« Reply #30 on: December 30, 2007, 10:34:19 pm »
I worked quite hard on this CH. I hope it comes out as something better than lame. I had great difficulty with it, and it suffered from many periods where I just didn't feel like writing any more. Lemme have some feed back, please. This will be the last Trek story for a bit, and I'm particular about this'n.
CH. 7
Commander Ron Davenport sat sleepily in the command chair and watched the young, Earth-like world revolve beneath Endeavour. It was late in Gamma Shift, 23:57 hours. Soon, Mister Bronstien would report for duty and take over the bridge. The lighting was as low as it was during combat alerts to emulate nighttime conditions on terrestrial worlds.
The bridge staff was moderate. One officer manned each key position: Conn, Helm, Ops, Science, Communications, Engineering and Tactical. Noncoms manned the other, less vital stations. When the shift rotated, Engineering, Tactical, Comm and Helm would then be assumed by enlisted personnel in need of the console time. There would be senior noncoms on deck to watch over several of the lesser stations at once and to help baby-sit the less experienced crewers.
The after hatch opened and disgorged Lieutenant Bronstien earlier than expected. Ron turned the conn to face the slim young lieutenant as he stepped down into the command circle. Soon, the pilot would be receiving a new set of cloned legs to replace his current prosthetics. The kid had come to walk rather well on his new masts. Only his slower gait belied the lack of real limbs beneath his pant legs.
Johnathan came to a bobbing halt beside the conn, arms clasped behind as he also eyed the main screen. “Quiet evening, Commander?”
“Yes, indeed, Lieutenant.” Ron replied, trying to mask his tiredness with a slightly louder voice. “You’re the early bird today, I see.”
“Trying to buck for a raise, sir. Relief still coming along strong down there?”
“We’ve gotten all the Ya’wenn to the ship now. Last one beamed on board at twenty-hundred. Security has ‘em confined where they need to be. Commander Tolin has a team down there sifting through the wreck.”
“Anything good?”
“She’s recovering their computer core and their comm suite. Ya’wenn communications are nearly as advanced as ours, and usually powerful enough to break through Tempest interference. She wants a look at it.”
“I don’t suppose she managed to recover any torpedo casings. Maybe a damaged one Jarn’s men couldn’t use in their fight?”
“No such luck. Jarn used everything he had to keep clear of capture. But we got him anyway.”
“Any word from Constellation?”
“She’s closing on the escort. The Ya’wenn are trying to give her the shake, but Jeremy is hanging onto them.” Davenport replied.
The chronometer clicked home on 00:00 hours. A gong sounded throughout the ship’s main spaces as the main computer denoted the time. Soon, the lifts were spilling fresh faces onto the deck. The change of shift was as smooth as expected. Once the junior officers made their exit, Ronald himself stood before the conn and assumed a lax state of attention. Johnathan stood rail straight. He made a pretty officer when he tried.
“I relieve you, XO.” Bronstien said.
“I stand relieved, Lieutenant.” Ron stepped off the dais. “You have the conn.”
“I have the conn.”
Johnathan ascended up to the level of the big chair but did not sit down. He looked about the bridge space for a second, telling Davenport he had something else on his mind. Ron turned back fully to the young man. There were only seven crew on the bridge level now. This was as cozy as it was going to get for a private conversation.
“Something on your mind, John-Boy?”
Johnathan clenched his lips a tad and looked down. When he spoke, it was nearly silent. The noncoms were experienced enough to turn away at the sound of quiet officer talk and busied themselves in keeping the younger hands occupied.
“It’s about the Skipper.”
Ron stepped in close, curious.
“Down on the planet?”
“Yeah. He almost killed Jarn. I think Keller knows about it.”
Davenport had thought such a thing likely given the facts and the CO’s mood when he’d returned to the ship hours ago. He’d had plenty of time to ponder what could or might have occurred down there. He looked questioning up to the boy.
“Which are you concerned about, Lieutenant? That the commodore was going to kill him or that Keller might know?”
“Ya know…I’m not so sure.”
Ron’s face became stern. It did not portray anger.
“Ford is among the best CO’s in Starfleet. If he kills a man, then it was deserved and unavoidable. He doesn’t kill out of malice or revenge. Whatever he might have wanted to do, I seriously doubt it would have ended with the death of his prisoner unless Jarn had tried to kill him or one of you. And since Jarn’s still alive, then it doesn’t matter what the doctor or even you believe he might have been about to do. There’s nothing to base any suspicion on.”
Bronstien took in the commander’s words and considered the stony set of his manner. At length, he nodded. He might have liked to argue the matter further, but no matter what, Ron was essentially right. Jarn was still among the breathing. Whether or not Ford had wanted him dead or was considering murder, it hadn’t occurred.
“Very well, sir.”
Ronald nodded once and turned leisurely away. As he made for the lift, he pondered how much of his speech had been truth and how much was simply wishful thinking…
***
Doctor Keller stifled a yawn. She was barely awake. Her duties among the injured and dying Ya’wenn had covered her in blood and worn her to the bone. Now the majority of them were stable, resting amid the armed guards down in the triage. She’d gone to her cabin already, showered and changed. Her red hair remained damp as she snaked through the corridors and halls of her ship. She was in uniform, but had opted to go without a duty jacket.
She found the commodore in Whisker’s, much as she thought she might. The barrel-chested man leaned his girth onto the polished top of the bar as he swigged his way through a tall glass of amber fluid. She slowed her pace as she neared him. He’d sighted her as she’d passed through the glass doors.
“Have a seat, ‘Drea.”
Andrea slid onto the stool nearest her man and regarded him somberly. He seemed buzzed, but not drunk yet. She wondered just how long he’d been here, and how long he intended to do this in front of the crew. Thankfully, Whisker’s beheld only ten enlisted and a spare officer at the moment.
“Feeling any pain, darling?” She inquired of him.
“If you’re implying I’m drunk, doll, think again.”
“I’m not. I know an old hound such as yourself prides himself on the quantities he can imbibe.” I’m wondering as to your status as a ‘Paragon of Virtue’ among the crew, however.”
Ford cast half a glance over his maroon clad shoulder to the assorted people about the compartment. Few of them were even associating with each other, let alone casting a look his way. This time of night was the late-drinker’s hour. Few came here during the wee hours. They wanted to avoid being thought of as a drunk. The few that did come in only stayed an hour at the most.
“Don’t think they ever thought of me as a paragon of anything.”
“You’re still not showing yourself as a proper officer, Chevy. How long have you been in here?”
Ford looked at her, amusement shining on his wide face.
“Is this what I’m gonna be looking for’d to if we ever get hitched? You trying so very hard to straighten out my kinks?”
Keller forced a wry smile.
“As well as correcting your grammar. ‘Hitched’ indeed.”
Ford grunted a laugh and drained the rest of his glass into the detriment of his liver. Then he slid off the stool and assumed his spongy feet. “Then lead me the hell outta here, my British darlin’. Ed-ju-ma-cate me.”
At least he wasn’t being loud and overly obnoxious. Andrea nodded and wrapped an arm around him as she escorted the commodore out the door. He was walking quite steadily, but he was taking particular care to remain at a slow pace. He led her out the double transparencies and into the darkened, empty corridors. He was headed aft, and not toward the turbolift banks.
“Where are we headed, Chevy?”
“Aft observatory seven. Sweet view of the fantail and the port nacelle.”
“Romantic.”
“Could be…if it wasn’t for the fact that the engineer checking the manual impulse manifold coolant gear comes through every hour on the hour.”
The doctor smiled despite herself as he led her to their private corner of the ship. The observatory was open and designed for the comfort of visiting passengers. It was open to the rest of the deck and granted a beautiful view of the aft portions of the Excelsior-Class ship. The broad bulk of the silver and black trimmed engineering hull dominated the left-hand side of the window furthest to starboard. The other four portholes showed a panorama of the living planet beneath them, receding constantly abaft, and the long, sleek mass of the port warp engine. Only the bearing strut connecting the engine to the secondary hull blocked out any of the view, but it was far enough removed and quite low. One had to get close and look down to see the plane of it. Andrea could see men moving to and from in the upper control section of Shuttlebay 2.
Chevis settled down on one of the armless, blue chairs that abounded in the observatory and patted the one next to it. Andrea sat, hands knit in her lap as she watched him. She’d been angry and confused and shocked about what she’d witnessed early on today. Chevy Ford had looked like a killer bent of revenge. Now, he was a kindly and even sweet starship commander bent of relaxing.
“Chevis,” she began. “I hardly know what to think about you.”
Ford looked to her, his attention having been fixed on the view aft of his ship.
“Oh?”
“Earlier, you looked like Satan himself, poised to commit a dreadful crime. Now it’s as though that never happened. As though your greatest enemy isn’t laying in a bed on this very deck…”
Reminded of his hatred, the commodore’s face darkened and twisted into a frown.
“What the f*ck did you have to bring that up for?”
Andrea almost regretted it. Part of her wished just to ignore the happening. But, she couldn’t abide being with a murderer. And if he was truly capable of committing the act she was sure she had been about to witness down there on that planet…
“Chevy… You were going to kill him… At least that’s what it seemed.”
His face was a mask of hate. Directed at her or not, it was painful and frightening to behold.
“Was it really?”
“Don’t try to mislead me. And don’t even try to deny that the phaser you turned in was set to maximum power.”
Chevis grinned maliciously.
“Nice try. I made sure to turn it back down to setting two before I beamed back home.” Finally his evil persona lessened, abating to a shadow. “But, yeah…you’re right. I might have killed him.”
“Might have?”
The commodore seemed to slide into a reflective mood and relaxed again into the square cushioning of the decorative furniture. “At the time…I was gonna kill him. And I wanted him to see me killing him. When I heard your voice…I wasn’t so sure any more. I wasn’t going to do it and have you think less of me.”
“And if I hadn’t happened along just in the nick of time?”
There was no change in Ford’s now guarded expression. His face was a mask. Andrea felt slightly betrayed at this apparent effort to hide himself from her. He looked right into her eyes.
“I’d have killed him. I’m pretty damn sure of it.”
The admission sank in with a cold grip of fright. Keller drew rigid as she sat there before him. She was afraid of the fact that he was blatantly capable and willing to commit such a thing. More frightful still was the assured knowledge she possessed that he would not miss a wink of sleep over it. The fact that he hadn’t actually killed Jarn did not totally allay this fear. This fact tainted everything she felt for him at this moment.
She struggled with the knowledge, however, that Jarn was indeed deserving of such treatment, whether or not she believed in the taking of life. The man was an animal. Hateful and cruel. A murderer as well. He’d have done exactly the same or far worse to anyone aboard this ship if given a reason or the chance. And when cornered…that same tyrant had begged for his life and pleaded with the nearest sympathetic ear to protect him.
But what did all this make Chevis D. Ford?
“So you are a murderer?”
Those brown eyes narrowed into cold, angular slits.
“Am I?”
“I don’t know. Do you?”
“I was gonna kill his ass. So am I as bad as him?”
“Perhaps not…but I don’t know if you’re truly much better…”
Comparing Ford to his enemy, the man who’d tortured him, might have driven him into hysterics. Chevis’s teeth ground back and forth as he fought to retain control. It was the most telling thing he was allowing to pass through his façade. “Fine, then.” He replied in acid. “I’m a piece of sh*t.”
Andrea shook her head. The sudden realization that she would do little more than drive him away from her flooded her senses and made her more afraid than she’d been of his capacity for murder. “No…no! Chevy… I’m…simply trying to come to some kind of understanding…”
“No…You’re trying to decide if you want to be with a killer.”
Andrea bit her bottom lip and looked down, at a loss over how to salvage this situation. What the hell was she doing? They’d only been back together for a day! Now she was calling him a murderer to his face and berating him for something he might have done to a man that deserved to be dead! She looked back up, her eyes pleading.
“Whatever you are, Chevy… I still love you…”
Her voice was tiny as she whispered those last three words. She clenched suddenly scratchy feeling eyes and instantly felt wetness fall down her flushed cheeks. Ford eased off the chair across from her and sank to his knees before her. He pressed in close and wiped the tears from her face. His lips pressed to hers. He drew in his breath to avoid assailing her with the smell of whisky, though his lips still tasted of it.
Separating himself from her again, but still on his knees, Ford looked into her hot feeling eyes. All the anger had fallen away, leaving only his compassion for her. “I love you, too… I won’t do anything that makes you think less of me, Andrea. You have my word…”
***
Much of the conversation just ended was patterned after conversations I've had with 2 various significant others. I wanted a feeling of 'where the hell is this conversation going'? I hope this was conveyed and that it looks like an actual discussion between partially estranged lovers while not seeming too...melodramatic...
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--thu guv!!