December 08, 2007, 07:12:27 pm »





CH. 3





Captain’s Log, Stardate: 9715.4

We have been en route to New Providence Colony for seven hours. No distress signals have been forthcoming, and no sign of the enemy has come about. USS Tenseiga reports no contacts between Endeavour and the colony. Ben has just reached Providence and states that all is well and his ship remains at alert status.

For now, we proceed on course. Engineering tells me we can maintain warp nine point two for another thirty hours if the need arises. This ship has mended well given the beating she took. I just wish we could pin down that damn vibration on Deck Eight. It’s drivin’ me crazy…

Given the lack in contacts, I’ve ordered the ship to stand down to Condition Three to resume combat shift rotation. I have a good crew, and I’m not about to wear them out before we even find the enemy.

End of Log.




Lieutenant Commander Rathus Slik leaned back uncomfortably into the human designed chair. His species did not favor such seating. Either they stood or they lay down. But primates tired easily and were not so steady on their feet under duress. They needed a soft chair to man their consoles with, and to meet with senior officers. Much as Slik was now doing.

The reptilian officer tried not to leer or glower at his CO who sat behind his smooth topped black desk. Ford seemed least spooked among the crew when confronted with him. This spoke much for his willpower. But there was still the primal taint of fear wetting the air.

For his part, Ford seemed perfectly calm and seemed more interested in perusing his glass full of iced beverage. He was a good actor. The commodore looked up and gave him a grin.

“So, Mister Slik. How’s life aboard the Endeavour treatin’ ya?”

The Gorn chief of ops tilted his predator’s head.

“Well, I suppose.” He hissed in response.

“No complaints? Too cold on the bridge? Problems with the crew or anything?”

“Should I expect problems with the crew?”

Ford pursed his primate lips. Slik did not understand the context of that particular gesture.

“Wouldn’t think it likely.” He answered. “But the bulk of the crew was on board when troops from a Gorn battleship boarded and attacked us. Even when I requested your transfer here, I was concerned whether a problem might arise in that arena.”

“I have encountered no racially motivated transgressions among the compliment, Commodore. The crew seems very professional when on duty.”

Ford paused a bit.

“What about when off duty?”

“I couldn’t say.”

Ford’s left brow shot up. Only his left ever made that movement. His right seemed permanently in place unless it moved with the left. Rathus had learned in his years among the humans that this denoted some kind of confusion on their part. Slik went on to explain further.

“I do not see them when they are off duty.”

“Never?”

“Unless I’m traversing to my cabin. Or encounter them in the corridors during my rounds.”

“You don’t fraternize with the crew? Or the officers?”

Rathus shook his head. It was one of the humanoid gestures he was most fond of. It was a good, simple way to say ‘no’. His stiffly designed and muscled neck could barely copy the motion, but he’d been practicing.

“What do you do when you’re off duty? If…you don’t mind my asking.”

“I sleep.”

“Sleep? Do you require a great deal of sleep?”

Rathus paused to consider what a primate might consider a ‘lot’ of sleep. Eight hours? Ten? More? He shrugged. He liked that gesture too. “Not really. But under the sun lamp, I tend to get drowsy.”

“Sun lamp? You need that to stay warm…since you’re cold blooded?”

“No. It feels good. As does a good, large tub of water.”

“Is the standard issue Jacuzzi big enough?”

“No.”

Ford smiled. Slik wondered why.

“I’ll have the quartermaster order you a bigger one from fabrication.”

“I do not require luxuries, Commodore.” Slik hissed slowly. He did not want preferential treatment. His duty here among the human fleet and the people of the Federation was to study them and their ways. His Hegemony had compelled him to seek Starfleet service to better determine if continued contact with these prey-like lifeforms was worth the trouble. He didn’t want to be treated any better than they were…

“I don’t consider it a luxury. If any other officer or permanently deployed crewman asked for a modification to his living space, then I’d likely give it to them. A big tub ain’t a real stretch.”

Slik didn’t follow much of the vernacular, but he understood the meaning. Ford was a giving man. It was a common quality among the fleshy, softer species. Giving and protective. He found them strange, but not in a disagreeable way. “Very well, sir.”

“And, if you’re not just opposed to the idea, you might try socializing with some of the crew. You might take a liking to them. I think it might beat laying around in your cabin.”

Rathus pondered why the human commodore might be so opposed to solitude. Primate-based humanoids were very social animals. They thronged in groups. Gorn did so, to a point. But they reveled in the time they could spend away from others.

Rathus figured that seeing how the humans and their allies spent their free time might add to his study of them. For this alone, it may have been worth the loss of a few extra hours under the lamp. It might even help him end this mission away from home earlier. He might see his home waters in twenty years as opposed to the planned thirty…

“I shall consider it, Commodore. Is that all?”

Ford seemed disappointed. If he was, he didn’t protest or elaborate. He shrugged again and nodded to his operations officer. Rathus nodded to him and stood to his full height of seven feet. Ford looked up at him in subtle amazement and remained quiet as he returned to the bridge.





Chevy watched as the hatch whispered closed behind the green-scaled officer. He was alone again, and his slightly elevated heart rate began to level. He wondered over the physiological reactions his body manifested when alone with the Gorn. Was it truly just a primal reaction to a large predatory reptilian creature? Maybe he’d have Andrea run a study on the affects Slik had on the crew. She would have to do it quietly to avoid pestering the commander, though. Would it be worth the trouble?
The commodore wondered whether all Gorn locked themselves away from people, even their own species, during their free time. Perhaps suggesting that he visit with the crew was past his bounds as commanding officer. But then, the Gorn was here, within the Federation, on a study mission for his people. If he was going to study humanoids, then he may as well do it right.

“Commodore Ford to the bridge.” The intercom squalled out, breaking any further reverie. Ford was on his feet and out the door at a slightly faster than normal gait. He entered the ship’s nerve center and rounded the after stations and closed on the conn.

“Report.”

Commander Davenport vacated the center seat for the commodore and paused by the railing for a moment before heading for science. “Both trails have taken a detour, Skipper. We make their new galactic heading as 115 mark 26.”

Ford eased into his seat and looked inquisitively back to his exec.

“Which takes ‘em where?”

“The Odarin Starsystem.”

“Info on that one?”

Davenport held up a staying finger and made for the sensors console to consult the library computers. It did not take him long to pull up the necessary file. “Odarin System. Class Two G-Type star. Sixteen planetary bodies. Two are within the limits of Class M, though both very young. One is Class L. Currently uninhabited. Planet Four is slated for pre-colonization efforts later this year.”

“Nothing there of immediate military value, then.” Ford thought aloud. “The lead ship may be trying to lose his pursuer. Or wants to use a planetary system to his tactical advantage.”

Ron looked back from the banks of blue writing on the black monitors. His countenance didn’t show much worry over his previously voiced concerns. “Sounds about right.”
Chevis looked to the dark haired flight control officer.

“Helm, come left to 322 mark 340. Slow to warp factor nine.”

Bronstien nodded his ascent and began working the controls on his panel. “Coming left to 322 mark 340, slowing to warp nine, aye. ETA to Odarin: two hours and seven minutes.”

The sleek Endeavour began a slow, measured turn to her left, dipping lower in her course as she maneuvered. The streaking of stars slowed their pace quite noticeably.

“New contact, Commodore!”

Chevis swung the conn round to face his science officer. Lieutenant Surall was inclining her head sharply to the right, looking at a scope on her subordinate’s side of the console. The junior officer sat stunned at her senior’s swiftness. “What do we have?”

“One Ya’wenn escort sized vessel.” Surall told him. She turned and again extended the main scope to her eyes and bent in close to it. “Given her energy and warp emissions, I suspect she is a Government vessel, not a rebel. She’s holding a course approximate to our previous vector, possibly shadowing the same ion trail we were following. Distance is six light years, speed: warp factor six…which puts her out of the Tempest Zone for at least four hours.”

“Why are we just now detecting her?” Davenport queried. Had he looked at the tactical map of the area, he needn’t have asked. Surall looked quite calmly at him.
“The contact was on nearly a straight-line trajectory between Endeavour and the Tempest anomaly. Therefor she was masked by the emissions of the plasma storms till we altered our course, thereby eliminating the direct interference from the phenomena.”

Ron nodded and looked back to Ford, who gave him an ‘I told ya’ not to ask’ look. As technical explanations went, this had been a relatively tame one. Surall could have elaborated much longer and dragged the answer out for several minutes had she wanted. Many Vulcans might have.

“Alright…” Ford turned his chair back to forward and sighed in thought. “Comm, send message to the Constellation. Update her with position of intruder vessel and order Captain Jeremy to intercept and turn her back. He is to proceed with prejudice. If the craft refuses to turn away, he is to force her.”

Ron caught the CO’s attention again.

“We’ve penetrated their territory before.” He reminded. “They had every right to order us out just as you’re doing…”

Chevy nodded, not looking back at his friend.

“You’re right. And they would’ve the last time if we hadn’t come with a fleet to back up our peaceful intentions. The difference here being…I’m not as tolerant as they were.”

Davenport nodded back with a shrug. Ford had the option to play it as he saw fit. And there were plenty of sound reasons to turn the alien craft back. There was already at least two of the marauding around Federation territory as it was. The executive officer stood and went to monitor Lieutenant Surall’s post.

Smith turned from his communications array.

“Constellation confirms her orders and reports she’s moving in to intercept.”

“Very well.” Ford looked back to his, as always, very quiet weapons officer. “Weps, are we outside the escort’s projected sensor range?”

Nechayev shrugged. Even his head added to the motion. “They could possibly scan this far, Keptin. However, they vould have to drop out of varp speed and direct nearly all their primary power into their sensor array. Ve have observed Jarn’s ships doing this from their end of the storm region as they scanned Starbase 23.”

“But they remain at warp?”

“Yes, Keptin. And ve have not detected any emissions of said strength. They are wery noticeable.”

Chevy nodded his understanding and looked back to the main viewer. He pondered what they would find in the starsystem ahead. Ronald, done with pretending to monitor the science station, meandered his way back down next to the command chair and crossed his arms in thought. Ford looked up at him. “Yes, XO?”

“Any reason behind slowing, Skip?”

“In case they have a nice, elaborate trap set up for us within system limits. Half our scans get reflected back from a dense starsystem. This one has sixteen planets and who knows how many asteroids and comets and hydrogen gas fields… In addition to stellar radiation… It’d make a terrific place to hide from an approaching starship.”

“So we go in slow?”

“Yup. Till we know more about what to expect. Once within system limits, we’ll drop to warp four and cruise in. Maybe whoever might be waiting will get impatient.” The commodore explained all this in a manner one used to speak with a friend, not the man one was grooming to take over command of a ship. Ron had been Ford’s trusted friend for six years now. They’d known of each other somewhat even before serving together on this ship. They hadn’t been through all the adventures shared between Chevy and his former exec, Ben Thomas, but there was a mutual bond there, none the less.

Ron had another inquiry lined up.

“Should we step back up to Condition Two?”

It was only two hours till Odarin. A surprise between the ship's current position and there was unlikely, but not totally out of the realm of possibility. He shrugged as he nodded. “If it’ll make ya’ feel any better, XO.”

Ron spun on a booted heel and pointed to the weapons officer.

“Yellow Alert!”

“Aye, sir. Yellow Alert.”

The whirring siren came to life as the lighting dimmed. Ford began to count how many times the yellow tracers flashed before the first turbolift arrived with backup and supplemental personnel. He counted off six, seven, then eight before the doors on the starboard bow portion of the bridge popped open with it’s liter of people. Less than fourteen seconds. Not bad at all.

“All stations report Condition Two Alert.” Nechayev was telling him twenty seconds later. Endeavour was renown for her response times. Now all they had to do was wait and try not to get bored.
***



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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #12 on: December 12, 2007, 01:39:20 pm »
More goodies to read on my two shorty days after the long ones I work early in the week!
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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #13 on: December 15, 2007, 09:01:07 pm »
No commento?
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CH. 4





“Now picking up vessel debris, Commodore.”

Lieutenant Surall’s report from science roused Ford from his hot tea. He brought the drink with him, continuing to sip at it carefully as he ascended to the sensor station. “Whacha got, Science?”

“Definite refined metal alloys, sir.” She told him, not taking her eyes from the scope protruding from her console face. “Ya’wenn metallurgy. It isn’t Starfleet, and not likely any Federation design. There is little duranium and no tritanium at all. The field is quite wide…”

“Also picking up veapons fire, Keptin.” Added Nechayev. He was traversing the distance between the weapons control station to the tactical sensors console to the conn’s left rear. He conferred with the ensign there and looked back with confirmation. “Ya’venn veaponry, Keptin. This wessel vas destroyed by magnetron gunnery.”

“Any way to determine whether that weaponry belonged to Jarn’s men or the Government?” The CO asked the Russian. Nechayev shrugged and bent back to whisper to his subordinate. Ford turned back to Surall. “Any thoughts, science officer?”

Surall straightened and began to manipulate a broad array of different sensor platforms. Endeavour’s sensor suite had nearly doubled in size and complexity since the CO had taken command of her six years prior. “I am scanning for latent neutron radiation signatures of the bandwidth associated with Federation torpedoes, Skipper.” She explained to him. “Likely this will take some time. I believe the vessel in question was destroyed while still at warp. The debris field is quite long and widely distributed.”
The commodore nodded and turned away to let her work. They were still at warp factor four. Within twenty seconds, the ship would be outside the range of most of the equipment Surall had just employed. He inclined his eyes to the helmsman. “Helm, secure from warp speed. Make your speed ahead one quarter impulse power.”

“Slow to one-quarter impulse, aye!” Bronstien rapped off. The sound of the mighty engines deflated smoothly and the ever present oscillations in the deck eased noticeably. John glanced back a few seconds after that. “Controls answer ahead one-quarter.”

“Very good.” Ford turned back to the science officer. Davenport was now also loitering in the vicinity. Chevy found himself smiling when he probably shouldn’t have been. “Who do you think won, XO?”

Ronald shrugged as though the question were academic. “Don’t know, Skipper. Guess we’ll find out when we meet the winner.”

Ford grunted. He went back to drinking at the much too hot tea his young yeoman had brought him. He hissed aloud when his tongue protested the heat. Ron chuckled.

“She likes to scald the hair off your tongue, doesn’t she?”

“Yeah. I can’t believe she’s a Petty Officer already. You know she’s only twenty!”

Davenport’s brows arched. He’d reviewed Yeoman Ailee Pershing’s file, of course, but hadn’t likely noted her age. “I know she’s more than checked out for security. Her phaser rifle percentile is better than yours. With our without the scope. I’m not sure how she got assigned to Administrations.”

“Some dumb-ass move of former Commodore Shiloah’s.” Ford groused about their former nemesis. “She was Starbase personnel before I assigned her to the Endeavour billet. Her jacket still doesn’t show how she made E3 in under two years. It’s been done, but generally someone makes a note of how.”

Ron leaned in on some note or another on the junior science officer’s screen. “You could ask.”

Ford’s mouth pursed with a bobbing sort of nod. Surall turned about to face both officers.

“Got something?” Ford inquired.

“Negative as yet, sirs.” Surall replied. Just the slightest amount of irritation was evident behind her brown eyes as she looked from one officer to the other. “And fewer findings are likely given your proximity to this station and the volume of verbal traffic taking place.”

Ford’s hands came up defensively, sloshing just a bit of tea onto his wrist and burning him. “Oooo-ooo! Okay! We talk too much. You can have the deck.”

The two senior officers rendered the science area back to its proper master and retired to the safety of the StratCom in the aft alcove. There, Ford relieved himself of his blazing tea, sitting it in a cup slot on the station’s side. They began to ply their minds on the study of the starsystem.

“The last ion trail keeps heading in for the inner planetary ring.” Ronald noted, pointing at the trail highlighted by science. “Almost like he’s still being pursued.”

“Maybe the destroyed craft deployed their version of a fighter group?” Came from the commodore, who was still busy sucking on his little burn. “The survivor’s trail is mighty weak. He didn’t get off without taking a lot of damage.”

Davenport seemed to agree. “Maybe he’s making for the inner core to set down for repair? Do we know if those things are landable?”

“Probably. Even the old NX-Class could maneuver in atmo.” Ford zoomed the screen down on the inner sphere of planets. The two Class M worlds were within, as was the L-Class. The fourth of the five inner worlds had a red marker showing its registry for future colonization. The ion trail was far too diffuse to be tracked into the system core from Endeavour’s current distance. Stellar radiation was making detailed scanning harder as well. Ford pointed to planets four and five. “Were I him, and my ship was on its last legs…I make for either the outer M or the L here. They’re both on this end of the system. The other M-Classed planet is clear on the other end of the solar rotation. Hell, a Ya’wenn ship might not even detect it.”

“Agreed.” He pointed to number five. “That L-Class is totally unprotected by any kind of Van Allen Belt. Its atmosphere is too thin to block out more than a tenth of the solar rads flying through here. Unless he had no choice, he wouldn’t have gone there.”

Ford straightened and looked off to the communications deck.

“Smith, any distress signals or weak broadcasts on any band?”

The comm officer pressed his silver receiver further home into his ear and turned back to his controls to make an intensive band search. He took nearly a minute to thoroughly scour the subspace region. “No signals of any kind emanating from inside this system, Skipper. Subspace or radio.”

“Very well. Keep looking.”

Lieutenant Surall turned to face the StratCom console.

“Skipper, there is no evidence of high band neutron radiation within this wreckage. I suspect this to be a Ya’wenn Government vessel. All hands aboard…killed.”

Ford’s light mood evaporated. He picked up his now cooler drink and headed back for the command chair. “Understood. Helm, turn your course for the fifth planet in this system for a passing approach of one million kilometers. We’ll scan it for life and any evidence of a landed craft, then head on for the fourth in the system. Ahead full impulse power.”

Bronstien tapped in the commands and pushed the accelerator lever forward gently. His skill with the helm was all but wasted on a starship of Endeavour’s size. “Coming right to 027 mark 001. Increasing speed to full impulse, Skipper. ETA fifth planet, ten minutes.”

Ford took a long, slow drink of his tea, finishing the still unpleasantly warm brew in on swallow. There was every reason to believe some of Jarn’s men still lived within this starsystem. There was as yet no evidence of their having left. Endeavour would have picked them up hours ago. Even if they were trying to sneak out of here at impulse, the Federation starship would likely have sighted them by now. His crew was among the best there was. And there wasn’t much that escaped Surall. The Ya’wenn rebels were on one of those two worlds. Were they there to undergo repairs, or were they slinking around with foul intent? Chevis decided to be ready in either event.

“Mister Nechayev. Red Alert.”

The weapons officer simply pressed a single waiting control on his board. His posture straightened. Ford had often marveled that the only time the man ever seemed to really perk up was during battle. The double beat of the alarm and the crimson tracers seemed to bath him in a new energy and sense of purpose. Even his blue eyes sharpened. It was as though his entire persona had just said ‘AH!’.

“Condition One, Keptin, aye.” He responded.

The entire crew was already at their posts. All that came next was the activation of weaponry and defenses, and the shutdown of all non-essential subsystems. Nechayev’s confirmations were soon forthcoming. “Shields activated, phasers armed, torpedoes loaded and ready. All decks report Red Alert status.”

Smith jerked at his station, then just as suddenly turned to face the conn. The boy’s expressive face was one of concern. “Now picking up an automated distress beacon, Skipper. Coming in from the fourth planet, southern continental region.”

Ford’s eyes were lit with a wry bit of sarcasm.

“I’ll bet. Maintain course and speed, helmsman. We’ll continue as described.”

It wasn’t likely, Chevis figured, but there was the slightest possibility that Endeavour’s sudden energy increase had been sighted. The activation of the beacon could just as easily been a planned rouse in such an event. Perhaps this was paranoia speaking out of turn, but Ford would play it safe. No one seemed to be questioning him, not even the XO. Commander Davenport remained quiet behind the junior science officer, arms crossed at his broad chest.

Ford watched his exec a minute. Ron would be a great captain. All he really lacked was the XO-billet’s experience. He had all the skills. He had the persona. The crew loved him. And he handled the ship and it’s personnel well. The only things stopping Ford from assigning the man to a ship in the sector’s fleet were the fact that he’d only been a commander for a couple months now, and the fact that Ford wanted him to take over the Endeavour. Sharp wanted very much for Ford to settle down on the Starbase and command the sector from there. Chevy didn’t want it that way. Grooming Ronald for this commission was his way of delaying the inevitable and making sure he left his ship in the hands of the best captain in the fleet.

“Now passing planet five.” Came the report from Commander Slik. Bronstien shot the Gorn an aggravated look for having reported a helm update before him. Ford smirked. He looked then to the science station. Surall was again at her scope. Ron was bent low, helping the junior officer with her own scans of the planet from medium range.

Ronald looked from the ensign to the senior lieutenant, then reported to the commodore. “No joy, Skipper. There’s no evidence of a ship making planetfall here.”

“Scour the poles with visual sensors, just to make sure nothing’s bobbin’ around in orbit, waitin’ for us to bug out.”

Ron nodded back to the captain and pointed to the two science officers.

Ford watched in continued silence while his helmsman drew the ship’s course for the next planet in their path. Bronstien looked back over his shoulder quickly, lest Slik beat him to the punch again. “Coming left to 331 mark 050.”

“Steady as she goes.” Replied Ford. Slik made a curious motion of the head at the sound of it. The commodore wondered how many more old sailors’ terms he could entertain the alien guest with. Surall broke into his thoughts. “Polar orbits are clear, Skipper. There are no vessels on or around planet five.”

“Keptin, now picking up an active energy signature from planet four.” Said the Chief of Security. “Same general location as the distress beacon. Matter/antimatter drive system. Low power yield.”

Ford waited as the weapons officer confirmed readings and made another scan.

“No fuel containment systems are evident, sir. There may be fuel pods in high planetary orbit, though. She may have had to dump her fuel to make an emergency landing.”

‘We can hope,’ Ford found himself thinking. He adjusted his seating posture and said to the helm: “Align your course for high parking orbit, southern hemisphere. Align forward weapons with the position of the alien vessel.”

“Aye.” Johnathan said back simply. The image of the planet growing on the main viewer was already beginning to rotate on its end.

Ford returned his attention to the comm.

“Smith, open general hail. Put me on.”

“You’re on, Skipper.”

Ford cleared his throat silently and projected.

“To the Ya’wenn vessel landed on the fourth planet in this starsystem. This is Commodore Ford of the USS Endeavour. We are moving in to assist you. You will disarm whatever weapons systems you currently have deployed and prepare to be taken into custody. Any resistance will be met with like retribution. Respond this channel. Over.”

Ford made a slash-throat gesture and Noah killed the transmission. Privately, the CO was beginning to doubt if anyone had heard the broadcast. He wondered if any one was even alive down there.

“Closing on planet four.” Slik intoned harshly.

“Now detecting life signs from the surface.” Came from Surall. Several are faint…likely injured. None appear to be moving. There is a radiation leak from within the Ya’wenn engine core. I believe the crew on the surface are being poisoned.”

“How long’s she been there?” Ford asked.

It was Ron that answered, still at science.

“About ten hours, I’d say. Maybe more.”

It was decision time. The lush blue and green world was swelling in size within the silver rimmed confines of the main viewer. Chevy could see the continent on the southern end of the planet. It was a wide, rocky expanse. Wide valleys were evident, even from space. And down there were a large number of the people Ford considered to be his enemy. Perhaps even his own personal enemy. They were rebels led by the man who’d ordered him to be tortured. And they now seemed to need his help.

“How…many survivors are there?” Ford’s voice was thick and husky. He hadn’t been conscious of the change, but his crew noticed it with concern. Ron turned and leaned in on the bridge rail.

“Seventy-one, sir. I’ll lead the landing party with a –“

“No.” Ford stood up, dropping his empty cup into the vacated conn. “I’m leading the away team. I wanna see what’s down there. Have three security teams armed and ready on the pads and four medical units with ground triage gear.” Ford was becoming a walking dynamo of pointing as he strode fast for the after lifts. “Slik, Bronstien, Smith, you’re with me. Make sure Goodwin’s leading one of the ground teams. Ron, you have the conn.”
***


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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #14 on: December 15, 2007, 09:55:16 pm »
I really don't think it's a good idea for Chevy to go down there.  It could still be a trap.
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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #15 on: December 16, 2007, 12:36:57 am »
If it is he'll just have to Dodge. 
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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #16 on: December 17, 2007, 05:44:35 am »
He'll just have to Cadillac. Smoothly and leisurely.

On a more serious note, I love the Gorn though I'd expect him to run into quite some difficulties due to Endavour's crew pior history with the Gorn so I'm hoping the hint you gave us will be played out.

I'm also wondering how you gonna play this prison dillema out. Perhaps by making Ron the voice of reason? The captaincy thoughts are a pointer to a high profile role for him in the very near future... We shall see.

“Ya’wenn metallurgy. It isn’t Starfleet, and not likely any Federation design.

This stuck me as odd. I took it as: It's Ya'wenn, and it isn’t Starfleet, and not likely any Federation design - I though to myself of course it's not Federation when it's Ya'wenn. I can see ways to make it logical (by thinking the Ya'wenn might have sold their metal to other fractions), but I still think it doesn't work in this phrasing. But maybe it's just me.


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Re: #15: 'Mercy For The Devil'
« Reply #17 on: December 17, 2007, 07:21:10 pm »
On a more serious note, I love the Gorn though I'd expect him to run into quite some difficulties due to Endavour's crew pior history with the Gorn so I'm hoping the hint you gave us will be played out.

The difficulties I hinted at shal indeed come, but I didn't try to work them into this one. This is part of the reason I mentioned his habits of staying in his cabin all the time...in a tub... [Yeah, that's for you La'ra!] You'll just have to wait till Season Three.

This stuck me as odd. I took it as: It's Ya'wenn, and it isn’t Starfleet, and not likely any Federation design - I though to myself of course it's not Federation when it's Ya'wenn. I can see ways to make it logical (by thinking the Ya'wenn might have sold their metal to other fractions), but I still think it doesn't work in this phrasing. But maybe it's just me.



I admitted to Federation member races having known of and trading with the Ya'wenn [prior to Ford's ever learning of them in] in a couple of stories. I think it likely someone might be using Ya'wenn alloys. Her stating that it was not Starfleet was a bit unnecessary, but then, oh well.

Glad to see some replies. I thank you and will post more once we here SOMETHING from La'ra... :-\

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« Reply #18 on: December 17, 2007, 09:31:17 pm »
I thought that was odd phrasing too.  The way I took it was that the Ya'ween had at some point in the past acquired (I almost thought they bought them) two or more of the old NX class ships and had copied stuff from that.
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« Reply #19 on: December 17, 2007, 10:35:35 pm »
The Ya'wenn grew into an interstellar power in their own section of the galaxy [mostly cut off by the Tempest, but not entirely] among a group of nations that had no Prime Directive. Thier tec has evolved as a melting-pot of various worlds' technology. It was only natural for Jarn to incorporate photon torpedoes into all his ships once Captain Rell introduced them to him. As for using NX-level stuff, I DID kinda copy their capabilities after what was seen in ENT, but my view of them is about 60 years more advanced than that. They didn't have the equivelent of photon torpedoes, but apparently neither did SFC's Mirak...or the Klingons for that matter [in SFC and B]

I tried to play off the tec difference between the Ya'wenn and Starfleet as WWII vessels battleing WWI era ships. One can imagine an Iowa-Class BB going up against a four stacker destroyer from 1916. This was how the battles were paired between Endeavour and enemy escorts in the first episode of the series. Since then, they've been adding stuff that the Klingons sold them. Photons. Better shields. SIF generators. Etc...

Don't know if that helps or what. Just started tapping keys and this is the result!  :D

I'll see y'all around soon!

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