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Cleopatra #2
« on: March 29, 2012, 04:53:52 pm »
Not a whole lot of action on the site lately, but here's the second installment.

Book Two     


Prologue


Alicia was running. But she wasn’t running fast enough. The thing was faster. Every time she thought she’d put distance on the thing, it was right there at the next corner. Leering at her. Maw full of fangs. Like some kind of macabre horror show about the monster you could never outrun.

The forest’s dense foliage certainly didn’t help her any. Nor did the moonless night’s blanket of darkness. She slipped on roots and wet fronds. She rebounded off trees. The thin mist coming down chilled her to the bone, soaked her thin shirt.

There were way too many of the things now. The colony’s meager defensive armament just wasn’t cutting it. At first they’d had little trouble controlling the outbreak. Now, with so damn many of them, the little laser pistol in her hand had proven hopelessly inadequate.

Alicia couldn’t even begin to catch her breath, she ran so hard.

She would die tonight. But that was alright. She had their attention, and that’s what mattered. No one else would die tonight. The others would have the time they needed to bring help to Roanal. No one else would die. They’d have 17 hours. Surely the Cleopatra would make it in 17 hours.

A huge snap told her it had ended around her again. The thing peered out from behind a filmwood tree, half-hidden in the darkness and the wispy tendrils of bark from the tree. Its eyes were lit with a vile, secret humor only it understood. It maw snapped quietly. Huge talons flexed. Long sinewy limbs prepared. Its distended gut bulged.
The most frightening thing about them was the utter silence with which they ran. The snap of the branch had been to draw her attention to it, to give it time to gloat for a second before it made the kill. They did sh*t like that when they new they had you. Creepy bastards.

It seemed to wink at her.

Her laser came up just a slit second before it came at her. She hit it. Maybe. She was beyond caring. It hit her so hard. She felt all over the cold-hot, zipping feeling you get when you slip and slice a finger with a knife. Not a nick-on-the-finger cut, though. Those bad ones that bleed like stuck pigs.

Shock hit her brain even before the pain. She might have been glad for that if she’d had the time to think about it. Instead she was caught full of wonder as she suddenly found herself looking down as the lower half of her seemed to just fall apart. Both arms went flying. Guts spilled into the darkness, glinting and looking much like the rest of the ground in her grainy vision. Bones she didn’t even recognize flew out of her. She recognized her heart easily enough. Other parts of her, spinning away.

When the ground reached up to hit her in the face, she realized she’d landed on one of her dismembered hands. The left. The one with the pistol. Her wedding band.

The things always went nuts after a kill, half gorging themselves on viscera and half-throwing bits about for décor. Her head wound up being in the latter category. Good thing. She really didn’t want to see the inside of the thing’s gullet.       
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"You wanna tell me why there's a statue of you here lookin' like I owe him something?"

"Wishin' I could, Captain. "

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Re: Cleopatra #2
« Reply #1 on: March 29, 2012, 05:01:20 pm »
Well i'd sum it up as death of a hero. But now I'm really curious about the rest, both the background as the main story. Cause there is more right?
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Re: Cleopatra #2
« Reply #2 on: April 02, 2012, 08:52:17 am »
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Not a whole lot of action on the site lately, but here's the second installment.
What am I, chopped liver?

I tell you all I've completed a whole story and give you a fresh chapter, with many more to come after, and what do I get? Apart from a comment by Kind Q, neechevo.

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Re: Cleopatra #2
« Reply #3 on: April 02, 2012, 10:50:52 am »
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Not a whole lot of action on the site lately, but here's the second installment.
What am I, chopped liver?

I tell you all I've completed a whole story and give you a fresh chapter, with many more to come after, and what do I get? Apart from a comment by Kind Q, neechevo.

Bah. My fragile ego is crushed.

Whoopsie, I haven't got the topic on notification so I didn't see it (I hardly ever check the main index, I'm just using the notify for new topics as well). I'll add it to the list to read. But I expect it to be fun to read as always!
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Re: Cleopatra #2
« Reply #4 on: April 03, 2012, 05:05:04 pm »
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Not a whole lot of action on the site lately, but here's the second installment.
What am I, chopped liver?

I tell you all I've completed a whole story and give you a fresh chapter, with many more to come after, and what do I get? Apart from a comment by Kind Q, neechevo.

Bah. My fragile ego is crushed.
And who are you again?

LOL, YOU, sir, are a lot of activity in and of yourself, sir. I meant OTHER than you. And me. Course, then I gotta include Q. Anyways.

And I hate liver, so no, you are not.

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Re: Cleopatra #2
« Reply #5 on: April 05, 2012, 08:41:32 pm »
And yes, there is more...much more...

Chapter One


Ensign Lania was running. Past the impulse intercooler compartment. Past the port injector column. Past Recon 2. Between parting crewmen and their watchful specialist minder. Past Portside Berthing 2. She leapt in a single bound over the spooled conduit being laid to the port phaser room.

She was barely sweating. The cool human air of the ship prevented much of that. Sweat wasn’t essential to a good cardio rhythm, though. And her body fat ratio was optimal for her height and weight. She didn’t need to sweat.

She needed the exertion. And she knew why.

Lania rounded the starboard side, running past duplicate compartments to most of what lay behind her. Ahead of her. Endless circle. The outer most concentric passageway of C Deck made for a good run. 323.7 meters. She made the complete circuit of that length twenty times every morning. Beginning at her cabin door and ending there.

The ship’s gymnasium would have made for a more efficient, less problematic workout, certainly. But that small, enclosed compartment, crowded and so permeated with the lingering scent of human male testosterone… Right now, she would never be able to endure it. Her willpower was weakened. And she knew why.

No, the corridor was a far more practical place to get her exercise. Again, she started the circuit. Round the ship. Past the impulse intercooler compartment. Past the port injector column. Past Recon 2. Between parting crewmen and their watchful specialist minder. Past Portside Berthing 2. Again, she leapt over the spooled conduit being laid to the port phaser room.

Faster this time. Increase her cardio rhythm. 47 beats per minute. A literal rush in Vulcan terms. She needed the rush. The exhilaration flooded her system like a drug. Faster still.

The circuit again. Impulse intercooler compartment. Port injector column. Recon 2. Portside Berthing 2. Round the fore compartments. The same faces looking at her in astonishment as she shot by. Her tabi clad feet making a steady thunking beat on the steel deck. Another circuit. Faster. Faster still.

In three solid steps she came to a halt. Those faces staring at her now, in confused wonder, had brought her back to reality. Why were they staring at her like that? Was she creating that much of a commotion. Sweat trickled down from her hairline. Lania blinked.

I’m sweating, the ensign realized. How fast had she been running?

And for how long?

She checked the deck chrono.

0805 hours.

Late for her shift.

Lania stood there a moment in wonderment of her own. Sweat dripped to the deck. I’m late repeated in her head. With a sudden motion, she turned for her cabin and the shower. She’d never been late before.

Alone in her shared cabin, the junior officer paused before her mirror, trembling in the chill. I must maintain my control. It is not yet the time.

When her time came, what options would she really have? There were no Vulcan colonies out here. Her betrothed was three sectors away, and she’d discarded him, quite against tradition. Her shivering hand grabbed up a towel and she began to strip, still glaring at her reflection.

The comm buzzed.

“Ensign Lania, report to the bridge, please.” Said the voice of the technician she was to replace at her console.

“On my way.” She replied, naked now. She’d lost a kilo. Even for her species, she was not eating enough. She headed for the shower.

Hot water. Lots of it. She wrung out her hair. It was now six centimeters past her shoulder line. No reason to cut it yet. Males aboard seemed to prefer long hair. Why did that matter? She knew why. She killed the shower, dressed.
Uniform? Unisex style with trousers? No. Female dress style. Tan hose. Knee high boots. Hair down. She chose the bra that fit a bit snug. No reason it should fit different than the others. They were all 33-Cs. Machine produced. But the black one did. Perfect. Why did it matter?

She knew why.

Dressed and ready, she considered the time it’d taken her to prepare. She was 14 minutes late. It was completely uncharacteristic of her. But she couldn’t bring herself to hurry either. With a final adjustment to her boots, she headed for the bridge.





“Chrono malfunction, ensign?” Captain Sharp asked in a slightly raised voice as his communications officer stepped off the turbolift. He knew this was likely not the reason. But she was a good officer. And a Vulcan. He would provide her an ‘out’.”

“Yes, Captain.” Was her reply.

Sharp glanced back at her from the conn. Her hair was still wet. Uniform clung to her. Her breast was still heaving a bit from her morning run. She’d nearly run him down this morning. Hadn’t even broken pace. The greenish flush in her bosom and cheeks did her good, though.

“See to it you fix that, ensign.” Was all he said to her.

“Aye, captain.”

Lania took her station, allowing the grateful tech there to leave. He turned his attention back to the science officer.
Commander Susan Ellyson had a large map of their portion of the sector projected on her primary display. They were missing a Klingon warship. Had been for six straight days. Sharp wanted to know where it had gone. The possibilities were endless, and he didn’t like most of them.

“Our recon drones have yet to reach their target areas,” Ellyson began once she was ready to issue a report. “They like another sixteen hours of travel time. But once they’re in place, they’ll give us near total coverage of the areas obscured by the Tellurian Rift.”

“You think he’s just hiding out there behind the Rift?” He asked her. He didn’t think so.

“Negative, Captain. But if he returns to his previous patrol route, we’ll have passive assets in place to watch for him.”

Jon decided he liked her way of thinking. His eye went back to the main viewer. He had that odd sensation that some sort of trouble was coming. It was indefinite as yet. Just a hunch. Nothing to act on. But his Sixth Sense was definitely working today. Did it have something to do with his missing Klingon patrol ship?

“Leaving Section Five for Section Six, Captain.” Came from Ensign Davenport.

The Cleopatra had been out in this sector for three weeks. There wasn’t much here. It was a sector full of small time colonies, following whatever cultural or agrarian mandate their originators had dreamed up decades ago. It was an area of space ships traveled through on their way to more important places. This was why the Cleo was posted here. A less important ship plugging a less important gap leading to more strategic locations.
 
“Captain, incoming distress signal.”

Jon whipped his seat about toward the communications section. Ensign Lania still faced her console, concentrating on bringing in the weak signal.

“Origin, Ensign?”

“This sector…Roanal Colony, I believe. Now receiving audio transmission. They’re patching it in from a hand held device.”

“On speakers, Ensign.”

The overheads erupted into a wash of static that quickly cleared.

“—Come in, please. This is Elan Darvy calling from Roanal Colony. Do you read me?”

“We read you, Roanal Colony. This is Captain Jonathan Sharp on the USS Cleopatra. What is the nature of your emergency?”

“Thank God, Captain! I didn’t know if I was going to get this thing to work! Captain, we’re being hunted and killed off in scores by some sort of…alien creatures. We need immediate assistance! They’ve already killed six people, probably more!”

“What sort of creature, Miss Darvy?”

“I’ve never seen one like it before. And we couldn’t find it in the data banks. But it isn’t native to Roanal. It’s bigger than a man…long legs and arms. Long…wicked claws. It…it just tears you to pieces!!”

Sharp stood. He pointed to his piloting team. Davenport was already inputting navigational commands. Ford’s hand wavered over the warp controls. With his nod, Ford slapped the waiting control.

Cleopatra shot into motion, rending the light barrier effortlessly.

“We’re en route to you now, Miss Darvy. Are you in a safe location?”

“Y…yes, Captain. The sun’s coming up. They don’t hunt in daylight. We’ll be safe till tonight.”

“How long is your terrestrial day?”

“Seventeen hours.”

Sharp glanced to Ronald Davenport. The ensign nodded. They’d be there before Roanal’s day ended. Good.
“We’ll be there before nightfall, Miss Darvy. Till our arrival, I want you to gather as many people as you can into a safe, defensible area and gather me all the information you can about these creatures and your general situation. Anything you can provide us will be useful.”

“I…understand, Captain Sharp. Thank you!”

Sharp headed for the aft portion of the bridge.

“Number One, prepare two security strike teams. You’ll outfit them according to the information Miss Darvy can send us. Mister Ford, head down to the hanger deck. Ready both assault shuttles for deployment.”

“Aye, Cap’n.” Ford said, already sliding out of his chair and on his way.

The captain’s hand found the nearest intercom.

“Engineering.”

“Bornet here.”

“What speeds are we looking at today, Engineer?”

“I’ve got her holding at Warp 4.6. If she’s willing, I might coax point eight out of her. Maybe. Why? What are we running for…or from?”

“Distress signal from Roanal Colony, Engineer. Hostile infesting organisms.”

“Bug hunt, great. How long will we be running her this hard?”

“Seventeen hours or less.”

“Well, I can hold her together that long.”

“Give me everything she’s got, Mister Bornet.”

“I always do, Captain. Bornet out.”

Sharp returned to his conn. He pondered his instincts. This didn’t feel like the worst situation he’d ever run toward, but he felt plenty of possibility for danger. Would he lose any men today? Tomorrow? He decided to prepare everything he could while he waited for the Roanal Colony to call back with what information they could prepare for his crew.

"Jayne?"

"Yeah?"

"You wanna tell me why there's a statue of you here lookin' like I owe him something?"

"Wishin' I could, Captain. "

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Re: Cleopatra #2
« Reply #6 on: April 06, 2012, 03:11:47 am »
Goodie, tyranids! ow wait damn wrong sci fi setting again ;)

Really liked the bridge to the previous chapter of Cleo with our Vulcan lady who's thinking not so ladylike thoughts. And I wonder where the Klingon went and what their contribution will be (if any).

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Re: Cleopatra #2
« Reply #7 on: April 17, 2012, 06:29:52 pm »
Alrighty, folks (or just Grim, either way). Here's a bit more.
This story started out as a completely different idea, and had to be changed halfway through as my mood changed and...well. Its almost 2 stories in one, but maybe decently meshed. Remember to be forgiving while reading.

Most of all, enjoy.


Chapter Two





Lieutenant Ford ducked beneath the piping and the low hatchway over the briefing room’s entrance. As usual, the entire group of senior officers had gathered here before he could finish prepping the shuttlecraft, and they had started without him. Shaking off his aggravation, he took his seat in the darkened room and swiveled his seat to face the glowing comm viewer on the bulkhead.

“They’re just under three meters tall in most instances.” The viewer showed a slim black man in civilian clothing was explaining, pointing to a rotating hologram of a walking nightmare of teeth and claws and horns. “Heavy musculature. Tearing carnivore teeth and long, rigid talons. They have horns, and have been seen ramming their victims when in a dead run.”

The civy looked like he hadn’t slept a wink in a week and his hand shook as he pointed out each of the beast’s attributes. His workman’s uniform was clean enough, but he had a dried smear of blood on the back of his hand and another on his neck. He’d seen the creatures up close.

Commander Ellyson halted the speaker with a question.

“Are these creatures resistant to weapons fire, Mister Kanly? You’ve killed some of them, right?”

The fellow looked back to the screen sharply, a flash of anger in his eye. “Oh, we’ve killed them, alright, Miss. They die if you can get in a good enough shot on them. Stun pistols are useless. And civilian lasers aren’t very powerful, as you can imagine.” There was unvoiced incrimination in his tone. “The real problem with them isn’t that they’re hard to kill. No… the problem is that every 40 hours or so, their numbers double.”

Captain Sharp spoke up.

“Their numbers double, Mister Kanly?”

“That’s right, sir.” Ford noted the greater respect the colonist seemed to display toward his captain. “At first we thought that they were just converging on us in larger groups. But after a few nights, we began to notice obvious size differences in the creatures we were seeing in security vids. So we started bringing in the bodies of some of them we managed to kill. Tricorder scan showed definite signs of age.”

The biologist assumed a deathly countenance as he leaned in closer to his video pickup. “Captain, none of the specimens we’ve scanned is more than a week old.”

Many of the officers blinked. Creatures that large, that vicious, but so young. The implications of what such an organism could do if not controlled was appalling. Had this been a colony out on an undefended frontier world, with no Starfleet protection…

There would not have been anyone left when a starship finally came looking. Such things had happened in the past. Similar catastrophes. Never like this, though.

“Thank you, Mister Kanly. I’d like you to send us all your tricorder recordings and detailed surveys of your colony site and surrounding ground.”

Kanly nodded back to Sharp. The screen went dark and the room’s lighting returned to normal levels. The gathered officers gazed toward their captain. The captain looked solidly at their chief surgeon, Doctor Goodnight.

“What can you tell me, Doctor?”

The big man shifted in his seat, data pad held close in hand. He never paused from reading it as he began to speak.

“Biologist Kanly is right about them having no sexual organs. They’re not male or female. They have a naval of a sort on the back of their pelvis, just above the short tail. I’d suggest they either have a queen-type progenitor or they come from some sort of spawning cluster, like the Aldaraant Bat. They’re too complex for conventional asexual reproduction, though outer space might just throw us a curve ball there. Anything’s possible.”

“Which theory do your think most likely, Doctor?”

“I’d lean more toward a spawning cluster. In the case of the Aldaraant Bat, the cluster continues to grow, creating more and more gestation pods.”

“So we’re likely looking for some kind of birthing cluster. Somewhere out of the way, and easily defended.” Sharp looked to his exec. “Number One, you will select a command team to oversee operations on the ground from within the colony site. Mister Fujiwara and Mister Ford will lead the hunting parties from their respective shuttle craft.”

Ellyson waited for a pause to step in.

“You don’t want me to command one of the teams directly, Captain?”

“Just consider it a hunch, Commander.”

Ford had heard his captain speak about hunches and gut feelings often in the time he’d served aboard the Cleo. He relied on them quite exclusively and was seldom wrong. The former CO, Captain Pratchett, had often been overheard asking him what his ‘Sixth Sense’ said about many things.
 
“Very well, Captain.” Ellyson agreed. She didn’t like the idea of sitting still while others led the hunt. She wasn’t arguing though.

“We have thirteen hours before we reach Roanal, people. Get some rest. I want everyone on their game when we get there.”

With a chorus of ‘aye, sir’s, the department heads stood and made for the hatchway. Ford glanced back at the holo-projector and tried to imagine what one of those things looked like in the flesh. Suddenly, he was glad for their combat armor.





“The hell you say!”

“The hell I don’t! I told you I had that issue!”

“You’re full of it. Lemme see.”

Ensign Davenport hadn’t wanted to eat alone in the officer’s ward. Most of the junior officers were either on duty, or those like his friend Ford were doing as the captain ordered, and getting some shuteye before their mission to Roanal. Ron didn’t envy any of them, save for the missed chance to join in an off-ship mission.
 
Ron’s want for human companionship, no matter how distant, had led him to the crew’s mess on D Deck. The view out the fore viewports was better here anyway. More windows, wider panorama of the streaking stars and the haze of subspace.
 
The two jackasses he was sharing the mess with, though, made him question his need for human bodies to share a mealtime with.
 
He didn’t know either of the guys. Their ratings showed them to be buck crewmen. Red shirts. Engineers, likely. In the red head’s hand was a folded magazine. Given the scantily clad nature of the Andorian girl on the cover, he could guess as to the nature of the magazine’s contents.

“Don’t know if I should let ya see it, Crewman Shandowski. I mean, the lack of faith you’ve shown in my collection of smut is appauling!”

“She ain’t in there.”

“Guess you’ll never know.”

Shandowski gave the other young man a shove. Ron really didn’t want to break up a fight in the mess. He actually considered taking his tray elsewhere. But then, the officer in him wouldn’t let him. He decided to watch. He leaned back, arms crossed, unobserved.

“Alright, man. Here ya go!”

The one with the magazine finally relented and bent over the table they were horsing beside. He laid open the paper thing like it was the gospel and flipped slowly through pages of ladies bearing their all. Ron watched them with a smirk.

“Holy sh*t! It is her!”

“Told ya, dude.”

“Commander Ellyson! Totally nude!”

Ron was up before he knew he’d ordered his legs to stand. Both ratings looked back at him with a start. With the clean sleeves of an ensign, it was easy to be disregarded as just on of the boys. Now they were looking for his stripes and bars. Once they realized they had a junior officer on their cases, they visibly blanched, minds roaring through their trained lists of excuses.

Davenport crossed the compartment like death on horseback. When he reached the boys, he halted, hand out for the open magazine. The owner of it scooped it up shut and handed it over. He stared at each of them without expression, looking from one to the other.

“Names, crewmen!”

“Norman Waltz, sir!”

“Aaron Shandowski, sir!”

“Have the two of you eaten yet?”

“Yessir!”

“Aye, sir!”

“And how long till your next watches?”

“An hour, sir!”

“Yeah, we got an hour, sir!”

“Oh, I think you’re gonna be early today, boys. Assume your posts. Dismissed!”

Both crewmen left, eyes wide and feet moving swiftly. They cast frightful eyes back his way, and bolted out the hatch. Only then did Ron allow himself a smile. The both of them were probably quite sure he was going to turn them in for having illicit pictures of their ship’s XO. In truth, he just wanted to take it out of circulation.
 
And secondly…he wanted to see if it was true that Commander Susan Ellyson had indeed posed nude. He’d heard of the scandal before even entering the Academy. Then he’d forgotten about it. He hadn’t committed her name to memory then.
 
Suddenly conscious of the item he held in his hand, Ronald looked about the empty compartment and tucked the mag into his back pocket. He’d finish his sandwich and coffee in his cabin.



"Jayne?"

"Yeah?"

"You wanna tell me why there's a statue of you here lookin' like I owe him something?"

"Wishin' I could, Captain. "

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Re: Cleopatra #2
« Reply #8 on: April 18, 2012, 01:52:58 am »
LOL, free p0rn ;) The aliens give me a bit of a Alien feel. Would be cool if something like a facehugger would be in your story as well. Or maybe some other way the higher numbers can be explained by the higher casualty count.
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Re: Cleopatra #2
« Reply #9 on: April 18, 2012, 02:54:44 pm »
Interesting people on that crew...
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Re: Cleopatra #2
« Reply #10 on: April 18, 2012, 03:06:28 pm »
I would imagine that the nature of the crew is quite close to what you'd see on a wet naval ship today.  The, ah, inappropriate pictures of the XO is certainly unusual, but it's doubtful that its completely unheard of.  The interactions of the crew makes it very believable story.  Looking forward to the unraveling of the infestation, although it wouldn't surprise me at all if they had to abandon the colony because they can't solve the problem.
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Re: Cleopatra #2
« Reply #11 on: June 01, 2012, 04:00:52 pm »
Innnnteresting! This story does seem to have two distinct plotlines underway. The Nasty Beasties and the Mass Debaters.

;D

I am very interested in both. Perhaps with more interest being shown, more chapters will be forthcoming?

My major trip-up of this story: I thought Lamia was an Andorian. I have an Andorian zhen character named Lamia, based on there being an Andorian female named that in the early TOS novel 'Bloodthirst' by J.M. Dillard. It was jarring to have her turn out to be Vulcan. I guess that means it is too long since I read Cleo #1. :)
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Re: Cleopatra #2
« Reply #12 on: June 16, 2012, 07:14:00 pm »
Sorry for the delay. Forgot I was posting these.

And before your blood pressure spikes, Andy, I intentionally misppell Claymore. Think of em as Space Claymores. But I threw a u in it just for you. Enjoy.


Chapter Three





The final coffin gently lowered into the six-foot deep hole to the mournful accompaniment of a bagpipe. About half of the surviving colonists gathered about the graveside, heads bowed as the service robot operated the coffin’s winch. This was the last burial for the day. God willing, it would be the last for a long, long time. The headstone was already in place, settled in by another ‘bot. The name Alicia Silvers shown in the ruddy afternoon sun.

The drone of an operating transporter beam drowned out the shrill wail of the bagpipe. 87 morose figures turned to look, seeing six shimmering swirls of light form into solid beings. At the group’s center was a blue shirted officer, a young redheaded woman with thick, curled locks. More colonists gathered to the sound of the beams. Hope finally began to shine in their eyes.

Commander Ellyson stepped forth from her team. They were all clad in hazardous environment suits, Starfleet’s multi-purpose armor. She’d chosen to remain in uniform, and had also decided on the more manly, unisex version. She wanted to project a lack of fear and professionalism.

“You’re finally here!” One of the younger men in the funeral procession exclaimed. “Are there gonna be any more?”
Ellyson nodded to him. Already, the transporter aboard ship was at work, beaming down the first load of support equipment she’d ordered. Her men began at once to deploy and unpack the gear once transport had finished. Another load began to beam in right after that.

Both the ship’s assault shuttles soared past overhead. The colonists watched them circle round, eyeing the terrain. When they began to drop into landing formation, the civilians were beginning to smile and clap one another on the shoulder.

“How many men did you bring, Commander Ellyson?”

Susan turned about to level eyes on the biologist they’d met over the comm earlier. Mister Kanly looked a little more rested than he had on the viewer. He’d washed off the blood. “Six in my command team. Two strike teams of seven aboard the shuttles. I’ll have additional support when I assess the situation. My men will need a clear place to emplace the modular sensor unit we’ve brought, and I want your help in choosing emplacements for the portable auto-cannon.”

Kanly blinked.

“Auto-cannon?”
Susan smiled.

“You want your colony defended, don’t you? We’ve brought our own on-site generators. What I want is a defendable building with a good clearing around it, large enough to gather most if not all of your people together.”

“I was hoping you’d be beaming us up to your ship till—“

“If it comes to that, we will, Mister Kanly. But I don’t think it’ll be necessary. For now the Captain only wants children, mothers and the elderly beamed aboard ship.”

Kanly nodded soberly. They were walking into the center of the town. A good knot of people had gathered around them as they spoke. Kanly pointed out a large building in the City Square. It had a heavy stone fascia.

“How about City Hall?”

“Not enough clear space around it. I need clear fields of fire in all directions. And I’d like to cut down on damage to the surrounding buildings.”

Kanly smiled at that. He halted and thought it over.

“We have the warehouse. Normally it’s full of farm machinery. We can move it out for a night or two.”

“Show me.”






Lieutenant Ford made the final adjustments on his armor’s chest piece and stepped out the back hatch of Assault Shuttle 2. The colony’s town was a pleasant looking collection of rustic buildings. Were it not for the lack of a highway, it might have passed for any small southern township in North America. He’d grown up in a town much like what this one could have been like.

And he’d hated every bit of it.

The lieutenant (junior grade) paid an eye to the overall size of the place. There were lots of hidey-holes for the beasts to tuck themselves into. It would be all but impossible to wipe them out easily. But then, they’d planned for that. Ford turned to his team for the first time.

“Emplace the peripheral guns there,” he began to point out the corners of nearby buildings. “There…and there. Put the sensor head up on top of the church.”

One of the junior hands blinked.

“How do I get up there, sir?”
“Beam up there if ya gotta, Shane. But get it up there ‘fore nightfall. When you’re done, get with the XO and see if her team needs any help finishing their setup.”

“Aye, sir!”

Ford watched his strike team disperse, hands filled with black equipment packs and plastic cases. He stepped back into the shuttle for his tricorder, intent on a scan or two.

“What’s the plan, Sergeant?”

Ford’s head shot up from where he bent over the pilot console.

“Huh?”

A blonde headed lady of probably 40 stood at the head of his boarding ramp. Her white blouse was rumpled, but clean. It seemed all the colonists wanted to put their best forward in the sight of visitors. Their pride was admirable considering what they’d gone through till now.

The lady had tiny black rimmed glasses pushed high on her nose. She’d even put on some lipstick. Ford tried not to be overly amused at what women thought important at times like these.

“I was just asking what your people’s plan was…Sergeant?”

Ford smirked at her, striving to keep his eyes kind.

“Lieutenant, ma’am. Sergeant’s a rank in the Assault Command.”

“Oh, I’m sorry, Lieutenant!” She blushed a bit. It looked good on her. Went down past her neckline. “I’m not familiar with Starfleet…officers.”

Ford stepped down out of the ship, unsnapping his scanner. His huge grin became an infectious thing.

“Me neither! Where’s the highest point I can reach without standing on top of that church?”

Surprised at the opportunity to be useful, the lady glanced about at the buildings she doubtless knew by heart. “You can get all the way to the top of the granary, Lieutenant. It’s almost as tall as the church steeple.”

“Ford, ma’am. Name’s Ford.”

“Elan Darvy, Mister Ford.” She smiled, offering her hand.

“You sent the first signal.”

“Yes, I did. I couldn’t get into the comm center in the mayor’s office. I had to relay through my hand comm. Daniel tried to make it, but they… took him down.”

Ford lost his smirk. He found his hand wrapping about the much shorter woman’s shoulder as they walked across the township.

“Don’t you worry none, Miss Elan. We’re gonna kick them critter’s asses right back where they came from.”

“My god, Lieutenant… We had thought they were multiplying.” Miss Darvy shook her head. Her eyes seemed so care-worn. “Last night…there had to have been a hundred of them. They just kept pouring out of the woods. We fought them. We just can’t handle them alone.”

The hollow edge in Elan Darvy’s voice tugged at the helmsman’s innards. Made him sad and angry at the same time. He was beginning to wish the creatures were here already, that his shipmates were done with setup, ready to fight.

“Well, you wanted to know the plan, right?”

She perked up.

“Yes.”

“We’re deploying robotic, static defenses. Rotary phaser auto-cannon. Nastiest field guns we carry. We’re settin’ ‘em up all over town with sensor support and fire control from our ship in orbit. Then we beam out the non-essentials, and the rest of ya hole up where ever Commander Ellyson decides to set her headquarters. We wait for ‘em to come, and we start slaughtering them.”

Miss Darvy blinked at Ford’s choice of language. She’d expected something a bit more humane, perhaps. Something more altruistic that ultimately would be impossible to carry out. They walked in silence for a bit.

The silo came into view as they rounded the city hall building. It was good and tall. Ford thought a moment about relocating the sensor unit he’d ordered to the top of the church, but thought against it. The church would give the better coverage within the valley’s terrain. The silo was too close to the eastern bluff that helped to form the valley.
“Do you think you can really get them all with that plan?” Miss Darvy asked suddenly, breaking Ford’s train of thought.

“No. That’s why we brought these.”

Ford opened up the pouch attached to his web belt. Within was a holstered air pistol and three magazines full of darts.

“Tranquilizers?”

“Tags. We’re gonna let some of ‘em get back to their den. Then we track ‘em there and take out their hive or whatever the hell they got.”

They reached the side of the silver silo. Ford looked the thing over. The door was shut and pad locked. The helmsman glanced back to his attractive companion.

“Is there a ladder?”

“Around the back is a lift they use. Hope you’re not scared of heights.”

Ford grinned.

“Ma’am, I fly a ship through space.”

They chuckled a bit as she led him around to the back of the granary. The so-called lift was little more than a narrow diamond plate platform with a slim handhold and a simple control panel. It probably had a hover pad on the bottom to propel it up, guided by a rusty rail welded to the side of the silo. Ford looked up the rail, gulped.

“Did I mention I’m scared of heights?”





Lieutenant “Mike” Fujiwara stood at attention as he handed over his scan results to the XO. Commander Ellyson looked the pad over, flipped through the pages of electronic data and field notes.

“I’d say we’re set, then.” She commented.

“Yes, ma’am. Ford’s team is already prepping their shuttle for standby. I’ve deployed his team to the east flank of this building, among the parked earthmovers. My team is on the southwest. When the Deathclaws come, we’ll make short work of them.”

“Deathclaws?”

“It’s what some of the colonists have taken to calling them.”

“Good a name as any.”

“Indeed. Any further orders from on-high?”

“Just a request from our surgeon. And I quote: ‘If ya can, get me a live one.’”

“I’ll take that under consideration.”

“Precisely what I told him. Stun energy doesn’t seem to affect them. And I don’t intend to try and coax one into a cage.”

“I’m actually hoping there isn’t much left of them after the first perimeter line.”

“Amen.”

The two officers shared a short chuckle and turned to gaze out the warehouse’s south facing windows. The sun’s last rays were still caressing the landscape, glinting off the armored shoulders of her men outside. The mass of civilians pressed in behind them amid the few farming rigs that remained inside spoke to one another in hushed voices. They were tense. Worried. Ready. Fujiwara felt much the same.

The security chief unstrapped the helmet from his belt and slid it on. The HUD came up in dim blue lines, showing him the ranges to everything his helmet’s laser range-finder pointed at and the condition of his hazard suit. He hefted his rifle.

“Ready?” Asked the XO.

“As I can be.”

Mike turned and headed outside. His team hunkered behind the bulk of their shuttle and behind a milling machine. A glance showed him Ford and his men, doing much the same amid the farming rigs. More of his security grunts would be positioned behind the warehouse and at other points in town, ready to fight.

Mike’s heart lurched with a concussion he felt quicker than he heard. He looked west, saw a cloud of gray smoke roiling about in the dimness of the tree line. The first perimeter. The Deathclaws had found the Claymours.
A deep howl reverberated from within the forest, and all the foliage about the colony town came alive with motion. Mike hunkered to a half-crouch, rifle ready, as Claymour after Claymour detonated. The howls became screeches of pain and anger. His men moved about nervously, anticipating. Specialist Anderson was scanning with his tricorder.

Mike hunched down beside him.

“What do you have?” He had to shout.

“I ain’t got sh*t, LT! Sum’bitches ain’t showin’ up!”

Fujiwara cursed, tapped his HUD control twice. The darkening landscape devolved into a panorama of muted reds and blues. The woods were a cool pink, save for the sudden heat flares of exploding mines.

Now he could see them. Their shapes weren’t definite, not like a human would have been. More fuzzy and faint, like a Vulcan. Low body temperatures…

“Switch to infrared!” Mike shouted into his tac-comm. “They’re in range!”

Both teams opened up as one, firing into the woodlands in short, concentrated bursts. Mike fired at two of the beasts he could make out, watched them leap and hop away. He couldn’t tell if he’d hit. He switched his comm to the command frequency.

“XO, scanner’s can’t pick the creatures up from here! They’re already here, in force!”

“I’m switching the auto-cannon to visual attack,” She responded. “Standby!”

“They show up on IR, but not out beyond 80 meters!”

“Roger that!”

Mike stood up, moved to the end of his team’s line of cover. HE could just make out the hazy silhouettes of a multitude of waiting Deathclaws, just hovering outside the perimeter line. What were they waiting for?

The auto-cannon opened up just then. They roared and chattered, sounding more like ancient machineguns than energy cannon. The surrounding landscape lit in a fiery crimson of phaser energy that made rifle fire look puny. Trees snapped off mid-trunk at the contact of multiple hits. Fires began to erupt as the underbrush caught fire. The beasts were obscured in the heat of the flames.

Mike killed his IR vision.

What he saw them were three dozen leering, saber toothed maws, lit in the licking tongues of flames that danced before him. The beady eyes burned in the firelight, malevolence amplified by the devilish hue. They were tensed to leap, even as the auto-cannon were taking them down.

“Kill your IR!” Mike shouted into his comm. He lifted his rifle and opened fire.

One shot wasn’t enough to bring them down, even from a phaser rifle. He pumped three into his first target. It never paused in its lunge toward the flaming line of foliage. One jump took it clean over the flames and the remaining Claymour trip-lines.

It was but the first of many.





“Still no alien life signs in the scan area, sir.”

Captain Sharp leaned down over the sensor tech’s seat and tapped a series of controls. His men below were able to see the things on infrared. The Cleo’s IR showed nothing. He grimaced, his own equivalent to a vehement curse, and switched on the ship’s exterior cameras.

“Zoom in on the colony. I want to see what’s going on down there.”

“Aye, sir.”

Sharp buried his anxiety. He had teams on standby in the transporter room should things turn dire down on the surface. One look at the overhead camera angle quelled his fears. His men, despite the creatures’ tenacity and resistance even to phaser rifle fire, were holding their own. The creatures were dropping. Damn they were fast. He caught sight of one as it leapt over an earth-moving vehicle in a single bound. His men and their closest auto-cannon caught the thing in mid-flight. The auto-phaser tore the thing to ribbons as it descended on his men. Till the animal came apart in visceral gore, it never stopped aiming for its targets below.

The beasts faired far worse the closer they got to the Starfleet strike teams. Once within the confines of the town proper, they were fully within the firing arcs of several auto-cannon at once. The combined crossfire cut them down in droves.

Sharp backed away from the science station, letting his technician continue without the weight of his commanding officer bearing down on him. Jon let his mind drift off in thought. His Sense told him that there was more to this situation down there on the planet. The pre-colonization survey had been thorough. Nothing like this animal had been found, either as an existing animal or in the fossil record. Sure, things got missed. But for a yearlong survey to miss something this big? Creatures like this would cause a devastation among the local animal populations that would be recorded for eons.

“Technician, begin an in-depth orbital scan. I want you to map and detail every piece of space debris within sensor range.”

“Sir?” It was a hefty order.

“Get the entire science staff on it.”

“Yes, sir!”

If these things didn’t originate on the planet below, then they had to have come from above…
"Jayne?"

"Yeah?"

"You wanna tell me why there's a statue of you here lookin' like I owe him something?"

"Wishin' I could, Captain. "

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Re: Cleopatra #2
« Reply #13 on: June 20, 2012, 10:50:25 am »
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And before your blood pressure spikes, Andy, I intentionally misppell Claymore. Think of em as Space Claymores. But I threw a u in it just for you. Enjoy.
The one time you don't need to... *rolls eyes*

I'll read this later and comment then.
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Re: Cleopatra #2
« Reply #14 on: June 20, 2012, 03:08:11 pm »
I just love the idea of a space ship smashing from orbit... And that's the only crit I have ;) Joking aside, I liked the chapter, still feels like aliens to me. Only better alien killing ;)
Snickers@DND: If there is one straight answer in that bent little head of yours, you'd better start spillin' it pretty damn quick, or I'm gonna take a large, blunt object, roughly the size of Kallae AND his hat and shove it lengthwise up a crevice of your being so seldomly cleaned that even the denizens of the nine hells would not touch it with a 10-feet rusty pole

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Re: Cleopatra #2
« Reply #15 on: June 20, 2012, 09:20:18 pm »
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And before your blood pressure spikes, Andy, I intentionally misppell Claymore. Think of em as Space Claymores. But I threw a u in it just for you. Enjoy.
The one time you don't need to... *rolls eyes*



LOL. Just had to do it man. Some cliche's that I use make me think of you and your reactions. Same with my mistakes. I'll be writing this mess and just start chuckling. My coworkers likely think I'm crazy, since I write most of these on lunch break.

Grim, glad you're enjoying. This is far from my best stuff. The first story flowed much better than this one did. I nearly scrapped this one several times, but slugged my way thru and finally managed something keepable. So long as it entertains, I'll consider it a moderate success.

More to come.

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"Yeah?"

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"Wishin' I could, Captain. "

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Re: Cleopatra #2
« Reply #16 on: June 21, 2012, 11:20:58 am »
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LOL. Just had to do it man. Some cliche's that I use make me think of you and your reactions. Same with my mistakes. I'll be writing this mess and just start chuckling. My coworkers likely think I'm crazy, since I write most of these on lunch break.
It's good that I'm making you laugh. :) And think. Hopefully to change your story and make it better? ;)
In my book, clichés are good to use as long a the characters realise it is a cliché. Clichés become clichés because they are real situations that happen so often as to become ridiculous, so if my characters don't know it is a cliché it seems weak to me. ;)

To the chapter: I re-read the story from the start to regain the feel of it and to remember who did what.

I like the response plan. A colony is under attack by creatures, so they beam down with a full combat support team and weapons emplacements, as well as aerial recon/transportation options. If I lived there, I'd be reassured by this approach.

Nice description of the town too. The characters are all real, if all from Middle America. ;)

The attack is gripping. Very 'Aliens', but different enough. I was hoping you'd not cut off there and leave it for the next chapter. :)

Waiting for more to read.

Including feedback. Hint hint.
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Re: Cleopatra #2
« Reply #17 on: June 28, 2012, 07:11:42 pm »
Chapter Four





“They’re runnin’!”

Lieutenant Fujiwara looked up from his rifle sights. Ford’s shout had broken through his killing concentration. The helmsman was right. The few beasts he could see through the smoke and haze were now running away from the colony.

Dammit! We haven’t tagged them, he realized.

“Ford! You tag any of them?” He projected back to Team Two’s position.

The armored junior lieutenant pointed down to the one lying at his feet. “Just that’n!”

‘That’n’ didn’t have a head. Smoke roiled up from its twitching shoulders. With a curse, Mike panned the area for viable options.

“Did anyone tag one of the bastards?”

“Negative, sir!”

“No, sir!”

“Sorry!”

They were all over us. No one had the time.

Mike pointed to Ford.

“Get to your ship! We gotta get these things tagged!”

“Aye!”

As Fujiwara bolted for his own shuttle, followed by his troopers, the lieutenant whipped out his communicator.

“XO, Strike Team One! Hostiles are escaping into the hills. As yet, none are tagged. Beginning aerial pursuit!”

“Roger that, Team One. Will monitor.”

“Roger, out!”

The captain’s voice broke in.

“Auxiliary teams are beaming down from Cleopatra to support you, Number One.”

“Aye, aye, Captain.”

Fujiwara smiled at the captain’s forethought. He’d just eliminated any possibility of the things circling back around for another attempt on the town while his teams were in the air. He didn’t leave anything to chance. The security chief dodged his way through his assault ship’s interior to arrive in the pilot’s seat.

Preflight had been completed and the ship left at standby. She was ready to go. He had but to wait on his fleet-footed men to get aboard and strap into their positions.

“Open the side doors!” Fujiwara’s second, Chief Gunnery Officer Lo’sii shouted back into the crew compartment. Her Tenatran voice was shrill, hard not to hear. It was part of the reason he’d made her the assistant chief of security. “Mount the heavies!”

As the ship lifted free of the packed earth and grass, the doors on either side rolled back out of the way. Armored soldiers strapped themselves to the doorframes and assembled the standing swing-mounts for the ship’s two heavy repeating phasers. Both guns were in place and drawing power before they had topped the passing trees.

Mike aimed his craft for the still burning foliage his men had set to blazing. He could see the last relief team still beaming in outside the warehouse. His ship hit the wall of smoke from the flames. He dropped some altitude, fired up the search beams.

“You see ‘em?” He shouted back to his guys.

“Not yet, sir!”

“Make sure you tag some this time!”

Fujiwara caught the unhappy grimace of the grunt on the starboard side’s gun-mount. He wasn’t as anxious to just pop a dart into the fleeing Deathclaws as he was to blow them to pieces. But he drew the pistol-like dart gun from his holster and extended its tiny shoulder piece.

“Portside! Portside!”

The left-hand gunner was pointing with vehemence out his window. Mike swung his craft that direction as his copilot aimed the search beams down into the dense tree scape. At first, the lieutenant made out nothing.

Motion drew his eye first. Flashes of gray moving fast. Had to be them. Several of them. Had they really left that many of the things alive?

“Swing right 30! I’m taking the shot!” His port gunner shouted.
 
Fujiwara swung the shuttle, killing the aft thrusters.

With an electric tinged ‘chap-chap-chap!’, the gunner squeezed off a series of shots. Instantly, the shuttle’s geo-tracking systems plotted three moving blips on the screen.

“Good shot!” He called out. “I think you got one of them twice, though.”

“Sorry sir! He had an extra big ass, thought there was two of him!”

“Get a few more into them!”

“Sir,” Lo’sii gesticulated off to starboard. “Another group, moving fast, bearing 340!”

“Starboard side! You got a shot?”

“I see ‘em, LT!”

“Let ‘em have it!”

The door gun began to roar. The muzzle glare lit the entire right-side window to the point of star-lit brilliance. The stream of tracer-like blasts rained down into targets Fujiwara could only trust were really there. He worked to keep his ship steady in the air, near to unmoving, while his gunners worked. More moving blips were zig-zagging along on the map before him. Trees were being shortened and reduced to burning heaps of splintery confetti to his right.
There were days when he loved this job.





“Captain…”

Sharp turned his seat about. Ensign Lania was stepping down from her console, report pad in hand. The junior officer was flushed a slight pea-color. He didn’t know exactly what that entailed, but he had been noticing it for several days now. Stress maybe. He took the pad from her.

“Sir, the reconnaissance drones deployed by Commander Ellyson should have reached their final positions three minutes ago.”

“Are you receiving telemetry from them?”

“No.”

Sharp glanced at the pad. It was a detailed time-table, modified by the ensign to list any normal and expected factors that might have caused the drone’s delay in transmission. None of them looked pertinent to the spatial conditions in the sector.

“Have you determined a cause for the lack in response, ensign?”

“Malfunctions are possible, Captain, but unlikely in this many drones. Jamming is also possible, but it would have to be specific and deliberate.”

“More likely they never dropped out of warp…at least intact.”

The captain gave his comm chief a nod and turned back to the viewscreen. The planet revolved before them blissfully, ignorant of the strife on its surface and the intrigues above it. Sharp eyed the planet’s sole moon, Kratus.

“Mister Davenport, load a Class Two recon drone. I want it to scan the other side of that lunar body.”

“Aye, sir.”

“Science, begin scouring the planetary Grange Points at the north and south poles.”

“Aye, aye, Captain.”

Jon’s Sixth Sense was beginning to burn. Things that shouldn’t have been related were beginning to come together in his mind. And he didn’t like the shape of it all. He hoped he wouldn’t find…

“Drone away.” The tall navigator called out. The little probe shout out from its home ship with a plume of blue fire.
“No elicit energy signatures from the Polar Regions.” Came from the sensor tech. “Beginning visual scan.”

“Contact!” Shouted Mister Davenport, suddenly sitting rigid in his white chair.

“On tactical!”

The monitor to the left of the viewer snapped on to show the Cleo circling slowly around a huge hunk of the globular mass below her, with the much smaller moon off ahead in the distance. A tiny, flashing red blip winked away on the exact opposite side of the dusty hunk of rock.

“He’s been hiding in the moon’s La Grange field!” Davenport said, voice full of accusation.

“ID, Navigator.”

The barest of pauses.
“Klingon, sir! He’s engaging impulse engines!”

Sharp’s hardened suspicion had proven right.

“Red Alert, all hands battlestations!”

The alarm began to wail its repetitious song, accompanied by flashing red tracers. Crewmen who had been standing about flew instantly to stations. The excited chorus of reporting voiced blanketed the bridge. Sharp gripped the hand rests of his conn like the grips of a rifle.

“Shields up, Captain! Full power!”

“Phasers armed and activating. Acquiring active target!”

“Loading torpedoes, Captain!”

“Impulse power at your discretion, warp power ready!”

“Signaling Away Team, Captain. XO is upraised of our situation.”

Sharp listened to it all, watched the little green-hulled ship circle out from around the crater-covered moon to face them. The ship’s design was all too familiar. The long neck ending in a boxy command pod. Thick engineering body flanked by thick wings, holding long engine nacelles. Beneath its main hull, the ship’s heavy disruptors waited for battle. No doubt it was designed to be awe inspiring to its creators. To Sharp, however, it inspired loathing and anger for the work it was known for.

It was a D-5 class battlecruiser. Over a century old, the design could still be found throughout the Klingon military. It was an older design than the Cleo, even. They were still deadly.

“Klingon slowing now, Captain.” Ronald reported. “Coming to a halt outside phaser range.”

“Standard hail, ensign.”

“Klingon vessel, this is USS Cleopatra, respond.” Lania paused, listening studiously for response. “Klingon vessel, stand down your defenses and state your intentions in this sector. Failure to comply will result in the use of deadly force against your ship. Respond.”

The main screen snapped onto a darkened image of the Klingon’s bridge. Blurred-out images of their consoles lined the perimeter of the compartment, framing the ship’s commander as he turned his chair to face Captain Sharp.
The Klingon CO bore the rank of commander. The commander had the traditional, long mustache and a hint of a beard that pointed down like sharpened fangs. Slightly slanted eyes gazed back evenly, darkly, lit with their own humor. He bore no cranial ridges, like many of the Klingons human ships encountered in this day and age.

The man drew Captain Sharp’s full attention. His Sense told him this was a man about whom many important things revolved, despite his secondary rank. Jon stood up, tugging his tunic straight.

“Commander Klingon ship, you are in violation of treaty here. You will withdraw.”

“I have no wish to combat you, Captain Sharp. Our mission is merely one of monitoring and has nothing to do with your Starfleet.”

The man’s voice was silky. Sweet. Sarcastic. Sharp inwardly blanched over the commander’s knowledge of his identity. Jon had no idea who this man was. 

“I’m sure. You can just consider that mission over and remove yourself from this star system.”

“I respectfully decline your offer, Captain. No, rather I will wait till the object of our surveillance has resolved itself. Then we will make our departure.”

Sharp half hid a snarl.

“Commander, might I inquire your name?”

The D-5’s captain shrugged a little.
“I am Rell, Captain Sharp. It is only proper that equals know the name of the man they pit themselves against.”

“And you’re here to pit yourself against me, Commander Rell?”

“Not today, Captain. We’re only here to monitor a situation on the planet.”

“The creature outbreak?”

“A menace, Captain. To be sure.”

“You knew of them?”

“We’ve encountered them before.”

“Did you bring them here?”

Rell smiled.

“Such accusations are beneath you, Captain. Truly.”

I won’t get a straight answer out of this bastard, Sharp knew.

“You knew of these things and of course, have done nothing to stave off their attacks?” He goaded.

“As you’ve said, this system is not currently under the rule of the Empire.”

“If you think wiping out 1200 colonists is going to change that for you, you have another thing coming.”

“Such is not our mission, Captain.”

“Whatever your mission, you’re going home.” The captain added a last note of finality to his words. “If you do not disengage, we will attack you.”

Rell smiled broadly.

“Captain, I did not come here to fight you. And should such a contest erupt, your ship would come out the loser, I assure you.”

Sharp smirked.

“Wanna bet?” He turned, making the cutthroat gesture to his comm officer as he approached her console.

“I take it they’re jamming our transmissions locally, ensign?”

Lania nodded.

“Aye, Captain. Local, targeted interference. I am attempting to break through.”

“Discontinue. Do we still have contact with our lunar recon drone?”

“Aye.”

“Then prepare to relay a burst transmission to it. Send a detailed report on ship’s situation as well as a warning that I believe the Klingons are compromising our patrol zone at this moment in the area we abandoned to come here. Relay that to the drone to be transmitted to Starfleet Command, Starbase 12.”

“Broadcasting now.”

Sharp looked back to the scout-raider floating out there before his ship. Now to see what kind of response the Klingon captain was willing to unleash…

"Jayne?"

"Yeah?"

"You wanna tell me why there's a statue of you here lookin' like I owe him something?"

"Wishin' I could, Captain. "

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Re: Cleopatra #2
« Reply #18 on: July 24, 2012, 12:48:35 pm »
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There were days when he loved this job.
Is 'Ride of the Valkyries' playing over the shuttle 'com too? :D

The inclusion of an old D-5 reminded me of our discussion in 'Shuttle Ride'. I'll attempt to come up with another segment of that today.

Nice little chapter of your own, and I'm looking forward to seeing just how the Klunks are involved here. And how Lamia's situation plays out.

I have also been struck with the idea of taking your situation and having one of my crews deal with it. Your guys are border patrol/standard navy. My crews are... not. :D
I'd like to see how the Kusanagi or Falklands crews would handle this situation. Perhaps a second outbreak in the late 2260s or 2270s? :D
I say this because I think for this situation your approach is the correct one to take, so I wonder what would happen to a crew here who tried to follow my pattern... and the people they are supposed to be protecting. Worth a story, do you think?

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Re: Cleopatra #2
« Reply #19 on: July 25, 2012, 02:32:20 am »
Feels kinda like tour of duty meets aliens, Which is a good thing!
Snickers@DND: If there is one straight answer in that bent little head of yours, you'd better start spillin' it pretty damn quick, or I'm gonna take a large, blunt object, roughly the size of Kallae AND his hat and shove it lengthwise up a crevice of your being so seldomly cleaned that even the denizens of the nine hells would not touch it with a 10-feet rusty pole