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Re: Second Chances III: The Trellious Incident
« Reply #30 on: January 04, 2008, 03:59:51 pm »
I strand corrected on the MAAs not having grades. Apparently, according to your first link, there are 3 MAA grades: MA2, MA1, and MAC (Presumably for "Command").

However, the comprehensive listing of job descriptions backs me up in that they are law/discipline enforcers and physical security. It is not a rank but a position - especially as the Navy Pay grades of these ranks are E5, E6 and E7 respectively. The MAA you note in your second link - a damn fine soldier by that account - was a SEAL who was an MAA.

What I'm trying to says is: Not all MAAs are SEALS, and not all SEALS are MAAs. The MAA's job function - regardless of their Service (Army, Navy, Marine, SEAL) - is discipline and security, not Offensive SpecOps. Here's one of my sources:

http://web.archive.org/web/20050207144053/www.seal.navy.mil/seal/bec_sourcerates.asp.

The prefacing note says:
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Note: the SEAL program is open to all enlisted Navy active duty members (with exception to established requirements) regardless of their rating. Once you are in the SEAL program you will be required to change your rating to one of the rates listed below, if applicable.

I take this to mean that you can be a Navy MAA and transfer to the SEALs, or any Navy Petty Officer transferring to the SEALs and making MAA your rate, and you'll be an MA1/2/C ( SEAL). You could also be a SEAL with a Gunner's Mate rate who wants to be an MAA.

Admittedly, I feel like an idiot trying to correct someone whose served with MAAs. I feel like I'm setting myself up for a fall, to be cut of at the knees. If I'm wrong, Czar, lay it on me. I'd really like to know, as all my (second & third-hand) sources are disputing you.

Oh P.S. - Sorry for hijacking your thread. I like your story.  :D
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Re: Second Chances III: The Trellious Incident
« Reply #31 on: January 19, 2008, 12:23:00 am »
Andy- I'll get back to you on that MA bit soon enough. Suffice it to say, I was going for something not Marines, better trained and also part of normal security. Cerberus' new mission is to explore the unkown. Sometimes they might need some muscle to get out of a scrape. Marines die, that's what they're there for; but SEALs tend to live forever, which means, Cerberus away missions with SEALs will live forever.

That said, here's the next thrilling part:


   The warble of the intruder alarm reiterated to her that the shields had been compromised. Frantic beeping from the helm told her the ship was still spinning slowly out of control due to the huge matter-antimatter explosion that had ripped the protective shields away from the ship. Flashing indicators told her of damaged systems, weapons, shields, life support, transporters… She ignored these. Her attention was focused solely on the individual that had materialized on the bridge. He held a small, egg-like object in his hand. “Computer,” she said as he activated the device and dematerialized back to wherever he’d come. “Emergency control system lock out, authorization McCloud, theta one seven nine enable.” Anesthazine gas slowly filled the bridge, and most likely the decks below. She knew a takeover when she saw it, even if she only had a split second to act. Computer screens dimmed and shut down, terminals locked out. Only three people could restore the ship, two were not aboard, the last drifted into an unwelcome slumber.


   “Are you certain?” Jones asked frantically. If it is him…”

   “We covered this particular act for three days in advanced combat tactics,” McDougal replied to her dryly. “We even watched the recordings from his ship’s logs. How do you think he got that ship he’s on now?”

   Several warnings beeped and blinked frantically for their attention, cutting the discussion short. “Klingon vessel has…” Jones started. McDougal’s hands sped quickly over the helm controls, narrowly avoiding the twin disruptor salvo. The shuttle dipped and swerved, and eventually found relative safety in the milky grey atmosphere of the planet they orbited.

   “Stand-by to vent drive plasma!” he ordered, most of his attention turned to dodging incoming weapons fire.

   “Computer has recognized the ship, and you were right! Standing by to vent…”

   “We’re in pretty deep,” he said as the shuttle shuddered from another near hit. “We can’t stay in the atmosphere, we’ll burn up, and we don’t have much of a chance against him, even if he only intended capture. To top it off, what we’re about to do could cause our very deaths.”

   “What do we have to ignite the plasma?” she asked, recognizing their part of the Kolvoord Starburst. She gave him an “I’m with you” smile.

   “Him,” he said, pointing to the ceiling in the cabin. “We’ll have to time it right, but from their perspective, it should look as if we’ve been vaporized. And it should buy us enough time to get aboard Cerberus and get out of here.”

   The shuttle angled up slightly and began her exit from the planet’s uppermost atmosphere. Many De’Oria shook gently as a phaser strike impacted the hull. Taking her cue, Jones executed the release of drive plasma. “He’s powering down weapons!” she said excitedly. “He’s accelerating to full impulse”

   “Shut the vent!” he shouted at her. “It’s not him, he’s not there… If he was, they would still be firing…” he paused, refocusing his mind on the art of evasion. Skilled hands danced playfully across the helm. Behind them, the massive Klingon battle cruiser closed the gap, twin gashes of freshly rent hull plates could now be seen adorning his secondary hull. The shuttle dove hard towards the planet below, using the gravity to accelerate them. Jones’ panel beeped a frantic warning as structural safety limits were being exceeded. He ignored these, focusing solely on the planet below. “That f*cker’s on Cerberus.”

   Behind, the cruiser tried to keep up, and had his commanding officer been aboard, would have followed the shuttle down. In his absence, the crew merely waited for the shuttle to burry itself in the planet’s surface, or explode trying; first by slowing, then altering course all together. At the last possible second, the shuttle pulled up from her dive, a slight shock to the crew of the cruiser, and bounced gingerly off the atmosphere. The entire event managed to mask her ion trail, and for the moment, Many De’Oria was nowhere to be found.



   He walked quietly through the silent corridor, the sound of his boots muffled against soft Starfleet carpeting; the hiss from his respirator was the only sound that assailed his ears. Red combat lights bathed him in familiarity; red alert flashers reflected the evil in his eyes. Starfleet had been smart enough to delete his command codes from their computers, denying him his prize for the moment. He knew that the crew was well trained and loyal to the fleet; they’d never aid him in restoring computer control. No matter, soon the Old Man would flush out the quarry, sending the lone bird back to the nest. Judging by what he found on the bridge, at least one of the persons on the shuttle would be the commanding officer. Unless, of course, she was the one in the command chair, wearing an engineer’s uniform.

   He’d slapped her unconscious form regardless; she’d given the order to fire on his ship, after all. He’d have had more for her later in one of his agonizer booths, had they both not been destroyed. But he was crafty, and something would happen, it always did, that would allow him to force her atonement for his dead personnel.

   He finally made his destination, and stood beside the large pressure door to the shuttle bay. He waited a silent moment, allowing his far behind security guards to catch up. Beyond the door he could hear the whispering hiss of a shuttle landing. He waited, and took a position to the left of the door. Familiar sounds of a shuttle’s door opening sounded through the bulkhead, along with the main hangar bay door sealing shut, and still he waited.

   His patience wore thin after ten minutes of silence. They had had more than enough time to come through the door, to be taken by his men. He motioned for his squad to stay put and remain ready as he opened the door.

   No phaser shots came through at him. One of his squad pulled out a tricorder and briefly scanned the bay, and shook her head to relay the “no life signs” message she’d received. Anger boiled inside him, but never the less, he motioned to his squad calmly to secure the bay.

   As they busied themselves with searching the scorched Many De’Oria, he opened his communicator and dialed in the proper frequency. “K’Tal,” he spoke into the device through his respirator’s voice filter. “K’Tal, come in!” Silence was his only response. He looked down the corridor to a sleeping form. It was possible that one of the bridge crew had revived themselves, but certainly not enough to overtake K’Tal and the three marines with her. He closed down his communicator. She could just be too busy to answer; restoring the computer was the first priority, after all. He stepped into the hangar and greeted one of his men who’d come running out of the larger shuttle.

   “Recent transporter activity, sir,” he said. “The shuttle’s transport log has been erased, along with most of the sensor and communications logs. Two personal life support kits are also missing from the storage locker.”

   It is a standard Starfleet shuttle, he mused. Why not have standard equipment?   He smiled, and turned to exit the shuttle bay with quick strides, motioning for his squad to follow. In a flash, the door slammed shut, locking them behind him in the bay. He didn’t wait, though. Without feeling he trod down the lonely corridor, to the nearest computer terminal. They might have pulled his authority off of the ships, but they still used the same computer designs. He made the terminal as force fields snapped into existence around him. Unnoticing, he forced his way through the multi-layered computer lock out.

   A few hundred keystrokes later, he found himself free of his temporary cell, and on a turbo lift to the bridge.



   “Status?” Commander Shawn McDougal barked at her. He’d moved Lieutenant Michaels’ unconscious form free of the helm and sat down himself. Unlocking the computer was a long ordeal, as was taking out the guards on the bridge. Precious time had been lost, forever unrecoverable.

   “Shields one through four fully functional,” Lieutenant Commander Selma Jones responded. “Five and six are down. Life support systems are taxed, but are flushing out the anesthazine; Bridge is locked down and secured; all computer and command functions routed to bridge terminals; insufficient power available for movement or weapons at this time. Our guests are still wandering the ship; I’m waiting for power systems to return to capacity to engage security force fields.” A low rumble was felt by the duo, followed by a flashing indicator on the engineering panel. Jones hopped from the tactical station to the engineering station.

   “Impulse engines are at full capacity. Rerouting power to security systems.” A snap came from the turbo lift door as a force field formed within the frame. “That should do it, including those in the shuttle bay.” A flashing indicator blinked for attention on the tactical panel, then faded as quickly as it had come, unnoticed by the busy executive officer.

   “Lock down all turbo lifts and Jeffries tubes,” he ordered. “How long until we have warp drive?”

   “The computer estimates ten minutes, maybe sooner if someone wakes up down there. That explosion wrecked havoc on the power grid and warp drive.”

   “We need to get the downed shields back up,” he said, working the controls of the helm. “I’m plotting a course out of system, as soon as we have the power, we’ll be on our way. And Miss Jones?”

   “Yes sir?”

   “See if you can’t secure the garbage on the bridge,” he said, motioning to the four stunned infiltrators.

   “Gladly, sir.” She left her station to tend to the binding of the hands and feet of their four unwelcome guests. She tended to the Vulcan first, assuming that she’d be most likely to come around quickest, and she was the closest to her position. Eight pair of security shackles formed in the bridge’s port replicator unit, and with a simple click the first two were affixed to the stunned Vulcan. Jones continued her rounds to the next two, both lying behind the command chair, when the crackle of the force field protecting the bridge sounded in her ears.

   The lift door parted, revealing the tall man behind, phaser pointed into the bridge. “Don’t,” he said as McDougal and Jones both began to stand and draw their own weapons, “or you’re both dead.”

   “Computer!” McDougal shouted. The two consious Starfleet officers slowly moved hands away from phasers, and pushed them towardss ths ceiling.

   “I wouldn’t do that either if you valued your lives,” the man interrupted him.

   “I’d known you’d sunk low,” McDougal said to him, softly returning to his seat. “But this is a new low, even for the great Czar Mohab.”

   “My reputation precedes me.” He took a short bow. “Pity, I’ve not heard of yours.” He stepped away from the twin terminals, further towards the center of the bridge.

   “Strange, I thought you’d recognize the boot that will be kicking your sorry *ss all the way back to Earth!” McDougal said vehemently. He turned quickly to the helm, pressing down hard on one shiny red key.

   The sound of a phaser beam broke through the tension filled atmosphere.


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EDIT 1: The old man was suffering from GID (her instead of his). Fixed.

EDIT 1.1: Had to act out parts of this to see if it was believable. Added a few words. Believable now.

EDIT 2: I swear I proof these before I post. But, Changed "Cargo" bay to "Shuttle" bay, as said by Jones.
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Re: Second Chances III: The Trellious Incident
« Reply #32 on: January 19, 2008, 09:41:27 pm »
I am very sleepy and have an attention starved feline in my lap, but am compelled to comment anyway.

This was a very exciting addition and left me wanting to see the story's completion all the more. The Ceberous sees as much action as the 'ill-fated' Endeavour!

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Re: Second Chances III: The Trellious Incident
« Reply #33 on: January 21, 2008, 02:27:21 am »
I feel stupid that I didn't figure it out.  It should have been obvious. 

Nice action, but I'm still not decided whether I like the overall story or not.
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Re: Second Chances III: The Trellious Incident
« Reply #34 on: January 21, 2008, 02:54:41 am »
I feel stupid that I didn't figure it out.  It should have been obvious. 

Don't. It was supposed to make the reader feel, "Is that... no, he wouldn't... would he?" I did leave enough clues, but don't feel bad for not getting it. I tried to keep it covered, too, you know.

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Re: Second Chances III: The Trellious Incident
« Reply #35 on: February 29, 2008, 07:37:01 pm »
Long overdue continuation. Enjoy!

   “You missed,” Mohab sneered at the wily commander. The sounds of the transporter faded away with the forms of two of Mohab's men.

   “So did you,” the commander retorted. Mohab noticed the scorch mark on the other's left shoulder. He hadn't missed that bad before the commander dove for the deck. Plain as day, his adversary's left arm lay limp at his side, stunned.

   “I wouldn't try anything like that again,” Mohab said calmly. He adjusted the phaser to a higher setting. “Both of you, up front, now!” They stood and obliged him, and only once they were both in his field of view did he remove the slumbering female from the command chair and take the seat for himself. She fell painlessly to the carpeted deck with a soft thud.

   “I was a lot like you once,” he started, casually letting the fingers of his free hand trace the few controls on the chairs arm rest. “Full of wonder and nobility. Trying to save everyone. Look where it got me.”

   “Not everyone falls like you have,” the slender female said back to him.

   “No, and not everyone can blame their career path on one singular event either. There were so many vessels during the incident... Lyran, Klingon, Romulan, Tholian, and all the Federation ships...”

   “Which incident are you talking about?” It was the female again, and deep down he wondered if it was even mentioned when she went through the Academy.

   “Surely you know of the Hyperion Incident? The basis behind the construction of the station...” He felt pain at the memory, pain and regret towards the choices he'd made that day. He knew deep within himself that had he followed his instincts that day, Operation Unity would still have started. Everything else would still have played out the same, except there would be no station, no war with the Romulans that cost the Federation the Star Empire and that stupid device, which in turn would have never led him down the dark trail that he was on right now.

   His vision wavered, the humans before him faded into the background like ghosts in an old house. “... multiple hull breaches in the engineering section.” K'Tal's musical voice finished the damage report from behind him. Flames licked eagerly at the bulkheads on the bridge, his first officer lay dead at his feet, the deck shuddered as the mighty warship struggled through his damage to remain mobile. On the static filled view screen the lone Dominator receded from the battleground, ensuring victory for the Galactic Forces.

   “Message from Captain Kadh,” K'Tal's voice once again called to him.

   “On screen,” he replied. The screen flickered briefly, then showed the stern face of the Klingon captain. His red battle lit bridge was filled with smoke and debris, clearly the Screaming Dizbuster had faired about equally as Mohab's own ship. The man's face staring at him excited another memory, of Mohab's home planet many years prior.

   He'd learned at a very young age the treachery of Klingons. Through skillful negotiations, Mandeline III was removed from the protective sphere of the Federation's influence, and turned to a neutral status. The planet was one of many that the Federation had taken as its own during the recent war with the Klingons, and in an effort to further peaceful relations, was abandoned by both sides. With little interest in peace, the Klingons deceitfully came one bloody night and massacred every person who was unable to leave the planet. This included the Royal Family, save one young Jacob Mohab. It was the night he'd taken the still beating heart from a Klingon's chest, the pungent flavor of the same still hung on his lips. It didn't bring his family or friends back, but avenged their deaths with the whisper of the dying general's last breath. Mohab was one of seven survivors from a colony of twelve thousand, and though 'avenged', he never forgot them.

   Nor did he forget his distrust and hatred of Klingons. This was his second chance, here and now. He wouldn't wait for this Klingon to offer a victory celebration. Mohab would speak first, and end it here and now. “Captain Kadh, I am hereby officially ordering all non-Starfleet vessels to leave this sector immediately. Any vessel that has not withdrawn in ten minutes will be considered hostile and fired upon. This incident happened within the borders of the Federation and was a Federation matter. We appreciate the response to the destroyer Hyperion's distress call and dealing with the Andromedans, however we now consider this matter closed.” He made a cut throat gesture and the channel closed.

   “In case they think we are bluffing, target the Screaming Dizbuster's main bridge.”

   “Aye, sir. I must remind you that we are in no condition to hold out long in sustained combat

   “I know K'Tal. This has to remain an internal affair. I think...” his words were interrupted by the familiar tingle just on the edge of his senses. He felt his command chair melt away below him, and suddenly he found himself inside a Starfleet shuttle looking up from the deck plates. Before he could reorient himself, the tingle came again.

   He found himself, sans phaser, on Cerberus's cold hangar deck, lying on his back. He looked to his left at the large shuttle that he was just inside, two of his men desperately trying to pry the doors open. “It would not have worked,” the commander's voice called over the shuttle bay's intercom system. “Even if you managed to scare off some of them, Kadh and Kotheme would have destroyed you!

   Mohab screamed in panic. How much had he said? How much of that was a delusion? 

***

   “It was only set for four,” McDougal responded to his XO's questioning gaze. “I set Many De'Oria's transporters to remove our guests if the became hostile. I'm glad it took the loon,” he smiled slightly, “and left the Vulcan. She'll make a good bargaining chip.”

   Jones made her way to T'Sala's tactical panel while McDougal returned to the now charred helmsman's chair. “I can't find Mohab's ship,” Jones said as she looked over the panel. “If they've cloaked...”

   “I've got something...” McDougal called back to her. “Focus scans here,” he said as he fed her panel the data from the helm.

   “Working... Shawn, I'm reading multiple fighters inbound.”


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P.S. Andy, have at it, I didn't feel up to an in depth pre-post proofread.
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Re: Second Chances III: The Trellious Incident
« Reply #36 on: February 29, 2008, 08:44:02 pm »
Damn... Been so long since the last post...I need to reread it all...

I read a lot of stuff...

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« Reply #37 on: March 01, 2008, 09:28:56 am »
Damn... Been so long since the last post...I need to reread it all...

LOL!!!  I am relieved I'm not the only one...

Glad to see you are still working on this Czar, thanks!   :D
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Re: Second Chances III: The Trellious Incident
« Reply #38 on: May 04, 2008, 12:37:33 am »



Decided to take the more difficult route. Be done when it is done ;)

Besides, had some bad real life happen lately... not a happy thing.

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Re: Second Chances III: The Trellious Incident
« Reply #39 on: May 04, 2008, 02:23:59 am »
I'll give you this. Maybe more tonight. Dunno. Not sleepy, so...?


   “What can you tell me?” McDougal asked his exec. He wasn't too surprised at the turn of events. It was just another coal in the ever growing fire.

   Soft grumbles came from around them as the unconscious crew began to wake.

   “Too distant to make anything out for certain, but I am reading at least fourteen  shuttle sized  hulls. Maybe more.”

   McDougal pondered the situation a moment, allowing things to flow through his brain and form a possible outcome to the seemingly worsening situation. “Clear picture on sixteen contacts, possible eight more fighter class hulls inbound. Also detecting larger power signatures on extreme long range.” He processed her report with everything else that he had been fed. Without further information, he came to what he felt were the three most logical conclusions:

   They were after Cerberus. Perhaps the ship, perhaps the symbolic nature of the ship.

   They were after the planets below.

   They were after Mohab.

   “Sh*t!” Lieutenant Michaels exclaimed as he struck his head on the underside of the his panel as he rose. “What the hell...”

   “Bogeys at noon, helm,” McDougal said, snapping the helmsman's attention to the here and now. There would be time enough for explanations later. “Mohab's cruiser is MIA, presumed local. Temporarily without warp drive or solid maneuverability. You've got the sticks.” McDougal stood from the scorched chair and with a single armed gesture, aided the still shaky helmsman to his seat.

   “I might need a moment to un-fuzz my brain,” Michaels said, holding his left thumb and middle finger to his temples.

   “Clear picture, twelve fighters, heavily armed with projectile weapons, mixed with twelve fighters, lightly armed, phaser only... heavy sensor suite on the drone mounts... all closing fast, bearing three-five-eight mark zero-zero-three.”

   “Seems like they're looking for someone,” the helmsman replied to Jones' continued reports.

   McDougal had turned his back on the view screen, assisting his engineer off the carpeted deck. “I'll figure it out on my way down below,” she said softly, rising from the ground. “I'm on my way, sir.”

   He was shocked at her sudden dedication to duty, and yet, not. He noticed T'Sala begin to stir near her tactical station. “Miss T'Sala, update yourself with our current situation as soon as possible. XO, assist the engineer in getting our engines to full power from the bridge. Helm,” he turned abruptly to face the forward station. “Maintain current speed and course, stand by evasive.” He took his own seat with a silent thud and a loud sigh. “And someone wake Mister Perkins.”

   Silently McDougal watched the rectangular viewer as twenty-four hostile assault craft angled towards his slightly crippled ship.



***
   Mohab paced gently inside the rather-spacious-for-such-a-small-vessel shuttle bay, listening intently to the reports coming in from Death Giver. Cerberus not only allowed for his ship to see these new threats much more clearly than his own ship's normal sensors could, but much sooner. He'd managed a fairly decent description from Biklis, and almost instantly recognized the intruder.
 
   Eric the Dead was a notorious pirate operating in the local area of space. He'd been dealing mostly within the Federation; however, he had occasionally wandered to the Klingon side of space. Last time, it was a normal VIP ferrying contract, nothing glamorous or dangerous; just taking a delegate from one planet to another. Eric had used the same space lane for years for such contracts and never once encountered any resistance.

   Until he met Mohab.

   Eric found out quickly that this newcomer was rather territorial, and vengeful. He'd managed to escape the war lusting former Starfleet admiral, only to have the bastard track down Eric's shipyard and capture it.

   There were laws amongst the pirates, laws that Mohab didn't know. Eric didn't hold a grudge when he was attacked in 'Mohab's territory'; that kind of misunderstanding happens, you don't notice the new guy so you miss paying the first “rights of passage” bribe. Usually it could be worked out. Eric learned that day that Mohab had no code of honor within the pirate circles. There would never be payments for passage, never more would there even be a blind shipping lane through the borderland for he and his associates to use.

   There would always be Mohab.

   Capturing the shipyard was one thing. It happened. As a pirate, you can't always protect every asset every time, stations and ships sometimes changed hands. Usually, deals could be struck, either returning the stolen goods or providing some form of compensation. Pirates were usually in pretty deep when it came to sharing hardships. Mohab did what he did, a simple act of retribution, to teach Eric a lesson.

   When the school bell rang, there was no more shipyard. Mohab had not only captured the giant ship manufacture and repair facility, but managed to cloak and move the entire thing out of the sector.

   Eric was miffed, to say the least.

   Attempting to contact Mohab had proven fruitless. Tracking him and his exploits proved pointless. Until, that is, an informant lead Eric to Mohab's slave factory.

***

   Mohab smiled to himself. “Czar Mohab,” he spoke into his communications device, “to commander Cerberus, please respond.”

   “Captain,” came the staticky  reply. “Kinda busy. Talk fast.

   “I believe I know who is approaching and why they are here,” Mohab smiled a bit wider as the words rolled off his tongue. “His name is Eric the Dead, one of the weaker pirate entities operating nearby. He's after me and my ship. If you let myself and my crew go free, we'll...”

   “Not so fast, silver tongue. You're officially a prisoner of the Federation. I can't just let you go.

   “Indeed, Commander, you'll do as I say or you'll not survive to hold true your weak threat. The pirate is after me, but I assure you he will gladly open fire on any vessel that has me inside.”

   The voice on the other side of the static paused, understanding the situation. Mohab was playing a dangerous game, but McDougal had to ponder how far the pirate would go. If what he was saying was true, then the lone Starfleet vessel would be left more or less alone. Unless they had a reason to attack the ship. Mohab was the reason, but would Mohab sell himself out for his own freedom? McDougal didn't know where Mohab was going with this. “You and the Vulcan will stay until Eric leaves. We'll drop the Vulcan off on the nearest surviving element of your 'empire', and keep you in custody.

   “Deal,” Mohab smiled.

   It was too easy. Way too easy. Mohab waited in the brief pause and thought he'd heard a mumble about transport. “Signal your vessel, ten seconds, three, four, five, all up.” The former 'Fleeter recognized the code, and relayed the information as such.

   It also meant that he had to get out of the shuttle bay in less than ten seconds to avoid the inevitable transport inhibitor field that no doubt would permeate the bay, locking him inside. The door to the bay swished slowly open, and he ordered the few of his men within out. They'd given his men a way out from under the inhibitor, but the quartet of phaser rifle armed security guards kept him at bay in the bay. Five or so seconds remained until shield three would drop. There would be a long enough pause between three going up and four going down... He pondered the approximate times in his head, and scoffed at the guards as they shut the door to the bay.

   No matter, he sighed to himself. I'll have almost forty-five seconds before the shields go back up. No problem.

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In a movie theater bathroom not long ago:
PFC: You really should wash your hands, sir.
ME: So... Private? Is that what they teach you in the Army? Take a leak and wash your hands?
PFC: Yeah. It helps prevent the spread of...
ME: Let me stop you right there. Ya see, The NAVY taught me how not to wizz on my hands. You have a good day now, Private. *Pats PFC on shoulder*

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Re: Second Chances III: The Trellious Incident
« Reply #40 on: July 10, 2008, 08:15:05 pm »
Did anyone want more?

   “Range to nearest strike craft is nine hundred thousand kilometers and closing,” T'Sala relayed from her tactical panel. “Shield three down, reading transporter activity.”

   “Very good, Tactical,” McDougal replied harshly. “Miss Jones, where's my damn power?”

   “Impulse engines now reading fully available,” the executive officer replied. “Stabilizing warp core... Wait, sir.”

   “Wait, aye,” he replied. “Mister Perkins, get the med kit, you're bleeding.” McDougal eyed the young lieutenant's left shoulder as he rose to tend his panel. McDougal focused on where crimson blood had begun to stain through his maroon uniform.

   “Just a flesh wound, sir,” he replied, with out looking up from his duty, tending his panel. “Targeting computer reinitialized.”

   “Get the med kit before you bleed any more on my carpet,” McDougal paused a moment, but was interrupted before he could speak further.

   “Nearest fighter is now actively scanning the immediate area,” the Vulcan's soft voice called.

   “Transport status?” the commander asked her.

   “Still in progress. Death Giver should be complete before the hostiles are able to detect the activity. Shield four down, sir.”

   “Warp status, Miss Jones?” He walked over to a small storage locker under the port replicator and manipulated the simple control panel.

   “Chief Rankin is trying to isolate a power fluctuation near the shuttle bay,” she replied. She grimaced with potential realization as her eyes locked with those of her commanding officer. His expression told her what she'd needed to know. “Isolating power to the shuttle bay,” she said to him, momentarily pausing to watch him remove the med kit he sought.

   “Too late!” Perkins cried. “Hold on!”

   The power surge that they had been tracking manifest itself in a brilliant explosion, rupturing the shuttle bay's main door to space. Under normal circumstances, the bay's emergency force field emitter would have snapped on, preventing the expulsion of anything lighter than a shuttle craft or otherwise bolted down, including the precious atmosphere. This particular emission of energy had flown through the emitters themselves, and allowed the unbolted, much lighter-than-a-shuttle, and otherwise unhindered occupant a forceful shot into the expanse of space, into the waiting arms of Death Giver's transporter beam.

   Cerberus shook violently from the blast and moved forward and down relative to the temporarily free floating Czar. As abruptly as it started, the tremors stopped, leaving those not in the know to ponder if they were under attack or not.

   “Breach is isolated in the shuttle bay!” Jones called out, rather loudly over the silence on the bridge. Much quieter she added, “He rerouted power directly from the EPS grid through the force field emitters.”

   “Mohab?” McDougal asked. He already felt he knew the answer.

   “Beamed from space,” Perkins answered him, receiving the hand delivered med kit from his CO. “Wasn't out there long, probably will survive.”

   “Dang,” McDougal said silently. He retook his seat in the center of the bridge. “Let's just focus on getting the hell out of here.”

   “All power generating systems operating at full capacity,” Jones said.

   “Just tell me where to point this pig,” Michaels said, looking at him over his left shoulder.

   “She's the last of the pirates on board,” Perkins said, pointing at the unconscious Vulcan lying on slightly propped against the forward end of the engineering panel.

   “Canceling beam out shield drops,” T'Sala said calmly. Her panel beeped softly to her. “Incoming transmission, sir,”

   “One of our pirates?”

   “A human calling himself 'Pop-pop',” she replied with an arched eyebrow.

   “Put him through,” he said, almost sarcastically. When it rains...

   The viewer flickered from inbound hostile fighter craft in open space to the silent visage of the elder man that they had only recently parted company from. “Commander McDougal,” he started, a hint of urgency in his voice. “I know that we didn't get off on the right foot, but I have one request of you and your crew.”

   “Time is of the essence,” McDougal replied.

   “We've been monitoring the situation, Commander, and we need your help.

   …it pours. “We’re about to leave the system until these rival pirate factions either blow each other up or leave the system.”

   “We don’t blame your choice of actions,” the elder replied. “However, we believe that the second pirate faction is here to obliterate our planets. The others, they’re too proud to ask for help, but without it our people will not be able to survive.

   “They’re not your people,” McDougal retorted. “You abandoned your people long ago.” McDougal began to form an irritated look on his face. “Can you prove their intentions? Or is this merely speculation on your part?”

   “I’m uploading our sensor telemetry from the outskirts of the system to you now, Commander. You’ve likely noticed the large quantity of nuclear warheads on board the fighter craft, but at your range, I doubt you picked up on this.

   The view screen changed from old man to deep space, focused on a massive space vessel. Its lines were clearly Orion, yet they were corrupted by the presence of several ominous gun-barrel shaped objects. “Those read as mass drivers, commander. Do you need more proof?

   “T’Sala, Perkins, verify nuclear weapons on those fighters!” McDougal snapped. He was angry at himself for letting these planet dwellers see a better picture than he and his crew had. It didn’t add up in favor of the “they hate Mohab” story… One didn’t bring a cannon to a knife fight.

   “Confirmed, sir,” Perkins replied. “They’re using nuclear tipped missiles. Our scanners were not calibrated for the particular fissionable they are using, a modified tri-plutonian alloy.”

   “Theories, fast!” McDougal almost barked the order.

   “Annihilation,” Jones said, “pure and simple.”

   “I agree,” T’Sala added.

   “Sadly,” McDougal returned, “so do I. But what about the fighters with the sensor… advanced guidance systems. They’ll be able to blow the can right out from under someone taking a crap. Mohab was a ruse.”

   “Indeed,” an unfamiliar female voice came from behind him. “Return me to my own ship, and we will assist.”

   T’Sala quickly moved to the side of the still bound Vulcan. “Mother,” she said to her. “It is agreeable to see you again.”

   “Likewise,” K’Tal replied.

   “You would help us, then?” T’Sala asked softly, gazing into her mother’s eyes.

   “I would.” For only the briefest instant, there was a fluctuation in her gaze. T’Sala pounced at the opportunity, catching the elder Vulcan off guard and forced her own hand to K’Tal’s face. Initially, K’Tal was off guard enough to be unable to prevent the mind meld, T’Sala quickly found the answer she sought, but she probed deeper, looking for more. A brief mental battle ensued, visible only in the minds of the combatants. As suddenly as it occurred, the meld was broken. A shaken T’Sala stood and addressed the man on the viewscreen.

   “We will aid you, provided you launch every available vessel from your planets, including the ship at Craxo.”

   McDougal looked to her, puzzled. Aren’t I in charge? “What is at Craxo?”

   “Earth Survey Ship Magellan,” T’Sala replied. “Rebuilt from the keel up; along with two others, that were reverse engineered from her design.”

   The view screen returned to the view of the ever approaching fighters.

   There is an old Klingon saying,” McDougal started. “Heghlu'meH QaQ jajvam! Helm, plot a course through the center of the fighter cloud. T’Sala, Perkins… Priority to the nukes, but if any other fighter presents itself…”

   “…take the shot,” Perkins finished for him. “Gladly, sir.”

   “Let's kick this pig,” Jones added. “All decks answering Red Alert, phasers charging, photons on stand-by. Warp and impulse power at one hundred percent.”


Czar "More later, but sooner than last time," Mohab, who is also working on SC4: The Forgotten (might be dropped), SC5: Atonement and SC6: Retribution (might be a different name); along with a post-Nemesis piece involving U.S.S. Challenger, but is currently unnamed. Planning events in SC4-6 is keeping 3 to a slow crawl. Don't want to trip on my own toes.
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In a movie theater bathroom not long ago:
PFC: You really should wash your hands, sir.
ME: So... Private? Is that what they teach you in the Army? Take a leak and wash your hands?
PFC: Yeah. It helps prevent the spread of...
ME: Let me stop you right there. Ya see, The NAVY taught me how not to wizz on my hands. You have a good day now, Private. *Pats PFC on shoulder*

Ivanova: May God stand between you and harm in all the empty places where you must walk.

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Re: Second Chances III: The Trellious Incident
« Reply #41 on: December 13, 2008, 12:56:37 pm »
Well that was an unexpected twist. T'Sala's mother a member of Mohab's crew. To coin a phrase, "Fascinating."
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